1、Section Writing介绍人物(说明文) 技法指导 1文体介绍 说明文是指以说明为主要表达方式,来说明事物的情况、特征 或道理的文体。其特点在于说明性、 知识性和科学性。 2篇章结构 第一部分:提出要介绍的人物(可包括出生时间、地点等基本 信息); 第二部分:介绍人物的主要经历、事迹或成就、人物品质、贡 献或地位等; 第三部分:对人物进行评价与总结。 3常用表达 (1)XXX, a famous., was born in., on. XXX,一位著名的,X 年 X 月 X 日生于 (2)XXX, born in., was a great scientist and inventor
2、. XXX 生于,是一位伟大的科学家和发明家。 (3)Born in., XXX is recognised as one of Chinas greatest scientists, a pioneer of. XXX 生于,被公认为中国最伟大的科学家之一,是 的先驱。 (4)XXX, known as., plays a crucial role in. XXX 作为,在方面发挥着至关重要的作用。 (5)XXX, without whom it would have been impossible for us to., is one of the academicians of the
3、Chinese Academy of Engineering. XXX 是中国工程院院士之一,没有他/她我们就不可能 (6)XXX, the founding father of., was the founder and promoter of. XXX 是的先驱,是的奠基人和倡导者。 (7)XXX was so diligent that he worked day and night. XXX 是如此勤奋,日夜工作。 (8)It was not until he died that his parents and many of his friends realised that he
4、had produced such extraordinary achievements. 直到他去世,他的父母和许多朋友才意识到他取得了如此非凡 的成就。 (9)Many good qualities are embodied in these heroes and they do deserve respect from all of us. 这些英雄身上体现了许多优秀品质,值得我们所有人尊敬。 (10)They are diligent and down to earth, which best demonstrates that the Chinese people are a har
5、dworking people. 他们勤奋踏实,这最能说明中国人民是艰苦奋斗的民族。 (11)Happiness of the people always tops the list in their dictionary, and the interests of our country outweigh their own personal ones. 人民的幸福永远是他们的头等大事,国家的利益高于了他们个 人的利益。 精品展示 假定你是李华,英语老师要求学生们了解“工匠精神”,根据 以下要点,用英文写一篇体现工匠精神的人物介绍。 129 岁的工匠王曦是天津杨柳青木版印刷最年轻的继承人。
6、2从小喜欢木刻,自从 2014 年成为学徒,至今致力于木刻。 3雕刻木头从来不是一件容易的工作,孩子们的胳膊和腿的 线条以及脸上的细节,包括眼睛,都是最具挑战性的部分。 4老师教导他保持一种平和的心态以及王曦对木刻的认识。 _ _ _ 审题谋篇 第一步:确定体裁、人称和时态 本文为人物介绍,以第三人称为主,时态主要以一般现在时为 主,兼顾其它时态 第二步:确定段落 第一段:人物介绍 第二段:工作情况介绍 第三段:对工作的认识 第三步:提炼要点 1_ 木版印刷 2_ 献身于 3_ 提醒某人做某事 4_ 保持平和的心态 5_ 净化灵魂 6_ 瞬息变化的世界 woodblock printing d
7、evote oneself to remind sb. to do sth. maintain a peaceful mind purify ones soul fast- changing world 第四步:句式升级 1雕刻木头从来不是一件容易的工作,这可能需要一个月甚 至两个月的时间才能完成。 (一般表达)Engraving wood is never an easy job, and it may take one or even two months for him to complete. (高级表达)_ _ Engraving wood is never an easy job,
8、 which may take one or even two months for him to complete. 2孩子们的胳膊和腿的线条以及脸上的细节,包括眼睛,都 是最具挑战性的部分,因为这些细细的线条应该光滑优美,足以展 现人物生动艺术的表情。 (一般表达)The lines of childrens arms and legs and the details on their faces, including eyes, are the most challenging parts to carve. These thin lines should be smooth and g
9、raceful enough to show the figures vivid and artistic expressions. (高级表达)_ The lines of childrens arms and legs and the details on their faces, including eyes, are the most challenging parts to carve, as these thin lines should be smooth and graceful enough to show the figures vivid and artistic exp
10、ressions. 3我的老师经常提醒我要保持一种平和的心态,没有这种心 态,手艺就不会稳定和准确。(without which 定语从句) (一般表达)My teacher often reminds me to maintain a peaceful mind. Without the mind, there will be no steadiness or accuracy in craftsmanship. (高级表达)_ _ My teacher often reminds me to maintain a peaceful mind, without which there wil
11、l be no steadiness or accuracy in craftsmanship. 连句成篇 _ _ _ _ _ 连句成篇 Wang Xi, a 29- year- old craftsman is the youngest inheritor of Yangliuqing woodblock printing in Tianjin. A fan of this art form since his childhood, he has devoted himself to engraving wood since he became an apprentice of woodbl
12、ock printing in 2014. Engraving wood is never an easy job, which may take one or even two months for him to complete. The lines of childrens arms and legs and the details on their faces, including eyes, are the most challenging parts to carve, as these thin lines should be smooth and graceful enough
13、 to show the figures vivid and artistic expressions. “My teacher often reminds me to maintain a peaceful mind, without which there will be no steadiness or accuracy in craftsmanship, ” Wang says. “Maybe this job seems boring to others. For me, it seems that I am carving the woodblock, but in fact, I am carving out my life and purifying my soul in this fast- changing world.”
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