读后写作微实战：两个口诀写表情.docx

1、读后写作微实战：两个口诀写表情 课堂上的一个微写作情景：You were caught cheating in class by Mr. Green. 第一句：He walked up to me. _. 这个写作纯粹是为了巩固所学，实际上写作中只要两句就足矣。 由于表达的形式多，先上口诀： 紧张的口诀： 人发抖（shake, shiver）， 掌流汗（sweating）； 脸发烫(burn)， 低头看(hang, lower, fixed)； 心在口(heart in mouth)， 怦怦跳（pump, thump, pound）； 愧难当(guilt, shame, overwhelmed

2、)， 话结巴（falter, stumble） 。 生气的口诀： 音发抖（voice shake with anger）, 话哽咽（voice choke with rage）。 脸愤怒（explode, anger spread）, 眼冒火（anger burn in eyes）。 狠关门（slam; door bang shut）， 冲出去（storm out）。 气跺脚（stamp）， 手砸桌（pound, bang）。 指留痕（dig finger into palm）， 牙咬紧（clench）。 人无语（speechless with anger） 内心怒（anger well up

3、, sweep over, explode, boil, burn） 操作过程： 如何写老师： Step 1: 写话语：“What are you doing?” he shouted. 2: 加表情：“What are you doing?” he shouted with an expression of utter disbelief 3. 加眼睛：“What are you doing?” he shouted with an expression of utter disbelief, his eyes narrowed, 4.加拳头：“What are you doing?” he

4、 shouted with an expression of utter disbelief, his eyes narrowed, pounding on the table with his fist 5.加眼神：“What are you doing?” he shouted with an expression of utter disbelief, his eyes narrowed, pounding on the table with his fist and glaring at me furiously. 如何写我： 肢体：Trembling nervously, I 加咬指

5、甲：Trembling nervously, I gnawed at my fingernails 加低头：Trembling nervously, I gnawed at my fingernails and kept my head down 加眼睛：Trembling nervously, I gnawed at my fingernails and kept my head down and my eyes fixed to the floor. 加心跳：Trembling nervously, I gnawed at my fingernails and kept my head d

6、own and my eyes fixed to the floor. Butterflies fluttered in my heart and stomach. I could feel my heart thumping wildly 加手心流汗：Trembling nervously, I gnawed at my fingernails and kept my head down and my eyes fixed to the floor. Butterflies fluttered in my heart and stomach. I could feel my heart th

7、umping wildly and my palm sweating. 完整： “What are you doing?” he shouted with an expression of utter disbelief, his eyes narrowed, pounding on the table with his fist and glaring at me furiously. Trembling nervously, I gnawed at my fingernails and kept my head down and my eyes fixed to the floor. Butterflies fluttered in my heart and stomach. I could feel my heart thumping wildly and my palm sweating.