2021届高考英语二轮复习写作必做题-短文改错+书面表达（二）含答案及解析.doc

1、2021 届高考英语二轮复习届高考英语二轮复习 短文改错短文改错+书面表达书面表达（二）（二） 题组一题组一： 1.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改 你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多 有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的 词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 Dear Lucy, I am glad to receive

2、your e-mail ask me about my future career plan. Here I want to share them with you. As the matter of fact, I want to be a translator. To begin with, I am fond of the languages, of that my English is always second to none. I appreciate the beauty hiding in literature. In addition, literature is like

3、a bridge which helps people understand the world better. I did hope the classical Chinese literature works can be conveyed every corner of the world with my efforts. So what do you find my plan? Please reply to me in your convenience. Yours, Karo 2.假定你是晨光中学的李津。你校英语社团的微信公众号开 展以“Trash Sorting Around U

4、s”为题的征文活动。根据个人对 垃圾分类的所见所做所感,要求同学们积极投稿,推荐给其他 同学。现请你投稿,文章内容应包括: 1.你的学校或所在社区(community)垃圾分类情况; 2.你是如何做的; 3.你的感受。 参考词汇:可循环垃圾 recyclable waste 不可循环垃圾 unrecyclable waste 有害垃圾 hazardous waste 注意: 1.词数不少于 100; 2.内容充实、行文连贯; Trash Sorting Around Us November 15, 2020 When it comes to trash sorting, _ _ _ _ _ _

5、 _ By Li Jin 题组二题组二： 1.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改 你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多 有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的 词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 Of all my hobby, gardening is the one that makes me particular happy

6、. I have a little yard behind my house, where I grow up all kinds of fruits and vegetables. In each season, I can see the variety of flowers in my yard. Summer is the time where watermelons grow in and out of my small yard. Tomatoes are also seeing among the others. I wake up early every morning in

7、order take care of my fruits and vegetables. It is an interested job to remove both weeds but other plants that disturb the growth of my fruits and vegetables. Actually, so far I have only tell about my back yard. 2.针对目前学生在食堂用餐时的浪费现象,学校英语俱乐部 决定开展一次征文活动,题目是“Saving Food Is Our Duty”。请 你写一篇英语征文,内容包括: 1

8、. 食物浪费现象; 2. 节俭用餐的意义; 3. 你有何建议。 注意: 1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Saving Food Is Our Duty _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 答案以答案以及解析及解析 题组一： 1.答案： Dear Lucy, I am glad to receive your e-mail ask asking me about my future career plan. Here I want to share them it with you. As the a matter of fact, I want to be a tr

9、anslator. To begin with, I am fond of the languages, of w that hich my English is always second to none. I appreciate the beauty hiding hidden in literature. In addition, literature is like a bridge which helps people understand the world better. I did do hope the classical Chinese literature works

10、can be conveyed to every corner of the world with my efforts. So what how do you find my plan? Please reply to me in at your convenience. Yours, Karo 2.答案： Trash Sorting Around Us Nov.15,2020 When it comes to trash my school and community are doing a wonderful job. Dustbins in different colors have

11、been put into use in certain places. Trash is also sorted into recyclable waste, unrecyclable waste and hazardous waste, which is now deeply rooted in peoples mind and making a change to the way we live. In addition, I am also a volunteer in our school and community, Learning plenty of knowledge abo

12、ut trash sorting via the Internet, I have been taking an active part in activities of trash sorting in my school and community Therefore, I think it essential to sort trash out Not only can it save our money and time while dealing with trash, but it also can enhance the quality of life So I approve

13、of trash sorting for our own sake and the sake of nature. By Li Jin 题组二： 1.答案： Of all my hobby hobbies , gardening is the one that makes me particular particularly happy. I have a little yard behind my house, where I grow up all kinds of fruits and vegetables. In each season, I can see the a variety

14、 of flowers in my yard. Summer is the time where when watermelons grow in and out of my small yard. Tomatoes are also seeing seen among the others. I wake up early every morning in order to take care of my fruits and vegetables. It is an int interested eresting job to remove both weeds but and other

15、 plants that disturb the growth of my fruits and vegetables. Actually, so far I have only tell told about my back yard. 解析： 1.hobbyhobbies【解析】all 修饰名词复数。 2.particularparticularly【解析】修饰形容词 happy 用副词。 3.删去 up【解析】grow up 是不及物动词组，种植物用 grow 即可。 4.thea【解析】a variety of 词组，意思是“各种各样的”。 5.where when【解析】先行词是 t

16、ime 表时间，关系词要用 when。 6.seeing seen【解析】tomatoes 和 seen 是被动关系。西红 柿也是其中之一应表述为 tomatoes are also seen among the others. 7.order 后面加 to 【解析】 in order to do 固定搭配“为了(做)” 8.interested interesting 【解析】interested 意思为“感兴趣 的”，常用来说明人的感受，作表语，其主语通常是人。 interesting 意思为“有趣的”， 常用来说明事物本身具有令人感 兴趣的特征。此处用 interesting 修饰 jo

17、b. 9.butand【解析】bothand“两者都.”本题表示除去杂草 和其他植物。 10.tell told 【解析】本题 So far 后跟了 have 可以推出使 用了现在完成时，所以用过去分词 told. 2.答案： Saving Food Is Our Duty Nowadays, wasting food seems very common. Take our school canteen for example, some students tend to fetch more food than they can, so some ends up in the dustbin

18、. What a pity! Saving food is a virtue. Now we can enjoy nice, rich and safe foods in the peaceful times, but it doesnt mean forgetting where they are from and what happened in hungry days. Besides, saving is also good for saving resources and living healthily. As young students, we should regard saving food as our duty, too. When eating in the school, wed better fetch a small order to avoid unnecessary waste. If there are leftovers, we can take them back home. In short, its time to make a change for saving food. Lets mean what we say!