2021届高考英语二轮复习写作必做题-短文改错+书面表达（一）含答案及解析.doc

1、2021 届高考英语二轮复习届高考英语二轮复习 短文改错短文改错+书面表达书面表达（一）（一） 题组一题组一： 1.文中共有 10 处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除 或修改。 增加:在缺词处加上一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加 的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不记分。 “Welcome to the Arctic,” the guide said, as we jumped onto the runway. Both of

2、we were a little surprised by the fact which the temperature was extremely low. Kiruna was most northern town in Sweden, 144 kilometers above the Arctic Circle. Around us, forest covering by snow spread away for nearly 390,000 square kilometers. A strong wind shakes the cabin as we landed on. We had

3、 been travelling from Denver for 18 hour. “Tell me again,” I asked my wife, Kim, “Why are we coming to the Arctic in winter?” “Just to seeing the wonderful view.” she answered cheerful. She loves the cold, but she saysit wakes her up. 2.假如你是新华中学的学生会主席李华,你校学生会应英国 Westminster School 邀请,下星期将到该校进行交流访问,向

4、该 校学生介绍中国传统文化。 请你给该校联系人 Mr. Smith 写一 封邮件,信的要点如下: (1)感谢对方的邀请; (2)询问食宿、活动安排和说明要介绍的传统文化内容; (3)祝愿交流活动成功。 注意: (1)词数 100 左右; (2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; (3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:食宿 accommodation Dear Mr. Smith, I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union of Xin Hua Middle School. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Thank you

5、for your attention! Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 题组二题组二： 1.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改 你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多 有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的 词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 I have been learning English si

6、nce I am in primary school, but the truth was that I was not so good at listening. No matter how hardly I tried, I couldnt understand clearly which my English teachers or native speakers said. One day, I was surfing the Internet while an advertisement for English listening drew your attention. To my

7、 amaze,it was a website that recordings of some well-known books were provided. When see the website, I fell in love it, which turned out to be that useful. Now I have made a progress in listening. 2.假定你是杨明,作为一名交换生(an exchange student)刚结 束在英国为期一个月的学习。学习期间,你和房东 Mr. Wilson 结下了深厚的友谊。 请按下列要点给 Mr. Wilson

8、 发一封邮件: 1.对 Mr. Wilson 在你生活上的照顾和学习上的帮助表示感谢; 2.希望保持联系; 3.邀请他来中国游玩。 注意: 1.词数:100 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头已经写好,不计入总词数; Dear Mr. Wilson, Time flies! Ive been back home. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Best wishes. Yours, Yang Ming 答案以及解析答案以及解析 题组一： 1.答案： “Welcome to the Arctic,” the guide said, as we jumped onto the r

9、unway. Both of we us were a little surprised by the fact which that the temperature was extremely low. Kiruna was the most northern town in Sweden, 144 kilometers above the Arctic Circle. Around us, forest cov covering ered by snow spread away for nearly 390,000 square kilometers. A strong wind shak

10、es shook the cabin as we landed on. We had been travelling from Denver for 18 hour hours . “Tell me again,” I asked my wife, Kim, “Why are we coming to the Arctic in winter?” “Just to seeing see the wonderful view.” she answered cheerful cheerfully . She loves the cold, but and she saysit wakes her

11、up. 2.答案： Dear Mr. Smith, I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union of Xin Hua Middle School. Thank you for inviting us to visit your school next week, for which we do feel honored. Now I am writing for more detailed information. Since it will be our first trip to Britain, we would like to know det

12、ails about our accommodation arrangement. If possible, we prefer to live in host families to experience British culture. Besides, could you please e-mail our schedule to me at your convenience? Finally, in terms of Chinese traditional culture, considering that there is growing interest in Tang Poems

13、, we plan to introduce this great cultural treasure. For better interaction, fellow students of your school can prepare some relative questions beforehand. Id appreciate it if you could give us an early reply. Wish our interaction activity a great success! Thank you for your attention! Best wishes!

14、Yours, Li Hua 题组二： 1.答案： I have been learning English since I am was in primary school, but the truth was that I was not so good at listening. No matter how hardly hard I tried, I couldnt understand clearly which what my English teachers or native speakers said. One day, I was surfing the Internet w

15、hile when an advertisement for English listening drew your my attention. To my amaze amazement , it was a website w that here recordings of some well-known books were provided. When see seeing the website, I fell in love with it, which turned out to be that useful. Now I have made a progress in list

16、ening. 2.答案： Dear Mr. Wilson, Time flies! Ive been home. How I miss the days we spent together! All I saw and experienced left a lasting impression on me. It was your help and kindness that made my study and life in the UK special and enjoyable. Thanks to your help, I got used to the life there soon

17、. I still miss the delicious meals you prepared for me. Besides, I really appreciate your patience while talking with me. It was a wonderful time for me to improve my spoken English. I hope we can stay in touch with each other so that we can communicate with each other to know more about the Chinese

18、 and British culture. In addition, it would be a great honor for me to invite you to come to my country in the near future, when you can experience the colorful Chinese culture. Best wishes. Yours, Yang Ming 解析：考查半开放性作文的写作。文字提示中只给出了部分 的要点,考生可以在生活上的照顾和学习上的帮助展开说明, 其中具体的做法,和你的感激之情。.写作时注意准确运用时 态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词 句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更 有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。 考点:考查半 开放性作文 点评:首先认真审题,并在脑海中回想自己积累的 哪些句式、句型、单词能用进来,这些单词、句型都应是经典 的,不会错的。写的过程中,多注意灵活使用定语从句,包括非 限制性定语从句。要熟悉英美人写文章的习惯,遇到专有地 名、人名一定要用非限制性定语从句,强调唯一性。平时的英 语作文就可以多尝试使用这些表达,考试时才能游刃有余,胸 有成竹。