08 高考英语书面表达的“七项基本原则”-冲刺2021年高考英语书面表达满分技巧.docx

1、高考英语高考英语书面表达书面表达的的“七项基本原则七项基本原则” 一、一、 长短句原则长短句原则 工作还得一张一驰呢，老让读者读长句，累死人！写一个短小精辟的句 子，相反，却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或 者段末，也可以揭示主题： As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a w

2、ay quite similar. 如此可见，长短句结合，抑扬顿挫，岂不爽哉？牢记！ 强烈建议： 1、在文章第一段（开头）用一长一短，且先长后短； 2、在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点 的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉！ 3、文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。 4、二、二、 主题句原则主题句原则 5、议论性性的文章一定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头（保险型）或者 结尾，让读者一目了然，必会平安无事！ 6、特别提示：隐藏主体句可是要冒险的！ 7、To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons an

3、d be fully prepared before the exam （主题句） . Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly. 三、三、 一一 二二 三原则三原则 考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否 结构清楚，条理自然。破解方法很简单，只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入 到你的几个要点前就清楚了。 1）first, second, third, last（不推荐，原因：俗） 2）firstly, secondly, thirdl

4、y, finally（不推荐，原因：俗） 3）the first, the second, the third, the last（不推荐，原因：俗） 4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly（不推荐，原 因：俗） 5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（强烈推荐） 6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（强烈推荐） 7）first and foremost, besides, last but not

5、 least（强烈推荐） 8）most important of all, moreover, finally（强烈推荐） 9）on the one hand, on the other hand（适用于两点的情况） 10）for one thing, for another thing（适用于两点的情况） 建议：不仅仅在写作中注意，平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚！ 四、四、 短语优先原则短语优先原则 考试时， 如果使用短语， 有两个好处： 其一、 用短语会使文章增加亮点。 其二、凑字数。 比如：I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.

6、I want it.可以用短语表达：I am looking forward to it. 这样字数明显增加，表达也更准确。 五、多实少虚原则五、多实少虚原则 多用实词，少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如 我们说一个很好的时候，不应该之说 nice 这样空洞的词，应该使用一些诸 如 generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm- hearted, hospital 之类 的形象词。再比如：走出房间，general 的词是：walk out of the room，但是 小偷走出房间应该说：slip out of th

7、e room，小姐走出房间应该说：sail out of the room，小孩走出房间应该说：dance out of the room，老人走出房间应该 说：stagger out of the room。 所以多用实词，少用虚词，文章将会大放异彩！ 六、六、 多变句式原则多变句式原则 1）加法（串联）加法（串联） 都希望写下很长的句子，像个老外似的，可就是怕写错，怎么办，最保 险的写长句的方法就是这些，可以在任何句子之间加 and, 但最好是前后的 句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说：I enjoy music and he is fond of playing guitar. 如果是二

8、者并列的，我们可以用一个超级句式：Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm. 其它的短语可以用：besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover 2）转折（拐弯抹角）转折（拐弯抹角） 批评某人缺点的时候，我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点，然后转入 正题，再说缺点，这种方式虽然阴险了点，可却比较容易让人接受。所以 呢，我们说话的时候，只要在要点之前先来点废话，注意二者之间用个专 这次就够了。 The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition。

9、 The coat was thin, but it was warm. 更多的短语：despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, 3）因果（因果（so, so, so） 讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序，先什么，后什么，所以然后这个 词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系！ The snow began to fall, so we went home. 更多短语：then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, as a result, for this

10、reason, so that 4）失衡句（头重脚轻，或者头轻脚重）失衡句（头重脚轻，或者头轻脚重） 有些人脑袋大，身体小，或者有些人脑袋小，身体大，虽然我们不希望 长成这个样子，可如果真的是这样了，也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文 章中如果出现这样的句子，就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就 是主语从句，表语从句，宾语从句的变形。 举例：This is what I can do. Whether he can go with us or not is not sure. 同样主语、 宾语、 表语可以改成如下的复杂成分： When to go, Why he goes away 5）附加（

11、多此一举）附加（多此一举） 运用定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。 The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine. I dont enjoy that book you are reading。 Mr.Liu, our oral English teacher, is easy- going. 其实很简单，同位语- - 要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成；定 语从句借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中。 七、七、 挑战极限原则挑战极限原则 在学生的文章中，很少发现诸如独立主格的句子，其实也很简单，只要 花上 5 分钟的时间

12、看看就可以领会，它就是分词的一种特殊形式，分词要 求主语一致，而独立主格则不然。比如： The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills. Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China. Everything (being) ready , hey started out. The teacher to help us, we will succeed. 如

13、果您可写出一些这样的句子，可得高分。 实战演练实战演练 请用高级词汇对下文黑体部分进行提升请用高级词汇对下文黑体部分进行提升 考生作文考生作文 Dear Peter， It is a great honor for me to invite you to 1.take part in the activity “Build a Civilized Campus” this month. We 2.plan to go hand in hand to 3.build our civilized campus where beauty and harmony meet. To achieve th

14、e goal，well 4.ask the school to communicate with each other in polite words. Meanwhile，we 5.should behave ourselves and obey school rules. As a nice environment 6.is good for us，well 7.try our best to create a pleasant school environment. All the above is to 8.lead to the good conduct of teachers an

15、d students in our school. It would be nice if you could join us. Yours， Li Hua 升格作文升格作文 Dear Peter， It is a great honor for me to invite you to 1.participate_in the activity “Build a Civilized Campus” this month. We 2.aim_to go hand in hand to 3.set_up our civilized campus where beauty and harmony m

16、eet. To achieve the goal，well 4.call_on the school to communicate with each other in polite words. Meanwhile ， we 5.are_supposed_to behave ourselves and obey school rules. As a nice environment 6.is_beneficial_to us，well 7.spare_no_effort to create a pleasant school environment. All the above is to

17、8.contribute_to the good conduct of teachers and students in our school. It would be nice if you could join us. Yours， Li Hua 根据汉语提示完成下面的作文根据汉语提示完成下面的作文 Dear Henry， How is everything？I am writing to invite you to join a paper- cutting show to be held this Sunday. 1 _(据报道， 将有一个中国剪纸展) this Sunday in t

18、he art gallery，which is expected to last about eight hours from 8： 00 am to 4：00 pm. I know you are always interested in traditional Chinese culture.2._(你越了解它，你就会越喜欢它)， so I think we can go there together.3._ _(不仅要展出 各种剪纸作品)，4._(而且工匠会当场向游客 展示如何把纸剪成不同的形状)I am sure you will feel amazed at this traditi

19、onal Chinese art. Would you like to attend the show with me this Sunday? Im looking forward to your early reply. Yours， Li Hua 答案： 1.It is reported that there will be a Chinese paper- cutting show 2The more you know about it，the better you will like it 3Not only will all kinds of paper- cutting work

20、s be on display 4but (also)the craftsmen will show visitors how to cut paper into different shapes on the spot 选用适当的过渡性词语补全短文选用适当的过渡性词语补全短文 to begin with，last but not least，moreover， as far as Im concerned (2019 安徽五校联盟第二次检测) Dear Jim， I am glad that you are interested in Chinese culture and eager to

21、 explore more. As far as Im concerned，the Ancient Poetry is your best choice. To begin with， by learning Chinese ancient poems， you can have an extensive knowledge of history and culture in ancient China. Moreover，you can feel the charm of the language by reading poems， which helps to improve your C

22、hinese. To follow the course well， youd better read and recite as many poems as possible. Last but not least，it is a good idea to search for related background knowledge so that you will fully understand the conception of poetry. What do you think of the course? I am sure you will have a lot of fun from it. Yours， Li Hua