小六英语第21讲：写作指导二（教师版）.docx

1、第 21 讲写作指导二 小六作文解题技巧小六作文解题技巧 一、一、 小六英语作文解题三部曲小六英语作文解题三部曲 1. 审题 审题这部分主要包括要写文章的文体、时态、人称 2. 草拟 在草稿纸上先草拟一份作文大致框架及要运用的精彩句型、短语 3 实践 在这部分要注意字迹的整洁、清楚 1、 掌握一些常见素材和好词好句； 2、 重点短语及重点单词的积累、讲解 (1) 以“A Farewell Party”为题按下面的要求写一篇英语小作文。 要求：1.语句通顺，条理清楚，书写清晰、规范。 2.不得少于 50 个单词。 A Farewell Party Its the end of the schoo

2、l year. The students in Class Three have a farewell party. They invite their parents to the party. Many students have performance at the party. Look! Chen Jie is singing songs. Zhang Peng is playing the piano. Sarah is playing the erhu. Mike is doing Chinese Kung fu. What is Miss White doing? She is

3、 dancing. Everybody has a lot of fun. But Liu Yun isnt here. She has a cold. She is at home. The classmates are going to visit her after party. They prepare many gifts for her. And they will take a picture together. 【要领点评】【要领点评】 写法：写法：这篇习作记叙了一个告别晚会。记叙了学年末的告别晚会上大家都表演了什么节目， 以及晚会后大家要去看望刘芸的故事。 时态：时态： 这篇

4、习作可采用三种时态来写。 由于本单元主要出现的时态是一般将来时和现在进行 时，所以这里我们才用一般现在时，现在进行时和一般将来时来写。 句型：句型：一般现在时：主语+动词原形+其他。 现在进行时：主语+现在分词+其他。 一般将来时：主语+ be going to / will +动词原形+其他。 注意：注意： 由于本篇文章中所涉及的时态比较多， 所以要注意一下时态的变化。 学生们都在表演 什么节目可以用现在进行时，将要去做什么，要用将来时。另外还要注意，一般现在 时在肯定句中，主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词也要用第三人称单数。 (2) 以“Toms Holiday”为题按下面的要求写一篇英语小作

5、文。 要求：1.语句通顺，条理清楚，书写清晰、规范。 2.不得少于 50 个单词。 Toms Holiday Tom went to Beijing by plane on his holiday. Every day he had fun with his parents. They went to the NaturePark. They saw elephants. They went swimming. They ate lots of delicious food. They also took many beautiful pictures. They will come back

6、 home tomorrow. In a word, they enjoy their holiday. 【要领点评】【要领点评】 写法： 这篇习作是按照地点的顺序记叙假期里的活动， 记叙了假期里去北京做了哪些活动以 及对活动的感受。 时态：这篇文章可采用两种时态来写。由于本单元主要讲述的是一般过去时的用法，所以这 里大部分我们采用一般过去时比较合适。 句型：主语+动词过去式+其他 主语+will+动词原形+其他 注意：注意： 活动的相关表达法可采用旧知识和新知识相结合去写， 但要注意动词过去式的变化规 则。例：eat 的过去式为 ate，为不规则变化。 以“A Post Card from

7、John ”为题按下面的要求写一篇英语小作文。 要求：1.语句通顺，条理清楚，书写清晰、规范。 2.不得少于 50 个单词。 A A Post Card from John Dear Sarah, This post card shows you a picture from my holiday. We got Kunming on Wednesday. On the first day we visited StoneForest. Its very beautiful. I love it very much. On Thursday Kathy and I got lost in th

8、e city. We asked a policeman for help. He helped us find the hotel. On Friday we went to a small village. We saw folk dances and ate some fresh vegetables from the farm. We enjoyed ourselves. Last day we went shopping and bought some presents for friends. Tomorrow we will be back home 【要领点评】 写法：这是一封

9、明信片，按照时间顺序记叙了约翰假期去昆明度假这几天的活动。分别记叙 了游览石林，迷路，看民族舞，购物，买礼物等活动。 时态：这篇文章由于是记叙已经发过的事，所以大部分可以采用一般过去时来写。 句型：主语+动词过去式+其他。 注意：注意： 描述已经发生过的事要用一般过去时， 在写这篇文章的时候要注意动词的过去式的变 化，尤其是动词过去式的不规则变化。没发生过的事要用一般将来时。 题目：写一篇介绍自己老师的短文 要求: 1 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范。 2 单词在 50-60 个之间。 【参考范例】【参考范例】 My Teacher Miss Lin is my Eng

10、lish teacher. In my eyes, she is not only my teacher, but also my good friend. She is not tall. She is thin. She has long hair. Her face is round. Her eyes are small. She likes swimming. She likes singing English songs, too. She often teaches us English songs. I love her very much. I also want to be

11、 a teacher when I grow up. 题目：写一篇关于自己最喜欢的节日的短文 要求: 1 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范。 2 单词在 50-60 个之间。 【参考范例】【参考范例】 My favorite Holiday My favorite holiday is the Christmas Day.Christmas Day is on December,25th of every year.On that day, I always send a lot of holiday letters to all of my teachers and c

12、lassmates.I also send e-mails to my friends on the Internet.Moreover, I can receive many surprising Christmas gifts from my family members and friends.such as food and chocolate.So I feel very excited when the Christmas Day is coming.Therefore, the Christmas Day becomes my favorite holiday. 1.写作写作 (

13、1) 题目：“My mother”为题写一篇作文 要求:1 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范。 2 单词在 50-60 个之间。 参考例文： My Mother My mother is a shop assistant. Shes thirty-six years old. Shes tall and thin too. Shes pretty. Her hair is short and straight. She likes to sing and she likes Zhang Xueyous songs and English songs.She likes t

14、o eat crabs. She always goes shopping with me. Shes good at Maths. When I have problems with Maths she will help me. She doesnt like pets; because she thinks they are dirty. I like my mother very much. (2) 以“Myself”为题写一篇作文 要求: 1 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范。 2 单词在 50-60 个之间。 参考例文：参考例文： Myself My name

15、 is Winnie.Im a 15 years old girl. I live in the beautiful city of Rizhao. Im an active， lovely and clever girl.In the school, my favorite subject is math.Perhaps someone thinks its difficult to study well.But I like it.I believe that if you try your best， everything can be done well. I also like sp

16、orts very much such as，running，volleyball and so on. Im kind-hearted. If you need help, please come to me . I hope we can be good friends! OK.This is me .A sunny girl. (3) 以“My Days of the Week ”为题写一篇作文 要求: 1 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范。 2 单词在 50-60 个之间。 参考例文：参考例文： My Days of the Week Im a student a

17、nd I am in Grade 5.Iget up at six oclock every day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven oclock. I have classes from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I dont have to go to school on school, a nd Ilike to go swimming on tha

18、t day. 2.阅读短文判断正确与否阅读短文判断正确与否 Something about Thailand Bangkok is the capital of Thailand, and it is very different from Guangzhou. There are many temples in Bangkok. It is hot all year round, so there are a lot of fruits, the most famous fruit is durian. There are many rivers in the city, so the ma

19、rket on the water is very famous, you can buy flowers, vegetables, fruits and other things on the boats. The best time to visit Thailand is at the end of March or the beginning of April, because it is the biggest festival in Thailand-Water Festival. It is the beginning of their New Year. Before the

20、festival, people clean their house and cook nice food. During the festival, people sing, dance and throw water on each other. They think that water can clean away bad things and bring good luck. How interesting it is! T or F: ( ) 1.Bangkok is the capital of England. ( ) 2.It is very cold in winter in Thailand. ( ) 3.We can visit many temples and the famous-market on the water in Bangkok. ( ) 4.Water Festival is the most popular festival in Thailand. ( ) 5.During Water Festival the people throw water on each other.