1、Unit3-Sports and fitness 单元重点回顾单元重点回顾 what matters is her faith, a faith that miracles do exist.” 总评 原文主要讲述了小女孩的弟弟病重，因家贫而无法救治。 她听父母说只有奇迹可以救弟弟，于是天真地去药店买奇迹，恰好遇 见一位陌生人，自称可以把奇迹卖给她。续写部分描述了小女孩的善 良纯真带来了奇迹，医生来到她家竭力救治，遵循原文的情节发展， 展现了人性的光辉。同时，续写部分与两段所给的开头段落语衔接也 十分紧密。 亮点呈现 (1)本文运用了非谓语动词(deeply impressed by her
2、innocence)、名 词性从句(what matters is her faith)等语法结构，更是准确运用了 specializing in, with payment of 等高级短语，使得全文十分出彩。 (2)衔接词 Later, And, Now 等用来承接故事情节的发展，行文流 畅、连贯、自然。 (3)本篇合理地使用了 10 个关键词语里的 8 个，符合要求。 实战演练：实战演练： 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故 事。 My_mother used to ask me what the most important part of the body is
3、. Through the years I would take a guess at what I thought was the correct answer. When I was younger, I thought sound was very important to us as humans, so I said, “My ears, Mommy.” She said, “No. Many people are deaf. But they are doing well in their life. You keep thinking about it and I will as
4、k you again soon.” Several years passed before she asked me again. Since making my first attempt, I had contemplated (深思) the correct answer. So this time I told her, “Mommy, sight is very important to everybody, so it must be our eyes.” She looked at me and told me, “You are learning fast, but the
5、answer is not correct because there are many people who are blind.” Over the years my mother asked me a couple more times and always her answer was, “No, but you are getting smarter every year, my child.” Then last year, my grandpa died. Everybody was hurt. Everybody was crying. My mom looked at me
6、when it was our turn to say our final goodbye to grandpa. She asked me, “Do you know the most important body part yet, my dear？” I was surprised when she asked me this on this occasion. I always thought this was a game between her and me. She saw the confusion on my face and told me, “This question
7、is very important. How you answer it shows whether you have learned about life. For every body part you gave me in the past, I have told you were wrong and I have given you a reason why. But today is the day you will know the answer.” I looked puzzled. “All your previous answersears, eyes, hands, he
8、art . They are all very important to yourself. But this time I need you to think of something that is important to others.” 注意： 1所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 2至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1： “My dear, the most important body part，” she said, Paragraph 2： “Mom, I understand. And you can cry on my shoulder too.” 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。作者的母亲过去常问作者，身体 上最重要的部位是什么。在不同的时间作者给出的答案不一，但都不 是正确答案。最后在祖父葬礼这天，母亲告诉了作者正确答案。 精彩范文 Paragraph 1： Paragraph 2：
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