英语作文1.闪光作文开头.pdf

1、一、开头类： 语文作文常言题好一半文，英语也一样，好的开头也就是一篇成功作文的一半，a good beginning is half done, 想想阅卷老师要批全年级噶许多作文，如果每篇上来都像 串通好了一样的 I think I think, 这会是如何郁闷的感觉=，always put yourself in the others shoes, 写作文的时候也要换位思考，替批分的老师想想阿四。如果这个老师， 在进行了一上午枯燥的批阅过程后，猛然间，读到一个缤纷绚烂的开头，被深深 shock 到，被 deeply impressed 到, 那会是何等的惊艳！下面就来欣赏一些容易吸引眼球的闪

2、 亮开头。 开头公式一：名人名言+谚语俗语 有人问了，“我没有记住名言，怎么办？尤其是英语名言？”，很好办：编! 尽管编! 但 是一定要听起来很有道理呦！而且没准将来我们就是名人呢！对吧？不过要记住，一篇 120 字左右的作文里，出现 1-2 句名言点缀一下即可，切忌为求华丽生搬硬套，那样只 会成为你的累赘，在老师眼里也只是一种显摆的行为，不讨巧。 在用到名言的时候，大致有这么 4 种写 1. A proverb says， 2. It goes without saying that 3. As a classic proverb goes that （推荐！as a proverb/say

3、ing goes 几乎人人会用， 但加上个 classic 味道一下子就不一样了！） 4.there is much truth in the saying “”（俗话说得好） 5. cited as saying，“” 援引的话（这个比较漂亮，用的人也相对较少，推荐！） 推荐背诵的名人名言+谚语： 在论述努力学习一类的作文中可用到以下这些 Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。（强调多做练习的重要性） Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。（学习要坚持不懈） Its never too old to learn. 活到

4、老，学到老。 A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里之行始于足下。（强调 脚踏实地的重要性） Action speaks louder than words. 行动胜过语言。（学习，是要去做的） Experience is the mother of wisdom. 实践出真知。（做学问要实践） Rome was not built in a day. 伟业非一日之功。（学习是个积累的过程） One false step will make a great difference. 失之毫厘，谬之千里。 （强调治学要严

5、谨） An idle 闲散的 youth, a needy 贫困的 age. 少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。（不好好学习 你就悲剧了） As a man sows, so shall he reap. 种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆。（声明天道酬勤的真理） All work and no play makes jack a dull boy. 只工作不休息，聪明孩子也变傻。（也要说 说学习不能过度） 刚学完的 O6 课文提倡健康不要一味注重外表美，前面的 O2 也是这个主题，搞不好考 试作文也出，下面就来看看关于外表的一些名句+谚语 Beauty will buy no beef. 漂亮不能当饭吃。 Beaut

6、y is only skin-deep. 美貌不过一张皮 Beauty without virtue is like a rose without fragrance. 无德之美犹如无香之玫瑰，徒 有其表。 Good looks are not a must. 美貌并非必需 A fine coat does not make a gentleman. 衣着并不能装扮出一个君子 Never judge a book by its cover. 不可以貌取人 开头公式二：数字统计，用报告说话 要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。 原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的，可是在考试的时候哪管

7、那三七二十一， 但编无妨，只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型： 1. According to a recent survey, 2. A recent statistics shows that 3. A recent survey revealed that 开头公式三：描述身边现象/生活现状/社会现象 在写到一些要求对某类热点民生话题的作文时，开头可以这样写 1. An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that （比如意识到环保、 节能、低碳的重要性） 2. Many individuals, if

8、 not the most, harbor the idea that （比较高阶的一种，词 漂亮又有插入语，推荐！） 3. Now, it is generally accepted/commonly thought that 4. There is a growing tendency for to do （开始呈现上升趋势） 5. Nowadays, many people are living under the idea/illusion/thought that 6. has caused wide public concern recent years（描述某件引起广泛关注的话题

9、时） 7. There is a general debate on/over Heated/hot debates have been stirred up these day/recently（写到有争议的话题时） 8. is now being questioned by more and more/a increasing number of people（写 到某些举措不得人心，或者你持反对态度的时候，可以这么写） 开头公式四：介绍某些人、事、物 1. When speaking of/When it comes to （万能公式） 2. ，described as ，is e.g.

10、 Microblog, described as an entire new form of communication, has now caught on quickly among teenagers by enabling the users to update their latest status within just a few words. 3. It seems that is （sweeping the world/catching on/becoming popular overnight）（比如说说科技的飞速发展，电脑、网络的兴起等等） 4. For many/mos

11、t of us, is e.g. For most of us, a drink of water is just a matter of turning on a tap. 开头公式五：气势磅礴的排比 1.For ,it is .For , it is .And for ，it is（从多方面多角度去描述你 要写的东西，前两个要为第三个蓄势，观点最后亮） e.g. For baseball fans, 2009 was the year of the Yankees. For job seekers, it was the year of the Great Recession. And f

12、or people who track baby names, it was the year of the vampire. 2. What do you but ?What but ？What but ？（在想要勾起读 者兴趣，增强文章互动性时可用这个，不同于上句的层层递进式，这个句式偏重三句并 列） e.g. What do you use every single day, but never pay for? What is truly yours but came from somewhere else? What is very personal but shared with

13、everyone? The answer? Its your name. 3. is a ，a , a （递进式） e.g. First love, is a surge of adrenalin, a rush of blood, a thing of innocence and pain that lasts a lifetime. 初恋是情感巨浪的汹涌，是情感在热血中的奔流，是情感纯真的表露，亦是一生中永恒 的伤痛 开头公式六：回忆式开头 回忆式的写法的作用就相当于语文中的倒叙，用你的开头将读者带回到当时的情景，用 在叙述一件事情的作文中效果尤其好 1. I never forget/r

14、emember/bear in mind the day when e.g. I never forget the sweet day when we walked down the street hand in hand. 2. I remember some words said by +某位名人或熟知的人 e.g. I remember some words by the third President of the United States, 3. Once upon a time was just a （用于强调某人某物今非昔比时） e.g. Once upon a time Li

15、ubei was just a peddler selling straw sandals. 曾经刘备也只是个卖草鞋的小贩 4. There was a time when I/we/you did sth e.g. There was a time when we met with a series of disasters but we didnt let go our hope. 5. There are very few things/people I truly love/hate in life.（few 表达你对该事物的 特殊感情，再用 truly 进一步强调，接着要做的就是开始

16、具体叙述你所要写之事） 开头公式七：否定句开头 有时候否定句起到的强调效果往往要好于肯定句，也更具有文采 1. Perhaps no one/nothing else （on Earth/in history）has such a as （用 来强调描写对象的独一无二） e.g. Perhaps no one else on Earth has such an affinity with the North Pole as Jean-Louis Etienne. 也许这个世界上没有人会像 Jean-Louis Etienne 那样与北极有过如此亲密的接触 2. There arent many

17、 （ people/teenagers/citizens ） who have had the honor/chance to e.g. There arent very many US citizens who have had the honor to meet a president, let alone a kid from a foreign country. 3. No has received more praise and abuse than e.g. No invention has received more praise and abuse than computer.

18、 开头公式八：强大的倒装句 相比前几种开头，倒装句式更能显示一个人的英语功底，同时因为用它的人相对较少， 也更能博得阅卷老师“欢心” 1. Never before in history has （the issue of） been more （controversial; serious; appealing） than now（十分强大的一个句式，既有倒装又有双重否定，极力 推荐！） e.g. Never before in history has the issue of overpopulation been more evident than now. e.g. Never bef

19、ore in history has the relationship between China and Japan been more hopeful than now. 中日两国关系从没像现在这么乐观过/中日两国关系空前乐观 2. Gone are the days when was/were; did/could do（！ ！ ！强大句型！抒情记叙说 明文通用！此句一出如同必杀 ） e.g. Gone are the days when we strived, we laughed and cried together with Deng. e.g. Gone are the days when we could release the greenhouse gases without a second thought. 开头部分小结： 一般大多数情况下能够套用的格式大致有以上这么多种， 但所谓水无常形兵无常势， 创作的力量是无穷的，在灵感如涌泉，文思如尿崩的时候也不妨用自己独一无二的搭配 写出一个独一无二的开头，要知道，作文写到最高境界就是没有公式，自成一派，信手 拈来。毕竟人是活的，公式是死的，公式只是为你提供一个结构，就像一块优质的画布， 但颜料还得你自己往上涂。