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1、英语书面表达英语书面表达-festival Teaching aims: 1. To know the structure of a composition. 2. To make students compositions perfect. 3. To arouse interest in writing Key and difficult points: 1. To know the structure of a composition. 2. To make compositions perfect. Teaching methods: 1. Constructivism 2. Theo

2、ry of task-baked teaching and learning Teaching aids: Multi-media work sheets Teaching procedures Step1 warming-up and lead in 1. Greet the class as usual. 2. Brainstorm. Get students to think of some names phrases and sentences about festival as much as they can 3. Ask students to complete the work

3、 sheet on their own. Step 2 presentation 1 . A writing material 2. Guide students to know about some writing skills First ayalyze. Second list. After that, connect Then polish Finally check Step 3 practice Show them the rating criteria of writing . Step 4 pair work 1. Allow the students a few minute

4、s to correct the mistake they have written in their compositions by themselves. 2. Then let students exchange their compositions with their partner and comment their partners composition. Step 5 summary Conclusion: a good composition should be with a complete body, a reasonable ending, correct linki

5、ng words etc. Step 6 Homework 1, Rewrite your paper and hand it in. 2. Recite all the good patterns and sentences. 1. New Years Day 元旦 2. the Spring Festival 春节 3. Latern Festival 元宵节 4. Womens Day 妇女节 5. April Fools Day 愚人节 6. Easter Day 复活节 7. May Day劳动节 8. Mothers Day 母亲节 素材百宝箱 9. Childrens Day儿童

6、节 10. Dragon Boat Festival 端午节 11. Fathers Day 父亲节 12. Teachers Day教师节 13. the Mid-Autumn Festival中秋节 14. National Day国庆节 15. Thanksgiving Day感恩节 16. Christmas Day圣诞节 Work Sheet Task one: translation 带来好运 品尝各种美食 共度好时光 感谢某人 用装饰 给买些鲜花 Task two: 1.我想向你介绍一些关于圣诞节的事情. 2.中秋节是中国最重要的传统节日之一。 3.我总是在母亲节帮助妈妈擦洗窗户

7、好洗衣服。 4.感恩节在亚洲变得越来越受欢迎了。 审审列 连（词 句 ） 美 查 今天是父亲节，假定你是李华，请你给你的美国笔友John写一封电子邮件， 谈谈你如何与父亲一起度过这个特别的日子。要点如下： u 表达你与父亲间的感情； u 为父亲制作一张卡片； u 帮助父亲做点事； u 随父亲散步等。 注意： 1 词数 80-100 2 请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥 3 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写出，不计入总词数。 Dear John, Its Fathers Day today.Its a special day,isnt it?_ _ _ Whats your plan for Fathers

8、Day? Im looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua （2013安徽卷） 今天是父亲节，假定你是李华，请你给你的美国笔友John写一封电子邮件，谈谈你如何与父亲一起度过这个特别的日子。要点如 下： u 表达你与父亲间的感情； u 为父亲制作一张卡片； u 帮助父亲做点事； u 随父亲散步等。 注意： 1 词数 80-100 2 请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥 3 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写出，不计入总词数。 Dear John, Its Fathers Day today.Its a special day,isnt it?_ _ Wh

9、ats your plan for Fathers Day? Im looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 1 1 审审(Analyze) (Analyze) 仔细审题，圈出要点（审体裁，时态，要求） 文体：说明文 时态：表达与父亲的感情用一般现在时， 陈述自己要为父亲做的事应用一般将来时 Outline (提纲) Topic Father s Day Beginning Body 正文 What things Ending Purpose make a card to show my thanks show our love to

10、 our fathers 2 列 (List) 列出提纲，定好框架 ready to help me help him wash the car cook his favorite food play chess with him take a walk with him to make my father happy Beginning Body 正文 What things Ending Purpose show our love to our fathers ready to help me play chess with him take a walk with him make a

11、card to show my thanks help him wash the car cook his favorite food to make my father happy I think we should show our love to our fathers He is already there, ready to help me. I will make a beautiful card for him I will help him wash the car and cook his favorite food in the evening. I will take a

12、 walk with him and then play chess with him What I wish is to make him happy 3 .连(Connect) 找出关键，连词成句。 三、高级 句型 二、 丰富的词汇和语言 被动语态 从句 4.美 固定结构 一、合理的过渡词/句子 A good paragraph is one that contains proper lingking words 1. 列举 firstly, secondly, -finally；此外besides, in addition; 并且 also ; 一方面，另一方面 on one hand

13、, on the other hand； for one thing , for the other 2. 转折或让步 although , though , but, yet ; however; otherwise ; instead 3. 结果 as a result; so; in a word, anyway; after all; therefore; 4. 强调 最重要的是 above all ; most importantly; 首先 first of all; 最后一点也是很重要的一点 last but not the least 5. 表达个人观点 以我看来 in my

14、opinion ; 对于我来说 As for me ; 一般说来 generally speaking 6. 解释 事实上 in fact , as a matter of fact, actually;换句话说 in other words 大家都知道的 as we all know; Use proper conjunctions 简单句为主，根据自身水平适当运用结构复杂的句子。 Helen is a kind girl. Helen is the kindest girl that I have ever seen. There is no doubt that Helen is the

15、 kindest girl. The reason why I like her is that she is kind. She is a kind girl who always helps others. She is so kind that everyone likes her. She is not only kind but also clever. 要点是否齐全 ，字数控制在80-100之间 检查人称是否一致、时态是否准确 检查句与句之间、段与段之间是否使用恰当的连接词 没有把握的词或句子不要冒险,句式要丰富， 尽量用上一些高级词汇 工整誊写到答题卷上，尽量不要涂改，注意大小写

16、、标点 5. 检(Check) 仔细检查 Excellen t Poor Show Time After writing: self-check(自查) Grammar&Tense语法和时态 Structure结构(是否分段，是否有主题句) Right linking words合适的连接词 Useful patterns and expressions 有用的句型和短语 Punctuation&Capital letter大小写及标点 Neat writing整洁的书写 What should you pay attention to? Peer-check(同伴互查) Any gramma

17、r mistakes? Any Chinglish(中式英语)? Any great sentences? Any linking words? Dear John, Its Fathers Day today.Its a special day,isnt it? I think we should do something to show our love for our fathers on this special day.My father and I are good friends,whenever I meet with difficulties ,he is always re

18、ady to help me. Today I will make a beautiful card for him,with my thanks and best wishes on it .Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon,and I will cook his favorite food in the evening .Besides ,Ill take a walk with him after dinner and play chess with him,for he likes playing chess very m

19、uch .I m sure hell be very happy. Whats your plan for Fathers Day? Im looking forward to hearing from you. You rs, Li Hua 2).Recite some good phrases , sentences and articles. Eg:Proverbs(sayings) 3).Dont write long sentences if you are not sure about it, Remember-short but good sentences are ok. 1).Write neatly. Homework 1. Rewrite your paper and hand it in. 2. Recite all the good patterns and sentences. Help our students Help our students writewrite clearly,clearly, naturally naturally beautifullybeautifully Thanks for listening! Bye- bye