1、 classmates teachers study travel military training sports meeting other memories the first day speech contest New Years party classmates fooled me . I remember (doing). I have learned (to do). I will never forget. because. I felt excited/happy/proud/shy when I. classmates teachers study travel mili
2、tary training sports meeting other memories the first day speech contest New Years party classmates fooled me . I remember (doing). I have learned (to do). I will never forget. because. I felt excited/happy/proud/shy when I. 初中生活即将结束,学校校刊针对毕业班 开设了一个写作专栏,需要向毕业班的每 个同学征集稿件,内容如下: 回顾初中三年生活,谈谈自己的收获和 感受。(如
3、:收获知识,收获友情,收 获成长等) 请你结合以上要求,用英语为校刊写一篇 短文,题目My Unforgettable Junior High School Life,词数80-100。 1 Read and make an outline.(列提纲) My Unforgettable Junior High School Life Paragraph 1Paragraph 2Paragraph 3 Beginning: express your thanks Body what you have learned: 1.knowledge 2.friendship 3.growth Main
4、Tense(时态): simple past tense(一般 过去时) Ending: summary wishes 2 Write and modify(修改) My Unforgettable Junior High School Life I have studied here for three years! I will never forget all the things here. I want to thank my parents,my teachers and my classmates.I learned a lot. I have learned a lot of
5、knowledge. I it from all kinds of subjects. I also learned many good learning ways, such as reading aloud, practicing and reviewing and so on. I lots of friends,too. They were kind. I was very happy to be with them. I have also grown up. I got good grades. And I won a soccer game with my friends. We
6、 excited. I the importance of team spirit. I learned more about rules and I learned how to respect others. I will study harder to be better and achieve my dream. Read Xiao Cuis article. Correct some mistakes about tense. learnedlearn makemade arewereknowknew TipTip 1 1 BeautifyBeautify t thehe sente
7、nces.sentences. ( (美化美化) ) TipTip 2 2 UseUse properproper linkinglinking words.words. ( (连接词连接词) ) TipTip 3 3 UseUse differentdifferent sentencesentence patterns.(patterns.(使用多样句式使用多样句式) ) I have studied here for three years! I will never forget all the things here. I want to thank my parents,my tea
8、chers and my classmates.I learned a lot. beginning Ive spent three years studying here. How time flies! Three years has passed since I studied here. Time flies! Its three years since I studied here. I will never forget all the things and people that made my life unforgettable. I will remember the ha
9、ppy time that Ive spent here with my kind classmates and caring teachers. I am really thankful to those people who helped and suppoted me. Because of them, I have learned a lot. use nice words and phrases Attributive Clauses 定语从句定语从句 I have learned a lot of knowledge. . I made lots of friends,too. .
10、 I have also grown up. I got good grades. . body First of all, I have learned a lot of knowledge. Besides study, I also made many friends. Whats more, I have grown up. First(ly),. Second(ly),. Finally,.Last but not least,. linking words 写作当中写作当中句子和句子之间句子和句子之间比较常用的连接词:比较常用的连接词: 1.表示并列表示并列/递进关系:递进关系:
11、and,or, besides, whats more, also,at the same time,whats worse ., not only.but also. 2.表示转折关系:表示转折关系: but, however, although/though 3.表示因果关系:表示因果关系: because, as, since, so, therefore, as a result, . 4.表示顺序表示顺序: firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, last
12、 but not least 5.表示结论:表示结论:all in all, in a word 6. 其它常用连词:其它常用连词:Un(luckily), to ones surprise, in my opinion, when bodyI have learned a lot of knowledge. I learned it from all kinds of subjects.Its useful for me. I become smart. I learned many good learning ways, such as. Not only did I get lots o
13、f knowledge from all kinds of subjects, but I also learned many good learning ways. Its so useful and valuable that it can make me more intelligent. not only.but also. so.that.结构结构 I won a soccer game with my friends. We were excited. I was very excited when we pulled together to win the soccer game
14、. I remember how excited I was when we pulled together to win the soccer game. body Adverbial clause of time时间状语从句时间状语从句 Exclamatory Sentence 感叹句感叹句 Object Clauses 宾语从宾语从 句句 I knew the importance of team spirit. I learned more about rules and I learned how to respect others. body It made me know tha
15、t team spirit is so important. At the same time, I understood the importance of rules. Moreover, I learned how to respect others. use different sentence patterns Use advanced words (高级词汇高级词汇) quite, pretty,reallyvery good great, nice,wonderful, fantastic,amazing, excellent many/much a lot of, lots o
16、f, plenty of, a number of, a great many, quite a lot of,tons of e.g. I felt pretty lucky to be with my friend. I learned quite a lot of knowledge. ending I will study harder to be better and achieve my dream. All in all, my junior high school life is unforgettable. I hope I can achieve my dream by k
17、eeping working hard. I believe where there is a will, there is a way. Sayings Object Clauses 宾语从句宾语从句 Useful sayings Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。熟能生巧。 Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者,事竟成。有志者,事竟成。 Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母。失败是成功之母。 Never too old to learn. 活到老,学到老。活到老,学到老。 Us
18、e it or lose it. 不用则废。不用则废。 Action speaks louder than words.行动胜过语言。行动胜过语言。 Nothing is too difficult in the world if you set your mind into it. 世上无难事,只怕有心人。世上无难事,只怕有心人。 No pains,no gains. 不劳无获不劳无获 A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。患难见真情。 A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single ste
19、p.千里千里 之行始于足下。之行始于足下。 3 Check your article(检查) My Unforgettable Junior High School Life How time flies! Its three years since I studied here.I will never forget the happy time that Ive spent here with my kind classmates and caring teachers. They made my junior high school life unforgettble and I am
20、really thankful to them. Because of them, I have learned a lot. First of all, I have learned a lot of knowledge which came from all kinds of subjects. Its so useful and valuable that it can make me more intelligent. I found some good learning ways,too. For example, I discovered that the secret to la
21、nguage learning is practicing. Practice makes perfect. Besides study, I also made lots of friends. They are quite cute, kind and patient. When I was upset, they were always there and cheered me up. I felt pretty lucky to be with them. Whats more, I have grown up. I remember how excited I was when we
22、 pulled together to win the soccer game. It made me know that team spirit is so important. At the same time, I understood the importance of rules and I learned how to respect others. All in all, I will not only cherish all the sweet memories, but also work harder to be better and achieve my dream. I
23、 believe where there is a will, there is a way. 初中生活即将结束,学校英语俱乐部邀你写一篇 英语短文,给新生提几点建议,内容要点如下: 初中科目多,好的学习方法很重要。 锻炼身体,保持健康。 参加社团活动,使学校生活更丰富。 多读书,多交朋友。 补充1-2点个人想法 注意:1.不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。 2.词数:80左右。 3.内容连贯,不要逐条翻译。 首句: Welcome to our school! 1 Read and make an outline 2Write and modify 3 Check your article 第五档
24、(13-15分)很好地完成了规定的写作任务。包含所有内容要点,结构完整, 语句流畅 ,意思清楚、连贯。使用较为丰富的语法结构和词汇,语法和词汇错误极少 ,格式正确,书写规范。 第四档(10-12分)较好地完成了规定的写作任务。基本上包含所有内容要点,结构较为完整, 语句完整,意思清楚。语法结构和词汇错误较少,格式基本正确,书写较为 规范。 第三档(7-9分) 基本上完成了规定的写作任务。包含主要内容要点,结构欠完整,少数语句 不通顺,意思基本清楚。语法结构和词汇错误较多,格式基本正确,书写基 本规范。 第二档(4-6分)未能按要求完成规定的写作任务。只包含少数内容要点,结构不完整,多数 语句欠
25、完整,意思不够清楚。语法结构和词汇错误较多,影响理解,格式不 够正确,书写欠规范。 第一档(0-3分)未能按要求完成规定的写作任务。只写出个别要点,结构不完整,多数语句 不完整或意思不明,语法结构和词汇错误很多书写不规范。 写作评分标准档次(分数)评分标准 Writing Class Sheet Part 1 talk about memories I remember (doing). I have learned (to do). I will never forget. I felt excited/happy/proud/shy when I. Part 2 Read Xiao Cui
26、s article. My Unforgettable Junior High School Life I have studied here for three years! I will never forget all the things here. I want to thank my parents,my teachers and my classmates.I learned a lot. I have learned a lot of knowledge. I learn it from all kinds of subjects. Its very useful for me
27、.I become smart.I also learned many good learning ways, such as reading aloud, practicing and reviewing and so on. I make lots of friends,too. They were kind. I was very happy to be with them. I have also grown up. I got good grades. And I won Memories:Teachers, classmates, study travel, military tr
28、aining, sports meeting, classmates fooled me, Friends helped me, the teacher praised me, argued with best friend. These questions may help you: What did your teachers and classmates do to help you? What activities did you take part in? How did you feel? What did you learn from those people and exper
29、iences? For example: I remember we studied and had fun toghther.We helped and supported each other.We cared about each other. I felt happy when I made great progress with the help of the teachers and friends. I have learned that we should be responsibe for our decisions and actions. a soccer game wi
30、th my friends. We are excited. I know the importance of team spirit. I learned more about rules and I learned how to respect others. I will study harder to be better and achieve my dream. 1.Circle and correct some mistakes about tense. 2.Modify(修改) the sentence to make the article better. I have stu
31、died here for three years! I want to thank my parents,my teachers and my classmates. I learned it from all kinds of subjects.I also learned many good learning ways. I won a soccer game with my friends. We were excited. I knew the importance of team spirit. I learned more about rules . Its very usefu
32、l for me.I become smart. 3.Enjoy some useful sayings. Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。 Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者,事竟成。 Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母。 Never too old to learn. 活到老,学到老。 Use it or lose it. 不用则废。 Action speaks louder than words.行动胜过语言。 Nothing is too difficult in t
33、he world if you set your mind into it. 世上无难事,只怕有心人。 No pains,no gains. 不劳无获 A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。 A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里之行始于足下。 Part 3 Read and enjoy the model essay.(范文范文) My Unforgettable Junior High School Life How time flies! Its three ye
34、ars since I studied here.I will never forget the happy time that Ive spent here with my kind classmates and caring teachers. They made my junior high school life unforgettble and I am really thankful to them. Because of them, I have learned a lot. First of all, I have learned a lot of knowledge whic
35、h came from all kinds of subjects. Its so useful and valuable that it can make me more intelligent. I found some good learning ways,too. For example, I discovered that the secret to language learning is practicing. Practice makes perfect. Besides study, I also made lots of friends. They are quite cu
36、te, kind and patient. When I was upset, they were always there and cheered me up. I felt pretty lucky to be with them. Whats more, I have grown up. I remember how excited I was when we pulled together to win the soccer game. It made me know that team spirit is so important. At the same time, I under
37、tood the importance of rules and I learned how to respect others. All in all, I will not only cherish all the sweet memories, but also work harder to be better and achieve my dream. I believe where there is a will, there is a way. Part 4 Your writing time. 初中生活即将结束,学校英语俱乐部邀你写一篇英语短文,给新生提几点建议,内容要点如下:
38、1、初中科目多,好的学习方法很重要。 2、锻炼身体,保持健康。 3、参加社团活动,使学校生活更丰富。 4、多读书,多交朋友。 5、补充 1-2 点个人想法 注意:1.不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。 2.词数:80 左右。 3.内容连贯,不要逐条翻译。 首句: Welcome to our school! Welcome to our school! 附: 中考写作评分标准 档次(分数)评分标准 第五档(13-15 分) 很好地完成了规定的写作任务。包含所有内容要点,结构完整, 语句流畅,意思清楚、连 贯。使用较为丰富的语法结构和词汇,语法和词汇错误极少,格式正确,书写规范。 第四档(10-12
39、分) 较好地完成了规定的写作任务。基本上包含所有内容要点,结构较为完整,语句完整,意思 清楚。语法结构和词汇错误较少,格式基本正确,书写较为规范。 第三档(7-9 分) 基本上完成了规定的写作任务。包含主要内容要点,结构欠完整,少数语句不通顺,意思基 本清楚。语法结构和词汇错误较多,格式基本正确,书写基本规范。 第二档(4-6 分) 未能按要求完成规定的写作任务。只包含少数内容要点,结构不完整,多数语句欠完整,意 思不够清楚。语法结构和词汇错误较多,影响理解,格式不够正确,书写欠规范。 第二档(4-6 分) 未能按要求完成规定的写作任务。只写出个别要点,结构不完整,多数语句不完整或意思不 明,
40、语法结构和词汇错误很多书写不规范。 Teaching Plan Go for it Grade 9 Revision of writing A Writing Class With A Topic About Junior High School Life Teaching Aims: 1.Make the students know writing steps and some writing strategies. 2.Enable the students to use good words, phrases,clauses and linking words to make the p
41、assage better. 3.Enable the students to be thankful to the people around them and cherish those memories and be better in the future. Teaching steps: Step one: Greetings and lead in Play a piece of music with some pictures of teachers, students and school. Ask the students to talk about their memori
42、es. (设计意图:播放一些老师,学生,学校以及师生一起参加各种活动的照片并配有背景音乐,让学生在轻松 愉快的氛围中回忆初中生活的点滴,让学生可以触景生情,帮助他们能够自由谈论初中生活的回忆。) Step 2 Show a writing topic: My unforgettable junior high school life. Ask the students to think about some questions: Before writing, what should we do first? How many parts will you divide your passag
43、e into? In each paragraph, what will you write about? (设计意图:呈现话题作文,让学生了解写作第一步,即审题列提纲,如构思每个自然段分别写什么内容, 使用什么时态等,这样可以帮助学生理清思路,为后面的写作作铺垫。) Step 3 Show a students passage, ask students to read and correct mistakes and then modify the article. Show some writing strategies to the students to help them to m
44、ake the passage better. (设计意图:呈现一篇学生作文,让学生改正其中的时态错误并修改句子,同时提供一些写作技巧帮助学生 能够把文章改得更好。从文章节选一些普通句子让学生逐个修改成更好的句子,在这个过程中,学生们可 以整合自己所学的好词汇,好词组,好句型或者从句,连词,谚语等,并将其运用到作文中,使文章更连 贯更有文采。让学生了解写作的第二步,根据提纲写出初稿并修改。) Step 4 After modifying, read and enjoy the model essay. (设计意图:让学生欣赏修改后的范文,对比之前的初稿,体会使用一些写作技巧修改过的文章的优点,
45、并 将这些好的地方能活用到其他作文中去。让学生了解写作的第三步检查并定稿。) Step 5 Exercise: write a passage and ask them to mark each others passage. Find out some good sentences and share them with us. Provide a standard of evaluation for the students in order to make them know how to mark each others passages. (设计意图:提供另一篇话题作文练习,重温写作步骤,让学生进行写作训练,并提供中考英语作文评分标 准,让学生写完后可根据评分标准互相批改,并分享一些好句。) Step 6 Homework: finish the passage by yourselves and mark it after class. At the same time, ask the students to collect some good sentences. (设计意图:完成课堂未完成的部分,使学生对备考中考话题作文的方法和技巧进行巩固。 )
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