1、Learning guide （导学案）（导学案） A Forever Friend A friend walks in when the rest of the world walks out. Sometimes in life, you find a special friend, someone who changes your life just by being part of it; Someone who makes you laugh until you cant stop; Someone who makes you believe that there really is
2、 good in the world; Someone who convinces you that there really is an unlocked door just waiting for you to open it. This is forever friendship. When youre down, and the world seems dark and empty, your forever friend lifts you up in spirits and makes that dark and empty world suddenly seem bright a
3、nd full; Your forever friend gets you through the hard times, the sad times, and the confused times. If you turn and walk away, your forever friend follows; If you lose your way, your forever friend guides you and cheers you on; Your forever friend holds your hand and tells you that everything is go
4、ing to be ok. And if you find such a friend, you will feel happy and complete, because you need not worry, you have a forever friend for life, and forever has no end. 永远的朋友 别人都走开的时候，朋友仍与你在一起。 ” 有时候在生活中，你会找到一个特别的朋友；他只是你生活中的一部分内容， 却能改变你整个的生活。他会把你逗得开怀大笑；他会让你相信人间有真情。 他会让你确信，真的有一扇不加锁的们，在等待着你去开启。这就是永远的友 谊
5、。 当你失意，当世界变得暗淡与空虚，你真正的朋友会让你振作起来，原本暗 淡，空虚的世界顿时变得明亮和充实。你真正的朋友会与你一同度过困难，伤 心和烦恼的时刻。 你转身走开时，真正的朋友会紧紧跟随，你迷失方向时，真正的朋友会引导 你，鼓励你。真正的朋友会握着你的手，告诉你一切都会好起来的。 如果你真到了这样的朋友，你会快乐，觉得人生完整，因为你无需再忧虑。 你拥有了一个真正的朋友，永永远远，永无止境。 I. Free talk What are friends? I think friends are those people who can _. I believe friends are t
6、hose people who can _. In my opinion, friends are those who can _. I agree friends are those who can _. As far as I know friends are those who can _. II. Reading 1. Answer two questions: What is a forever friend? _ Whats the result of having such a friend?_ 2. Read again and answer: What can a frien
7、d do for you? _ _ _ _ _ _ III. Rewrite the sentences. (Expression opinions) 1. Sometimes in life, you find a special friend, someone who changes your life just by being part of it; _ 2. Someone who makes you believe that there really is good in the world; _ IV. Rewrite the article orally _ _ _ _ V.
8、Good tips for writing. 1. Good framework and content. 2. V. Write an argumentation How to make good friends _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ A Writing Class of Grade 9 How soon will we separate from each other? In about two months What and who will you miss? Whatarethetruefriends? Friendsarethose peoplewhocan
9、makeusfeelathome. makeuslaugh. Ithink Ibelieve Inmyopinion AsfarasIknow Iamsurethat Asforme, AForeverFriend Afriendwalksinwhentherestoftheworldwalksout. Sometimesinlife,youfindaspecialfriend,someonewho changesyourlifejustbybeingpartofit;Someonewhomakesyou laughuntilyoucantstop;Someonewhomakesyoubeli
10、evethat therereallyisgoodintheworld;Someonewhoconvincesyou thattherereallyisanunlockeddoorjustwaitingforyoutoopen it.Thisisforeverfriendship. Whenyouredown,andtheworldseemsdarkandempty,your foreverfriendliftsyouupinspiritsandmakesthatdarkand emptyworldsuddenlyseembrightandfull;Yourforeverfriend gets
11、youthroughthehardtimes,thesadtimes,andtheconfused times. Ifyouturnandwalkaway,yourforeverfriendfollows;Ifyou loseyourway,yourforeverfriendguidesyouandcheersyouon; Yourforeverfriendholdsyourhandandtellsyouthateverything isgoingtobeok. Andifyoufindsuchafriend,youwillfeelhappyandcomplete, becauseyounee
12、dnotworry,youhaveaforeverfriendforlife, andforeverhasnoend. 1. Whatisaforeverfriend? 2. Whatstheresultofhavingsuchafriend? change your life just by being part of it make you believe that there really is get through the hard/sad/ confused(迷惑的)times lift you up and make that dark and empty world A for
13、ever friend: convince(说服) you that there really is What can he do? follow you, guide you and cheer you on make you laugh until you cant stop hold your hand and tell you issomeonewhowalksinwhen therestoftheworldwalksout Aresultofhaving suchafriend: feelhappyandcomplete,neednt worry AForeverFriend Afr
14、iendwalksinwhentherestoftheworldwalksout. Sometimesinlife,youfindaspecialfriend,someonewho changesyourlifejustbybeingpartofit;Someonewhomakesyou laughuntilyoucantstop;Someonewhomakesyoubelievethat therereallyisgoodintheworld;Someonewhoconvincesyou thattherereallyisanunlockeddoorjustwaitingforyoutoop
15、en it.Thisisforeverfriendship. Whenyouredown,andtheworldseemsdarkandempty,your foreverfriendliftsyouupinspiritsandmakesthatdarkand emptyworldsuddenlyseembrightandfull;Yourforeverfriend getsyouthroughthehardtimes,thesadtimes,andtheconfused times. Ifyouturnandwalkaway,yourforeverfriendfollows;Ifyou lo
16、seyourway,yourforeverfriendguidesyouandcheersyouon; Yourforeverfriendholdsyourhandandtellsyouthateverything isgoingtobeokay. Andifyoufindsuchafriend,youwillfeelhappyandcomplete, becauseyouneednotworry,youhaveaforeverfriendforlife, andforeverhasnoend. Whatdoyouknowaboutaforeverfriend? Whatcanyoulearn
17、fromthisarticle? AForeverFriend Afriendwalksinwhentherestoftheworldwalksout. Sometimesinlife,youfindaspecialfriend,someonewho changesyourlifejustbeingpartofit;Someonewhomakesyou laughuntilyoucantstop;Someonewhomakesyoubelievethat therereallyisgoodintheworld;Someonewhoconvincesyou thattherereallyisan
18、unlockeddoorjustwaitingforyoutoopen it.Thisisforeverfriendship. Whenyouredown,andtheworldseemsdarkandempty,your foreverfriendliftsyouupinspiritsandmakesthatdarkand emptyworldsuddenlyseembrightandfull;Yourforeverfriend getsyouthroughthehardtimes,thesadtimes,andtheconfused times. Ifyouturnandwalkaway,
19、yourforeverfriendfollows;Ifyou loseyourway,yourforeverfriendguidesyouandcheersyouon; Yourforeverfriendholdsyourhandandtellsyouthateverything isgoingtobeok. Andifyoufindsuchafriend,youfeelhappyandcomplete, becauseyouneednotworry,youhaveaforeverfriendforlife, andforeverhasnoend. 开 头头 主 干 结结 尾 Topic pa
20、ragraph（定义/观点等） SupportingParagraph1SupportingParagraph1（支撑论据（支撑论据1 1） SupportingParagraph2SupportingParagraph2（支撑论据（支撑论据2 2） SupportingParagraph3SupportingParagraph3（支撑论据（支撑论据3 3） Concluding paragraphConcluding paragraph（总结升华）（总结升华） Rewritethearticleorally.(口头改编文章60字左右) Aforeverfriend Sometimesinli
21、fe,youfind aspecialfriend,someone whochangesyourlifejust bybeingpartofit. A friend can change your life just by being part of it. Afriendcanmakeyou believethattherereally isgoodintheworld. Rewritethisarticleusingyourownwords!(口头改写) Someonewhomakes youbelievethatthere reallyisgoodintheworld. Which ar
22、ticle do you think is better? Why? As far as I know, aforever friendistheonewhowalksin whentherestoftheworldwalks out. Firstofall,hecanchangeyour lifejustbybeing partofit;secondly,hecanmake youlaughuntilyoucant stop;moreover,hecanmakeyou believethattherereally isgoodintheworld;lastly,hecan convincey
23、outhatthere reallyisanunlockeddoorjust waitingforyoutoopenit. All in all, this is forever friendship. Aforeverfriendwalksin whentherestoftheworldwalks out. Hecanchangeyourlifejust bybeingpartofit;hecanmake youlaughuntilyoucantstop;he canmakeyoubelievethatthere reallyisgoodintheworld;he canconvinceyo
24、uthatthere reallyisanunlockeddoorjust waitingforyoutoopenit. This is forever friendship. What makes a good What makes a good argumentative writing?argumentative writing? Topic beginning (introduction ) body end Topic(提出观点) Supporting4:finally Supporting2:secondly Supporting3:moreover Supporting1:fir
25、stly Conclusion总结升华 1-2句 6-7句 1-2句 Good framework(框架图) and content(内容)方法 1: 1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, bothand, whats more not onlybut also, neithernor 2.表示选择: or, eitheror 3.表示转折: but,however,althoughthough,after all,anyway 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result 5.表示条件: if , unless 6
26、.表示对比: instead, notbut, while, in the same way, on the one handon the other hand 7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words,to tell the truth 8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end 9.表示强调:
27、 also, besides, especially, actually, in fact 10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking, in short 关联词关联词(Linking words)(Linking words) 方法 2: Aforeverfriendwalksinwhentherestoftheworld walksout. _ , he can change your life just by being part of it; _, he can make you laugh until
28、you cant stop; _, he can make you believe that there really is good in the world; _, he can convince you that there really is an unlocked door just waiting for you to open it. _ ,this is forever friendship. Firstofall secondly moreover lastly All in all moreover, lastly, first of all, secondly, all
29、in all Lets try! 善用词汇、短语(good words and phrases) 甚至善用高级词汇 方法 3: 你永远的朋友帮你克服困难。你永远的朋友帮你克服困难。 A You forever friend helps you overcome difficulties . B You forever friend gets you through difficulties . C You forever friend helps you out with difficulties. 妙用引文和例子 （Good examples - 多用于“the body”） 方法 4: A
30、foreverfriendcanhelpyoualot,likeguidingyou, cheeringyouon 活用多种句型(good sentences) 方法 5: Eg. What a kind boy my friend is! How important a friend is ! 感叹句 强调句 Eg. It was the friendship that helped the hopeless boy. I do hope I can have many friends if possible. Eg. 1. Only in this way can you make tru
31、e friends. 2. Not only do I learn how to get on well with others, but also I no longer feel lonely . 倒装句 1. 用这种方式你才可以交到真正的朋友。 2.我不仅学会了怎样和别人相处，而且还 不再感到孤独。 各种从句 1.你是否能交到好朋友取决于你的品质。 2.据报道，拥有朋友的人活得更长。 1.Whetheryoucanmakegoodfriendsornot dependsonyourcharacter. 2.Itisreportedthatpeoplewithfriendslivelong
32、er. 主 语 从 句 Hecanmakeyoubelievethattherereally isgoodintheworld. 宾语从句 Themostimportantruletomakefriendsisthat youshouldbehonest. 表语从句 In my opinion, friends are those who can make me laugh. 定语从句 各种状语从句 Someone who makes you laugh until you cant stop. If you turn and walk away, your forever follows.
33、As long as we have such a friend, we will feel happy and complete. Content （内容） Framework （结构） language （语言） handwriting （书写） A good article 要点全，思想正 语法、拼写正确 详略得当 行文流畅 工整、整洁 上一级词汇、短语， 优美句式结构 连接词的合理使用 评价标准 Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患难见真交。 Alifewithoutafriendisalifewithoutasun. 人生在世无朋友，犹如生活无太阳。 Atru
34、efriendisknowninthedayofadversity（逆境）. 疾风知劲草，患难见真情。 每个人都渴望友谊，但是交朋友也是一门 学问。请你根据自己的实际情况，以“How tomakegoodfriends”为题，写出一篇90个 词左右的英语短文。 25 Three-step Analyzing(三审) 三审 person （人称） key points （要点） tense （时态） 第一人称 一般现在时 topic Supporting conclusion How to make good friends Content （内容） Framework （结构） languag
35、e （语言） handwriting （书写） A good article 要点全，思想正 语法、拼写正确 详略得当 行文流畅 工整、整洁 上一级词汇、短语， 优美句式结构 连接词的合理使用 How to write 三审十 句 三段 写作模式 person （人称） tense （时态） key points （要点） 1-2句 6-7句 1-2句 bodyend beginning (introduction ) Modify your writing and copy it out in your exercise books. A writing class of Grade 9 “
36、三审三段十句三审三段十句”写作教学模式写作教学模式 设计导言设计导言： 英语写作一直是当前学生最薄弱的环节，为了帮助学生掌握正确的写作方法，写出较 为成熟的书面表达作品，我校进行了长达三年的“三审三段十句”英语写作教学模式的研 究与实践，其效果非常显著。经过系统的写作教学模式训练，大部分学生产生了写作兴趣， 克服了写作为难情绪，培养了学生写作思维能力，整体写作水平提高了。 “三审三段十句” 英语写作教学模式，基本涵盖了写作的各个层面，包括写作前的“三审” ，这里面包含词汇、 短语和句型的准备，也包含思想要点的准备等，在写的过程中的“三段十句”包含了结构、 内容、评价标准等。 我选择的这篇文章是
37、世界知名的英语美文，是一篇说理性的散文，但其结果内容语言 都是写作的经典范文。虽然不是教材内容，但是并不超出学生理解范围。然后我根据分析 其优美之处，和学生讨论一篇好文章的几大评价标准。然后鼓励学生自己动手一篇 100 词 左右的文章，并根据所学内容进行评价与修改，完成整个写作过程。 这节课也是以读促写的典型示范。阅读是理解和吸收书面信息的技能，是人们获得信 息和知识的重要手段，写作是运用语言文字符号反映客观事物、表达思想感情、传递知识 信息的创造性脑力劳动过程。就英语教学而言，阅读是对语言和篇章的理解和学习过程， 是学生学习英语的重要输入途径之一。写作是对语言及篇章的运用与表达的过程，是语言
38、 输出的主要方式之一。阅读和写作在语篇特征上有很强的共性，教学中将阅读与写作结合 起来，有助于促进学生写作能力的提升。 教学过程教学过程 Step 1 Preparation 1.Greet the students. 2.Talk about “How soon will we separate from each other?” and “What and who will you miss after graduation? 3.Ask Ss to discuss these questions. Step 2 Read the article 1.Ask Ss “What are tr
39、ue friends? Ask them to talk about the meanings of “true friends” by using “In my opinion/ as far as I know” I think true friends are those people who can make me feel at home. I believe true friends are those people who can make me laugh. . 2.Read an article named “a forever friend” for the first t
40、ime. This time , ask Ss to skim the article and answer two questions: What is a forever friend? What is the result of having such a friend? 附美文：A Forever Friend A friend walks in when the rest of the world walks out. Sometimes in life, you find a special friend, someone who changes your life just by
41、 being part of it; Someone who makes you laugh until you cant stop; Someone who makes you believe that there really is good in the world; Someone who convinces you that there really is an unlocked door just waiting for you to open it. This is forever friendship. When youre down, and the world seems
42、dark and empty, your forever friend lifts you up in spirits and makes that dark and empty world suddenly seem bright and full; Your forever friend gets you through the hard times, the sad times, and the confused times. If you turn and walk away, your forever friend follows; If you lose your way, you
43、r forever friend guides you and cheers you on; Your forever friend holds your hand and tells you that everything is going to be ok. And if you find such a friend, you will feel happy and complete, because you need not worry, you have a forever friend for life, and forever has no end. 3.Read the arti
44、cle again (skip the article) slowly and carefully and find out “What can a forever friend do for you? 4.Then discuss this question in groups of 4. 5.Analyze the main information about this article like the following: change your life just by being part of it change your life just by being part of it
45、 make you believe that there really is make you believe that there really is get through the hard/sad/ confused(迷迷惑惑的的)times get through the hard/sad/ confused(迷迷惑惑的的)times lift you up and make that dark and empty world lift you up and make that dark and empty world A forever friend: convince(说说服服)
46、you that there really is convince(说说服服) you that there really is What can he do? follow you, guide you and cheer you on follow you, guide you and cheer you on make you laugh until you cant stop make you laugh until you cant stop hold your hand and tell you hold your hand and tell you is someone who
47、walks in when the rest of the world walks out A result of having such a friend : feel happy and complete, neednt worry Step 3 Analyze the framework and the content of the article. Discuss the framework of the article together with the Ss like the following: A Forever Friend A friend walks in when th
48、e rest of the world walks out. Sometimes in life, you find a special friend, someone who changes your life just being part of it; Someone who makes you laugh until you cant stop; Someone who makes you believe that there really is good in the world; Someone who convinces you that there really is an u
49、nlocked door just waiting for you to open it. This is forever friendship. When youre down, and the world seems dark and empty, your forever friend lifts you up in spirits and makes that dark and empty world suddenly seem bright and full; Your forever friend gets you through the hard times, the sad t
50、imes, and the confused times. If you turn and walk away, your forever friend follows; If you lose your way, your forever friend guides you and cheers you on; Your forever friend holds your hand and tells you that everything is going to be ok. And if you find such a friend, you feel happy and complet
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