Unit3 作文-写日记 课时学案 教师版（2021新牛津译林版）高中英语必修第一册（高一上期）.doc

1、1 M1U3 作文作文-如何写英文日记如何写英文日记 如何解决高中生活的困难如何解决高中生活的困难 1.写作指导写作指导 英文日记一般是用来记叙一天中所发生的有意义的事情或对将来的打算等。 日记 可分为记事、议论、描写及抒情等。 记事型是用英语记述当天自己生活和学习中发生的事情。 议论型是对生活中的某一事情或情况、现象谈自己的看法，发表议论。 描写型或抒情型，则是对某人物和事物的特征做细致的描述，或针对某事物抒发 自己的感情。 (1)格式： 一般是在左上角记上当天日期、星期，时间的排列法与书信一致， 如： September 1st， 2019， 星期写在日期之前； 右上角写上当天的天气情况，

2、表示天气情况的词一般是形容词， 如：fine(晴朗 的) ，sunny(阳光充足的) ，snowy(下雪的) ，rainy(下雨的) ，cloudy(阴天的) 等。 (2)时态： 由于日记是对当天所发生事情的回顾，故常用一般过去时。 在发表议论或感想时，也可使用现在完成时或一般将来时。 (3)人称： 因为日记是记载自己的亲身经历，故应用第一人称，语言尽量口语化，按照事情 发生的先后顺序，清楚、准确、连贯地把事情表达出来。 2.写作典例写作典例 作为一名高一新生，你在学习和生活中遇到一些困难，特别是与新同学的相处， 为此你有时会感到很沮丧。 请你以日记的形式写下遇到的困难以及克服困难的方法， 同

3、时也表达你对未来的 学习生活的信心。 2 写作要点： 1.学习和生活中遇到的困难； 2.如何解决； 3.对未来充满信心。 注意： 1.词数 100 左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.写作思路写作思路(一审、二定、三明确、四分段) (1)一审 确定写作体裁和主题 体裁：应用文英文日记 主题：高一新生的困惑，苦恼以及自己的应对策略 (2)二定 确定时态和人称(与体裁和主题息息相关)时态：用完成时态，一般过去为主(介绍 已经发生的情况) 人称：以第一人称为主 (3)三明确 明确写作要点： 学习或生活中遇到的困难自己的解决方案表达对未来的信心 (4)四分段(与写作要点息息相关) 第一段

4、：学习和生活中遇到的困难；第二段：如何解决和对未来充满信心。 4.素材整理素材整理 (1)关键词语 since,sufferalot,horrible/terrible,meetwith,counton/dependon ， take measures to do sth.,in person， get along on well with sb., definitely, free sb.from, in addition/besides， schedule, its no use doing sth., make good use of (2)单句写作 自从我来到这所学校已经快两个月了。(

5、It is/has been.since.) 3 _ 但是现在有时我遭受很多痛苦。(suffer a lot) _ 在我的生活和学习中我遇到了一些困难。(meet with， as well) _ 此 外 ， 因 为 我 周 围 有 这 么 多 优 秀 的 学 生 ， 我 感 觉 坏 透 了 。 (in addition， as， feel horrible) _ 然而，我知道感到悲伤和担心是没有用的。(Its no use doing sth.) _ 我决定依靠自己，采取一些措施来改变这种情况。(count on， take measures to do sth.) _ 首 先 ， 为 了

6、充 分 利 用 我 的 时 间 ， 我 应 该 亲 自 制 订 一 个 时 间 表 。 (make good use of， schedule) _ 只有这样我才能很好地学习所有的科目。(only+状语位于句首引起部分倒装) _ 此外，我应该积极结交新朋友，并与我的同学和室友很好地相处。 (besides， get along well with) _ 这一定会让我从孤独和思乡中解脱出来。(definitely，free sb.from.) _ keys ： IthasbeenalmosttwomonthssinceIcametothisschool. But now sometimes I

7、suffer a lot. I meet with some difficulties in my life and study as well. Inaddition,astherearesomanyexcellentstudentsaroundme, I feel extremely horrible. 4 However，I know its no use feelings ad and worried. I decide to count on myself and take some measures to change the situation. Firstofall,inord

8、ertomakegooduseofmytime,Ishouldmake a schedule in person. Only in this way can I study all the subjects well. Besides,Ishouldbeactiveinmaking new friends and getting along well with my classmates and roommates. It will definitely free me from loneliness and homesickness. 5.连句成篇连句成篇 Thursday， Septemb

9、er 22ndCloudy IthasbeenalmosttwomonthssinceIcametothisschool.I canwellremember when I knew I would study in this amazing high school， howexcitedIwas.ButnowsometimesIsuffera lot ，because I meet with some difficulties in my life and study as well . As a fresh student in senior one, this is the first t

10、ime that I have left my parents to measures to live in a boarding school， so sometimes I feel homesick and unhappy. In addition （衔接词的使用)as there are so many excellent students around me，I feel extremely horrible. However ， I know its no use feeling sad and worried, so I decide to count on myself and

11、 take some measures to change the situation. First of all, in order to make good use of my time， I should make a schedule in person. Only in this way( 倒 装 强 调 ) can I study all the subjects well. Besides , Ishouldbeactiveinmakingnewfriendsandgettingalongwellwith myclassmatesandroommates,whichwilldef

12、initelyfreemefrom loneliness and homesickness. 5 6.写作训练写作训练 A 进人高中生活以来已经有两个月的时间了，在这一段时间里，一定有令你难忘的 回忆，请在日记中描述令你印象深刻的一件事，并谈谈你的体会。 Thursday， November 2ndWindy _ _ _ _ _ B 假定你是李华， 你的美国朋友 Paul 随父母来中国定居。他写信告诉你开始新的 学校生活不是很容易，他感到很孤独。请你给他回信以示安慰，并给予适当 的建议。 注意： 1.词数 80 左右； 2.信的开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Paul， _

13、_ _ _ _ _ Yours sincerely， LiHua 6 C 假设你是某中学学生李华， 在你班级留学的美国学生 Bill 无法适应这里的学习与 生活， 感到苦闷， 他写信向你求助。请你用英文给他写一封回信。内容如下： 1.深表同情； 2.提出建议并给出理由；(至少三条建议，如：参加学 校社团活动，与朋友交流，做些户外活动等)； 3.希望建议能有所帮助。 注意： 1.词数 80 左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _ _ _ _ _ 答案： A One possible version： Thursday， November 2nd Windy Generally speak

14、ing， high school life is busy and warm.I used to be very shy and had difficulty making new friends.However，my first task in high school was to introduce myself in front of all my classmates.I got fully prepared and tried to remember every word by heart. Unfortunately，when it was my turn to make the

15、speech， I was so nervous that I couldnt say a word.Seeing that， my teacher said gently to me， “Take 7 it easy. Be confident and you can make it.”To encourage me，my classmates applauded me.Suddenly I was not nervous any more，and I finished my speech fluently and perfectly.Again， the classroom broke i

16、nto thunderous applause. It was my teacher and classmates that made me more confident.It was the most unforgettable thing in my life. B Dear Paul， Im sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to your new school life in China， but this situation can be easily changed if you take my advice. F

17、irst of all， you are supposed to work hard at Chinese，which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others. In addition ， why not make some friends?They can help you to know more about China，and it is very important to express your thoughts and feelings to them so that you can forget abo

18、ut your loneliness， Last but not least， it would be a good idea if you take an active part in all kinds of activities， which will help to make your life more interesting.Only by doing these will you be happier with your new life soon. I hope you will find these ideas useful. Yours sincerely， LiHua C

19、 One possible version： Dear Bill， I am sorry to know you are having trouble with your life and study here.However， the situation is easy to change.Now， Id like to give you some advice. Firstly， join some school clubs，where you can make some friends.Secondly， communicate with the people who have the same interest with you.Maybe it can get rid of your loneliness. 8 Thirdly，do some outdoor activities and they can make you relaxed.By doing all these，you can get used to your school life and live happily. Hope my advice can help you. Yours， LiHua 9