书面表达之请求帮助&表达祝贺专训课件-2022届高三英语二轮复习.pptx

1、2020全国卷改编假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括：1剧情简介；2指导内容；3商定时间、地点。注意：1.词数80左右；2结束语已为你写好。_Im looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely，Li Hua满分作文第一步：“三定”审题“三段”谋篇(一)“三定”审题1定体裁：本文为求助信。2定人称：本文以第一人称为主。3定时态：主要使用一般现在时。(二)“三段”谋篇第一段(开篇点题)：点名写信目的；第二段(3个要点，缺一不可)：剧情简介；指导内容；商定时间和地点；第三段(巧

2、妙收尾)：表达期待。满分作文第二步：斟酌词句设计亮点1我写信是想请您指导一部根据我们的一篇课文改编的短剧。_(高频词汇定语从句被动语态)2这篇课文讲述了一个名叫黛西的女孩的故事，她和一些野生动物交谈，并下定决心帮助保护环境。_ (非谓语动词作定语定语从句) Im Im writing to ask for your guidance on a short play, which is writing to ask for your guidance on a short play, which is adapted from one of our texts.adapted from one

3、of our texts.The text tells a story about a girl named Daisy, who talks with some The text tells a story about a girl named Daisy, who talks with some wild animals and makes up her mind to help protect the environment.wild animals and makes up her mind to help protect the environment.3如果您方便的话，我们可以在本

4、周日早上8点在我们学校的艺术大厅见面吗？(1)Could we meet in our school art hall at 8：00 am this Sunday _？(高频词汇)(2)Could we meet in our school art hall at 8：00 am this Sunday _？(if条件状语从句)4我们真诚地希望你能帮我们这个忙，帮助我们提高演技。We sincerely hope you can _(词汇不重，彰显水准)at your earliest convenienceat your earliest convenienceif it is conve

5、nient for youif it is convenient for youdo us a favour and help improve our do us a favour and help improve our performanceperformance满分作文第三步：巧妙过渡完美成篇Dear Miss Evans，Im writing to ask for your guidance on a short play, which is adapted from one of our texts.The text tells a story about a girl named

6、Daisy, who makes up her mind to help protect the environment.I wonder if you can give us some expert guidance on dialogue between characters, plot, setting and so on. Could we meet in our school art hall at 8：00 am this Sunday if it is convenient for you? We sincerely hope you can do us a favour and

7、 help improve our performance.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely，Li Hua一、请求帮助求助信是针对自己目前遇到的困难写信请求对方给予帮助的信件类型，因此整篇文章应用一般现在时。(一) 谨记写作范式(二)充盈写作语料库吸引阅卷人开头句1The reason why I am writing to you is that I quarreled with my friend Lucy and I need your help now. 我给你写信的原因是我和我的朋友露西吵架了，我现在需要你的帮助。220

8、211月新高考八省联考An English Poetry Reading Contest will be held next weekend in our school. I am eager to have a try, so Im writing to turn to you for help.下周末我们学校将举行一场英语诗歌朗诵比赛。我渴望尝试一下，所以我写信向你寻求帮助。吸引阅卷人篇中句120211月新高考八省联考To start with, would you please be so kind to give me some recommendations on which poe

9、m to choose？首先，你能给我推荐一首诗吗？220211月新高考八省联考Besides, what I need are the skills of recitation, including pronunciation and intonation, which will perfect my performance.此外，我需要的是朗诵技巧，包括发音和语调，这将使我的表现更完美。吸引阅卷人结尾句1I would appreciate it if you could do me a favour and spare some time to polish my application

10、 letter and resume.如果您能帮我一个忙，抽出时间来润色我的求职信和简历，我将不胜感激。2Im eager for your timely help./Im eager to get your timely help.我渴望得到你的及时帮助。(注意卷面书写哟)2021河北省张家口市高考二模假定你是李华，你校即将举办“英文读书月”活动阅读并写读书笔记。请你给外教Alex写一封邮件求助，内容包括：1介绍活动内容；2请他推荐英文书；3请教如何写读书笔记。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2请按如下格式作答。Dear Alex，Im writing to ask for your hel

11、p._Yours，Li Hua参考范文：Dear Alex，Im writing to ask for your help. Our school is planning to hold an event called English Reading Month, in which we are required to read an English book and take notes.I hope you can recommend an English book to me. Considering Im not an advanced English learner, the boo

12、k needs to be suitable for my level. It will be better if the book is about the life of teenagers. Meanwhile, I also feel confused about taking notes. Could you offer me some guidance?Id appreciate it if you could reply to me soon.Yours，Li Hua二、表达祝贺祝贺信是向对方表示祝贺的信件，一般用于对方有什么喜事或取得了什么成绩，以及节日寿宴等。祝贺信是人们情感

13、交流的一种方式，写祝贺信可以使亲戚朋友同事之间加强联系， 增进了解，彼此关心。(一) 谨记写作范式(二)充盈写作语料库吸引阅卷人开头句1I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations to you on your receiving the first prize of Chinese Bridge Chinese Composition Competition.得知你获得汉语桥中文作文比赛一等奖，我写信向你表示最衷心的祝贺。2Congratulations on your winning the prize in the photo ta

14、king competition with the title of Charming School which was held last week.祝贺你在上周举行的“魅力学校”摄影比赛中获奖。吸引阅卷人篇中句1I know you have worked very hard in the past years, so Im not a bit surprised at your remarkable achievement.我知道你在过去几年里工作很努力，所以我对你的非凡成就一点也不感到惊讶。2Its the great efforts which you have made that

15、result in this excellent achievement. The prize is a reward you deserve.正是你所付出的巨大努力才使你取得了这一卓越的成就。你受到奖励是当之无愧的。吸引阅卷人结尾句1Congratulations to you again from the bottom of my heart!再次向你表示衷心的祝贺！2Please accept my warmest congratulations and the best wishes for you！请接受我最热烈的祝贺和最好的祝愿！(注意卷面书写哟)2021金华十校模拟假定你是李华，

16、你的好友Steven即将代表学校参加全市留学生中文演讲比赛，写信向你求助。请你给他回一封信，内容包括：1表示祝贺；2提供建议；3表达祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_参考范文：Dear Steven，Im overjoyed to hear that you will represent our school to be engaged in the citys Chinese speech contest for overseas students. Congratulations! And I am here willing to offer some rel

17、evant suggestions.First, you can seek Chinese teachers professional guidance to reinforce your language proficiency and accuracy. Second, watch videos of previous speech contests, which will help better your speech skills, like the application of gestures. Additionally, staying selfassured is what i

18、t takes to guarantee your performance and bring out the best in you.I genuinely hope that your unremitting effort will pay off ultimately.Yours，Li Hua假定你是李华，请给你的外教John Smith写一封信，邀请他参加你校中华传统文化艺术节的闭幕式晚会。内容包括：1晚会时间、地点；2闭幕式晚会内容。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Mr. Smith， Zhenhua High School request

19、s the honour of your presence at the closing ceremony of Traditional Chinese Art Festival._ We do hope you are able to join us at this event. Yours sincerely，Li Hua参考范文：Dear Mr. Smith， Zhenhua High School requests the honour of your presence at the closing ceremony of Traditional Chinese Art Festiva

20、l. The ceremony is scheduled to start at the School Hall at 3 pm. on Friday and run for two hours. Studentmade artworks featuring traditional Chinese culture such as painting, seal cutting, paper cutting will be on display in short videos. And you will also enjoy the performances with Chinese charac

21、teristics like martial arts, folk dances and instrument playings. We all know that you are enthusiastic about Chinese culture and we believe there will be something you cant miss. We do hope you are able to join us at this event.Yours sincerely，Li Hua 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My school

22、had a tradition during the ninthgrade graduation: a beautiful gold and green jacket (the school colors), was awarded to the student who had maintained the highest grades for nine years. I had been a straight A student since the first grade and had looked forward very much to owning that jacket. My f

23、ather was a farm laborer who couldnt earn enough money to feed five children, so I was given to my grandparents to raise. There would never be a school sports jacket for me because we couldnt afford it. This scholarship jacket was my only chance. One day in May, I happened to overhear Mr. Schmidt, m

24、y history teacher, and Mr. Boone, my math teacher arguing about me. “I refuse to do it! I dont care who her father is; her grades cant match Marthas at all. I wont lie or falsify (伪造) records，” said Mr. Schmidt angrily. But Mr. Boones voice sounded calm. “Joanns father is on the board (董事会), and he

25、also owns the only store in town. We could say it was a close tie and.” The pounding in my ears drowned out the rest of the words, only few words here and there filtering through. “.Martha is Mexican.resign.wont do it. To this day I dont remember how I made it through the rest of the afternoon. That

26、 night, I cried into my pillow so Grandmother wouldnt hear me. The next day the principal called me into his office. “Martha，” he said, “theres been a change in policy this year regarding the scholarship jacket. This year the board has decided to charge fifteen dollars, which still wont cover the co

27、mplete cost of the jacket. So if you are unable to pay the money for the jacket, it will be given to the next one in line for it.”Standing with all the dignity I could find, I said, “Ill speak to my grandfather about it, sir, and let you know tomorrow.” That day I cried sadly on the walk home.参考范文：

28、By the time I got home, my eyes were red and swollen. I found my grandpa in the bean field. Sensing something wrong, he asked me what happened with great concern. I murmured the principals words, after which Grandpas eyes rounded (变圆) in disbelief. Feeling a surge of regret, I really hated to see my

29、 grayhaired grandpas disappointment. Time ticking by (流逝), he let out (发出) a long sigh, “My child, an award bought cant be called an award.” I nodded understandingly. But who knew how reluctant and bitter (愤愤不平的) I was? I dragged into the principals office the next day, sad and disappointed. My head

30、 still lifted with dignity, I tried to fight back (忍住) the tears, stammering, “I cannot.afford the jacket, sir.” Staring into my eyes, the principal suddenly grinned, “I have good news for you.” I looked at him in confusion. “The board made the final decision that an award cannot be bought just for the sake of winners dignity.” I pinched my hand only to find I was not dreaming. Only at that moment did I believe that Mr. Schmidt and my grandpa were right: never can awards be falsified or bought.