高考英语作文模板求助信篇课件.ppt

1、文体概述文体概述 求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信。通常包括或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信。通常包括三部分内容：三部分内容：1. 表明写信目的，请求帮助。表明写信目的，请求帮助。2. 要清晰陈述请求帮助的具体内容。要清晰陈述请求帮助的具体内容。3. 希望得到帮助。注意语气委婉、真诚，并要向希望得到帮助。注意语气委婉、真诚，并要向收信人表示感谢。收信人表示感谢。常用语块常用语块 做某事有麻烦做某事有麻烦 _ 2. 给某人帮助给某人帮助 _3. 寻求帮助寻求帮助 _4. 遇到一些问题遇到一些问题 _5. 面临困难面临

2、困难 _have trouble/difficulty (in) doing sth.do sb. a favor / give sb. a handask for help / seek for helpencounter some problemsbe faced with difficulties6. 忙于做某事忙于做某事 _7. 为某事做准备为某事做准备 _8. 集中精力集中精力 _9. 学以致用学以致用 _10. 让某人失望让某人失望 _let sb. downbe busy doing sth. / be engaged in doing sth.prepare for sth.c

3、oncentrate on / focus onputinto use11. 克服恐惧克服恐惧 _12. 取得巨大的进步取得巨大的进步_13. 渴望做某事渴望做某事 _14. 提供一些有建设性的指导提供一些有建设性的指导 _15. 因某事感激某人因某事感激某人_be grateful to sb. for sth.overcome the fearmake great progressbe anxious to do sth. / long to do sth.offer some constructive guidance套用句式套用句式 我写信想请您帮我一个忙。我写信想请您帮我一个忙。2.

4、 我遇到三个困扰我的问题。首先，我遇到三个困扰我的问题。首先，其其次，次，最困扰我的是最困扰我的是3. 不幸的是，我觉得做某事很困难。不幸的是，我觉得做某事很困难。3. Unfortunately, I find/feel it quite difficult/hard to do sth.1. I am writing this letter to ask you to do me a favor/give me a hand.2. I am encountering three problems which trouble me a lot. To begin with, Whats mo

5、re, What troubles me most is4. 面对以上的问题，我渴望得到你的帮助。你能面对以上的问题，我渴望得到你的帮助。你能给予我一些关于给予我一些关于的建议吗？的建议吗？5. 我想知道你能否帮助我解决这些问题。如果你我想知道你能否帮助我解决这些问题。如果你能帮助我，我将感激不尽。能帮助我，我将感激不尽。4. Faced with the above problems, I am anxious to get your help. Would you please offer me some advice on?5. I wonder if you can help me w

6、ith these difficulties. I really appreciate it if you could help me.习作修改习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文做短文改错，背经典范文)Dear Sir/Madam, I am Li Hua, the Chinese student takes summer courses in your university. I am writing to ask for help. I come here last month and found my courses interested. And I have some difficul

7、ties with note-taking and I have no idea of what to use the library.a taking came interesting But how I told that the Learning Center provides help for students and I am anxious to get help from you. I have no class in Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with y

8、ou. You may email or call to me. Here is my email address and phone number: ; 12345678. Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua was on are 1. the a此处表示此处表示“一个一个”学生，表泛指，学生，表泛指，要用冠词要用冠词a。2. takes taking此处是非谓语，且与逻辑主此处是非谓语，且与逻辑主语是主动关系，故用现在分词语是主动关系，故用现在分词taking。3. come came由后面的由后面的last month可知，要可知，

9、要用一般过去时。用一般过去时。4. interested interesting此处是指此处是指courses令令人有趣的，是修饰物。人有趣的，是修饰物。5. And But根据上下文的逻辑关系，此处根据上下文的逻辑关系，此处应该表示应该表示“转折转折”，而不是，而不是“递进递进”。6. what how根据句意应该是不知道怎样使根据句意应该是不知道怎样使用图书馆，故用用图书馆，故用how。7. 在在told前加前加was此处表示此处表示“我被告知我被告知”，应该用被动语态，且是在写信前被告知，故应该用被动语态，且是在写信前被告知，故用一般过去时的被动语态。用一般过去时的被动语态。8. in

10、on具体指具体指“星期几的下午星期几的下午/上午上午”，要用介词要用介词on。9. 去掉去掉call后的后的to因为因为call是及物动词。是及物动词。10. is are此句是倒装句，主语是此句是倒装句，主语是my email address and phone number，故用，故用are。课堂练习课堂练习 假定你是李华，你正在为高考紧张复习，但假定你是李华，你正在为高考紧张复习，但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习。最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习。于是你给你校的外籍心理老师于是你给你校的外籍心理老师Kate写一封求助信写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下：寻求帮助。要点如下：

11、1. 作业多，没有时间运动。作业多，没有时间运动。2. 压力大，难以入睡。压力大，难以入睡。3. 希望得到希望得到Kate的帮助。的帮助。注意：注意：1. 词数词数100左右。左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。开头语和结束语已为你写好。Dear Kate, I am Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. Recently, Ive been busy preparing for my College Entrance Exam, but unfortunately I find it quite har

12、d to concentrate on my study. So Im writing to ask you for help. Im encountering some problems which trouble me a lot. First, I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports. Moreover, the high expectation from the teachers and my parents makes me extremely stressf

13、ul because I dont want to let them down. What troubles me most is that its difficult for me to fall asleep every night. Faced with the above problems, Im anxious to get your help. Could you please offer me some advice on how to solve these problems?Sincerely yours,Li Hua课外作业课外作业 假定你是李华，当前你在英语学习方面遇到了

14、假定你是李华，当前你在英语学习方面遇到了一些问题。于是你向你校的外籍老师一些问题。于是你向你校的外籍老师Tom写一封写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下：求助信寻求帮助。要点如下：1. 本人简介。本人简介。2. 求助内容。求助内容。3. 希望得到希望得到Tom的帮助。的帮助。注意注意：1. 词数词数100左右。左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。开头语和结束语已为你写好。Dear Tom, Im Li Hua, a Senior 3 student in your school. Currently, Im having tro

15、uble learning English. So Im writing to ask you for help. Therere two main problems Im faced with now. First, I find it quite hard to master the English grammatical rules and put them into use. Furthermore, so nervous do I feel in front of my classmates that I cant say a word in English. Therefore, I sincerely hope you can offer me some advice on how to study English grammar and how to overcome my fear of speaking English. I have the confidence that with your help, I can conquer my English. I really appreciate it if you could help me.Sincerely yours,Li Hua