高中英语作文道歉信课件.ppt

1、 A Letter of Apology道歉信文体概述（道歉信文体概述（Letter of apology) 道歉信是指因过失或疏忽等做错了事，道歉信是指因过失或疏忽等做错了事，给别人带来了麻烦或损失，发觉后给对方赔给别人带来了麻烦或损失，发觉后给对方赔礼道歉并请求对方原谅的信件。通常包括以礼道歉并请求对方原谅的信件。通常包括以下三部分内容：下三部分内容：1. 开门见山，表明写信目的，表示歉意。开门见山，表明写信目的，表示歉意。2. 说明出现差错的原因，提出弥补措施。说明出现差错的原因，提出弥补措施。3. 再次致歉，请求原谅，希望得到理解再次致歉，请求原谅，希望得到理解(语语言要诚挚，解释的理

2、由要真实言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实)。常用语块常用语块1.因某事向某人道歉因某事向某人道歉 _2. 向向说对不起说对不起 _3. 接受我的道歉接受我的道歉 _4. 为某事原谅某人为某事原谅某人 _5. 并非故意做某事并非故意做某事 _ have no intention to do sth.apologize to sb. for sth. / make an apology to sb. for sth.say sorry toaccept my apologyforgive sb. for sth.6. 弥补；赔偿弥补；赔偿 _7. 赔偿；偿还赔偿；偿还 _8. 给你带来不便给你带来不便

3、_9. 给你带来许多麻烦给你带来许多麻烦 _10. 更加小心更加小心 _be more carefulmake up forpay for / compensate forcause you inconveniencecause you much trouble11. 犯这样愚蠢的错误犯这样愚蠢的错误 _12. 应当受到责备应当受到责备 _13. 承担责任承担责任 _14. 难以接受的后果难以接受的后果 _15. 下不为例下不为例 _never let it happen againmake such a stupid mistakebe to blamebe responsible for/

4、shoulder /undertake the responsibilityan unacceptable result/consequenceStep 1：审题：审题养成重视审题的习惯。养成重视审题的习惯。思考的问题思考的问题样题分析样题分析人称人称题材题材信息点的顺序信息点的顺序 时态时态第一人称第一人称一封道歉信一封道歉信说理的逻辑性说理的逻辑性一般现在时一般现在时注意：道歉之事有可能是已发生过的，注意：道歉之事有可能是已发生过的，也有可能是将来不能做的事情也有可能是将来不能做的事情83.提出补救办法提出补救办法 2.说明具体原因说明具体原因道歉信写作4步走写信的一般要求写信的一般要求1

5、.内容要简单内容要简单对于题中所给的内容：对于题中所给的内容：全面全面对于自己发挥的内容：对于自己发挥的内容：简单简单写熟悉的，会写的！写熟悉的，会写的！ 2.结构要清晰结构要清晰开头段：开头段：中间段：中间段： 结尾段结尾段: 3.语言要精彩语言要精彩：4.注意内容之间的连接注意内容之间的连接1.表示歉意表示歉意4.再次致歉望理解再次致歉望理解造句能力 +高分套话9lBasic structure and expressions第一步第一步:简明说明写信目的，为自己的过失表示歉意，简明说明写信目的，为自己的过失表示歉意，希望得到对方的谅解。希望得到对方的谅解。道歉的表达：1.I feel s

6、orry for my failure to 2.I am awfully sorry that I cannot 3.I am very sorry for 4.I am writing to express my sincere apology for my pick you up at the airportattend your party. my rudeness/thoughtlessness / bad manners.10l第二步：详细说明当时情况，解释原因，语气第二步：详细说明当时情况，解释原因，语气要诚恳。要诚恳。1. Now let me explain what hap

7、pened that day.2. I am afraid what I have done has caused much inconvenience to you.3.I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened.11l第三步：提出补救方法，具体提出自己的想法，第三步：提出补救方法，具体提出自己的想法，希望能弥补过失，消除误会。希望能弥补过失，消除误会。1. To make up for my fault, I will2. I wish you could give me a chance to make

8、 up for my fault.3. I hope the settlement of this matter can meet your wishes.12l第四步：再次表示歉意，愿意为此负责，希望以后不再出现类似不愉快事件。1. I promise that I will never make such a stupid mistake again.2.I sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apologies.3.Once again, Im sorry fo

9、r any inconvenience caused/you have sustained. Step 2：写作：写作14Dear_, I am writing this letter to apologize to you for _. I feel very sorry about it and let me explain what happened that day/ (the reason is that) _ , but is it possible that I make up the loss ? To make up for my fault, I will Please a

10、ccept my most sincere apology . I promise that such a thing will never happen again. Yours sincerely 假如你是李华假如你是李华, 上周在外教上周在外教Mr. Jackson 的口语课上使用的口语课上使用手机被老师发现手机被老师发现, 手机被收走。手机被收走。 请给外教写一封道歉信请给外教写一封道歉信, 内容应包括以下要点：内容应包括以下要点：1 表示歉意；表示歉意；2 解释上课使用手机的原因；解释上课使用手机的原因；3 提出自己的请求并适当表态。提出自己的请求并适当表态。注意：注意：1. 可适当

11、添加细节使文章连贯；字数可适当添加细节使文章连贯；字数100左右左右;2. 信的开头和结尾已给出信的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。不计入总词数。Dear Mr. Jackson,_Yours sincerely,Li HuaLets take actions!Write an a letter of apology in 15 minutes.Dear Mr.Jackson， I am really sorry about my using the mobile phone in your lecture last week. Please accept my heart-felt apo

12、logy for being so rude a student. I know any word might sound a made up excuse. But I did not use the mobile phone for no reason. I was trying to find a part time job last week and that day，I got a job offer and they needed my further information immediately. Therefore，I had no other choice but to try sending them a text message in class and that was exactly what I was doing when you discovered. Anyway，using a mobile phone in the classroom is not acceptable to any teacher. I swear it will not happen again. But I do need my phone back to keep in touch with others. Yours sincerely, Li Hua