建议信-作文-PPT课件.ppt

1、Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books,

2、 newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you l

3、earn Chinese.Try writing to me in Chinese next time.Best wishes, Li HuaHow to write a letter for advice如何算是一篇好文章？如何算是一篇好文章？覆盖了所有的要点覆盖了所有的要点应用了较多的语法结构和词汇应用了较多的语法结构和词汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。全卷整洁美观，书写端正全卷整洁美观，书写端正要要点点全全词汇词汇,句型句型 （高级）和语法（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）语言地道多样化（较

4、复杂）语言地道连连接接词词写作攻略写作攻略1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。常用常用句式句式A建议信开头常用句式建议信开头常用句式(照应材料照应材料,表明写作意图表明写作意图)1After I read your letter, I am sorry to know that 2I know you have

5、 trouble inafter reading your letter3.I am writing to you for the purpose of -4. You have asked me for my advice with onand Ill try to make some suggestions.5.I am writing to express my views concerning.B. 表达建议（表达建议（body）1 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could 2. I would like to suggest/

6、recommend that3. If I were you, I would4. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action.5.I suggest that 6. You would better do/ not do 7. You may consider doing first，firstly，secondlythen，after that，in the endfinallyMeanwhile, whats moreC.建议信结尾常用句式建议信结尾常用句式 1. I believe you will take

7、 my advice into account/consideration.2. I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.3. In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.篇章结构及内容：首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。结尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，要注意有礼貌使读者容易接受。注意事项：语言要委婉、礼

8、貌，顾及对方感受。注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。Dear Bob,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主题引出主题). Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句此三句不同不同的句式提出建议的句式提出建议)As to , I suggest (有时根据需要有

9、时根据需要具体到某一反面具体到某一反面). In addition, (其他建其他建议议). Im sure (预测可能的结果，给对预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心方以行动的信心和决心).Im looking forward to (表达愿望表达愿望).Sincerely yours,Li HuaDear_, You have asked me for my advice with regard to _, and Ill try to make some conductive suggestions here. In my humble opinion(以我拙见以我拙见), you

10、would be wise to take the following actions: _. I hope youll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with you.Yours,XXX 假如你假如你朋友朋友JimJim是多年的烟民是多年的烟民，现身现身体不适，所以你想写一封给他建议他体不适，所以你想写一封给他建议他戒烟。戒烟。Task 11.首段：写信的目的Afterreadingyourletter

11、,Iamsorrytoknowyouarenotwellthesedaysandthatyoustillhavetroubleingivingupsmoking.SoIamwritingtoexpressmyviewsonhowtoquitsmoking.2.主体：关于如何戒烟的建议主题句+建议：意志；参与有益活动,远离烟友2.关于如何戒烟的建议主题句：Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:_.Abouthowtostopsmoking,hereareafewsuggestions.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewi

12、setotakethefollowingaction.Ihavereadmanybooksandalsohavesearchedsomeinformationabouthowtoquitsmoking.HerearesomeadviceIfoundforyou,hopingtheymaybehelpful.Firstly,togiveupsmoking,youmusthavestrongwill.youhavetoinformyourselfagainandagainthatsmokingnotonlydoesharmtoyourhealth,butalsodoesharmtoyourfami

13、lies.Secondly,Ithinkyoucantakepartinsomehealthyactivitiessuchasswiming,readingnewspapersandmagzines,listeningtothemusic.Onlyifyouhavemuchtodo,willyouforgettosmoke.Thirdly,Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucouldstayawayfromothersmokersbecausetheymayhaveabadinfluenceonyou.3.结尾Ihopeyoullfindthesepropos

14、alsusefulandIwishyouleadahealthylifeandbehappyeveryday.DearJim，Afterreadingyourletter,Iamsorrytoknowyouarenotwellthesedaysandthatyoustillhavetroubleingivingupsmoking.SoIamwritingtoexpressmyviewsonhowtoquitsmoking.Ihavereadmanybooksandalsohavesearchedsomeinformationabouthowtoquitsmoking.Herearesomead

15、viceIfoundforyou,hopingtheymaybehelpful.Firstly,togiveupsmoking,youmusthavestrongwill.youhavetoinformyourselfagainandagainthatsmokingnotonlydoesharmtoyourhealth,butalsodoesharmtoyourfamilies.Secondly,Ithinkyoucantakepartinsomehealthyactivitiessuchasswiming,readingnewspapersandmagzines,listeningtothe

16、music.Onlyifyouhavemuchtodo,willyouforgettosmoke.Thirdly,Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucouldstayawayfromothersmokersbecausetheymayhaveabadinfluenceonyou.IhopeyoullfindtheseproposalsusefulandIwishyouleadahealthylifeandbehappyeveryday.yourssincerely,XXX假如你是营养师假如你是营养师Mr. LiMr. Li, ,李华向你写信咨询有李华向你写信咨

17、询有关如何保持健康的建议：关如何保持健康的建议：1.健康的重要性健康的重要性2.如何保持健康如何保持健康Task 2 Dear Li hua, How nice to hear from you ! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. I would like to give you some advice. As the proverb says, “No one knows the value of health until he loses it”. In other words, nothing is more import

18、ant than health. Good health is beneficial to your work and study. But how to keep healthy? Here I want to give you some advice. First, you should have a regular life: go to bed and get up early. Second, keep a healthy and balanced diet: eat more vegetables and fruits and other food full of energy a

19、nd fiber; eat as little sugar and oily food as possible. Dont eat food which has gone bad. Third, get rid of the bad habits such as smoking, drinking or staying up too late. Physical exercise can make your body strong, so we should exercise every day. In a word, health is more valuable than anything

20、 else. We should do everything we can to keep us healthy.yours,Dear Li hua, How nice to hear from you ! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. I would like to give you some advice. As we all know, health is very important for everyone . Without health, its more difficult for us to enjoy a

21、happy life. However, in our life, not everyone can have a healthy lifestyle.To be healthy, we should take proper exercise and have a balanced diet. Besides, having a scientific timetable is also very necessary. In addition, wed better develop some good habits in our daily life and keep away from alc

22、ohol and drugs. Whats more, as students, we should not be addicted to addictive computer games, which will distract us from study. In a word, its a good idea for us to keep fit. Only in this way can we live a positive life. yours, Dear Li hua, How nice to hear from you ! In your letter you asked me

23、how to keep healthy. I would like to give you some advice. As we know, we teenagers grow very fast, so we need plenty of nutritious foods,such as fish fruit and vegetables. You should not eat too much meat or too many sweets. Also, you should take physical exercise regularly instead of studying all

24、the time. For example, you can play basketball or swim after school .Whats more , having enough sleep is very important. So I advise you to have at least eight hours of sleep every day and not to stay up too late Only in this way, can you keep fit . yours,Homework 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友假定你是李华，你的英国朋友PeterPete

25、r来信向你咨询来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。要点：要点： 参加中文学习班；参加中文学习班； 看中文书刊、电视；看中文书刊、电视； 学唱中文歌曲；学唱中文歌曲； 交中国朋友。交中国朋友。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。给出。Dear Peter,Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice no how to le

26、arn Chinese for my advice no how to learn Chinese well._ well._ _ _Best wishes,Best wishes,Li HuaLi Hua2.抽烟的危害主题句+危害1234.Asweallknow,smokingdoesgreatharmtohumanbeings.Firstly,smokingcausesmanyillnessessuchascough,heartdiseaseandthemostseriousillness-lungcancer.Meanwhilesmokingisawasteofmoney.Besides

27、,carelesssmokersmaycausedangerousfires.激励学生学习的名言格言激励学生学习的名言格言220、每一个成功者都有一个开始。勇于开始，才能找到成功的路。221、世界会向那些有目标和远见的人让路（冯两努香港著名推销商）222、绊脚石乃是进身之阶。223、销售世界上第一号的产品不是汽车，而是自己。在你成功地把自己推销给别人之前，你必须百分之百的把自己推销给自己。224、即使爬到最高的山上，一次也只能脚踏实地地迈一步。225、积极思考造成积极人生，消极思考造成消极人生。226、人之所以有一张嘴，而有两只耳朵，原因是听的要比说的多一倍。227、别想一下造出大海，必须先由

28、小河川开始。228、有事者，事竟成；破釜沉舟，百二秦关终归楚；苦心人，天不负；卧薪尝胆，三千越甲可吞吴。229、以诚感人者，人亦诚而应。230、积极的人在每一次忧患中都看到一个机会，而消极的人则在每个机会都看到某种忧患。231、出门走好路，出口说好话，出手做好事。232、旁观者的姓名永远爬不到比赛的计分板上。233、怠惰是贫穷的制造厂。234、莫找借口失败，只找理由成功。（不为失败找理由，要为成功找方法）235、如果我们想要更多的玫瑰花，就必须种植更多的玫瑰树。236、伟人之所以伟大，是因为他与别人共处逆境时，别人失去了信心，他却下决心实现自己的目标。237、世上没有绝望的处境，只有对处境绝望

29、的人。238、回避现实的人，未来将更不理想。239、当你感到悲哀痛苦时，最好是去学些什么东西。学习会使你永远立于不败之地。240、伟人所达到并保持着的高处，并不是一飞就到的，而是他们在同伴们都睡着的时候，一步步艰辛地向上爬241、世界上那些最容易的事情中，拖延时间最不费力。242、坚韧是成功的一大要素，只要在门上敲得够久、够大声，终会把人唤醒的。243、人之所以能，是相信能。244、没有口水与汗水，就没有成功的泪水。245、一个有信念者所开发出的力量，大于99个只有兴趣者。246、环境不会改变，解决之道在于改变自己。247、两粒种子，一片森林。248、每一发奋努力的背后，必有加倍的赏赐。249、如果你希望成功，以恒心为良友，以经验为参谋，以小心为兄弟，以希望为哨兵。250、大多数人想要改造这个世界，但却罕有人想改造自己。