读后续写公开课-ppt课件.ppt

1、 读后续写的具体要求 提供一段提供一段350350词以内词以内的语言材料，要求考生依的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语进行续写（据该材料内容、所给段落开头语进行续写（150150词词左右左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整情节和结构完整的短文。的短文。1如何构思续写的内容 Step 1 Read for Read for elementselements( (要素）要素） Step 2 Read Read for plotsfor plots（情节）（情节） Step 3 Gather Gather ideas ide

2、as Step 4 Make Make predictionspredictions（预测）（预测） Step 1 Read for elementswhen:where:who:what: why:my mom, I, receptionist, between spring and summeron the road through the countryside gave flowers to nursing home，Leaving flowers for someone makes mom feel good.Tip1: We can get the main idea with t

3、he help of_. broke down5W questions Step 2 Read for plotsNo garage, no passers-byRead for plots and feelingswriters behaviorswriters feelingsways to express feelings were driving,unhappyimpatient, annoyed“Do you know someone there?” ” curious,confused“Did you leave your name?”heard the car burst wor

4、riedhopelesssomewhere between spring and summer, Suddenly，in the middle of nowhereBefore she started the car,Not long after we continued driving, Suddenly， adj. actions dialogues surroundings timescried, skimmed, looked back“What?” ”“What did you do with the flowers?” ”no garage, no passers-byrebell

5、ious(叛逆的）叛逆的）.drove to ask:Tip2: While writing, we can express our inner feelings byadjActionsDialoguesSurroundingSimile(比喻)BeginningClimaxEndingalways unhappycurious, confusedmisunderstandingworried, hopelessimpatient, annoyedFeeling analysisdevelopmentThe writer has_with his mom Step 3 Gather idea

6、sgather the ideas信息整理：genre(体裁)：narration(记叙文记叙文)tense(时态)：the past tense(一般过去时一般过去时)main idea原文核心信息解读：Between spring and summer, on the road through the countryside my mom gave flowers to a nursing home, because leaving flowers for others made her feel good. Unluckily, our car broke down.Step 4 Mak

7、e predictions Group talking for the plot developmentsPara. 1：We were worried about what could be done. 1. How would the writer show their worries?2. Did anyone come to help them?Who? feelingfeeling3. How did the writer feel about being helped?3. How did the writer feel about being helped?Tip3 The en

8、ding of Para1 should be connected with Para2Tip3 The ending of Para1 should be connected with Para2The car should have been repairedThe car should have been repaired Various ways to express worriesadj.:actions: dialogues: surroundings: After what seemed to be ages, I scratched my head, stamped my fo

9、ot and walked back and forth hopelessly.“What if no one is willing to help us? Would we die from thirsty ?” I murmured in a low voice.The air was thick and the hot sun was burning us, I stood there clumsily with nothing to do.Deadly silence swallowed the road thoroughly, leaving nothing but hopeless

10、ness. Worried and depressed, I was wandering along the road aimlessly.simile:比喻比喻 I was walking back and forth like an ant on a hot pan.Group talking for the plot developmentsPara. 1：We were worried about what could be done. 1. How would the writer show their worries?2. Did anyone come to help them?

11、Who? feelingfeelingthe the receptionist?receptionist?an old an old garage man?garage man?a stranger?a stranger?relievedrelievedthankfulthankfulhopefulhopeful3. How did the writer feel about being helped?3. How did the writer feel about being helped?1. Seeing a flower shop, what would the writer do?2

12、. How would the writer feel?3. How could para.2 be ended reasonably?Para. 2：As we drove along, a flower shop came into sight on the road.buy some flowers buy some flowers to mom?to mom?be given some be given some flowers?flowers?. .excited?excited?proud?proud?understanding?understanding?Group talkin

13、g for the plot developmentsactive or negative?active or negative?Tip4: passage can be ended variously usingfeeling ending surrouning ending meaningful ending natural endingfeeling ending:Just at that moment, a ripple of(一阵一阵) excitement began to cross my face.surrounding ending: A pleasant breeze wa

14、s blowing, making the leaves of trees swinging lightly as if to be cheering for us.meaningful ending: What mom did reminded me of a famous saying:Roses given, fragrance in hand.natural ending: We continued our travel with a sweet smile.especially for the endingPara.1： We were worried about what coul

15、d be done. After what seemed to be ages, under the hot burning son, I scratched my head, stamped my foot and walked back and forth hopelessly. All of a sudden, one man with his hands waving at mom came into our view. “He is the receptionist from the nursing home.” Mom explained to me. “Why are you h

16、ere?” Mom asked excitedly. “I just intended to thank you for your flowers formally.” How lucky we were! What amazed me most was that he was a retired garage man. As a consequence, he had our car repaired in a short while.One possible version Paragraph 2：As we drove along, a flower shop came into sig

17、ht on the road. I paced quickly into the flower shop, where a bunch of flowers glowing(绚丽夺目绚丽夺目) red in full bloom caught my eye. Having witnessed the effect of my mothers kindness, I decided to send mom the sweet flowers. Soon, the heavenly scent filled the car again. Mom tried to conceal(隐藏隐藏) her

18、 excitement, but the glittering(晶莹的晶莹的) tears filled her eyes. Through this trip, I discovered that, despite my occasional anger towards her, I actually felt proud of her. Just at that moment, a pleasant wind was blowing, making the leaves of trees swinging lightly as if to be cheering for us.One possible versionRoses given, fragrance in hand