高中英语读后续写课件Legend-of-butterfly-lovers.ppt

1、Legend of butterfly lovers 梁祝What have you learned from the video?Selfless love 第二节：读后续写（满分25分） 阅读下面350字短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。注意：所续写短文的词数应为180左右；应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；若词数少于若词数少于130，从总分中，从总分中扣去扣去2分。分。 Brief informationWho: What:a couple of lovers, God, t

2、he woman doctor _ couple of lovers led an _ (envy)life in a town. _ (fortunate), the man had an accident and was severely _(injure). The woman _ (attend) himday and night. _ her lover was still sleeping, _ (hope), she made a deal _God: to be a butterfly for three years in exchange for the mans _ (re

3、cover), _ was a hard choice but easy to make to a willing heart.AenviableUnfortunatelyinjuredattended toButhopelesslywithrecoverywhichSummaryDevelopmentEndingBeginningClimax(高潮高潮)A. The man was badly injured and showed no signs of recovery.B. The woman dealt with God to save her lover but another gi

4、rl appeared between them.C. The man and the woman had an enviable love.Endings of our students Endings of our students Endings of our students logic（逻辑）（逻辑）白猫掉到河里，黑猫奋尽全力救它上岸，上岸后，白猫对黑猫说了什么？Continue the story You should find the clues in the story. logicthe titlethe given storythe underlined wordsthe

5、two given sentencesThey are the clues to help you create your writing logically. underlined wordsenjoying the sunrise the sunset consciousnessthe church God tearslove regret becamethe butterfly fly sweetheart-stricken underlined words（选（选5个以上）个以上）who (人物）：人物）：God the butterfly where（地点）：（地点）：the chu

6、rch what（事件）：（事件）：enjoying the sunrise the sunset consciousness tears lovebutterfly sweet heart-stricken clues（线索线索） “I can help youfor three years”“Yes, I do! i wont regret doing that!”God also felt sad “Do you regret for what you have done?” logicthe titlethe given storythe underlined wordsthe two

7、 given sentencesParagraph1: The butterfly knew that all these should have belonged to her, but now they belonged to another woman. She could do nothing but rest on the mans shoulder off and on. _Single is simple,double is trouble, triangle is terrible.利用已给信息将情节推向高潮利用已给信息将情节推向高潮How to deal with the w

8、oman doctor?When to get married ?Paragraph2: God also felt sad and sighed to the butterfly, “Do you regret for what you have done?” _利用已给信息得出一个完美结局利用已给信息得出一个完美结局 CreationThe possible versions of the endinge.b. The man and the doctor married, and the woman remained to be a butterfly.The man and the d

9、octor married, and the woman left.c. The man proposed to the doctor, but God uncovered the truth to the man and gave the separated lovers a happy reunion.d. The man proposed to the doctor, but God uncovered the truth to the man which involved him in a dilemma. Finally, the man left.the two given sen

10、tencesthe underlined wordsThe two lead you,help you,and control you to go in the right direction.Reading for brief informationReading for summaryReading for creationReading for writing There was once a placid 平静的；温和的；沉着的and beautiful town in which there were a couple of lovers who would often stay t

11、ogether on the top of the mountain enjoying the sunrise and by the sea appreciating the sunset. Everyone who knew them could not help envying them and praying for their happy love.Group A(paragraph 1)1. 目睹；见证目睹；见证 (vt) 2. 他说过的最甜蜜的话他说过的最甜蜜的话（提示词（提示词sweetsweet）3. 蝴蝶难过得情不自禁地哭了。蝴蝶难过得情不自禁地哭了。(tears)4. 变深

12、；使加深变深；使加深(v) 5. 第三年的最后一天第三年的最后一天 6. 他们的爱已成为回忆。他们的爱已成为回忆。Group B(paragraph 2)Group B(paragraph 2)被打动的；受感动的被打动的；受感动的 (adj.) 揭露真相揭露真相 3.对于我为他所做的事我从来没有后悔过。对于我为他所做的事我从来没有后悔过。（提示词（提示词regret, regret, 用倒装句式）用倒装句式）4. 唤醒唤醒 ( (vt.)5. 遭受许多挫折遭受许多挫折 6. 男人震惊了，男人震惊了， 越发觉得后悔和内疚越发觉得后悔和内疚 （提示词（提示词the feeling of regre

13、ts/guiltthe feeling of regrets/guilt） 1. 目睹；见证目睹；见证 vt. _2. 他说过的最甜蜜的话他说过的最甜蜜的话 （提示词（提示词sweetsweet）_3. 蝴蝶难过得情不自禁地哭了。蝴蝶难过得情不自禁地哭了。 （提示词（提示词tearstears）_see/witnessThe sweetest words he has ever saidThe butterfly couldnt help bursting into tears sadly./The butterfly could no longer hold back the tears.5

14、. 在第三年的最后一天在第三年的最后一天 _On the last day of the third year4. 变深；使加深变深；使加深 vt./vi. _deepen6. 他们的爱已成为回忆。他们的爱已成为回忆。_Their love has become memories./Their love has become a past.Paragraphy1: The butterfly knew that all these should have belonged to her, but now they belonged to another woman. She could do

15、nothing but rest on the mans shoulder off and on. _ It was heartbroken to see their love deepen day by day. Time went by quickly. On the last day of the third year when the deal between God and the butterfly was almost over, the man proposed to his girlfriend. He took out a beautiful ring and swore

16、the sweetest words he has ever said. Hearing this, the butterfly couldnt breathe. Her darken eyes were full of tears. she flew away silently. At that moment, she realized that he wouldnt know her sacrifices and their love has become a past.2. 揭露真相揭露真相 _1. 被打动的；受感动的被打动的；受感动的 adj. be_ bytoucheduncover

17、 the truth/expose/reveal /moved/impressed3. 对于我为他所做的事我从来没有后悔过。对于我为他所做的事我从来没有后悔过。（提示词（提示词regret, regret, 用倒装句式）用倒装句式）_Never have I regretted for what I have done for him.4. 唤醒唤醒 vt. _awaken/ arouse5. 遭受许多挫折遭受许多挫折 _go through many obstacles suffer many struggles 6. 男人震惊了，男人震惊了， 越发觉得后悔和内疚越发觉得后悔和内疚 （提示词

18、（提示词the feeling of regrets/guiltthe feeling of regrets/guilt）_The man got shocked, and the feeling of regrets and guilt grew stronger.setbacksfrustrationsParagraphy2: God also felt sad and sighed to the butterfly, “Do you regret for what you have done?” _ The butterfly said, “No. Never have I regret

19、ted for what I have done for him.” moved by her words, God was lost in thought: she had gone through so many struggles and she shouldnt deserve that. So, the day before the man and the doctors wedding, God uncovered the whole truth to him. Obviously, the man was shocked and the feeling of regrets an

20、d guilt grew stronger. The love deep inside was awakened. He rushed to the church to beg for the womans forgiveness. And he determined that this time he wont let her go. He will take her to enjoy the sunrise and the sunset for a lifetime. Step3 Step3 polish（润色）（润色） Step 2 Step 2 draft（拟稿）（拟稿） Step 1

21、 Step 1compose( (构思）构思） Reading for writing Paragraphy1: The butterfly knew that all these should have belonged to her, but now they belonged to another woman. She could do nothing but rest on the mans shoulder off and on. _ It was heartbroken to see their love deepen day by day. Time went by quickl

22、y. On the last day of the third year when the deal between God and the butterfly was almost over, the man proposed to his girlfriend. He took out a beautiful ring and swore the sweetest words he has ever said. Hearing this, the butterfly couldnt breathe. Her darken eyes were full of tears. she flew

23、away silently in great grief and despair. At that moment, she realized that he wouldnt know her sacrifices and their love has become a past.How to polish your words? “小”心思丰满人物内心 Inner thoughts to portray the figuresTip1：“小小”心思心思丰满人物内心丰满人物内心悲伤悲伤快乐快乐2016年年10月高考作文月高考作文 23分分Tip1：“小小”心思心思丰满人物内心丰满人物内心震惊震惊

24、2017年年6月高考作文月高考作文 23分分How to describe your inner thoughts?1. Feeling happy/sad/angry/guilty/depressed,2. Driven by curiosity/a sense of sympathy(同情)或者是 Deeply touched/ moved by3. .，full of regret/anger/fear/gratitude（感激）4. 具体的动作描写 stand frozen, jump with joy, tremble with anger, with tears filling o

25、nes eyes, with ones eyes wide open 等等Lets have a try! 1. God said to the woman, “Do you regret for what you have done?” Driven by a sense of sympathy(同情), God said to the woman, “Do you regret for what you have done?” 2. She said to God, “Thank you ,God.” With tears filling her eyes, She said to God

26、 cheerfully, “Thank you ,God.” * inner thoughts * . * .1 * theme：negative/positive * interpretation（解意）（解意）n * key words（关键词）（关键词）two given sentences * clues （线索）（线索） Step3 Step3 polish（润色）（润色） Step 2 Step 2 draft（拟稿）（拟稿） Step 1 Step 1compose( (构思）构思） Reading for writing Choose one of the following

27、theme to write two paragraphsfor the story based on the given underlined words. a. The man and the doctor married, and the woman left.b. The man and the doctor married, and the woman remained to be a butterfly.The man proposed to the doctor, but God uncovered the truth to the man which involved him in a dilemma. Finally, the man left.