2022届高考英语书面表达复习写作指导之咨询篇-课件.ppt

1、首 页末 页咨询篇单词单词consult v. 咨询 require vt. 需要arrange v. 安排 option n. 选择guarantee n. 保证 relevant adj. 相关的certificate n. 证书 tendency n. 趋势enquire/ inquire v. 询问 inform v. 告知短语短语more/ further information/ details 更多信息/ 详情provide sb. with sth. 给某人提供某物happen to 碰巧plan to do sth. 计划做某事inform sb. of sth. 告知某人某

2、事enquire about 咨询某事一、话题词汇一、话题词汇Step 1 素材累积素材累积首 页末 页开头引人入胜开头引人入胜1. Having read your advertisement in the newspaper, I feel interested in.and want to.Therefore, Im writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with some specific information regarding.看到你在报纸上登的广告之后,我对很感兴趣,并想。 因此,我写信想知道你是否能提供一

3、些关于的具体信息。2. I happened to come across your advertisement on the Internet and felt quite interested. Im writing to enquire about further relevant information concerning.我碰巧在网上看到你的广告,并对此很有兴趣。我写信向你咨询更多有关的信息。3. It is your advertisement on the Internet that deeply impresses me, so I am writing to consult

4、 you about more relevant information about.你们在网上登的广告给我留下了深刻的印象,所以我写信向你咨询更多关于的信息。二、话题句型二、话题句型首 页末 页篇中精编细织篇中精编细织1. As for.,would you be kind enough to offer me some information more clearly and exactly?关于,你能给我提供一些更清晰、更具体的信息吗?2. To begin with, would you please tell me when.and where.? Whats more, Id al

5、so like to know.In addition, I wonder whether.Also, what deserves my special attention is.首先,你能告诉我什么时候,什么地点吗? 此外,我也想知道。 还有,我想知道是否。 另外,值得我特别关注的是3. I wonder if/ whether it is convenient for you to inform me when and where the course will be given.我想知道你是否方便告知我这个课程上课的时间和地点。二、话题句型二、话题句型首 页末 页收尾简练到位收尾简练到位

6、1. Thank you for your kindness, and your timely reply to this letter will be highly appreciated.谢谢你的友善,如能及时回信我将不胜感激。2. I would greatly appreciate it if you could give me a reply at your earliest convenience.如果你能在方便时尽早回信,我将不胜感激。3. Im looking forward to a response from you at your earliest convenience

7、.我盼望着你尽早回复。首 页末 页1. 看到你在报纸上登的广告之后,我对语言课程很感兴趣,并想要参加这次的暑假培训班。 因此,我写信想知道你是否能提供一些关于这次为期六周英语课程的具体信息。_2.此外,我想知道参加这次的暑假课程是否有什么注意事项。_3.首先,我想知道你是否方便告诉我一些具体的安排。_三、仿写练习三、仿写练习 Having read your advertisement in the newspaper, I feel interested in the language courses and want to take part in the summer course. T

8、herefore, Im writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with some specific information regarding your six-week English course.In addition, I wonder whether there is anything that needs special attention to take part in this summer course. To begin with, I would like to know if it is conv

9、enient for you to inform me of some detailed arrangements.首 页末 页Step 2 遣词造句遣词造句一、句型讲堂一、句型讲堂祈使句祈使句祈使句主要用于表示请求、命令、叮嘱、邀请、劝告、号召、禁止等。Take a seat, please.Lets go shopping._ _ _动词原形动词原形 其他成分其他成分 表示礼貌表示礼貌(在这个祈使句中在这个祈使句中,主语是主语是 you,省略省略)_ _ _Lets 动词原形动词原形 其他成分其他成分首 页末 页二、强化训练二、强化训练(一一) 单句改错。下列每个句子中均有一处错误单句改错

10、。下列每个句子中均有一处错误,请找出并修改。请找出并修改。1. Lets go to see movie together.2. Is sure to get there before midnight.3. Listen to the teacher careful, please!4. Let Peter cleans the house.5. Never did that again._Be_carefully_clean_doa首 页末 页(二二) 写作必备。请将下列中文句子译为英文。写作必备。请将下列中文句子译为英文。1.他是一个很有做生意天赋的年轻人,你们可以相互学习。 (have

11、 a gift for)_2.她决不屈服。 (by no means)_3. 为了满足这些灾民的需求,他们决定提供足量的食物。 (meet the needs of)_4. 在过去的几天里,他们在不同的城市演出,这让他们感到疲惫不堪。 (非限制性定语从句)_5.尽管这两个礼物他都很喜欢,他还是必须做出一个选择。 (make a choice_ He is a young man who has a gift for doing business, so you can learn from each other. She will give in by no means. It is beli

12、eved that our living standard will become higher and higher. In the past few days, they put on performances in different cities, which made them exhausted.Though he loves both of the gifts, he has to make a choice. / Though he loved both of the gifts, he had tomake a choice.首 页末 页浪哥英语-微信公众号三、短文改错三、短

13、文改错以下短文共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。Dear Sir/ Madam, Im a junior student in the senior high school. Ive always been fond of collectingstamps since I am a child. As far as Im concerned, collecting stamps is a more meaningful hobby, helping me to know a lot. Besides, dealt with my collecti

14、on of stamps not only gives me great satisfaction but also helps me relax under great study pressure. Whats more, I even earn money by selling some stamp and my collection will be more valuable on time going by. _a_ was_dealing_stamps首 页末 页 However, my parents are strong against it. They consider it

15、 as a waste of money but they also think that sorting out my stamps may take up too much of my time, which should spent on my studies. I dont want to argue with them any more. Could you help me out? Looking forward to you early reply! Yours, Li Hua 剖析剖析第一处:thea。 考查冠词。 根据句意可知,一个高中的高三学生,这里使用不定冠词 a,故 t

16、he 改为 a。第二处:amwas。 考查动词的时态。 主句使用的现在完成时,这里使用一般过去时,故 am 改为 was。第三处:more 去掉。 考查形容词。 根据句意可知,集邮是一个有意义的习惯,没有比较的含义,故 more 去掉。_strongly_ and_ yourbe首 页末 页第四处:dealtdealing。 考查非谓语动词。 动名词作主语,故 dealt 改为 dealing。第五处:stampstamps。 考查名词的单复数。 stamp 是可数名词,前面有 some 修饰,使用名词的复数形式,故 stamp 改为 stamps。第六处:onwith。 考查介词。 with

17、 time going by 是 with 的复合结构,意为“随着时间的流逝, 故 on 改为 with。第七处:strongstrongly。 考 查 副 词。 副 词 修 饰 against,故 strong 改为 strongly。第八处:butand。 考查连词。 前后两句是承接关系,这里应该使用 and 连接,故 but 改为 and。第九处:spent 前加 be。 考查动词的语态。 which 与 spend 之间是被动关系,这里使用被动语态,又因为 should 后跟动词原形, 故 spent 前加 be。第十处:youyour。 考查代词。 形容词性的物主代词修饰名词 rep

18、ly,故 you 改为 your。首 页末 页Step 3 谋篇布局谋篇布局一、案例展示一、案例展示2017高考仿真卷五高考仿真卷五 书面表达书面表达 假如你是李华,来自阳光中学。 你校乒乓球队应邀去澳大利亚一所中学参加中学生乒乓球友谊赛。 请你给举办学校的联系人Mr. Williams 写一封邮件询问相关事宜,要点如下: 1. 接受邀请,表示感谢; 2. 询问食宿、交通及比赛日程等方面的安排; 3. 提出相关建议。注意:1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Mr. Williams, I am Li Hua, a

19、student from Sunshine Middle School._ Yours, Li Hua首 页末 页二、审题立意二、审题立意审题定位审题定位1. 文体:咨询信2. 主题:咨询比赛相关事宜3. 要点:表明咨询意图+详细叙述咨询内容+期望回复4. 要求:词数 100 左右,增加细节以使文章充实、连贯5. 人称:第一、第二人称为主6. 时态:一般现在时和一般将来时技技巧巧点点拨拨1. 根据要点进行分段,引出咨询为第一段,陈述咨询内容为第二段,表达感谢、期望回复为第三段。2. 正确地采用带非谓语的简单句、复合句、强调句、倒装句等来强化表达。 在表达充分的基础上使用高级词汇。3. 注意语句

20、间的衔接,适当使用过渡性词语。 句子与句子之间有一定逻辑关系,过渡性词语就是这种逻辑关系的体现。首 页末 页要点整合要点整合1. 引出咨询意向:依照要点进行信息加工,也就是要确定句型表达。2. 表达咨询内容:这个内容要表达完整,尽量使用多种不同的句型,避免句型单一。3. 感谢与期望:这是写信的结尾套句。框框架架构构建建第一段:很高兴接受对方的邀请,写信咨询更多细节安排。第二段:了解食宿的一些细节以便预先做好准备。 为了解当地的语言和文化,更愿意住在接待人家里,这有益于交流。 到达机场后对方是否来接。 双方共同制定比赛日程表以使比赛顺利进行。第三段:非常感谢对方对这封信的关注,期待对方的回复。首

21、 页末 页斟词酌句1. 引出咨询的意向:With our cooperation advancing, we are delighted to accept the invitation to play a friendly table tennis match, which will no doubt strengthen our friendship.Therefore, I am writing to get more about the arrangements.2. 陈述咨询内容:Wed like to know the details about the food and acco

22、mmodation so that we can make some preparations in advance.Is it possible for you to pick us up at the airport after our arrival?It is a proper match schedule for both sides that should be created, which can make sure that the match goes well.3. 表达感谢和期望:Your attention to this letter would be highly

23、appreciated and I am looking forward to your early reply.We are looking forward to your response at your earliest convenience.We would appreciate it very much if you could deliver us early reply.首 页末 页三、妙笔生花三、妙笔生花 丰富的词汇和多样的句型,是从众多作文中脱颖而出的关键。积累高级词汇,学会运用多种句型,你的作文才能出类拔萃。词汇与短语词汇与短语be delighted to do sth

24、. 很高兴做某事 no doubt 毫无疑问in advance 事先 long for sth. 渴望得到某物prefer to do sth. 更乐意做某事 live in host families 住在寄宿家庭里pick sb. up 接某人 so that 以便make sure 确保 be highly appreciated 不胜感激句型与表达句型与表达With our cooperation advancing, we are delighted to accept the invitation to play a friendly table tennis match, wh

25、ich will no doubt strengthen our friendship.with our cooperation advancing, 独立主格结构作状语,which 引导非限制性定语从句。首 页末 页Since it is the first time for us to go to Australia, wed like to know the details about the food and accommodation so that we can make some preparations in advance.since 引导原因状语从句,so that 引导目

26、的状语从句。Longing for more knowledge about English language and culture, we prefer to live in host families to get more chances to communicate with others.longing for.为非谓语动词作状语。Finally, it is a proper match schedule for both sides that should be created, which can make sure that the match goes well.it i

27、s.that.强调句型,which 引导非限制性定语从句,体现了作者深厚的英语功底。Your attention to this letter would be highly appreciated and I am looking forward to your early reply.由 and 引导的并列句, be highly appreciated 被动语态。首 页末 页四、写作达人四、写作达人首 页末 页首 页末 页Step 4 经典再现经典再现一、考题回放一、考题回放2014 全国卷 I 卷 假定你是李华,计划暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周。 下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校

28、写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。首 页末 页注意:1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:住宿 accommodationDear Sir/ Madam,_ Yours, Li Hua首 页末 页二、思路点拨二、思路点拨 本题要求给英国某学校写一封信,咨询相关信息。 首先把握全部的要点,叙述要完整;其次,可以运用一些过渡句和衔接词将要点串联,使文章连贯。 写作过程中要注意句型的正确使用和多样化,如问句的表达除“Would you please tell me.“Does it.外,也可尝试其他表述,如“I won

29、der whether.“How many class hours are there.“I dont know whether.,这样的文章更能吸引阅卷老师的眼球。三、词句锦囊三、词句锦囊plan to 计划 approaching 即将到来的for more/ further relevant information 为了更多相关信息 first of all 首先would you please tell me.你能告诉我 besides 除外pay for 为付钱 in addition 此外I wonder whether.我想知道是否 accommodation 住宿首 页末 页四

30、、补充完整四、补充完整Dear Sir/ Madam, I am Li Hua, a student in China. I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the approaching summer vacation. 1. _ (是你们网上的广告给我留下了深刻的印象), so I am writing for further relevant information about your six-week English course. First of all, 2._ (你能告诉我课程什么时候开始吗) an

31、d how many students a class consists of? Besides, how many class hours are there per week and how much I have to pay for the course? In addition, 3._ (我想知道住宿是否包括在内). Meanwhile, will students live with a host family or in a students accommodation dormitory? I would appreciate it if you could give me

32、a reply at your earliest convenience. Yours, Li Hua It is your advertisement online that deeply impresses me would you please tell me when the course will star I wonder whether accommodation is includedStep 5 佳作研习佳作研习一、作文典范一、作文典范佳作研读佳作研读Dear Wang Xin, Im at a loss for painting study recently, and co

33、unting on your advice and detailed information about it. First, do you think I should choose to study painting? In spite of the fact that I am just a beginner in painting, I have been powerfully attracted by it as you. However, Im some sort of an academic success and one of the tops students of our

34、grade, so some teachers think its a pity for me to study painting. Im also confused about the work it may bring . Besides, is there any difficulty in studying it? My last concern is about the cost. Do I need to expend extra money? To be honest, I hate to burden my family by such a choice. Thanks for

35、 your time, and Im eager to receive your earliest reply. Yours faithfully, Li Hua开门见山开门见山,与结尾呼应与结尾呼应,体现作者急迫焦虑的心情体现作者急迫焦虑的心情so 连接并列句连接并列句+it 形式主语形式主语+some sort of+academic successbe confused about+定语从句定语从句difficulty (in) doing sth. 首 页末 页习题示例习题示例 假定你是高二学生李华,对美术有着浓厚的兴趣,但下不了决心学习,于是写信给两年前考上艺术学院的邻居王欣,就自己

36、是否应该学习美术,以及学习美术的难度、费用等向她咨询。 注意:1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 开头语和结束语已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Wang Xin,_Thanks for your time, and Im eager to receive your earliest reply.Yours faithfully,Li Huaa首 页末 页一、作文典范一、作文典范研习以上范文美句研习以上范文美句,将下列句子译为英文。将下列句子译为英文。我指望你能说服她。2. 尽管他很失望,他还是勉强露出一丝淡淡的微笑。3. 他总是没办法空着问题不作答。4.

37、对她来说,观看女儿在节目中表演舞蹈是件乐事。5. 我们对你所谈论的医院和医生一无所知。_ In spite of his disappointment, he managed a weak smile.Im counting on you to persuade her. He always had difficulty leaving questions unanswered. It is a delight for her to watch her daughter dance in the show. We know nothing about the hospitals and the

38、 doctors that you are talking about.首 页末 页Step 6 仿真模拟仿真模拟 假定你是李华,正在德国柏林学习,暑假期间你准备学习芭蕾舞。互联网上一则广告引起了你的注意,但一些具体信息不明确(箭头所指内容)。 请给该舞蹈培训机构发一封电子邮件,询问有关情况。 注意:1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Task 1Task 2 假定你是李华,正在美国学习。 你的美国朋友 Louis 送了你一张万圣节舞会票,但一些具体的信息不明确(箭头所指内容)。 请给Louis 发一封电子邮件,询问相关情况。 注意:1. 词数 100 左右; 2

39、. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。首 页末 页Dear Sir/ Madam, Im Li Hua, a student in China. I plan to take ballet courses during the approaching summer vacation. I happened to come across your advertisement on your website and felt quite interested. Im writing to you in the hope that you can provide me with more releva

40、nt information concerning ballet courses. Above all, would you please inform me the difference among courses of different levels? Besides, I wonder whether I can experience the ballet lesson at any time before signing up and whether your training center will provide me with costume. Additionally, ho

41、w many class hours are there per day and how much do I have to pay for the course? Looking forward to a reply at your earliest convenience. Yours, Li HuaTask 1首 页末 页Dear Louis, Thank you so much for inviting me to take part in Horror Nights Party with Halloween approaching. Convinced that Ill have a

42、n unforgettable cultural experience, Im writing for more details about this party. Above all, I wonder if its convenient for you togive me a brief introduction of Halloween Dance Party so that I can get a better understanding of this festival before attending it. Besides, as its my first time to par

43、ticipate in such an activity, would you be kind enough to offer any suggestions on what presents I need to take with me? In addition, Id like to know whether I should dress up as a ghost. Finally, Im wondering how I can get there so as to avoid being late. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua Task 2