中考英语写作专题精品课件.ppt

1、2020中考复习专题中考复习专题2 Learning aims2.To learn to use some writing rules and skills to better the composition. 1.To learn to write compositions about the topics of WeChat; 学会写关于微信主题的作文；学会写关于微信主题的作文；学会使用写作规则和技能来完善作文。学会使用写作规则和技能来完善作文。Writings in different years2012E-card2013After-school activities2014Recom

2、mendation201520201818高邮市第一次模拟考试高邮市第一次模拟考试不重视课外阅读的原因不重视课外阅读的原因 1.作业任务重；作业任务重； 2.缺少良好的阅读习惯；缺少良好的阅读习惯； 3.课外阅读的益处课外阅读的益处 1.更多地了解世界；更多地了解世界； 2.对学习有帮助；对学习有帮助； 3.对学校和同学们的建议对学校和同学们的建议 （至少一条）（至少一条） At present, only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons. First of all, quite a lo

3、t of students have too much homework to do every day. And others havent formed a good habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet. However, reading has many advantages. Through reading, we can learn more about the world. Besides, it is usually helpful to our s

4、tudy because it can help us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our life more colourful and help us to relax ourselves. Here are my suggestions. For one thing, teachers should reduce our homework so that we can have more time to read. For another, its a good idea to form reading club

5、or organize reading activities, which can allow us to share our reading experience.202.clear paragraphs3.good sentences 1.cover all details 5.correct grammar6.neat handwriting4.linking verbs First of allAndBesidesLast but not leastFor one thingFor anotherHowever, reading has many advantages.Here are

6、 my suggestions.写出全部内容要点，层次清楚，写出全部内容要点，层次清楚，语言流畅，有句式变化，语言流畅，有句式变化，有复杂结构，至少有复杂结构，至少2-32-3个，个， 中考英语写作评分标准中考英语写作评分标准基本无语法错误，只有基本无语法错误，只有1-21-2个，个，或有少量由于使用复杂结构或有少量由于使用复杂结构而引起的语法或拼写错误，而引起的语法或拼写错误，但不影响意义理解。但不影响意义理解。 Level 1Level 1（17-2017-20分）分） 20 1719What can we do by using WeChat? 要 求： 1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连

7、贯； 2）必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥； 3）词数：100词左右(信的开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。如今微信已成为我们生活中的一部分，尤其受年轻人欢迎。如今微信已成为我们生活中的一部分，尤其受年轻人欢迎。Writing Task 好处好处1.迅速的与朋友交流；迅速的与朋友交流；2.与朋友分享图片，音乐和视频；与朋友分享图片，音乐和视频；3.发送语音讯息；发送语音讯息；坏处坏处1.占用人们太多时间；占用人们太多时间；2.泄露个人信息；泄露个人信息；3.太多的广告；太多的广告；建议建议 （至少一条）（至少一条）Main pointsAdvantages D

8、isadvantages AdvicePara 1Para 2Para 3What should we do when facing the composition?Task1：Search(审题）审题）如今微信已成为我们生活中的一部分，尤其受年轻人欢迎。如今微信已成为我们生活中的一部分，尤其受年轻人欢迎。好处好处1.迅速的与朋友交流；迅速的与朋友交流；2.与朋友分享图片，音乐和视频；与朋友分享图片，音乐和视频；3.发送语音讯息；发送语音讯息；坏处坏处1.占用人们太多时间；占用人们太多时间；2.泄露个人信息；泄露个人信息；3.太多的广告；太多的广告；建议建议 （至少一条）（至少一条） 要 求：

9、 1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2）必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥； 3）词数：100词左右(信的开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 key pointsTranslate the1.1.迅速的与朋友交流；迅速的与朋友交流；2.2.与朋友分享图片，音乐和视频；与朋友分享图片，音乐和视频；3.3.发送语音讯息；发送语音讯息；4.4.占用人们太多时间；占用人们太多时间；5.5.泄露个人信息；泄露个人信息；6.6.太多的广告太多的广告municate with friends quickly2.share pictures, music and video

10、s with friends3.send voice messages4.take up people too much time5.give away personal information6.too many advertisementsTask2：List(列列)Make up some sentencessend voice messagestake up people too much timeSending voice messages is interesting.=It is interesting to send voice messages.It takes up peo

11、ple too much time.=People spend too much time on it.=It takes people too much time to play it.too many advertisements many people sell thingsbecauseThere are too many adertisements because people sell things on it.Conjunction(连词连词)Task3:Connect(连连)Better sentences can make the writing more attractiv

12、e. How can we better the sentences?1. 他得了第一名，感到很惊喜他得了第一名，感到很惊喜。A. He won the first place. He was surprised.B. He was surprised to win the first place. Simple sentences can be put into complex sentences (复合句复合句) for better. A. I find it really interesting to learn English .B. Learning English is inte

13、resting, I think.Sentence pattern (句型句型) Better sentence patterns （句型（句型) can be used to improve the writing. Common mistakes in grammar Xiao Ming is a middle school student. Hedoesnt learn English careful at all. At home, he enjoys watch TV. He always forgot to go over his English .carefully at all

14、. watching TV.forgetsParts of speech 词性词性 Forms of words 词形词形 Tenses of verbs 时态时态 Disadvantages It takes people too much time to play. It takes people too much time to play it. Key points 1Key points 2 Firstly, itSecondly, it To express order表表 示示 先先 后后 First of all, besides, firstly, secondly, fin

15、ally, afterwards, then, nextTask4:Add(加加)如今微信已成为我们生活中的一部分，尤其受年轻人欢迎。如今微信已成为我们生活中的一部分，尤其受年轻人欢迎。好处好处1.迅速的与朋友交流；迅速的与朋友交流；2.与朋友分享图片，音乐和视频；与朋友分享图片，音乐和视频；3.发送语音讯息；发送语音讯息；坏处坏处1.占用人们太多时间；占用人们太多时间；2.泄露个人信息；泄露个人信息；3.太多的广告；太多的广告；建议建议 （至少一条）（至少一条）Add the key pointsI think/suggestIn my opinionMy advice is As the

16、saying goes, -To save time is to lengthen life节约时间就是延长生命. Task5:Beautify(美美)Which one is better?How to write a good compositionSearch Search ( (审审) )ListList ( (列列) )AddAdd ( (加加) ) Connect Connect ( (连连) )Beautify Beautify ( (美美) )1.2.3.4.5.How to better a piece of writing 2.paragraphs3.sentences 1

17、.details 5.grammar6.handwriting better4.linking wordsstandard for evaluation (评分标准评分标准)Good handwriting( (书写）书写）+2分分Clear structure( (分段）分段）+2分分No absent key points( (不缺要点）不缺要点）+10分分Good sentences( (好句子）好句子）+2分分Few mistakes( (无错误）无错误）+2分分Connecting words( (连词）连词）+2分分 Scores( (得分）得分）? Nowadays, WeCha

18、t has been a part of our life. It is becoming more and more popular with young people _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Thanks for listeningHave a discussion first , then, next, afterwards, finally, not only-but also-, both-and-, either-or-, however, but, yet, on the other hand, otherwise, or, for example, whats more, such as, in a word, because of, because, as a result, so/suchthat ,supplementary 补充说明补充说明 result 结果结果 cause 原因原因 order顺序连词顺序连词 transitional words 转折转折 Conjunctions并列并列