四级各类型作文及模板课件.ppt

1、CET4写作写作大学英语四级考试大纲大学英语四级考试大纲对写作的要求对写作的要求v教育部（2006修订版）明确规定写作部分要求考生达到大学英语课程教学要求中的一般要求，即“能完成一般性写作任务，能描述个人经历、观感、情感和发生的事件等，能写常见的应用文，能就一般性话题或提纲在半小时内写出至少120词的短文，内容基本完整，用词恰当，语意连贯。能掌握基本的写作技巧。” 评分标准评分标准v短文写作要求考生在30分钟内根据提纲写出一篇120词以上的短文，本部分的得分占总分的15%，采用总分评分法（Global Scoring），从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。满分为15分，共分五等：14分、1

2、1分、8分、5分及2分（注：四级作文在试卷总分中占15%，改卷时按照作文总分15分来评改，然后经过处理转化为710分中的作文分数）。各个分数档的标准如下：评分评分依据（依据（1. 主题主题、2. 表达表达、3. 文字文字、4. 语言语言）14分切题切题，表达表达思想清楚，文字文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本上无语言语言错误，仅有个别拼写错误。 11分切题切题，表达表达思想清楚，文字文字通顺，但有少量语言语言错误。 8分基本切题切题，有些地方表达表达思想不够清楚，文字文字勉强连贯；语言语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。 5分基本切题切题，表达表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重错误。 2分条理不

3、清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。0分白卷；文不对题，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想。 v备注：备注：阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数（如8分）相似，即定为该分数（即8分）；若认为稍优或稍劣于该档次，则可加分（即9分）或减1分（即7分），但不得加或减半分。 v字数不足按下表所示酌情扣分：v 累计字数90-99 80-89 70-79 60-69 50-59 49扣分123579历年真题分析与总结历年真题分析与总结v一、请看近十年的一、请看近十年的20套作文试题列表分析：套作文试题列表分析： 参见参见大学英语四级考试教程大学英语四级考试教程P

4、61二、纵观历年大学英语四级考试作文题目，我们不难二、纵观历年大学英语四级考试作文题目，我们不难发现，近年来的四级作文凸显发现，近年来的四级作文凸显三大趋势三大趋势：序号序号内容内容1实用性实用性增强增强从体裁体裁上看，议论文、说明文、应用文写作占绝大多数，记叙文偶尔也会涉及。到目前为止，虽然议论文议论文占绝对优势，但近年来应用文应用文上升的势头很猛，书信、欢迎词、祝贺词、招聘书、解说词、见证书、竞选演说等频频出现，集中体现了大纲对实际运用语言能力的要求。 2主要考核主要考核三大主题三大主题从内容内容上看，所考题型都与考生熟悉的生活事件与现象有关。就话题话题而言，四级作文主要有三类：社会热门话

5、题、校园生活话题和日常生活话题，如教师节、英语口试、计算机的使用、求职面试、上大学的费用等等，因此，平时应尽量偏向这几方面的主题进行练习。 3注重注重综合能力综合能力的考核的考核四级作文从倾向于单纯考查某一文体，逐渐过渡到几种文体的结合几种文体的结合。如：2004年6月的A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction是一篇解说词，属应用文，但同时要求说明和描写。这说明作文命题越来越灵活。 四级写作基本模式四级写作基本模式三段式三段式文章引言段主题句 (Topic Sentence)扩展句1 (Developing Sentence 1)扩展句2 (De

6、veloping Sentence 1)结尾句 (Concluding Sentence)发展段主题句 (TS)扩展句1 (DS1)扩展句2 (DS2)结尾句 (CS)结尾段主题句 (TS)扩展句1 (DS1)扩展句2 (DS2)结尾句 (CS)三、为了便于考生尽快掌握四级作文的写作方三、为了便于考生尽快掌握四级作文的写作方法，在此综合历年四级考试作文真题，重点介法，在此综合历年四级考试作文真题，重点介绍绍七类七类常见的写作类型常见的写作类型。v. 对比选择型对比选择型v. 现象解释型现象解释型v. 观点论证型观点论证型v. 问题解决型问题解决型v. 应用型应用型v. 看图作文看图作文v. 图

7、表型图表型. 对比选择型对比选择型特点及写作要求特点及写作要求v对比选择型议论文是大学英语四级考试写作最常见最常见的写作题型。一般来说，这类议论文的通常是对一个观点或事物的正反两方面正反两方面或者两种不同的观点或事物两种不同的观点或事物进行对比对比，从而引出主题，得出结论。在对两种不同的观点或事物进行对比时，主要运用比较和对比两种写作技巧。在四级考试中曾多次出现此类议论文。. 对比选择型对比选择型写作流程写作流程v第一段：简介简介。(简单介绍某一现象或事物。)v第二段：主要对比观点或事物主要对比观点或事物。(分析某一观点或事物的正反两面，或比较两种不同的观点或事物。)v第三段：结论结论。(得出

8、结论，或提出自己的看法。)v或者或者v第一段：主要观点或事物甲主要观点或事物甲。(简单提及某一现象或事物，并分析该现象或事物的好处。)v第二段：主要观点或事物乙主要观点或事物乙。(分析该现象或事物的利弊。)v第三段：结论结论。(得出结论，或提出自己的看法。). 对比选择型对比选择型句子模板句子模板v1. 对比不同观点/对比法：v When it comes to , peoples ideas/views/notions/opinions vary from person to person/from one to another.v There is no consensus(共识) of

9、opinions/there are some controversies/there is no agreement among people as to do /as to the view of .v Whenever people , they will come across the problem of whether they should or , and it is natural for different opinions to arise.v The general public has been debating whether or not . 对比选择型对比选择型

10、句子模板句子模板v1. 对比不同观点/对比法：v Some people think we should . They say that . While others think otherwise .They argue that .v Some people advocate that . Others hold the opposite opinion/adopt a totally different view/take an opposite side. They believe .v Those in favor of believe/claim that . Those oppo

11、se to argue/hold/point out that .v Everything has two sides and is not an exception, it has both advantages and disadvantages. 对比选择型对比选择型句子模板句子模板v2. 在两种对立观点中选择一种观点/表明自己的观点：v Were it left to me to decide whether we should , I should not hesitate a moment to prefer the latter.v As far as I am concerne

12、d, the former/latter notion is preferable/holds more weight.v As for me, I agree to/prefer to the former/latter idea. There are a dozen of reasons behinds my belief. First of all, .v Weighing up the arguments on both sides, Im inclined to believe that . 对比选择型对比选择型句子模板句子模板v2. 在两种对立观点中选择一种观点/表明自己的观点：v

13、 In my opinion/mind, we should .v From my perspective/point of view, I think .v Personally speaking, I approve of .v From what I have discussed above, I can draw the conclusion that .v【模板一】v 1 Nowadays, wherever you go, you will hear people talk about . 2 Whether you like it or not, it had become a

14、part of our life. v 3 Some people who are in favor of maintain that . 4 In their view, . 5 While those who are against argue that . 6 Besides, .v 7 As far as I am concerned, I stand on the side of . 8 First of all, 9 Furthermore, . 10 Thirdly, . 11 Therefore, . 对比选择型对比选择型作文作文模板模板v【模板二】v 1 Views/Opin

15、ion on (Attitudes towards) vary from person to person. 2 Some people think that . 3 They hold this opinion because (they think) . v 4 Others, however, take a negative / positive attitude to . (Others, nevertheless, are more pessimistic / optimistic about it). 5 From their point of view, . 6 Besides,

16、 . v 7 In my opinion/Personally /From my point view /If asked my attitude, I am more in favor of . 8 I stand in / hold this attitude /opinion / view because . 9 Its true that , but it doesnt mean that . 10 Therefore / In a word/ In short, . 11 Instead, we should . 对比选择型对比选择型作文作文模板模板. 现象解释型现象解释型特点及写作

17、要求特点及写作要求v 现象阐释型的作文通常先指明一种现象或提出一种观点，然后对这一现象或观点进行解释，最后得出结论或发表个人见解。. 现象解释型现象解释型写作流程写作流程v第一段：概述概述。(简要描述某一现象或某一观点。)v第二段：具体阐述具体阐述。(具体阐释现象或观点的正确性正确性或危害性或危害性等。)v第三段：个人见解个人见解。(表明自己的态度或看法。)v或者或者v第一段：概述概述。(简单描述某一现象或观点。)v第二段：具体阐述具体阐述。(具体阐述引起这种现象的或持有这种观点考虑的主要因素考虑的主要因素。)v第三段：个人评价个人评价。(对现象或者观点进行评价。). 现象解释型现象解释型句子

18、模板句子模板v1. 分析原因：v There are many/plenty of/ a number of/ numerous reasons explaining/ for .v The reasons of lie in several aspects .v Many factors contribute to . v There are many reasons that many account for .v The reasons for/why are as follows: .v There are many reasons for it, but generally, the

19、y come down in three major ones. 现象解释型现象解释型句子模板句子模板v1. 分析原因：v is mainly caused by .v What caused these changes? .v There are many factors that have stimulated this huge change.v The reasons that caused changes are diverse. On the one hand, . On the other hand, .v The rapid growth of owes much to . 现

20、象解释型现象解释型句子模板句子模板v2. 总结归纳 / 说明影响 / 表明作者态度 / 以作者个人为例：v Through the analysis, we can draw a conclusion that .v In short/ In brief, .v To solve the problem of , we .v From all the facts given above, we can see .v Considering all these /Taking all these into consideration/account, I believe .v As to/for

21、 me, I believe .v Take me as an example/In my own case, I .v【模板一】v 1 In recent years, (描写现状或趋势). 2 This has caused a lot of problems.v 3 First, (结果1). 4 For example, (细节，说明结果1). 5 Second, (结果2). (细节，说明结果2). 6 Finally, (结果3). (细节，说明结果3).v 7 Since is such a serious problem, we should take effective me

22、asures to . 8 First, we should (措施1). 9 Besides, (措施2). 10 And finally, (措施3). . 现象解释型现象解释型作文作文模板模板v【模板二】v 1 At present/ In recent years/ Nowadays, (描写现状或趋势). 2 It may someday become the main trend when (进一步描述这一现象或观点).v 3 Three major elements/factors would be taken into consideration when (doing sth

23、). 4 First of all, (主要因素1). 5 Moreover, (主要因素2). 6 Last, (主要因素3). 7 From their perspective, .v 8 Everything has both positive and negative aspects, and (这种现象或观点) is of no exception. 9 (这种现象或观点的正确性). 10 However, (这种观点或现象的危害性). . 现象解释型现象解释型作文作文模板模板. 原因阐释型原因阐释型特点及写作要求特点及写作要求v 原因解释型作文的重点在于探讨产生某一社会现象或问题的

24、原因。近十年来，原因阐释型议论文在四级考试中出现的并不多。. 原因阐释型原因阐释型写作流程写作流程v第一段：现象现象。(对某一社会现象进行描述。)v第二段：原因阐释原因阐释。(阐释产生这一社会现象的原因。)v第三段：评述评述或提出解决方法提出解决方法。(发表个人看法，或提出解决思路。). 原因阐释型原因阐释型句子句子模板模板v1. 一果多因：v Why ? For one thing, . For another, .v The answer to this problem involves many factors. For one thing, . For another, . Still

25、 another, .v A number of factors, both physical and psychological affect/both individual and social contribute to .v Another important factor is . 原因阐释型原因阐释型句子句子模板模板v1. 一果多因：v is also responsible for the change/problem.v Certainly, the is not the sole reason for .v The factors that contribute to inc

26、lude . v You dont have to look very far to identify the reason that .v Thanks to/ Owing to/Due to/Because of/As a result of . 原因阐释型原因阐释型句子句子模板模板v2. 一因多果v It will produce a profound/far-reaching effect/impact on .v It involves some serious consequence for .v There are a number of dreadful consequence

27、 of . Perhaps the most serious/disastrous consequence is .v It may cause/result in/lead to a host/number of problems.v It leaves/involves some serious consequence of v The immediate result it produce is . And perhaps the most obvious result of is . 原因阐释型原因阐释型作文作文模板模板v 1 Nowadays, we often hear that

28、(提出现象). 2 This phenomenon is not accidental, and there is social and individual background. v 3 Why ? 4 For one thing, (原因1). 5 For another, (原因2). 6 For instance, (举例说明). 7 From that, 8 we . v 9 As far as I am concerned, I agree that . 10 I think that (作者本人的观点). 11 .v第三段或为：9 We should take measures

29、 to . 10 First, (措施1). Second, (措施2). 11 Finally, (措施3). 问题解决型问题解决型特点及写作要求特点及写作要求v 问题解决型的作文通常先说明情况，提出问题，随后提出解决方法或处理方式，最后给予评价。. 问题解决型问题解决型写作流程写作流程v第一段：引言引言。(描述现状、形势、提出问题。)v第二段：解决方案解决方案。(提出解决问题的方法。)v第三段：评价评价或个人选择个人选择。(简要评价提及的方法，或选择其中一、两种自己认为合适的方法并说明理由。). 问题解决型问题解决型句子模板句子模板v1. 提出问题：v Nowadays, with , m

30、ore and more , which causes serious problem to .v Nowadays, .It has become such a serious problem which has aroused the concern from .v Recently, the problem of has become increasingly serious in .v Today, with , a serious social problem has arisen . 问题解决问题解决型型句子模板句子模板v1. 提出问题：v Today, more and more

31、 people have realized that has become a very serious problem.v Nowadays, there is growing concern over .v Currently, is being considered a major problem in . 问题解决型问题解决型句子模板句子模板v2. 解决问题：v To solve this problem, .v As is known to all, there are many ways to .v To put an end to this serious problem, in

32、 my opinion, several measures should be taken/adopted by .v How can we solve this problem? I think there are three approaches. 问题解决型问题解决型句子模板句子模板v2. 解决问题：v If you want to solve this problem, the following advice may be helpful.v My suggestions to deal with/solve/relieve the problem are as follows. I

33、n the first place, . Secondly . Finally .v At first thought, the problem seems far too involved (复杂的), but it can certainly be solved when seriously dealt with. . 问题解决型问题解决型作文模板作文模板v 1 Nowadays, great importance has been attached to (目前的现象及存在的问题). 2 Many ways can contribute to (要解决的问题), but the foll

34、owing ones may be effective.v 3 First of all, (方法1). 4 Besides, (方法2). 5 Finally, (方法3).v 6 In conclusion/ To sum up, the ways I have mentioned above should never be separated from each other. 7 (希望). . 应用型应用型特点及写作要求特点及写作要求v应用文，就是在现实生活中有实际应用功能的文体，比如信信函、通知、演讲稿、导游词、见证书函、通知、演讲稿、导游词、见证书等。应用文是大学英语四级考试中常见

35、的考查内容，与议论文、记叙文和说明文相比，应用型作文与生活、社会的联系更加紧密，在格式、行文习惯等方面更讲究规矩。因此，无论写哪些应用型作文，都必须按其各自规范化的、约定俗成的格式来写，不能随意改变格式。v下面主要介绍英文信函、通知、演讲稿、导游词的写作模板。. 应用型应用型(信函信函) 句子模板句子模板v1. 信函句子模板开头常用表达：v Excuse me for not writing to you for so long a time.v Your letter dated is at hand.v Words cannot express my joy of receiving yo

36、ur letter of May 8th.v I am writing to .v I am very much delighted to inform you that . v I have the pleasure to tell you that . 应用型应用型信函信函v2. 信函句子模板结尾常用套话：v I send you my best wished. v Looking forward to hearing from you soon.v All the luck in the world to you.v Please give my best regards to your

37、 family/parents. 应用型应用型(信函信函)作文模板作文模板v同学间的日常信件作文模板：v1 Dear , v 2 I am glad to know that . 3 As for , I suppose that can be a good choice for you. (首先用一句话来回应收到的信，然后进入此次写信的主题。) 4 . 5 . 6 Whats more, . . 应用型应用型(信函信函)作文模板作文模板v同学间的日常信件作文模板：v 7 To , you are supposed to . 8 are also of great importance, .

38、(对来信的第二问题进行答复)v 9 Now lets talk about . 10 First of all, you should . 11 In addition, . (转至第三个问题) 12 If any further questions come to you, do not hesitate to write to me.v 10 .v vYours, . 应用型应用型(通知通知) 作文模板作文模板v活动通知作文模板：vVolunteer Neededv 1 With the approaching of (活动日) , (组织者) is to organize and is

39、now recruiting volunteers.v 2 This program is planned to . 3 It aims to . 4 By participating in the activity, volunteers can . 5 Volunteers are expected to . 6 The program will be carried out .v 7 are needed. 8 Fellow students who meet the requirements and want to take part in the activity, please c

40、all us at or email us at . v 9 Come and join us!. 应用型应用型(演讲稿演讲稿)作文模板作文模板v竞赛演讲稿作文模板：vA Campaign Speech v1 , (选择一个合适的称呼。)v 2 Thank you for . 3 , 4 I am delighted to announce that . (演讲词常用开场白套语。)v 5 , I have always been considered as . 6 Meanwhile, . 7 . 8 In addition, if I get elected. (层次清楚地陈述自己的优势，突

41、出重点)v 9 . 10 If elected, I am confident that . 11 I will . (工作规划的简要陈述，点到为止)v 12 Thank you very much for your attention. (结束语套话). 应用型应用型(导游词导游词)作文模板作文模板v导游解说词作文模板：v1 ,v 2 Welcome to . 3 First of all, Id like to introduce myself: I am , Its my honor to be here with all of you, and I wish you a wonderf

42、ul trip today. (表示欢迎，自我介绍，开场白套话。)v 4 Here is the schedule of the day. 5 is the first place we are going to visit this morning. 6 Then will be our destination in the afternoon. (简要介绍行程安排，无需赘述。). 应用型应用型(导游词导游词)作文模板作文模板v导游解说词作文模板：v 7 Now we are on the way . . . . (用三四句话介绍第一景点的概况，突出重点。)v 8 Thats the int

43、roduction to . 9 If you have any questions, please dont hesitate to ask me. (结束语套话). 看图作文看图作文v 图片作文：描述3-4句，寓意1，分析4句，评论4句v关键：仔细分析，观察细节，把握寓意，联系现实，丰富表达. 看图作文看图作文写作流程写作流程v第一段引言，图画描述。主要是描述图片中的信息和表达的含义。v第一句：总体描述：人物、动物、事物+动作+环境： 1句；第二句：挖掘细节此、串连成句：1-2句；第三句：文子说明、象征寓意：1句v第二段主题段，意义阐述。是全文的重点，指出现象的寓意及分析其原因。 v第一句

44、：主题句：象征寓意：1句；第二句-第四句：论证（因果论证，举例论证，联系现实，正反论证）第五句：小结：概括论证，总结本段：1句v第三段结论段，建议措施。根据题而定，有的要求评论，有的要求给出建议及这一现象的措施v第一句：结论句：1句；第二句：针对双方提建议：2句；第三句：包装结尾展望未来：1句. 看图作文看图作文第一段：图画描述段的写法v1. General description：套话+总体描述 v寻找出图画的中心事物，确定中心事物的位置，从动作和状态两方面来描述画面中的中心事物；v2. Details：挖掘细节词，联结成句v寻找中心事物周围相关的事物，并进行简单的描述 ( 细节描述）v3.

45、Caption：文字说明+段尾套话过渡v若图画下方有 caption，可将其翻译为英语。 v替换picture 的词语：vDrawing, cartoon, portrait, sketchv描述图画的形容词：vThought-provoking 发人深省的vEnlightening 有启迪作用的vCompelling/striking /intriguing引人注目的vProfound/far-reaching implications 含义深刻vInstructive/beneficial/significant 有益的 vImpressive 印象深刻的v修饰动词的副词：vVividly

46、/graphically 生动地vSymbolically 象征性地vConspicuously/clearly/explicitly 清晰地vSubtly 巧妙地. 综合叙事型综合叙事型作文作文模板模板v 第一段v What a compelling and thought-provoking drawing it is! As is vividly depicted (portrayed, illustrated, presented, described) in the picture above, 描述1 。或者 The cartoon depicts vivid scene in w

47、hich/ where描述1 。 The most striking feature of the drawing is the fact that 描述2 。There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration./clearly, the cartoon reveals us a simple truth:. 综合叙事型综合叙事型作文作文模板模板v 第二段v The picture implies a prevailing trend in our soci

48、ety today which is_(图画总体概括)./ the purpose of this picture is to show us that due attention should be paid to_. There are several factors/causes/reasons contributing to/accounting for/responsible for this phenomenon. To begin with, _(第一个原因). Whats more/Moreover/In addition, _(第二个原因). Last but not lea

49、st, _(最后一个原因). 或者for one thing_. For another_. 综合叙事型综合叙事型作文作文模板模板v 第二段vThe picture implies a prevailing trend in our society today which is_(图画总体概括)./ From the cartoon, we can conclude that the cartoonist wants to convey a message:_. As far as I am concerned, numerous instances can be given to expla

50、in this phenomenon. The first one I can think of is _. A case in point is that _. 综合叙事型综合叙事型作文作文模板模板v 第三段vTo sum up,_(结论句). (两个建议) On the one hand,_(建议一). On the other hand, _(建议二). (结论句) Only in this way can we promote_. 图表型图表型特点及写作要求特点及写作要求v图表型作文要求根据图表上的数据，找出所反映的某个趋势或某一个问题、现象某个趋势或某一个问题、现象，并对该问题、趋势