（参赛）定语从句与写作-完整版PPT课件.ppt

1、I know you need a friendSomeone you can talk toWho will understand what youre going throughWhen it comes to loveTheres no easy answerOnly you can say what youre gonna doI heard you on the berSaid you werent alone, but youd call him soonIsnt he the guyThe guy who left you cryingIsnt he the one who ma

2、de you blue.The One You Love- Glenn Frey定语从句The attributive clauseThis is our school, _is one of the key schools in yiyang .whichThe teachers _ work in our school are all excellent.who The playground _ we have sports is very beautiful.where _ everybody knows, our teaching buildings are well equipped

3、.AsMr zhang, our headmaster, is a man _Maths is very good.whose This is our school, which is one of the key schools in Yiyang. As you know, Mr Zhang, whose Maths is very good, is our headmaster and he is very friendly. Look at the e to No. 1 Middle School of Datonghu.定语从句在写作中的运用定语从句在写作中的运用The attrib

4、utive clause1. I still remember the has what we dont know.whenwhywhich/thatwhich/that/正确使用关系词！正确使用关系词！whoselAt first, the s on TV, which we also can see in y classmate, who is named Lihua, he isnt the cleverest in our class. At first, the s are shown on TV, which we also can see in phones and on the

5、 Internet. My classmate, who is named Lihua, isnt the cleverest in our class.要有两个完整的句子要有两个完整的句子两句涉及同一事物两句涉及同一事物/ /人人两个涉及同一事物的简单句。两个涉及同一事物的简单句。11找出这两个简单句中都出现的同一个事物。找出这两个简单句中都出现的同一个事物。22将其中一个简单句改成从句，去修饰另外一个句子中那个相同的事物将其中一个简单句改成从句，去修饰另外一个句子中那个相同的事物（注意关系词的选用）（注意关系词的选用）如何写出定语从句The girl is Mary. We saw her

6、 yesterday.herThe girlyesterday is Mary.we saw who1. Im a student, Lihua. I am really interested in it.2. The waitresses of our canteen should be more e when I select food.3. The organization has many students all over the world. I will talk about China with the students.Im a student, Lihua, who is

7、really interested in it.The waitresses of our canteen, who always scold me when I select food, should be more patient.The organization has many students all over the world, with whom I will talk about China.to describe someone4. Last week, we had a math quiz. It was difficult for me.5. There are man

8、y interesting festivals from other countries. At these festivals, we can do lots of extraordinary things.6. Children will get lucky money from the senior ost exciting moment for me.Last week, we had a math quiz, which was difficult for me.There are many interesting festivals from other countries, wh

9、en we can do lots of extraordinary things. Children will get lucky money from the senior ost exciting moment for me.to describe something能力提升找到简单句的中心词，用定语从句将其丰富。找到简单句的中心词，用定语从句将其丰富。 1. 1. 汉语是一门受欢迎的语言。汉语是一门受欢迎的语言。Chinese is a popular language.怎么受欢迎？怎么受欢迎？被谁所欢迎？被谁所欢迎？Chinese is a ore and more people a

10、ll around the world .能力提升找到简单句中的中心词，用定语从句将其丰富。找到简单句中的中心词，用定语从句将其丰富。2. 2. 李明是一个热心肠的人。李明是一个热心肠的人。Li Ming is a warm-hearted man, who always help others when they are in trouble.( (具体化具体化) )Li Ming is a warm-hearted man.能力提升找到简单句中的中心词，用定语从句将其丰富。找到简单句中的中心词，用定语从句将其丰富。3. 3. 英语演讲比赛将于英语演讲比赛将于3 3月月2525号举行。号举行

11、。The English sarch 25th.The English sed to raise students awareness of ent,will be held on March 25th. (活动的目的活动的目的)Practice用定语从句增添做这些事情的原因或结果用定语从句增添做这些事情的原因或结果4. In this summer vacation, I would like to do a e jobwhich will hele gain money and working experience.6. Nowadays, more and more western fe

12、stivals become popular in China, lwhich is a good oore about other cultures.lwhich is a sign of globalization.5. I would like to join in the activity to do voluntary work,lwhich will helyself to helping those who are in need Our class is a big family . It consists of 12 girls and 50 boys. Most of th

13、em are mainly from the countryside. In the countryside the climate is pleasant. Zhao Qiang is a kind-hearted boy. He is always ready to help others. Our class is a big family which/that consists of 12 girls and 50 boys, most of whom are mainly from the countryside where/ in which the climate is plea

14、sant. Zhao Qiang is a kind-hearted boy, who is always ready to help others. 能力提升能力提升 It was recorded that there was one band. It started in a different way. It was called the Monkees and began as a TV show. The musicians were to usic. Most of the music was based loosely on the Beatles. As was record

15、ed, there was one band that started in a different way ,which was called the Monkees and began as a TV show. The musicians were to usic, most of which was based loosely on the Beatles. 能力提升能力提升(1)(1)我有一个同学我有一个同学Kate, Kate, 她的妈妈是我以前的英语老师她的妈妈是我以前的英语老师; ;(2)(2) Kate Kate是一个容易相处的人，我们都喜欢她是一个容易相处的人，我们都喜欢她

16、; ;(3)(3) Kate Kate 在此次口语竞赛中获得第一，这使得她妈妈很高兴；在此次口语竞赛中获得第一，这使得她妈妈很高兴；(4)(4) 新年就要到了，到时新年就要到了，到时KateKate会和她妈妈一起去深圳；会和她妈妈一起去深圳；(5)(5) 众所周知，深圳是一个购物天堂，众所周知，深圳是一个购物天堂， Kate Kate打算在那里买她需要打算在那里买她需要的东西。的东西。 请按以下内容要点写一篇有关你的同学请按以下内容要点写一篇有关你的同学Kate的短的短文：文： I have a classmate called Kate, whose mother is my former

17、English teacher. Kate is a girl who is easy to get along with and we all likes her. Kate takes first ing, when Kate will go to Shenzhen together with her mother. As we all know, Shenzhen is a shopping paradise, where Kate intends to buy what she needs.姓名姓名MandyMandy爱好爱好听音乐听音乐 演讲演讲职业职业毕业后一直从事教育事业毕业后一

18、直从事教育事业; ; 英语教师英语教师性格性格勤奋勤奋 自信自信 有很强的意志力有很强的意志力儿时梦想儿时梦想成为一名出色的音乐家成为一名出色的音乐家教育背景教育背景20032003年考取西南师范大学年考取西南师范大学, , 主修英语主修英语想对学生们说的想对学生们说的话话作为高三学生，同学们应抓住现在的学习机会努力学好英语。只有作为高三学生，同学们应抓住现在的学习机会努力学好英语。只有这样，才能为明年的高考贡献自己的力量。这样，才能为明年的高考贡献自己的力量。你的评价你的评价 请根据下面的表格，用五句话介绍请根据下面的表格，用五句话介绍MandyMandy。（尽量。（尽量每句话都使用定语从句

19、）每句话都使用定语从句） Mandy, whose hobby is listening to the music and making sed to be an outstanding musician when she was a child. In 2003, she was admitted to the Southwest Normal University where she majored in English. The words (that/which) she want to say to her students is that students in Senior Th

20、ree should seize the oake their contributions to the college entrance examination.(评评价略价略)1. 1. 增加词数（增加词数（100100词左右）词左右）可以连接两个包含同一事物的句子，可以连接两个包含同一事物的句子， 避免单词的重复避免单词的重复和句式单一。和句式单一。补充细节补充细节( (具体信息、原因、结果、目的等具体信息、原因、结果、目的等) )，以丰富文，以丰富文章内容章内容写作中定语从句的主要作用 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的

21、邮件中在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给你给Jim回信，内容包括：回信，内容包括： 1. 该人物是谁；该人物是谁； 2. 该人物的主要贡献；该人物的主要贡献； 3. 该人物对你的影响。该人物对你的影响。Writing 尽量多运用定语从句哦！DreamsHold fast to dreams,For if dreams die,Life is a broken-winged birdThat can never fly. Hold fast to dreams,For when dreams go,Life is a barren fieldThat cant grow.梦想梦想紧紧抓住梦想不放，紧紧抓住梦想不放，因为如果梦想消逝，因为如果梦想消逝，人生便如折了翅膀的鸟人生便如折了翅膀的鸟儿儿再也不能飞翔。再也不能飞翔。紧紧抓住梦想不放，紧紧抓住梦想不放，因为梦想一旦幻灭，因为梦想一旦幻灭，人生就是荒凉的土地，人生就是荒凉的土地，草木不长。草木不长。All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to !