8上7Writing教学课件.pptx

1、There will be more trees.There will be There will be less pollution.There will be fewer high buildings.LucyLets read the short passage and get some information about Lucy! In 20 years, my life will be happy. First,I think Ill be a teacher , because I like playing with children. Second,Ill work in Be

2、ijing, because its a beautiful city and I like it very much. Third, I hope I will be thinner and taller. At last, I am going to travel around the world in my free time. All in all, I will work harder from now on to make my dream come true！ Lucys Future LifeHow many parts are there in the passage ?Lu

3、cys Future Lifepart1part2part3Read the 2nd part and answer questions.1. What will she be?2. Where will she work?3. What will she look like?4. What will she do in her free time ?A teacher.In Beijing.She will be thinner and taller.She will travel around the world.her jobplaces to workappearance外貌外貌fre

4、e time activitiesLucys Future Lifepart1part3part2jobplaces to work appearanceactivitiesRead the 2nd part again and answer questions.1. Why does Lucy want to be a teacher?2. Why does Lucy want to work in Beijing ?Beacuse she likes playing with children .Beacuse she thinks Beijing is beautiful and she

5、 likes it very much . In 20 years, my life will be happy. First,I think Ill be a teacher , because I like playing with children. Second,Ill work in Beijing, because its a beautiful city and I like it very much. Third, I hope I will be thinner and taller. At last, I am going to travel around the worl

6、d in my free time. All in all, I will work harder from now on to make my dream come true！ Lucys future life beginning endingTip 1:use linking words连接词连接词 Tip 2:rich supporting details 细节支撑细节支撑 bodyu beginning bodyu ending: jobplaces to workappearance外貌外貌free time activitiesgive reasonsFree talk:What

7、 will your life be like in 20 years?.I will be a/an .scientistteacherpilotastronautcomputer programmerdoctorreporterpolicemanplaces to work/liveBeijing Parisa big house.I will work/live in .a high buildingfree time activitiestravel around the worldplay the pianofly kitesplay basketballhave parties.I

8、 will .read booksMy Future Life.jobplaces to work appearanceactivitiesWrite a short composition about your future life.My life in 20 years jobappearanceactivities places to live/ workIn 20 years , I will be a/anBecause.Ill work/live one day.Because.In my free time, Ill. In 20 years, my life will be

9、happy. endingbodybeginningI believe my dream will come true one day.Ill be.Self Check自查自查 Grammar&Tense语法和时态语法和时态 Right linking words合适的连接词合适的连接词 Useful patterns and expressions 有用有用的句型和的句型和短语短语 Punctuation&Capital letter大大小写及标点小写及标点 Neat writing整洁的书写整洁的书写What should you pay attention to?total point

10、s总分总分(20) criteria标准标准requirements要求要求2 pointshand-writing (书写书写)beautiful4 pointsbeginning and endinggood8 pointsbody(正文正文)clear, complete(完整完整) coherent (连贯连贯)4 pointsgrammar(语法语法)tense(时态时态), mistakes(错误错误)2 pointsmake articles betterconjunctions (连词连词), good sentence patterns(句型句型) and expressions (表达表达).独一无二的独一无二的Just be yourself.ryTry you best.ncomplaining 不抱怨的不抱怨的esponsible有责任心的有责任心的nthusiastic充满热充满热情的情的earless无畏的无畏的niqueWhere there is a will, there is a way!有志者，事竟成。有志者，事竟成。Study hard,I will makemy dream come true.Thank you!Thank you!