读后续写高分作文7则-2022届高考英语写作备考.docx

1、2020年1月浙江高考读后续写高分作文7则 “Im going to miss you so much,Poppy,” said the tall, thin teenager. He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye. He stood up, hugged hisparents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions（情绪）get the better of him. His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control. The

2、y had driven their son several hours out of town to theuniversitywhere he would soon be living and studying. It was time to say goodbye for now at least. The familyhuggedand smiled through misty eyes and then laughed. Theboylifted the last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile. “I guess

3、this is it,” he said. “Ill see you back home in a month, okay?” His parents nodded, and theywatchedas he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents. The boys mother turned to thedog, “Okay, Poppy, time to go back home.” The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy li

4、ving there. All that week, Poppy didnt seem interested in her dinner, her favorite toy, or even in her daily walk. Her owners were sad too, but they knew their son would bebackto visit. Poppy didnt. They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the sofa, bu

5、t the old girl just wasnt her usualcheerfulself. Her owners started to get worried. “What should we do to cheer Poppy up?” asked Dad. “Weve tried everything.” “I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy,” smiled Mom. “Without anybody left in the house but us, this place could use a bit of fun. L

6、ets get a little dog for Poppy. It didnt take long before they walked through the front door carrying a bigbox. Poppy welcomed them home as usual but when she saw the box, she stopped. She put her nose on it. Her tail began wagging（摆动）ever so slowly, then faster as she caught the smell.注意:1.所续写短文的词数

7、应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1：Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.Paragraph2：A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university.范文1Paragraph 1.Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.Eyes beaming with excitemen

8、t,Poppypounced at the littledogas if they were long lost cousins. Soon the naughty guys started chasing along the corridor, stepping clumsily upstairs and downstairs. At the sight of such frames,momfelt a weight taken off her mind. Evidently the arrival of the little dog broughtcheerfulatmosphere ba

9、ck to the dull house.Paragraph 2.A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university.No sooner had he stepped in than poppy threw herself at him and licked his hands and face excitedly. Habitually, theboyplayed with poppy for a while. Much to the boys surprise, what followed poppy was a lovely s

10、weet little dog, which bounced forward and intimately licked its new owners hand. Knowing the truth after moms narration, he could feel a surge of warmth cascading through him, moved and touched. He vowed to the family that he would contact them more henceforth when at school. That evening, the fami

11、ly clustered around to listen boysuniversitylife and let out laugh from time to time.范文2Paragraph 1：Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.Apparentlytaken by surprise,Poppystared at theadorablelittle dogaffectionately. Seeing Poppys eyesglittering with rapture, theparentsbreathed a sigh

12、of relief. The little dog watched around curiously,exploring every inch ofthe house with his sparkling eyes. Poppy seemed tobe overwhelmed with pleasure, as she couldnt help licking the little dog. From then on,the empty house was no longer ruled by dead silence but filled with laughter, and the atm

13、osphere of sheer delight enveloped the whole family.Paragraph 2:A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university.He was quite astonished to be warmly greeted by two lovelydogs. Sensing his confusion, the parents explained what had happened to poor Poppy and how theyfigured outsucha splend

14、id solution. His face beaming with delight, the boy hugged his parents tightly. With tears welling up in their eyes, the family chatted joyfully about what they had gone through during the last month. Ultimately theboysighed, “Its so nice to see usbathed in love and -harmony. Ive been supported by y

15、oureverlastinglove which alwaysexerts a positive impact onme along the learning path.” Just at that moment, Poppy and the little dog barkedcheerfullyas if they had taken in what the boy had said.范文3Paragraph 1：Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.Poppywas a little cautious at first,bac

16、kingaway as the little creature struggled to get out of the box. But aftersniffing the airfor a while, she got a bit closer, and thenlet out a cheerful barkas she started licking the littledoghappily. It seemed that she hadgot out of the shadowthat moment, filled with joy and excitement. So had the

17、parents who watched her every move. “Seems like weve got it,” said Mom,exchanging a delightful smilewith dad . “It really will be a great surprise for our son.”Paragraph 2：A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university.Imagine how surprised he was when he opened the door, as he was not

18、only greeted by poppys warm hug, but also “attacked” by a tiny creature.“Wow, Mom and Dad, youve got a partner for poppy,” said theboyas he hugged his parents tightly. That afternoon, the three played happily in the living room,tossingtoyshere and there, as theparentsstarted to prepare their evening

19、 feast. That evening the family sat happily,enjoying the delicacies and most importantly, the time together. Though the time may be short, it would last in everyones memory, forever.范文4Paragraph 1：Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.“Meet your little new friend!” Dad announcedmerrily,

20、 as the little onesquirmingits way out of theboxtoPoppy, who was nowexhilaratedwith her oncedroopyeyes opening wide out of surprise andelation. She came to life immediately as shebefriendedthe newcomer. They accompanied each other when the boy was absent. The house was now filled with an air of joy,

21、 where barks of happiness could be heard from time to time. Bright smiles appeared onparents faces, as they earnestly waited their son.Paragraph 2：A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university.No sooner had he stepped into the house than Poppy and the littledogdashed forward to greet t

22、heirlong-expectedowner, with his parents watching by the side,grinning.His eyebrows lifted highas the surprise hit him, but then theysoothedas the dogs warmlynestledagainst his feet, wagging their tails, waiting to be stroked. “Thank you for finding Poppy a friend!” Words of appreciation andmerrimen

23、tflooded out of theboy, as he cupped the little creatures and hugged his parents in the arms.范文5Paragraph 1:Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.HowPoppys eyes sparkled with delight and curiosity when the lovely furrydogbumped into her sight, who immediately captured her whole attentio

24、n!And it was not long before Poppy and the little dog were merrilyboundingacross the yard and in cheerful chase.The house rang with excited barks again and theparentswere content with this new way to please Poppy.Paragraph 2:A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university.The instant he

25、flew into the door, theboywas first greeted enthusiastically by Poppy, who sprang towards him and showed her joy by wagging her tail.His mom hugged him affectionately and nearly kissed away all his tears! Pointing to a small dog, mom said it was Poppys new playmate and Poppy haddeveloped the habit o

26、fstaying in front of his bedroom to keepwatchingevery night since he went touniversity, which touched the boy deeply. Could anything else describe the boy half the happiness he felt at this moment?范文6Paragraph 1：Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.Poppypokedhis round head out of thebo

27、x, and looked aroundout of curiosity. The sudden arrival of a new friendanimatedPoppy, who barked excitedly and licked the littledogin rapture. The poppywas a bit numbowing to the unexpected welcome ceremony. “Look! My dear, she loves our new member!”Momlaughed. Soon the puppy got used to his new ho

28、me, beginning to chase Poppy with great pleasure, or be chased by Poppy delightedly. Parents wereexceedinglyhappy to see poppy becomecheerfulagain.Paragraph 2:A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university.Upon arrival, he received the rapturous welcome from poppy. “Hey! Its been a long

29、 time, isnt it?” Hechuckledat the dog as he closed the door. Unexpectedly, Poppy abruptly ran away and then dragged another puppy to him. The puppy seemedreluctantwhen approaching the stranger. “ Poppy was extremely depressed after you left, so we bought her a new friend,”explained Mom to the confus

30、edboy. Awinsomesmile lit up the boys face. “I can receive one more piece of love then.” Herubbedthe two dogs head affectionately.“So can you, Poppy.范文7Paragraph 1：Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.Pure white fur,dotted with dark spots, the tinydogput her paws on the boxs edge, glanc

31、ing around in curiosity.Poppystepped aside, sniffed, then approached near observing. Assolid connectionwas abruptly formed between them and they stuck to each other everywhere and every time, poppys sorrow was driven away by the lovely creature, devoting all her time to accompanying her.Theparentswe

32、re relieved as they got along well, and brought back some energy in their house as different tones of barks appeared every day, which were always in a merry tune.Paragraph 2:A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university.It was Poppy that firstdartedto him with its tail wagging cheerful

33、ly. Dragging his sleeve, Poppy led him to thebox.Scarcely had theboytaken off his shoes when he found a puppy dog barking soundly in it.“What a surprise!” he turned to his parents. “We bought her to comfort Poppy.” answered his parents wearing bright smiles, hugging him tightly. On the dinner table, they chatted about theuniversitylife and many adventurous experiences, whichpushed the atmosphere to the peakand everyones face was reddened by the warmth including the twocheerfuldogs. What a harmonious reunion!