应用文写作：求助信 美国旅游-2022届高考英语三轮冲刺写作备考.docx

1、应用文写作：求助信 美国旅游原题假设你是李华，计划今年暑假去美国旅游两周，请给你的美国朋友David写一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：1提出你对旅游地点的要求并请David推荐地点；2你对住宿和交通的要求；3请他代为预订宾馆并对他表示感谢。注意：1.词数100左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear David，Best regards!参考范文Dear David，The summer holiday is drawing near. I feel very excited at the thought that I am going to visit A

2、merica in the holiday. Its the first time for me to travel abroad on my own so I need your help.Id like to visit some areas of scenic beauty, such as mountains, valleys rivers and forests ,where I could enjoy the beauty of nature. Please recommend several places to me. Besides, I prefer to live in t

3、he hotel and I hope the traffic around isnt too heavy because Im going to rent a car to start my travel. Please help me book a hotel. Thanks a lot.Im expecting to hear from you, and Im looking forward to meeting you.Best regards!同学的作文Dear David,How is everything going? I plan to travel around the US

4、 for two weeks during my summer holidays.(交待背景）As a traveler who knows little about this country,I am writing with the aim of asking for your help.（写信目的）Id like topay a visit tosome beautiful natural sights,whereI can enjoy the dramaticviewsand be far away from noisy city life.I was wondering if you

5、 couldrecommend some of this kind oftourist attractionsto me.(请求推荐地点)As for accommodation,I prefer a luxury hotel with great modern facilities on condition thatit is near the subway station. I would appreciate it if you couldreserve such a hotel forme.（住宿和交通）I am looking forward to your reply. (信的结尾

6、)Bestregards!存在的问题1.审文体: 什么信？耀眼的要点词汇是什么？背景信息又是什么？2.要根据要点合理分段！3.减少口语化表达：Long time no see./ Please tell me!/ How long have we not met each other?/过多的问句4.请求David推荐、告诉David你的要求, 语言精准Itll never be a wrong choice to.There is nothing better than.均用于建议他人，而非求助表达期待/希望/要求：Its better that./ It would be better i

7、f.be eager/longing for sth.be eager/longing to do sth. Id rather do./ prefer doing/to do. in hopes of doing./ in hopes that.例Should they hang onin the hope thatthe shares will soon be worth serious money?他们是否应该还抱有希望，自己的股份不久就值一大笔钱？We came to the islandin the hope offinding a simpler way of life.We ca

8、me to the island hoping to find.我们来到这座岛上，希望找到一种更简朴的生活方式。5.无效表述：美国优美的自然景观和人文风光. 与要点有何关系？大量描写, 辞藻华丽却无实际意义。6.第一段用了很多个I， 如何改变句式减少I？7.I would appreciate it if you could help me out.这个句子放在哪里更合适？写作语言表达1.表达感谢be grateful/thankful for.;I would appreciate . if you could.2.待在.酒店 stay at a hotel where.3.live：if

9、you live in a place, you have your home there4.最好. sb. had better do sth.Itsbetter that./ It would be better if.5.给某人关于某事的建议advise sb. to do sth.offer sb. some advice on (how to do) sth.6.hotel: small/ large/ luxury豪华的/ comfortable7.Quiet /quite8.where&whichId like to go to places which allow me to

10、leave behind all my worries.Id like to travel to places where I can be treated to the sight of dramatic natural scenery.同学们的好句子1.Tired and stressed, I prefer the places providingdramatic and charmingscenery, which allow me toget away from my stressful life.2.Considering that you are a local American

11、, Id like you to recommend someplaces of interestandpicturesque natural wonders.Apart from that, acozyhotel with a convenient traffic system is what I badly need.3.Eager and excited, Im planning for a trip to America for two weeks this summer. To have amemorableexperience, Im writing to sincerelyask you for a favor.4.Keen onbothcultural wonders and ancient civilization, I hope my accommodation is near the downtown areawherethe traffic is not that heavy.