unit6 小作文训练 课件-新外研版《高中英语》必修第三册.pptx

1、应用文专题训练教学目标：1.英语写作的两个意识2.了解写作中常见的错误3.通过写作训练强化写出正确地道的英语句子。想要写好英语作文，就要养成良好的写作意识。1.要养成用英语思维写句子的意识。要养成用英语思维写句子的意识。2.要养成正确要养成正确使用使用谓语动词的意识。谓语动词的意识。英语和汉语句子表达的语序是有区别的。在汉语中我们一般说：或“什么时候，某人在什么地方做了某事。什么时候，某人在什么地方做了某事。”但在英语中则要表达成：_“某人做了某事在什么地方某人做了某事在什么地方什么时候。什么时候。”1.这个星期五，我们将在阶梯教室（lecture hall）上汉语课。_2.在过去几年里，这座

2、小镇发生了很大的变化。_ Well have the Chinese lesson in the lecture this Friday.Great changes have taken place in the past few years.英语中，一个句子的主干部分是“主语+谓语+宾语”，而“谓语”则是句子的核心，因此，有无谓语不成句之说。英语写作中，谓语出错都要扣分，故使用正确的谓语形式成为必然。正确的谓语形式包括：1）准确的谓语动词2）正确的时态、语态和主谓一致1.我突然想起一个好主意。_ _2.我们可能早点出发，以便我们有更多时间看书和选书 _Suddenly I a good op

3、inion.We may early so that well have more time to choose and read books.In a flash I a good opinion.3.从那时起，他就一直住在这个村庄。_2.几个小时后，他们终于到达了目的地。_He in this village ever since.They the destination several hours later.正确地道的语句一、谓语错误 谓语是句子的核心成分，谓语错误属于“重大错误”。通常每错必扣分。谓语错误通常分为以下两类：1.谓语动词选用错误2.谓语的时态、语态、一致性错误1.误：D

4、oing a parttime job can effect your studies.正：Doing a parttime job can _ your studies.affect/have an effect on 2.误：He opened the light after he entered the room.正：He _ the light after he entered the roomturned on1.谓语动词选用错误4.误：He was like ice cream even though in winter.正：He _ ice cream even though i

5、n winter.liked5.误：The sports meet will held in our school next Friday.正：The sports meet _ in our school next Friday.will be held3.误：He fond of pop music while his brother likes raps.正：He _ pop music while his brother likes raps.is fond of 2.误：Children who raise in poor families can generally deal wi

6、th problems more effectively in their adult years.are raisedbicycled2.谓语时态、语态、一致性错误1.误：In the morning,we had bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees.正：In the morning,we _ to the suburbs to plant trees.误：Children who _ in poor families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult y

7、ears.3.误：I have a wide range of hobbies,which includes drawing,collecting stamps and so on.正：I have a wide range of hobbies,which _ drawing,collecting stamps and so on.include主语主语which 指指hobbies,为复数为复数二、单词拼写错误 很多考生因为基础词汇没掌握好，在写作时经常会出现单词拼写错误。拼写错误一般是每三个错词扣一分。但拼写错误过多的考生肯定是得不了好分数的。误：Compared with others

8、,this country pays little attention to the polution.正：Compared with others,this country pays little attention to the _.pollution误：With the development of transportation,the world seems to be geting more and more smaller.正：With the development of transportation,the world seems to be _ smaller and sma

9、ller.getting三.非谓语错误 写作中使用非谓语动词时要注意非谓语与句子主语或所修饰名词的谓语关系和被动关系。这是很容易出错的点。误：With his attention fixing upon his cellphone,he didnt notice the teacher was standing by him.正：With his attention _ upon his cellphone,he didnt notice the teacher was standing by him.fixedfix his attention upon是固定搭配是固定搭配误：Seating

10、 on the bench,she buried herself in her thought.正：_ on the bench,she buried herself in her thought.Seated改正下列句子中的错误。1People throwed cans,paper,bags and so on into the river.threw2Its high time we do something to reduce the number of traffic accidents.3There have been more and more road accidents hap

11、pened in recent years.4Dr.Smith,together with his wife,are to arrive by taking an evening flight.didhappeningis技能应用技能应用请根据一下提示，以Travelling 为题写一篇关于旅游的短文。1.旅游的益处。2.旅游也可能有麻烦，如天气变化，丢失钱物等。3.旅游应做好准备。如天气、交通状况、结伴而行等。文章必须包括所有要点，词数100；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生以Travelling 为题写一篇关于旅游的短文。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态

12、：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分 1.旅游的益处。（the benefits of traveling）(领略大自然以及其他城市的美丽风景；呼吸新鲜空气；结交新朋友；放松自己)2.旅游的麻烦。（the trouble of traveling）(如天气变化，丢失钱物)3.应做好准备。（have enough preparation）(天气、交通状况、结伴而行)第二步:列提纲（重点词组）As is known;breathe the fresh air;make friends with;be caught in;catch a cold;have a good preparation

13、，go on a trip第三步：连词成句1.As is known traveling is a good activity.2.You can breathe the fresh air,meet different people and make friends with them,which can help you relax.3.You may be caught in the rain and may catch a cold while travelling.4.Therefore,when going on a trip you must prepare yourself c

14、arefully.2.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）考虑三个要点之间的逻辑关系前两个要点是转折，二三两个要点之间是因果，第二个要点的麻烦和第三个要点的准备工作，可用表示结构顺序的词。1.表文章结构顺序：First of all,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second And then,Finally,In the end,At last2.表并列补充关系：What is more,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,In addition As well as,not onlybut(also),

15、including,3.表转折对比关系：However,On the contrary,but,Although+clause(从句),In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand,On the other hand Some,while others,as for,sothat 4.表因果关系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【答案】Travelling（背诵）As is known,travelling is a very g

16、ood activity.When you are free you can go out to enjoy the beauty of nature.Travelling can let you breathe the fresh air,meet different people and make friends with them,which can help you relax.But travelling is not always pleasant.For example,the weather can be changeable.You may be caught in the

17、rain and may catch a cold while travelling.Whats worse,You may have your money stolen or may be injured.Therefore,you must have enough preparation before going on a trip.Firstly,you must have clear information about the weather.Secondly,you should choose a good partner to go with.If so,you will surely enjoy yourself.