2020年高考英语写作专题备考：书面表达冲刺课件.pptx

1、高考英语书面表达冲刺,目录 写作评分标准 考情考点回顾 各类文体指导 写作句式升级,PART ONE,写作评分标准,写作评分标准为何？,PART TWO,考情考点回顾,2019年1月,写作试题,2019年1月 II. Guided Writing (25) Directions: Write an English composition in around 150words according to the instructions given below. 假如你是明启中学的李华，你的朋友李楠给你写了一封信，告诉你他要开发一个新的APP，用这个软件共享衣服，想要征集大家的看法，你是否愿意共享

2、你的衣服，给出理由（信的格式已给）。,Dear Li Nan, Hearing that you plan to develop a new app of students sharing clothes, I feel truly proud of your novel idea. Personally speaking, I am willing to share my clothes on your app. The reasons are as follows. To begin with, it will be wonderful for me if I learn that som

3、eone that I barely know of can share my happiness of wearing my clothes. It feels like you are emotionally connecting someone in your clothes. Then I may naturally wish to know more about that particular “someone” and probably further deepen our relationship. In the end, a good friendship between me

4、 and my clothes mate might be built based on our common clothes. Whats more, if other students can try my clothes through the app. In turn, I also can try their new clothes. Therefore, students can wear different types of clothes without actually spending any money.,Whats more important is that shar

5、ing my clothes will take full use of them. In todays material society, there are so many parents who prepare lots of clothes for their beloved children for different occasions, such as a dress for the party, gym suit for indoor sports. Moreover, the clothes can only realize their true value after th

6、ey are put on a persons body. To summarize, sharing my clothes on your app benefits others and me. Yours, Li Hua,2018年6月,写作试题,2018年6月 II. Guided Writing (25) Directions: Write an English composition in around 150words according to the instructions given below. 假设你是明启中学高三学生卢平，你校英语报向全体高三学生征文，题目为“My Te

7、achers”。你有意投稿，撰写一篇文章，内容如下： 对遇到过的老师进行分类 具体描述每一类老师的特征（注意：不得透露老师的真实信息）,Teachers are to students what gardeners are to flowers. Apart from parents, they are tutors that virtually carry the most weight in our life, paving way for our future. I have met many teachers in my twelve years study, and Id like

8、to classify them into three types; “dominators“, “ friends and “consultants. Dominators literally, are strict with students, make decisions for students quite decisively, and usually cannot tolerate objections in class. A “poker face“ is the mask they wear, which makes them unapproachable. I believe

9、 most of my friend can refer to our math teacher, who criticizes us most and we are all afraid of. However, no matter how harsh they may seem, they motivate us to achieve advances faster and tap our potential to the full.,The second type, “friends“, share the same interest with us and are always wil

10、ling to listen to our worries and concerns. In addition, they offer us practical solutions to our problems. My class teacher is a case in point. She engages in lots of our activities, helps us when we are in need, and gives us compliments when we succeed. This type of teachers is the most popular. T

11、he final type, “consultants are mostly wise senior ones and look very kindly. When we are confused and troubled, they can instruct us with their rich life. experience to gain a deeper insight into the Problems that we meet. They Praise our merits but also Point out the shortcomings, enlightening us

12、on life and study. Whatever the characteristics of our teachers are, we students ought to appreciate, respect and understand them, because their efforts to push us forward are the treasure for us to cherish, granting us a promising future.,PART THREE,应用文写作指导,信件,A,日记,B,演讲稿,C,应用文常考分类,信件,A,2018年1月上海春考,

13、B,2018年虹口一模,假设你是启光中学的学生李跃华，你在学校公众号(public platform)上看到一张志者招募启事。请根据该启事的要求，写一封邮件（邮件中不得提到自己的真实姓名和学校），就启事中的三个活动任选其一，申请一份志愿者工作。,假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，你校计划引进一个机器人担任餐厅服务员或者图书馆管理员，并在英语贴吧征求学生意见，你很感兴趣，决定回帖响应，你所写的内容应包括： 1. 你认为机器人适合担任的一个岗位，二选一； 2. 通过比较，阐述你选择的理由，可以从工作效率，服务范围等方面进行表述。,书信的书写格式,No. 1268 Shangzhong West Road

14、, Shanghai, 200237 P.R. China June 11, 2016(信头和曰期) Dear Tom, (称呼) I am writing to .(正文) . Yours sincerely, (结束敬语) Jerry (签名,LETTER,Dear Sir/ Madam, My name is Li Yuehua. Hearing that our school is about to hold the open day activity, Im writing to apply for the volunteer job for sharing my learning

15、experience. Ive spent my 12th year being a student. Small as the number is, I always think it easy to learn every course. So Im going to share my methods with our mates, for they can benefit a lot. Three steps, I think, consist of my work. First of all, I will divide our subjects into 3 dimensions,

16、according to the different learning methods, and Im telling our mates that there is a unique trait in every dimension. Moreover, Ill introduce the aids that I always use in my learning process, which may sharply improve our learning effect. Ultimately, with the Internet technology available in our l

17、ife, I want to share some websites containing many useful documents, which can do good to our learning. Thanks for your consideration, and I would appreciate it very much if I could take to the job. Yours, Li Yuehua,日记,A,2018年12月长宁一模,B,2018年9月川中月考,美国华盛顿州(Washington state)有一所学校因为“天气特别好”（especially ni

18、ce weather）而决定给学生放假一天，让他们有机会享受更多欢乐的时光。你在报纸上读到此事，请写一篇日记，谈谈你对这个决定的想法。你的日记必须包括： 1.你对这一决定的明确看法； 2.简要说明你的理由。,，,假设你是明启中学的高三学生王蕾。学校正在招募话剧团（drama club）和机器人社团（robot blub）新成员。你在日记中表达获知该消息时的感受，做出选择，并阐述理由。,日记格式,演讲,A,2018年普陀二模,B,2018年徐汇一模,学校将组织一次“我心目中的英雄”主题班会活动，请你以Heroes in My Heart为题，写一篇演讲稿。 基本要求如下： 你心目中英雄的标准；

19、你心目中英雄的事迹简介（请举1-2例）； 从这些英雄事迹中，你学到了些什么？,母亲节快到了，班里准备在这天召开主题为“感谢母亲”的班会诸你就以下这份调查结果统计表撰写一份演讲稿，在演讲稿中，你必须： 1.描述表格中的信息; 2.分析可能导致这一结果的原因; 3.表达你的想法.,Hello, everyone! Its my great honor to speak here! Since the Mothers Day is approaching, Id like to share with you some of my feelings based on a survey. As is v

20、ividly shown in the chart, most students in the three age groups choose to celebrate their mothers and classmates birthdays. And as time goes by, the number increases from about 50 percent elementary school students, 60 percent junior high school students to over 90 percent senior high school studen

21、ts. However, among all the three groups, more students tend to celebrate their peers birthday rather than their mothers. The reasons are as follows. First, the increase in the number of students who celebrate others birthdays indicates an increasing awareness of others around us, and a tendency and

22、desire to express our care to others, which is a positive sign. However, the lack of attention to our own mothers birthday may lie in the limited time spent together, for students often share most of their time with peers at school. Less company thus leads to less communication, resulting in our les

23、s care of our mothers. Mom should have been our closest friend, and we are all clear of their warm care and love. The Mothers Day is around the corner, and its high time that we care more about our mom and increase quality time spent with them. Behaviors are more powerful than words. Please well tre

24、at your mom. Thank you for your listening.,各类书信模板,PART FOUR,图片&图表类写作指导,图片类,A,2017年12月金山一模,B,2018年4月浦东二模,生活本来不容易，当你觉得容易的时候，其实 1. 请简要描述图片。 2. 谈谈由此引发的感想。,内容须包含： 1. 简要描述图片内容； 2. 简要分析父母陪伴孩子的时间越来越少的原因； 3. 结合自己的经历，谈谈父母多陪伴孩子对其孩子的影响。,As is vividly described in the picture, 54% of parents devote less than 3 h

25、ours to playing with their children. Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that an increasing number of parents spend less time accompanying their families. There are several reasons accounting for the phenomenon. To begin with, with the development of the intellectual economy, faced with the fierce c

26、ompetition among colleagues, parents have to take some courses for further study and acquire more qualifications during their weekends and holidays so as to be promoted and raise salaries. Furthermore, due to the popularity of electronic products, some parents are addicted to smart-phones or compute

27、rs in their spare time instead of keeping their children company. Eventually, some parents have part-time jobs after work to support the family due to the high expenses, such as tutoring, Wechat business or waiters and so on. As far as I am concerned, my parents were very busy with work and earned a

28、 living during my childhood. Thus, I became independent of them but felt lonely. So eager was I to draw their attention and love at the bottom of my heart. In terms of my experience, I strongly recommend that parents should commit more time to accompanying their children however busy they are. Not o

29、nly can it have a positive on shaping their personality but also is beneficial to their mental and physical health. Nothing is more important than parents love.,图片类模板,经典套路,As is vividly shown in the picture, _ (描述图片). It is a common phenomenon that _(简单说现象). As far as I am concerned, _(我的观点). My rea

30、sons are listed as follows. To begin with, _(观点一). _(论据). Whats more, _(观点二). _(论据). Last but not least, _ (观点三). _(论据). In conclusion,_ (重复主题，呼吁人们应该这样做). Only by doing this can we_(美好的憧憬seize every golden minute to welcome a splendid future/ achieve our success and living out our values/).,图表类,A,20

31、18年日校,B,2018年12月普陀二模,假如你校最近就“家长应该如何对待孩子”的问题进行了调查，结果如下：请根据表1中的信息描述调查结果，并针对表2的其中一个数据所反映 的情况写出你的看法。,母亲节快到了，班里准备在这天召开主题为“感谢母亲”的班会诸你就以下这份调查结果统计表撰写一份演讲稿，在演讲稿中，你必须： 1.描述表格中的信息; 2.分析可能导致这一结果的原因; 3.表达你的想法.,Recently, a survey on how parents treat their children has been conducted in our school. According to t

32、he result, its not surprising to find that parents behavior that students like best is trust with 33. 5%, followed by talking freely and praise with 31.7% and 22. 7% respectively. On the contrary, students are not satisfied with their parents because they are over concerned about children, which ran

33、ks first with 37.6%. Always blaming the children and expecting too much of them are the other two main behaviors children dislike. From my perspective, I can understand youngsters feelings, especially when parents take charge of all things. Admittedly, parents are not willing to let us alone for fea

34、r that we are hurt or lost in trouble. However, as we can see from the data, what students want most is trust. If parents trust us completely, they wont restrict our freedom to decide important matters. Therefore, we will pick up the courage to face various difficulties and be grateful to our parent

35、s faith in us. Furthermore, no matter how careful parents can be, little birds will fly independently one day. It is the repeated warnings and over concern that prevent us from growing mature. Last but not least, the fact that students under the charge of their parents may deepen the generation gap

36、even if the original intention is not like this. Never will children understand parents love when they get tired of their unnecessary worries. In conclusion, I suggest that parents should spare some room for children, thus giving them opportunities to be independent and strengthening the relationshi

37、p between them.,图表类模板,扇形图表,A survey has been conducted among _（调查对象） on the topic “_（主题）” The data from the pie chart shows that “_（结果一）” ranks first at _%, which is followed by “_（结果二）” at _%. However, the least proportion goes to “_（结果三）” at only _%. As far as I am concerned,_ (我的观点/选择). Firstly,

38、_(原因一). _(论据). Whats more, _(原因二). _(论据). Last but not least, _ (原因三). _(论据). In a word, ,_ (再次建议人们应该这样做),柱状图图表,According to the graph, _(图表结果). The _ amount rises from _ to_ while _climbs from_ to_（数据）, both of which demand our prompt attention. As a citizen/student, my suggestions to _（点出主题） are l

39、isted as follows. To begin with, _(建议一). _（观点）. In addition, _(建议二). _（观点）. Thirdly, _(建议三). _（观点）. In a word, only if we pay much attention to our everyday behavior and take actions to _(重申主题), can we make contributions to _.(美好生活的向往),PART FIVE,论说类写作指导,论说类,A,2018年12月浦东一模,B,2018年12月金山一模,网络时代，人们常常不辨别

40、真假就在社交媒体上疯狂点赞(give the thumbs-up)或转发(forward)，这种行为有实际意义吗？请就此现象谈谈你的看法，并结合生活中的实例加以说明。,目前中国的移动支付(mobile payment)非常盛行，越来越多的年轻人选择使用移动支付，有的人认为移动支付给人们带来了便利，而有些人认为这种方式存在安全隐患。请你谈谈对这一现象的看法。内容包括： 1. 简要描述你或你身边的人在日常生活中使用移动支付的现象。 2. 通过与传统方式的比较，谈谈移动支付给人们带来的利与弊。,In the age of the Internet, it is a common phenomenon

41、 that people are always giving the thumbs-up or forwarding without distinguishing right from wrong on social media. From my perspective, there is no point in doing so. The reasons are listed as follows. First of all, the action that we give the thumbs-up also displays our inner fear that we are to b

42、e out-dated. Hence we try to catch up with the trend to follow others behavior, giving the thumbs-up unconsciously, which I think is often meaningless. Whats more, because of the explosion of information, the amount of fake news soars,which means the news we see on the social media is likely to be f

43、alse when we give the thumbs-up, we become the push power that makes the fake news spread and the action can result in serious consequences. For example, several years ago twenty-year-old actor named Mr Qiao quit his young life because of the netizens false comments. It is peoples unwise behavior th

44、at causes such a tragedy. If people can think twice before they give the thumbs-up or forward, I believe that fewer tragedies will happen. In a word, I firmly hold the view that giving the thumbs-up or forward without consideration is meaningless. I hope one day the trend will be reversed, and it ne

45、eds the work of both you and me.,论说类模板,经典套路,第一段（描述话题，导入主题）： Recent years have seen a growing concern over_ (本文话题) . With _(和本文主题有关的一个现象，结合身边事例，注意with后用名词性短语或者动名词) , _(上述现象导致的结果) . 第二段（提出自己观点或者阐述原因）： The issue, in my opinion, is_ (提出自己的观点) . On one hand,_ (提出原因1) . On the other, _(提出原因2) . In additio

46、n,_ (提出补充原因/原因3) . 第三段（提出解决的措施或给出自己的建议）： Based on the two above mentioned causes, it is imperative/suggested that_ (提出措施1， 注意本句谓语动词需用到(should+)动词原形的虚拟用法. Besides,_ (提出措施2) .,PART SIX,写作之语言美,语言美,考纲词汇,1.occur 替换 think of Suddenly I had an idea that someone had broken into my house. An idea occurred to

47、 me that someone had broken into my house. It occurred to me that someone had broken into my house. 2.devote替换spend He spends all his spare time in reading. He devotes all his spare time to reading. 3.seek替换want / look for They sought ( wanted ) to hide themselves behind the trees,4.average 替换ordinary Im an average ( ordinary ) student. 5.but替换very The film we saw last night was very interesting. The film we saw last night was nothing b