2020年安徽中考英语学复习课件专题十七 书面表达.pptx

1、Writing 1(2019安徽) 假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike最近因视力减退而感到不安,请你用英文给他写封电子邮件,谈谈你 在保护视力方面的一些做法。要点如下: 1.经常做户外活动; 2.很少用电子产品; 3.坚持做眼保健操; 4.,A组 安徽中考题组,注意:1.词数80100; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息; 4.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, Im sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. Yours, Li Hua,答案 写作要点 1.视力减退有多种

2、原因。有运动量减少,体质下降;有饮食不当,营养不良;有使用电子产品过度对视力造成 伤害等。可根据各条提出建议并解释原因。 2.以第一人称为主,一般现在时态为主。 参考范文 Dear Mike, Im sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. Id like to share with you some ways of protecting eye- sight in my daily life. At school, I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmate

3、s or do physical exercise during the breaks. In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer. You know, the light they give off is harmful to our eyes. Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes. Lastly, I usually have my eyes examined

4、 every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy.,I hope youll find my ways helpful. Yours, Li Hua 精彩词句 1.精美词汇:do physical exercise进行体育锻炼;avoid using the mobile phone避免使用手机 2.出彩结构:Lastly, I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy.(to make sure.为动词不定式短语,作目的状语),Writing

5、2(2018安徽) 某英文杂志社正面向九年级毕业生征文,请从以下要点中选择一至两个方面,并结合具体事例,用英语 写一篇题为“Thank you, my teacher!”的短文参加此次活动。要点如下: 1.严格要求; 2.耐心指导; 3.热情鼓励; 4. 注意:1.词数80100; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。,答案 写作要点 1.时态以一般过去时为主。 2.人称以第三人称和第一人称为主。 3.主要内容:严格要求;耐心指导;热情鼓励。 参考范文 Id like to say thanks to my English teacher, Miss Li,

6、 because shes helped me a lot. Once, I failed my English exam. When she found I was very worried, she encouraged me to study harder and promised to help me. After that, I turned to her for help every time I had questions. She was always patient to make me understand every single question. With her h

7、elp, Ive had enough courage to face difficulties and made much progress in English. Thank you, my dear teacher!The love and support from you will be with me forever.,精彩词句 1.精美词汇:fail v.不及格,未能通过;encourage v.鼓励;promise v.承诺;turn to sb. for help向某人求助;patient adj.有耐心的 2.出彩结构: (1)After that, I turned to

8、her for help every time I had questions.(every time 引导时间状语从句) (2)She was always patient to make me understand every single question.(不定式短语作状语) (3)With her help, Ive had enough courage to face difficulties and made much progress in English.(With her help 作状语),Writing 3(2017安徽) 假如你是李华,你们学校将举行“弘扬中华传统文化

9、戏曲进校园”展演活动,你打算邀请你的美 国朋友Mike参加。请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。 1.时间:7月1日下午2点; 2.地点:学校操场; 3.内容:文化展览、节目表演等。 提示词:戏曲opera n. 表演performance n. 注意:1.词数80100; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息; 4.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。,Dear Mike, I know you are interested in traditional Chinese culture. Yours, Li Hua,答案 写作要点 1.这是一封电子邮件,

10、属于应用文。 2.时态以一般将来时为主,以一般现在时为辅。 3.内容主要有:邀请的原因,即学校将举行“弘扬中华传统文化戏曲进校园”展演活动;时间是7月 1日下午2点;地点在学校操场;内容包括文化展览、节目表演等。 4.可以适当发挥,词数80100。 参考范文 Dear Mike, I know you are interested in traditional Chinese culture. Now, I have a piece of good news to share with you. There is an activity about traditional Chinese op

11、eras at 2:00 p.m. on July 1. It will be held in the playground in our school and all the teachers and students will attend. On that day, a culture show and many wonderful opera performances will be put on. Its a chance for you to learn,more about traditional Chinese culture. Come and join us! I thin

12、k well have a great time. Im looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 思路分析 本篇书面表达要求学生写一封电子邮件,开头和结尾已给出,考生需要根据所给要点适当补充 细节。尤其要注意的是,写作时要紧扣主题、囊括要点、文理通顺、语言得体。本题对内容和范围有所限 定,但是题目所提供的内容要点有一定的开放性,考生写作时可根据自己的生活经历,围绕主题适当发挥。 解题关键 要表述清事件的内容、人物、时间、地点和原因,即我们常说的五个“w”(what, who, when, where, why)。确定主题句,巧用连接

13、词,并归纳总结。要有新意和亮点。 易错警示 写作要点不能缺失,不能用中文思维直接翻译句子,词数要足,书写要工整无误。,精彩词句 1.精美词汇:traditional Chinese culture 中国传统文化;a piece of good news一条好消息;hold v.举办; attend v. 参加 2.出彩结构:It will be held in the playground in our school and all the teachers and students will attend.(一般将 来时的被动语态),Writing 4(2016安徽) 假定你是李华,你的美国

14、朋友Jack来信,说他暑假期间要来中国交流学习。他学了两年中文,但是仍然 担心用中文交流时会遇到困难。请你用英语给Jack写封回信,提几点建议,要点如下: 1.大胆自信; 2.放慢语速; 3.借助图画或肢体语言等表达方式。 注意:1.词数80100; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息; 4.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:自信的confident 肢体语言body language,Dear Jack, How is everything going?I am very glad to learn that you are coming to

15、 China this summer. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua,答案 写作要点 1.本文是应用文。主体时态是一般现在时。 2.内容要点:对朋友的到来表示欢迎并且乐意提供帮助;具体建议:大胆自信、放慢语速、借助图画或 肢体语言等表达方式;美好祝愿。 参考范文 Dear Jack, How is everything going?I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer. Its not necessary to worry about your Chinese. Id like

16、to share my ideas, which I think might help. First, be brave enough to speak Chinese when you communicate with others. Its of great importance to be confi- dent about myself. We Chinese are very friendly so you neednt be afraid of making any mistakes. Second, its better to speak slowly and clearly.

17、In this way you can make yourself understood more easily. Whats more, sometimes you can use drawings or pictures, and as you know, body language is also widely used across cultures and very often it really works. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua,Writing 5(2015安徽) 假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter来信询问汉语中一些流行的网络语言的意思,请根据下

18、列提示回一封电 子邮件。 点赞(Dianzan):赞同、喜爱 任性(Renxing):随心所欲 秒杀(Miaosha):快速达到目的 土豪(Tuhao):很富有 注意:1.词数80100; 2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥; 3.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名; 4.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。,Dear Peter, As the Internet is developing fast,more and more new words and phrases have been created in Chinese.Here are some examples. All the be

19、st! Yours, Li Hua,答案 写作要点 1.本文是提纲类作文。主体时态是一般现在时。 2.对所给网络流行语的解释要明白、准确。 3.注意词数。 参考范文 Dear Peter, As the Internet is developing fast,more and more new words and phrases have been created in Chinese. Here are some examples. One of the most popular words is Dianzan,which is often used when you quite agre

20、e with someone.Another ex- ample is Renxing.When you say somebody is Renxing,you mean that he will do whatever he likes.The phrase Miaosha first came from online shopping,which means you can complete your shopping orders before others. But now its widely used when you achieve your purpose in a very

21、short time. If you describe somebody as a,Tuhao,you mean that he is very rich. You can find lots of such new Chinese words. Keep learning,and youll know more about our language and cul- ture. All the best! Yours, Li Hua,B组 20152019年全国中考题组,Writing 1(2019内蒙古包头) 假定你是李华,请给你的笔友Alan写封邮件,告诉他今年暑假你将去他所在的城市游玩

22、,并制订了旅行 计划。你想征求他的意见,同时询问他是否可以接机。 邮件还应包括以下内容:,注意:1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。 Dear Alan, How is it going? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua,答案 写作要点 1.本文为一封邮件。注意人称和时态。 2.写作要点分解:(1)告诉Alan你将去他所在的城市游玩;(2)陈述你的旅行计划,并征求他的意见;(3)询问是否 可以接机。 3.注意行文的流畅性和语法的正确

23、性。 参考范文 Dear Alan, How is it going? Im thinking of taking a trip to your city this summer vacation. I wonder if you will meet me at the airport at 10:3 0 am, July 2, since it is my first visit there. Besides, Ive made a travel plan, including enjoying music at a concert, going camping and visiting s

24、ome places of interest. Ive heard that there are some amazing sights in your city! Would you please give me some advice?,Either traveling by bike or by bus would suit me fine. Its environmentally friendly. Do you have any plans for the coming vacation? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 精彩

25、词句 1.精美词汇:besides adv.除之外;including prep.包括;places of interest名胜古迹;give sb. some advice给某 人一些建议;environmentally friendly adj.不损害环境的 2.出彩结构: I wonder if you will meet me at the airport at 10:30 am, July 2, since it is my first visit there.(本句是一个主从 复合句,since引导原因状语从句。在主句中又包含一个由if引导的宾语从句),Writing 2(2019

26、江苏连云港) 减负之后,同学们有了更多的课余时间。某校英语角就“如何让课余生活更有意义?”展开了讨论,大 家各抒己见。请你根据下图提示,以“How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?”为题,用英语写一 篇短文。,注意:(1)短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯; (2)词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数; (3)短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息; (4)参考词汇:提升素养promote literacy。 How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful? Nowadays, we stu

27、dents have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful?,答案 写作要点 1.本文的话题是如何让课余生活更有意义。 2.本文为根据图表所提供的信息进行的半开放式写作。 3.写作时可采用总分总的结构,时态以一般现在时为主,写作内容可有适当拓展和发挥。 参考范文 How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful? Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever

28、 before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful? My schoolmates give the following suggestions. First, its good to help our parents do some housework to show our love for them. Second, we will know more about the world by reading. Third, it is a good chance for us to get close to nature and

29、relax ourselves. In my opinion, we can do some sports to make us stronger and healthier. Whats more, we can take an active part,in some social activities as volunteers to help those in need. In a word, lets make full use of our spare time and promote our literacy. 高级语块 help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事 know a

30、bout sth.了解某事 get close to nature亲近自然 do some sports做运动 whats more更重要的是 take an active part in积极参与 make full use of充分利用,Writing 3(2019甘肃兰州) 假如你是李华,你校校报的英语专栏正在开展以“美丽的黄河风情线”(The Beautiful Yellow River Custom Tourist Line)为主题的英语征文活动,你打算参加。请根据以下内容要点,用英语写一篇短文。 1.风情线总览(the Yellow River, run through the ci

31、ty of Lanzhou, a famous road called Binhe Road, along the Yellow River); 2.聚焦景观Zhongshan Bridge, waterwheel(水车),many parks; 3.休闲娱乐(fly kites, play chess.); 4.特色游览go sightseeing, sheepskin raft(羊皮筏子),water bus。 要求:1.80词左右; 2.条理清楚,行文连贯,书写规范;内容上可适度发挥。 注意:不得出现学校、姓名等个人信息(除所给身份外)。,答案 写作提示 1.文章介绍的是家乡的风貌,注意

32、人称(以第一人称“我”的身份介绍)和时态(以一般现在时为主)。 2.内容涵盖所有要点:风情线总览、聚焦景观、休闲娱乐和特色游览四个方面。 3.语言表达准确,意思连贯,符合逻辑。 参考范文 The Beautiful Yellow River Custom Tourist Line The Yellow River is our mother river. Do you know what scenic spots the beautiful Yellow River has? Let me tell you! The Yellow River runs through the city of

33、Lanzhou. There is a famous road called Binhe Road, which runs along the Yellow River. Along the Yellow River there are many parks, as well as the picturesque Zhong- shan Bridge, the beautiful waterwheel and so on. There are many places for leisure and entertainment, such as flying kites, playing che

34、ss and so on. There, you can go sightseeing and enjoy special tours, such as sheepskin rafts and water buses. The beautiful Yellow River is waiting for you!,精彩词句 1.精美词汇:mother river母亲河;as well as 也,还有;and so on 等等;such as 比如;wait for 等待 2.出彩结构:There is a famous road called Binhe Road, which runs alo

35、ng the Yellow River. (本句是一个主从复 合句,which引导非限制性定语从句),Writing 4(2019山西) 阅读是同学们未来参与社会应具备的关键能力,无论你喜欢哪种阅读方式,它都能让你增长知识,开阔 眼界。最近,某出版社在两万人中,针对人们喜欢的阅读方式做了一项调查,下图是相关的统计结果,其中包 括电子阅读和纸质阅读的人数。 请你用两段话写一篇短文,第一段用百分比简要说明图表内容,第二段从图表中选出一项你喜欢的阅读方 式,结合自己的经历,谈谈这种阅读方式的好处。 要求:1.词数不少于80词; 2.首句已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇仅供参考; 3.文中不得出现真实的

36、人名、校名。,Recently, a survey was done among 20,000 people about the ways of reading.,答案 写作要点 1.本文为议论文,用两段话来表述; 2.第一段用百分比简要说明图表内容; 3.第二段结合图表发表自己的观点,要用第一人称。 参考范文 Recently, a survey was done among 20,000 people about the ways of reading. Here is what we have learned from it. 60% of the people like to read

37、 on mobile phones or e-readers, while only 38.4% choose to read paper books. So we can know that more and more people prefer to read e-books rather than paper books. However, whatever way of reading we choose, it can help increase our knowledge and open our eyes. As for me, I am still used to readin

38、g paper books. Whenever I open a paper book, the smell of paper reminds me of the stories in the books from my mom when I was a little kid. Just because of this, I got into the habit of read- ing. So when I read paper books now, they always bring me the old feelings. On the other hand, compared with

39、,the electronic devices, reading paper books is good for eyes. So you see, I believe e-books wont take the place of paper books in my heart. 精彩语句 1.精美词汇: prefer to do.rather than do.宁愿做而不愿做;increase v.增加;as for 至于;be used to doing sth.习惯 于做某事;remind sb. of sth. 使某人想起某事 2.出彩结构: Whenever I open a pape

40、r book, the smell of paper reminds me of the stories in the books from my mom when I was a little kid.(使用了两个时间状语从句),Writing 5(2019陕西) 即将毕业的你,将如何处理初中阶段的各种书籍和笔记呢?假如你是李华,请根据以下提示, 给学校英 文报写一封电子邮件,分享你处理这些书籍和笔记的计划与理由。 要求:1.参考提示语,可适当发挥; 2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;,3.文章不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等); 4.词数:不少于70词。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入

41、总词数) Dear Editor, My name is Li Hua. Im going to graduate soon. Id like to share some ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks. These are my ideas. I hope they can help. Yours, Li Hua,答案 写作要点 1.文体:本文是一篇应用文。 2.时态:一般将来时态和一般现在时态。 3.人称:以第一人称为主。 4.要点:处理初中阶段的各种书籍和笔记的计划与理由。 参考范文 Dear Editor, My

42、name is Li Hua. Im going to graduate soon. Id like to share some ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks. First of all, I will put all my books into different kinds. Secondly, I am going to give my textbooks to my younger cousins. In this way, they can study at home during the coming sum

43、mer vacation. Besides, I want to have a book sale so that children can buy the picture books at low prices. Whats more, I decide to keep the note-,books for myself. They bring me lots of sweet memories. Finally, the used paper will be taken to the waste cen- ter. These are my ideas. I hope they can

44、help. Yours, Li Hua 精彩词句 1.精美词汇: first of all 首先;put.into different kinds 把分成不同种类;in this way 这样,用这种方法;whats more 另外 2.出彩结构: Besides, I want to have a book sale so that children can buy the picture books at low prices.(so that引导目的状 语从句),Writing 6(2019云南) A Weekend to Remember 提示:请以“A Weekend to Reme

45、mber”为题,用英语写一篇短文,叙述一个令你难忘的周末以及你的感悟。 要求:1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个; 2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。,答案 写作要点 一、体裁:叙事为主的记叙文。 二、要点: 1.一个难忘的周末; 2.你的感悟。,三、时态:以一般过去时为主。 参考范文 A Weekend to Remember I had a nice and unforgettable weekend. Last weekend,we had a party to thank our teachers for staying with us for three

46、years.We sang,danced,took photos and played games together.We shared our happiness and sadness, which moved us so much that we all cried. We ate a big cake with all our names on it. Our teachers encouraged us to face our future life.We promised to be friends for ever.,This is my weekend to remember,

47、because I come to realize the importance of friendship. I hope everything will be fine to us all! 精彩词句 1.精美词汇: unforgettable adj.难忘的;encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事;realize v.意识到 2.出彩结构: We shared our happiness and sadness, which moved us so much that we all cried.(which引导定语从句;so. that.如此以至于),Writin

48、g 7(2019湖南长沙) 假如你是李华,你们班输了上周的篮球赛。Henry认为是他未能投进最后一球所造成的,有的队友也因此而 责怪他。请你写一封英文邮件安慰他,谈谈你对此事的看法,并就如何取得队友的理解提出建议。 要求:(1)80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数); (2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; (3)信中不得出现真实人名和校名。 Dear Henry, I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game.,答案 写作要点 1.本文为一封邮件。主体时态应该为一般现在时

49、。人称以第二人称为主。 2.按题目要求将要点进行呈现,其中建议应不少于两点。 参考范文 Dear Henry, I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game. Its not easy being in your situation, and its normal to have these feelings. Anyway, dont be too hard on yourself. You know, basketball is about team effort. Its never just one persons fault. What matters is that you should learn from the games as well as your mistakes. Besides, you need to think a