2020年湖南中考英语复习课件专题二十　书面表达.pptx

1、Writing 1(2019长沙) 假如你是李华,你们班输了上周的篮球赛。Henry认为是他未能投进最后一球所造成的,有的队友也因 此而责怪他。请你写一封英文邮件安慰他,谈谈你对此事的看法,并就如何取得队友的理解提出建议。 要求:(1)80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数); (2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; (3)信中不得出现真实人名和校名。,A组 20152019年湖南中考题组,Dear Henry, I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game.,答案 写作要点

2、 1.本文为一封邮件。主体时态应该为一般现在时。人称以第二人称为主。 2.按题目要求将要点进行呈现,其中建议应不少于两点。 参考范文 Dear Henry, I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game. Its not easy being in your situation, and its normal to have these feelings. Anyway, dont be too hard on yourself. You know, basketball

3、 is about team effort. Its never just one persons fault. What matters is that you should learn from the games as well as your mistakes. Besides, you need to think about how you can do better next time.,As a whole, teammates should support and believe in each other. Why dont you sit down and communic

4、ate with them? And you could promise that you will spare no effort to better your skills. If all of you pull together, youre sure to win the next one. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua,Writing 2(2019衡阳) 根据一项新的调查,学生安全已经成为一个大的问题。假设你是一名老师,对学生进行以“自我保 护”为主题的消防安全教育,请以“How to Protect Yourself in a Fire”为题,提出你的建议。

5、 要求:1.短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。 2.书写工整,语句通顺、连贯,词数不少于80。 参考词汇:cover v.遮盖 take the lift乘坐电梯 exit n.出口 towel n.毛巾 shut off切断 How to Protect Yourself in a Fire,答案 写作要点 1.本文为应用文,注意以老师的身份来写。 2.时态以一般现在时为主。 3.围绕“消防安全”和“自我保护”分别给出建议。 参考范文 How to Protect Yourself in a Fire Nowadays, a growing number of fire accidents h

6、ave drawn our attention. If we are caught in a fire, what can we do to protect ourselves? Here comes my advice. First and foremost, you should shut off the electricity in the house in case you could get hurt by it. Whats more, it is of great value to learn how to get out of the fire by yourselves. Y

7、oud better first find out a wet towel to,cover the mouth and the nose so that you wont breathe in much smoke on the way out. Before you stay indoors, please make sure where the exit is. And always remember never try to take the lift to the exit when you are in a fire. These are my suggestions for ev

8、erybody in case of any fire accident. Anyway, wish good luck will always be with you!,Writing 3(2019娄底) “读万卷书,行万里路”,研学旅行现在受到教育主管部门和学校的高度重视,也深受学生和家长的欢迎。 假如你们学校的英文网站就研学旅行中需要注意的事项发帖,征集建议。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文, 进行跟帖回复。 1.要点: 2.要求: (1)文中不能出现真实的校名和姓名等;,(2)语言要通顺,表达要正确; (3)要求包含所有要点提示,为了行文需要,可适当拓展和增加要点; (4)词数不少于60个英

9、语单词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。 3.参考词汇: 在危险中 in danger 报警 call the police Now study trips are becoming more and more popular with parents and students.What should we pay attention to when were having a study trip?Heres my advice.,答案 写作要点 本次作文需要写一篇研学旅行中注意事项的网络征集帖,以第一人称为主,主体时态使用一般现在时,需要 涵盖题目中健康饮食、安全出行、遇险报警等方面,可以适当补

10、充。 参考范文 Now study trips are becoming more and more popular with parents and students. What should we pay attention to when were having a study trip? Heres my advice. First of all, we should be careful about what we eat during the trip. We are supposed to follow the teachers requirements of only eati

11、ng healthy and clean food. Once we eat something bad and become ill, itll be difficult for us to get medical help in a strange city. Then we should watch out when we travel outside. Its very impor- tant for us to follow the traffic rules. Last but not least, if we are in danger, call the police at o

12、nce. Only in this way can we be safe. There are many things we should pay attention to when were traveling. Take my advice and have a nicet rip.,Writing 4(2019益阳) 最近,你美国的笔友Tony在与同学的交往中遇到了烦恼,他写邮件向你寻求帮助。请你以李华的身份给他 写一封邮件,提出你的一些建议。 建议内容包括:遇到问题多倾诉,多与他人分享情绪,尊重他人,与人为善,诚实守信 要求:1.词数 6080,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 2.可适

13、当增加细节,使行文连贯。 3.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。 参考词汇:share,solve,respect,friendly,be honest to Dear Tony, Im sorry to hear that you have problems with classmates,Im glad to help you.,I hope everything will go well with you soon. Yours, Li Hua,答案 写作要点 本文需要写一封电子邮件,针对美国笔友Tony在与同学交往中遇到的烦恼提出你的建议。人称以第一人 称为主,时态以一般现在时为主。内

14、容包括遇到问题多倾诉、多与他人分享情绪、尊重他人、与人为善、 诚实守信等。,参考范文 Dear Tony, Im sorry to hear that you have problems with classmates. Im glad to help you. Here are some suggestions for you. First, when you have difficulties, you should talk to your parents, your teachers or your friends and share your sadness and happines

15、s with them. They will help you solve the problem. Second, when you get along with your friends, you are supposed to respect them. Third, you should be friendly to people around you. You can help each other. Last but not least, you have to be honest with your friends. Then you will make more friends

16、. I hope everything will go well with you soon. Yours, Li Hua,Writing 5(2019湘西土家族苗族自治州) 湘西自治州正在进行“美丽湘西”建设,我们要积极参与“美丽湘西”建设活动,从小事做起,让我们家乡 变得更美。作为学生,请以“Start out small”为题,用英语写一篇倡议书。 要点提示:1.多种植树木和花草,不乱砍伐树木。 2.购物时重复使用袋子。 3.不乱扔垃圾,保持河流等干净。 4.遵守公共秩序,做文明学生。 要求:1.80词以上。文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2.文章须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文意思

17、通顺、语气连贯、过渡自然。不得在作文中出现学校真实 的名称和学生的真实姓名。,参考词汇:protect the environment;reuse bags;plant;cut down;throw;wait in line;be polite;obey Start out small Hello, everyone. We should try our best to make our hometown Xiangxi more beautiful and comfortable. What can we do for our hometown?,答案 参考范文 Start out smal

18、l Hello,everyone. We should try our best to make our hometown Xiangxi more beautiful and comfortable. What can we do for our hometown?In order to make our hometown more beautiful, as students, I think we should start from small things. First of all, we should know the importance of protecting the en

19、vironment.We should plant more trees and flow- ers and not cut down trees randomly.Second,we had better reuse the bags when shopping. We cant throw rubbish about,and we should keep the rivers clean and so on. In addition, we must obey public rules and be polite.When we got on the bus, we should wait

20、 in line.,Writing 6(2018长沙) 假如你是李华,于4月13日星期五这一天参加了学校组织的郊游活动。请你以school trip为主题,写一则英文 日记,内容包括参加活动的人员、集合时间、郊游地点、交通方式、活动内容以及个人感受等。 要求:(1)80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数); (2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; (3)日记中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 Friday, April 13th It was sunny today. We went on a school trip.,答案 写作要点 1.本文为应用文,是一则日记。主体时态为一般过去时。人称以第一人称为

21、主。 2.按题目要求将写作要点一一呈现。 参考范文 Friday, April 13th It was sunny today. We went on a school trip. We visited the Greenery Farm and it was great fun. All of our classmates met at the school gate at 7: 00 a.m., and went to the farm by bus. On arriving there, we were given a warm welcome by the farm workers.

22、Then one of the workers showed us around the farm, where we learned a lot about farming. At noon, we had a picnic, during which we enjoyed ourselves in the sunshine, singing, dancing and flying the kites. We did love the fresh air and the beauty of nature. We took lots of pictures. Time flied! It wa

23、s time for us to leave though we didnt want to. It was really an unforgettable and meaningful trip for us.,Writing 7(2018郴州) 假如你是李华,上周六上午,你们班全体同学在特殊教育学校做了一次志愿者活动。请根据下表中提供的 信息,用英语给你的笔友 Sandy写一封信。,要求: 1.文中需包含要点提示中的所有信息(不要逐字翻译),并适当发挥; 2.词数:80词左右(短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数); 3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Sandy, Last

24、Saturday morning, our class went to the Special Education School to have a volunteer activity. Do you have anything special to tell me? Im looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua,答案 写作要点 1.本文主体时态应为一般现在时和一般过去时。 2.明确要点,包括学校介绍、参与的活动及感受。 3.分段描述,适当使用关联词和复合句。 参考范文 Dear Sandy, Last Saturday morning, o

25、ur class went to the Special Education School to have a volunteer activity. It was an un- forgettable experience. The Special Education School is very clean and tidy. The students who study there are the blind or the deaf. Al- though they have some difficulty in speaking or reading, they follow thei

26、r teachers to learn knowledge carefully. It is very interesting to meet these students. During the activity, we not only played together, but also learned pa-,per cutting with them. Besides, we gave some books,snacks and toys to these children. We hope these things can help their life become more co

27、lorful. I love this kind of volunteer activity. Do you have anything special to tell me? Im looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua,Writing 8(2018衡阳) 假如你是刘伟,你在英国的笔友Jim对中国的传统节日很感兴趣,他来信询问有关情况。请你给他回一 封电子邮件,简单介绍中国的传统节日。今天是端午节,请你重点介绍中国人一般是如何过端午节的。 注意:1.80100词左右。 2.可以结合自己的情况适当增加细节,以便行文连贯。 3.开头、结尾已给出,

28、不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, Im glad to receive your e-mail.,What do you think of the Dragon Boat Festival? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Liu Wei,答案 写作要点 1.本文是一封电子邮件,时态以一般现在时为主。 2.要点:简单介绍中国的传统节日,重点对端午节进行介绍。可提及端午节传统的活动和食物。,参考范文 Dear Jim, Im glad to receive your e-mail. I am very happy to share some Chin

29、ese traditional culture. China is a great country with over 5,000 years of history. There are many traditional festivals in China, such as the Spring Festival, the Mid-Autumn Festival, the Lantern Festival and so on. But today I want to introduce the Dragon Boat Festival. It is celebrated on the fif

30、th day of the fifth month accord- ing to the Chinese calendar. This festival is to commemorate the death of Qu Yuan. During the festival, I get to- gether with my family to have a big meal. We often eat zongzi. It tastes very nice. Besides, we also watch the dragon boat races. I feel very excited wh

31、en I watch the races. What do you think of the Dragon Boat Festival? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Liu Wei,Writing 9(2018株洲) 假定你是李华,你在美国的笔友Sam给你寄来一本英语词典,你给他回赠一件具有中国特色的礼物,并发送 一封电子邮件,包括以下内容: (1)说明你觉得他的礼物怎么样; (2)介绍你回赠的礼物的中国特色; (3)邀请他来中国观看冬季奥运会(the Olympic Games)。 注意:(1)词数80左右; (2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连

32、贯; (3)文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。,答案 写作要点 1.本文为应用文,回复一封邮件。 2.本文应以第一人称为主,主体时态为一般现在时。 3.内容要点:表达自己收到礼物时的心情;介绍回赠的礼物及意义;邀请他来看冬奥会。 参考范文 Dear Sam, Hows it going? Im very glad to receive that English dictionary. What a great gift you sent to me! It is so good and helpful that I always take it when I go to school

33、. I also prepare a present for you. I know you like Chinese culture very much. So I decide to send you the china. As we know, the china is a symbol of China. It shows Chinese goodness. China will hold the 2022 Winter Olympic Games. Do you want to watch them? I hope you can come and look forward to h

34、earing from you. Yours, Li Hua,Writing 10(2017长沙,第三节) 为了庆祝同学们顺利毕业和感谢老师们的辛勤培育,你班将于下周五晚上在教室举行毕业晚会(gradu- ation party)。假如你是班长李华,请你就晚会的活动安排、需要协助的具体事项等给全班同学写一个邀请函。 要求:(1)注意邀请函的写作特点; (2)80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数); (3)信中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。 Dear classmates, How time flies! Its time to say goodbye. Im looking for

35、ward to hearing from you all. Yours, Li Hua,答案 写作要点 1.本文为应用文,时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。 2.介绍毕业晚会的活动安排和需要协助的具体事项。 3.最后表达自己对晚会的期待。 参考范文 Dear classmates, How time flies! Its time to say goodbye. The past three years has been really a wonderful journey full of laugh- ter and tears. So we are planning to have a g

36、raduation party at 5 p.m. next Friday in our classroom. We will have a variety of activities about graduation. First, we can give teachers presents to express our thanks. Because of what our dear teachers have done for us, we are extremely grateful. Second, for our friendship, we can leave words for

37、 each other in our memory collec-,tions, and exchange gifts. Third, during our party time, we will play some easy games, and invite some of you to sing a song or dance. I hope everyone will have a good time. Im looking forward to hearing from you all. Yours, Li Hua,Writing 11(2017邵阳,C) “美丽邵阳我的家,人人都要

38、爱护她”。“创卫活动”使得我们的街道更干净,河水更清澈作为邵阳 的一份子,我们需要身体力行。请谈谈你平时是怎么做的。 要求:1.80词左右,开头已给出,不计入词数。 2.语法正确,文理通顺,流畅,并适当发挥。 提示词:not litter; collect the trash; plant trees;clean the streets; water the flowers Shaoyang is a beautiful city with a long history. Its our hometown and it has changed a lot in the past few yea

39、rs. To make it be more and more beautiful, I often,答案 写作要点 1.本文为应用文,时态为一般现在时。 2.介绍能让城市变得更好的方法。 3.号召大家一起加入,让城市变得更美好。 参考范文 Shaoyang is a beautiful city with a long history. Its our hometown and it has changed a lot in the past few years. To make it be more and more beautiful, I often keep my room clea

40、n at home. On weekends, I do some cleaning in my neighborhood. I usually go to the park near my house on Sundays. I always collect the trash when I find it around the park. I never litter and I ask my classmates not to litter at school. Sometimes I water the flowers in my school. Sometimes I plant t

41、rees on the hill near the school. My teacher takes us to clean the streets once a month. There are a lot of things we can do. In order to make our city more and more beautiful, lets work to- gether and do our best.,Writing 12(2017郴州,第三节) 中学生的行为习惯直接影响着他们的健康成长。下周的英语课上,老师打算让同学们介绍个人的行为习 惯。请根据下表提示,准备一篇英语

42、发言稿。,要求: 1.短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息(不要逐字翻译),并适当发挥; 2.词数:80左右(短文开头已给出,不计入总词数); 3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 Good morning, everyone! Im glad to be here to talk about my habits.,答案 写作要点 1.本文为议论文。本文应以第一人称为主,时态为一般现在时。 2.内容要点:分段讲述自己的优点和缺点及感受和以后的打算。 参考范文 Good morning, everyone! Im glad to be here to talk about my habits. Ev

43、eryone has good and bad habits. So do I. I get up early and never stay up late. I like sports, so I often do exercise. In class, I listen to the teacher carefully and take notes. After class, I finish my homework in time and do lots of reading every day. However, I often watch TV or play games for t

44、oo long. I seldom help my parents with housework and I often eat junk food. Good habits are good for my whole life. I think I should develop good habits instead of bad ones. Thats all. Thanks for listening!,Writing 13(2017怀化,第五节) 怀化市各中小学正在开展“阳光校园,我们是好伙伴”活动。你的身边一定有很多品学兼优的阳光少年。 请你根据表格中所给的信息,写一篇关于你的好伙伴

45、李明同学的演讲稿。,注意:1.文中请勿使用真实人名、校名和地名; 2.内容应包含表格中的要点并可适当发挥; 3.词数:80词左右; 4.文章的开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。 Good morning, everyone! Today I am glad to introduce a good friend of mine. His name is Li Ming. He,答案 写作要点 1.本文为应用文,应以第三人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主。 2.介绍李明的优秀行为。 3.表达自己的想法。 参考范文 Good morning, everyone! Today I am glad to i

46、ntroduce a good friend of mine. His name is Li Ming. He is in Class 8, Grade 9. He is very polite. When he meets his teachers or classmates, he always says hello to them. He also gets on well with others. He has made many friends. Whenever we have problems with our schoolwork, he is always ready to

47、help us. He is kind to help other people. He often tries his best to help people in need. Li Ming wants to be a useful man in the future. He is a model student for us. We should learn from him. Thats all. Thank you.,Writing 14(2017益阳,C) 暑假即将来临,许多学生喜欢下河游泳。为预防游泳溺水事故的发生,你们班将举行以“珍爱生命,预防溺 水”为主题的班会。请你用英语写

48、一篇发言稿,谈谈你对安全游泳的建议。建议内容包括:不要到陌生的 河流湖泊游泳;不允许擅自结伴游泳;不会游泳,不要下水救人 要求:1.语言通顺,意思连贯,符合逻辑。 2.内容可适当发挥。 3.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。 4.词数:70词左右。 参考词汇:alone without permission(未经许可) allow ask for help cherish(珍爱) Going Swimming Safely,答案 写作要点 1.本文为应用文,时态应为一般现在时。 2.对于游泳时应该遵守的规则进行书写。 3.呼吁大家保障自身安全。 参考范文 Going Swimming Safely

49、 Summer vacation is coming. Many students like going swimming in rivers and lakes. But how to swim safely? Here is my advice. First of all, dont swim in strange rivers and lakes. We shouldnt go swimming alone. Second, we cant swim with other students without permission. We are not allowed to swim without a parent. If we cant swim, we mustnt get into the water to save a person. Last but not least, it is dangerous for students to swim at times. Re- member that safety alwa