2020年浙江中考英语复习课件专题二十一　书面表达.pptx

1、Writing 1(2019杭州) 假定你是李平,最近收到意大利朋友Linda的电子邮件。以下是邮件的一部分,请你阅读后回复,词数80左右。,A组 20152019年浙江中考题组,答案 写作要点 1.本文是书信格式的应用文。 2.写作主要采用第三人称,时态为一般现在时。 3.构思前应该仔细阅读邮件,找出写作要点,依次进行回答。 4.注意层次感,注意词数,使用完整的语句进行表达。 参考范文 Dear Linda, Thank you so much for agreeing to show my brother around Rome. Now let me tell you something

2、 about my brother. He is thirteen years old, easy-going and humorouswe get along really well. He loves different cul- tures. He is interested in museums and likes trying local food. My brother is also cute. Hes of medium height with short straight black hair. He is good at Chinese kungfu, and usuall

3、y wears T-shirts and jeans.,Thanks again for your help! Yours, Li Ping 精彩语句 1.精美词汇: agree to do同意做;show.around带参观;get along well相处得好 2.出彩结构: Thank you so much for agreeing to show my brother around Rome.(Thank you for.为固定结构),Writing 2(2019温州) 最近,用手机APP买菜的人多了。手机菜场菜品丰富、洗净配好、预约送菜上门外国朋友对此也很感 兴趣。 请你以A Ne

4、w Use of the Mobile Phone为题,写一篇110词左右的英语短文介绍手机买菜带来的便利,让外国 朋友了解中国人民生活中的这个新变化。,A New Use of the Mobile Phone,答案 写作要点 1.本文是说明文。 2.审清题目,注意写作目的,不要写成议论文。 3.文章可分为三段:第一段描述背景,第二段就手机买菜的便利展开介绍,第三段总结。 参考范文 A New Use of the Mobile Phone Preparing for meals is tiring. You may have to spend hours getting everythin

5、g ready for cooking. Now in China, new mobile apps are here to help. These apps provide you with meat, fish, and vegetables, almost everything you need for a meal. You can order whenever you like and decide on the time for them to arrive. If you like, they can be washed, cut and packed for a certain

6、 dish. Some apps even guide you to cook step by step, making cooking easier.,Compared with the traditional way of going to the market, mobile apps save your time and energy. With such a new use of the mobile phone, you can enjoy a more relaxing life. 精彩语句 1.精美词汇: spend.doing.花费做;provide.with.为提供 2.出

7、彩结构: Compared with the traditional way of going to the market, mobile apps save your time and energy.(过去分词短 语作状语),Writing 3(2019宁波) 回顾初中三年,有许多事令人难忘。校英语报Have Your Say栏目正面向九年级毕业生征文。假如你是李 华,请你选择其中一个话题,并结合具体事例,用英语写一封信表达你对某个人的谢意或歉意,参加此次征文 活动。 要点如下:,注意: (1)短文必须包括你所选择话题的所有要点,并适当拓展; (2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名; (3)词数

8、:80100。书信格式已给出; (4)首句供参考:Looking back on the past three years, Id like to say.,答案 写作要点 1.本文是记叙文。 2.注意使用供参考的首句。行文中恰当使用连接词,指代清晰。 3.时态以一般过去时为主。 参考范文 Possible version 1: Dear Alice, Looking back on the past three years, Id like to say thanks to you for helping me with my English. When I was in Grade 7,

9、I was not good at English. I just hid behind my textbook and never said anything in class. Once I did very badly in an English test, and I lost heart. However, you had a patient talk with me and en- couraged me to be more active in class.,Since then, I have worked harder and made great progress. I f

10、eel lucky to be your student. Thank you again. Wish you good luck. Yours, Li Hua Possible version 2: Dear Alan, Looking back on the past three years, Id like to say sorry to you for arguing with you. When we were in Grade 8, we lost the chance to get first prize in the football match. I never stoppe

11、d complain- ing to you that it was you who missed the goal. But you shouted back that you were not the only reason. You walked off angrily. From then on, we didnt talk to each other. I have been regretting doing so. Soon we will graduate from our school. Lets forget about the past and become good fr

12、iends again. Yours, Li Hua,精彩语句 1.精美词汇 do badly in在方面做得糟糕;lose heart失去信心;make great progress取得巨大进步;walk off走开;graduate from从毕业 2.出彩结构 I never stopped complaining to you that it was you who missed the goal.(that引导宾语从句;强调句型it was sb. who.) I have been regretting doing,Writing 4(2019湖州) 5月18日是国际博物馆日,下图

13、是你班同学参观博物馆的情况。请你结合调查结果、自己的参观经历和感 受,写一份报告,并在英语课上汇报。,注意: 1.词数:80100(短文首句已给出,不计入总词数); 2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 Visiting museums has become one of the most popular ways for us students to spend our spare time.,答案 写作要点 1.本文是一份调查报告。时态以一般现在时为主。 2.注意一定要结合图表信息,说明学生最愿意前往的博物馆。 3.结合自己参观博物馆的经历和感受,说明对博物馆感兴趣的原因。 参考范文 Vis

14、iting museums has become one of the most popular ways for us students to spend our spare time. According to the survey made in our class, almost all the students have been to museums, such as science museums, tea mu- seums and film museums, etc. Among them, the science museum is our favorite. Ive be

15、en to Huzhou Science Museum and Lu Yu Tea Museum. I like the tea museum very much, because I can learn about the history and development of tea and watch the tea art performances there as well. What Im inter- ested in most is the show of beautiful tea sets, which has left a deep impression on me.,Mu

16、seums make it possible for us students to learn knowledge and experience cultures at the same time. Why not visit more? 精彩语句 1.精美词汇 according to根据;make it possible to do使成为可能 2.出彩结构 What Im interested most is the show of beautiful tea sets, which has left a deep impression on me.(what引导主 语从句,which引导

17、非限制性定语从句),Writing 5(2018杭州) 假定你是李平(Tel:1361234567),家住滨海市人民路1号。你在美国旅行期间不慎遗失钱包,曾向宾馆询问。 以下是宾馆的答复邮件,请你阅读后进行回复,词数80左右。,答案 写作要点 1.本文是应用文。 2.写作时应使用第一人称,时态主要为一般现在时。 3.写作中应包含何时入住宾馆、所住房间和对失物的描述及里面的物品,并附上地址和电话号码。 参考范文 Dear Mr. Smith, Thank you so much for your reply. I stayed in your hotel on July 6, in Room 1

18、06, and I remember having left my new black wallet on the table. My ID card, two credit cards, and a 100-dollar bill, are in my wallet. Would you,be kind enough to send me the wallet to No. 1 Renmin Road, Binhai, China by mail if you find it?Please call me at my phone number 1361234567 if needed. Th

19、anks again. Yours, Li Ping 精彩语句 1.精美词汇 remember doing记得做过 2.出彩结构 Would you be kind enough to send me the wallet to No.1 Renmin Road, Binhai, China.?(拜托您),Writing 6(2018温州) 如今,国内外很多孩子在父母的安排下没有了自己的周末,如下图中的Jack。请分析图中的这种现象并谈谈 你的看法,以Weekend or Not?为题写一篇约110词的英语短文向Parents杂志投稿,让父母们通过阅读你的文 章能有所启发。,注意:文中若出现“

20、Jack”以外的人名或任何学校名称,该作文得分不超过12分。 Weekend or Not?,答案 写作要点 1.本文是看图作文。 2.写作时应以第三人称为主,时态应以一般现在时为主。 3.写作中应先描述Jack周末的基本情况,而后分析现象,谈论自己的看法。 参考范文 Weekend or Not? Jack has to attend lots of classes at weekends. He has little time for his favorite sportsoccer. Still, his parents are pushing him to do more math e

21、xercises, which worries him a lot. Nowadays, many students are under much pressure like Jack. Their parents believe it necessary for them to make full use of the weekends and learn as much as possible. As a result, some students are stressed out and therefore lose interest in learning anything. What

22、 is worse, they may not be able to learn to manage their own life. I do hope all the children can have the freedom to choose what they like to do and enjoy their weekends.,精彩语句 1.精美词汇 make full use of充分利用 as a result结果是 be stressed out紧张,饱受压力 at weekends在周末 2.出彩结构 Still, his parents are pushing him

23、to do more math exercises, which worries him a lot.(使用定语从句) Their parents believe it necessary for them to make full use of the weekends and learn as much as possible. (it是 形式宾语,真正的宾语是动词不定式短语) What is worse, they may not be able to learn to manage their own life.(连接词的使用),Writing 7(2018宁波) 今年5月11日,你校

24、组织了一次社会实践活动,部分学生选择去了红星农场(见导图一),其余学生选择去了科 技博物馆(见导图二)。请根据你所选择的实践活动写一篇英语日记,记录当天的经历和感受。 注意:(1)日记必须包括你所选择导图的所有要点,并适当发挥; (2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;,(3)词数:80100。日记格式及首句已给出,不计入总词数。 Friday, May 11th Today I had a school trip.,答案 写作要点 1.本文是应用文。 2.写作时应使用第一人称,时态应为一般过去时。 3.写作中应按照导图介绍人物、出行方式、活动,并补充自己对活动的感受,合理拓展。 参考范文 Pos

25、sible version 1: Friday, May 11th Today I had a school trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off to Hongxing Farm by bus early in the morning. The minute we arrived, we took a walk around the farm. Then we fed the chickens. When I threw some food to them, they ran over to me with excit

26、ement and some of them even walked into their friends. The most exciting thing was that we picked strawberries after lunch. While we were picking, we ate a lot. How sweet they were!,I had a wonderful time today! I do hope to go there again in the near future! Possible version 2: Friday, May 11th Tod

27、ay I had a school trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off to the Science Museum by subway at 7:00. As soon as we reached the museum, we were amazed to see lots of pictures about science. Then we watched a video about different inventions and their inventors. Its unbelievable that tec

28、hnology has progressed in such a rapid way. In the afternoon, we played chess with some special robots. It was surprising to find that nobody could beat them. Before leaving, we bought some gifts for our friends. I had a wonderful time today! I do hope to go there again!,精彩语句 1.精美词汇 set off出发 with e

29、xcitement兴奋地 be amazed to do惊讶地做 in such a rapid way以如此快速的方式 as soon as一就 2. 出彩结构 Its unbelievable that technology has progressed in such a rapid way. The minute we arrived, we took a walk around the farm.(the minute一就) How sweet they were!(感叹句的使用),Writing 8(2018金华) 在即将举行的中学生国际文化交流活动中,你将代表学校介绍中国的传统节

30、日,请你从所给的卡片中任选 一张,用英语写一篇发言稿,介绍该节日。 注意: 1.发言稿中必须包含卡片上的信息,并适当发挥; 2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息; 3.词数80100;,4.文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to the Chinese culture tour. Thats all. Thanks for listening.,答案 写作要点 1.本文是应用文。 2.写作时应使用一般现在时。 3.写作中注意包含时间、活动、意义,在列提纲时注意把必要的活动和意义补充完整。 参考范文 Possible versio

31、n 1: Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to the Chinese culture tour. Now allow me to introduce one of the Chinese traditional festivals, the Spring Festival. The Spring Festival falls in January or February. It is Chinese New Year and also the biggest day of year. So people come back home from different

32、places and get together for a big dinner. Many people stay up late to wel- come the new year, hoping they will have a bright new start.,During the festival, people visit their relatives and friends and wish each other good luck for the new year. Chil- dren can often get hongbao from their elders. Do

33、 you think it interesting? Thats all. Thanks for listening. Possible version 2: Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to the Chinese culture tour. Now allow me to introduce one of the Chinese traditional festivals, the Mid-Autumn Festival. The Mid-Autumn Festival usually falls in September or October when t

34、he moon appears the biggest and the brightest in the year. During the festival, Chinese people sit around the table with their family members and enjoy mooncakes as well as the beautiful moon. People believe that the round mooncakes and a full moon are symbols of being together. When seeing them, pe

35、ople will miss their family members far away. At the same time, they will express wishes and hopes for them. Does it sound interesting? Thats all. Thanks for listening.,精彩语句 1.精美词汇 allow sb. to do sth.允许某人做某事 fall in January or February恰巧在一月或者二月 their elders 他们的长辈 have a bright new start 拥有一个全新的开始 a

36、s well as也,又 2.出彩结构 The Mid-Autumn Festival usually falls in September or October. Many people stay up late to welcome the new year, hoping they will have a bright new start.(现在分词作伴随状 语) At the same time,they will express wishes and hopes for them.,Writing 9(2017温州) 假如你是李华,就读于Wenzhou Tanghe Middle S

37、chool。你想去美国的Washington International School(WIS) 读高中。现在你需要给对方学校写一封简明扼要、有说服力的自荐信,争取让学校录取你。 参考要点: 个人信息 学习成绩 爱好、能力 要求: (1)不能出现真实的个人身份信息; (2)词数: 110左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Sir/Madam,I am looking forward to your kind reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua,答案 写作要点 1.本文使用一般现在时态,要写清楚个人信息。 2.介绍自己喜爱的学科及成绩。 3.写出自己的爱好

38、和能力。 参考范文 Dear Sir/Madam, I am Li Hua from Wenzhou Tanghe Middle School. I wish to get an opportunity to study at WIS. Like many other boys, I enjoy doing sports,but maths and science are my favourite. I like Chinese, English and music as well. I have won several prizes in various competitions, incl

39、uding a second prize in an international maths competition. I have joined in three one-month-tour-study programs in the US, learnt a lot about American culture and made many friends there. So WIS is my first choice to study abroad.,Although I am not the best now, I will make every effort to become a

40、 top student and I believe you will be proud of me. I am looking forward to your kind reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 精彩语句 1.精美词汇 make every effort 尽最大的努力 2.出彩结构 I wish to get an opportunity to study at WIS. (动词不定式作定语是英语表达中的一种特色),Writing 10(2017宁波) 三年的初中生活让你收获满满。校英语报邀你写一篇短文,给即将升入九年级的学弟学妹或他们的父母提 一些建议。

41、请你结合自己的学习经历选择其中一个对象,阐述你的观点。,注意: (1)短文必须包括你所选择一方的所有要点,并适当发挥; (2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名; (3)词数:80100; (4)短文首句仅供参考,不计入总词数。 短文首句:How time flies! Now (you/your children)are students of Grade 9.,答案 写作要点 1.本文使用一般现在时态。 2.覆盖答题要点。 3.行为连贯,连接词使用恰当,指代清晰。 参考范文 Possible version 1: How time flies! Now you are students of G

42、rade 9. Here Id like to tell you something that will make your school life more comfortable and wonderful. First of all, it is important for you to keep healthy, so dont forget to exercise every day. Second, youd better join clubs so that you can learn better and make more friends. Third, you will b

43、e able to make great progress if you develop your study skills. Besides, there are many ways for you to lower your stress, such as listening to music, hanging out with friends, and watching movies.,I hope you will enjoy your school life and achieve your dreams. Possible version 2: How time flies! No

44、w your children are students of Grade 9. Here Id like to tell you something that will make their school life more wonderful. First of all, it is important to encourage your children more so that they will be more confident. Second, please do not compare your children with others, because if you push

45、 them too hard, they will feel stressed out. Third, the children should be allowed to make their own decisions. There is no need to get everything ready for them. Besides, being a good listener will help you get along well with your children. I hope your childrens dreams will come true with your hel

46、p.,精彩语句 1.精美词汇 forget to do sth.忘记做某事 make great progress取得巨大的进步 compare.with.把和做比较 make ones own decision做好自己的决定 2.出彩结构 Besides, there are many ways for you to lower your stress, such as listening to music, hanging out with friends, and watching movies.而且,有很多减轻你压力的方式,比如听音乐、和朋友闲逛、看电影。,Writing 11(201

47、7湖州) 英语课上,老师组织大家就以下两幅图进行“To change or not”的话题讨论,请用英语阐述你对此话题的看 法。 注意: (1)短文可结合图片信息或自身经历,作适当发挥; (2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名; (3)词数:80100,短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。,短文首句:Last week, we had a discussion about the topic“To change or not”.,答案 写作要点 1.本文要恰当运用时态,对一般事实的论述用一般现在时,而对自己的经历要用一般过去时。 2.书写规范整洁。 3.用词恰当,句型变化多样。 参考范文 Last

48、 week, we had a discussion about the topic“To change or not”. I think different people have different choices to deal with problems. For example, when meeting with the weight problem, some people decide to take exercise to lose weight while others think they cant do anything about it. When I was in

49、Grade 7, I had difficulty with my spoken English. Instead of giving up, I chose to change. I tried my best to listen to tapes and practice speaking every day. Now my pronunciation has been improved a lot. In a word, facing problems, we should take actions to change. Surely it will make a great difference.,精彩语句 1.精美词汇 deal with处理 lose weight减重 try ones best to do sth.尽某人最大的努力去做某事 2.出彩结构 When I was in Grade 7, I had difficulty with my spok