2022届高考英语读后续写教研公开课同课异构课件.pptx

1、Continuation Writing Watch a video about two larvas:Red&YellowWarming up 1.Can you predict the ending?A:The two larvas failed to survive.B:The two larvas succeeded in rescue.setting(when,where)Theme(main idea+writing purpose)characters(who)plot（what,how,why)What makes a great story?vivid&proper desc

2、riptions Six elementsStep 03Step 02Step 01Step 04 Four StepswhowherewhenHowwhywhatendingbeginning an old man&his sonAn crow perched on their windowthe old man asked the same question four times,which made his son annoyedon the sofa in his houseStep 1 Read for the theme(main idea +writing purpose)too

3、k out the diarythe son:May he was busy and overlooked his fatherthe father:poor hearing and poor understandingThe intention of the writing is to _Step 1 Read for the theme(main idea +writing purpose)warn the son to give more attention and care to his father Further:_how many times:all 23 times to re

4、mind us to be more patient and caring with our parents 4 times impatientlovingattitude:BeginningBeginningClimax(Climax(高潮高潮)Ending Ending sitting on the sofa sitting on the sofa a crow percheda crow perchedrepliedhave just now told youimpatientsome expression of irritation in his toneirritated/annoy

5、edshouted at his fathermad5.the father took out the diary and asked the son to read 6.replied to him 23 times;hugged lovingly each time;not felt irritated but had a deep affectionpara 1:After reading the diary,para 2:Feeling ashamed,the son got down on his knees before his father.Step 2 Read for the

6、 plot(underline the sons&the fathers actions and feelings)apologize&forgive Tip 1:Predict the ending based on the plot and the theme.(reasonabe&positive)1.the first time:_2.the second time:_3.the third time:_4.the fourth time:_MovedashamedPara 1+After reading the diary,_ Para 2+Feeling ashamed,the s

7、on got down on his knees before his father._ 1.所续写的短文词数应为所续写的短文词数应为150左右左右;2.续写部分分为两段续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好每段的开头语已为你写好.Step 3:Infer plots or events in each paragraph.forgiveness be moved and realized his faultTip 2:Predict the ending of para.1 based on the two given sentences.Para 1+After reading the

8、diary,_Step 3:Infer plots or events in each paragraph.realized his faultTip 3:Infer the plot by making questions.(what,how,why.)After reading the diary,what did the son know from the diary?How would the son feel?What would the son think of?What would the son do?father selfless lovemoved by his fathe

9、r&ashamed memories crowed in his mindreflect on his behaviorStep 4:Writing based on the outline and using sentence patterns.Para 1+Feeling ashamed,the son got down on his knees before his father._forgivenessWhat would the son do?What would the son say?How would the father respond?Why did the son get

10、 down on his knees?To get his fathers forgivenessApologize to his fatherMake promises to his fatherForgivenessWhat theme would reveal?Be more paitent and give more care to your parents Tip 3:Infer the plot by making questions.(what,how,why.)Be consistent with the style Transitional wordsStep 4:Writi

11、ng based on the outline and using sentence patterns.Advanced vocabularyRich sentences structure Based on the“Question”&“Answer”,Please vividly write Para1&Para2 with the ending reasonable and the theme highlighted.AssignmentParagraph 1 After reading the diary,the son began to reflect on the days whe

12、n he used to sit together with his father,with eyes filled with tears.His father would patiently answer the same question all 23 times without feeling irritated while his father asked him the same question just 4 times!The son thought to himself with regret：If I attain old age,how will my son look a

13、t me?Will he think of me as a burden?Will he shout at me because of my poor sight,poor hearing or poor understanding?One possible version for Para.1:Paragraph 2 Feeling ashamed,the son got down on his knees before his father.He made an apology to his father,begging his father to forgive him for his bad behavior.He said this aloud,“I promise to see you happy forever,Dad.It is you who have cared for me ever since I was a little child,showing your selfless affection for me.You worked hard to make money so that I could afford to go to university.I will serve you in the best way.”参考范文