中考英语指导：题型六　书面表达.pptx

1、书 面 表 达,专题15 单词拼写,人物介绍类文章主要围绕人物展开,因此写作时,要根据话题内容,确定人称,然后再谋篇布局。,认真审题,明确要求 在提笔写作之前,花几分钟时间弄清题目的提示内容和要求,以免文不对题,倘若审题不准,就可能出现“下笔千言,离题万里”的情况;另外还需针对材料内容,确定文章的主体。,(2013安徽)今天是父亲节。假定你是李华,请给你的美国笔友John写一封电子邮件,谈谈你将如何与父亲一起度过这个特别的日子。要点如下: 1.表达你与父亲间的情感; 2.为父亲制作一张卡片; 3.帮助父亲做点事; 4.陪父亲散步等。,注意: 1.词数80100; 2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥

2、; 3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。,Dear John, Its Fathers Day today. Its a special day, isnt it? Whats your plan for Fathers Day? Im looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua,剖析 文章要求写我与父亲过父亲节的事情,首先我们确定这是一篇记叙文,文章给了四点提示,这样我们就必须围绕这四点展开,而不是任意发挥,同时人称要用I,由于很多事情都没有做,因此在写作时,主要用一般将来时来叙述我为父亲做的事情。,参考答案 Dear Jo

3、hn, Its Fathers Day today. Its a special day, isnt it?I think we should do something to show our love for our fathers on this special day. My father and I are good friends. Whenever I meet with difficulties, he is always there, ready to help me.Today I will make a beautiful card for him, with my tha

4、nks and best wishes on it. Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook his favorite food in the evening.,Besides, Ill take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him, for he likes it very much. Im sure hell be very happy. Whats your plan for Fathers Day? Im looking forwa

5、rd to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua,分析要点,编制提纲 考生通过对写作内容进行分析,弄清文章的主题后,开始着手组织材料,首先可以选取一些典型的、易于表达的材料作为自己的写作重点,再列出提纲。,每个人的一生中都会有令自己难忘的人。回想一下自己的成长过程,对你影响最深的老师是谁?请你根据以下要点提示,以“The Nicest Teacher in My Heart ”为题,写一篇英语短文。,注意: 1.文中请勿使用真实人名、校名和地名; 2.内容可参考表格中的要点并适当发挥; 3.词数80左右; 4.文章的开头已给出,但不计入总词数。,The Nicest

6、Teacher in My Heart Junior high school days will be over. I have some special memories. One of them is about a teacher.,剖析 考生在组织写作思路时,要从外貌、性格和喜欢的原因进行写作;其次谈论老师应该采用第三人称,谈论自己的感受应该使用第一人称;最后谈论老师的情况以及自己喜欢的原因可采用一般现在时;谈论老师对自己的帮助需采用一般过去时。根据提示写出下列提纲: 1.He/She is of medium height. 2.He/She helps us with Englis

7、h not only in class but also after class. 3.So he/she offered me some advice and encouraged me to improve it. 4.I must say many thanks to.,参考答案 The Nicest Teacher in My Heart Junior high school days will be over. I have some special memories. One of them is about a teacher. In my heart, Mr.Wang, my

8、English teacher, is the nicest teacher. He is of medium height. We think he is very handsome. He impresses me with a friendly, kind and hard-working image. He is strict with us in English. He helps us with English not only in class but also after class. About two years ago, Mr. Wang noticed,noticed

9、that I was worried about my poor pronunciation. So he offered me some advice and encouraged me to improve it. He also gave me chances to speak as much as possible in class. With his help, my pronunciation has greatly improved. I must say many thanks to Mr. Wang. I wish him a healthy and happy life i

10、n the future.,考题17 传统文化篇,对传统文化的考查主要是为了激发考生对中国文化的了解及传承,因此考生只有全面掌握一些传统文化知识才能在写作时得心应手。,列举法 在写作时,可以根据文章的内容及要求,列举出文章的写作要点,然后根据写作要点组织材料,这样的列举既有提纲作用,又能使文章脉络清晰。,(2017安徽)假如你是李华,你们学校将举行“弘扬中华传统文化戏曲进校园”展演活动,你打算邀请你的美国朋友Mike参加。请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。 1.时间:7月1日下午2点; 2.地点:学校操场; 3.内容:文化展览、节目表演等。 提示词:戏曲opera n. 表演 perf

11、ormance n. 注意:1.词数80100; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息; 4.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。,Dear Mike, I know you are interested in Chinese traditional culture. Yours, Li Hua,剖析 列举写作要点 1.分享好消息good news to share with you 2.展演的时间、地点与人物:at 2:00 p. m. on July 1;on the playground in our school;all the teachers and s

12、tudents 3.展演的内容:a culture show and many wonderful opera performances will be put on;learn more about Chinese traditional culture 4.祝愿:have a great time,5.列出关键短语和句型 be interested in 对感兴趣;a piece of一条;put on上演;look forward to 期盼;It will be held.它被举行;Its a chance for sb. to do.对某人来说是去做,参考答案 Dear Mike,

13、I know you are interested in Chinese traditional culture.Now, I have a piece of good news to share with you. There is an activity about Chinese traditional operas at 2:00 p. m. on July 1. It will be held on the playground in our school and all the teachers and students will attend. On that day, a cu

14、lture show and many wonderful opera performances will be put on. Its a chance for you to learn more about Chinese,traditional culture. Come and join us! I think well have a great time. Im looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua,语言表达准确 在写与传统文化有关的作文时,一定要注意遣词造句的准确性。一些传统节日或工艺品等的专有名词要熟悉。如:trad

15、itional handicraft 传统手工艺,set off firecrackers 放鞭炮, paper cut剪纸,等等。另外,要想使文章有整体性、连贯性,就要学会正确使用连接词,使句子表达准确。,假如你是李华,现就读于一所国际学校。你校正在举行“我与传统文化有个约会”的主题活动,请选择你喜欢的一个传说故事或一种传统工艺品,用英语写一篇短文,分享中国传统文化。词数80左右。 内容要点: 1.你的选择及喜欢的原因; 2.相关的传说或历史; 3.感想或启示。,剖析 话题是“选择你喜欢的一个传说故事或一种传统工艺品”,与中国文化相关,能激发考生的兴趣,深入挖掘中华优秀传统文化。本文属于说明

16、文,需要考生给出自己的选择以及喜欢的原因。根据要表达的内容确定要使用的时态。写作时应注意上下文意思连贯,要有较好的过渡衔接。如:on the one hand.on the other hand,not only. but also., in a word,等等。另外注意表达自己的感想或启示时彰显个性。,参考答案 Fancy lantern is my favorite form of Chinese traditional art, for its colorful and beautiful. Fancy lantern is made of bamboo or metal covered

17、 by cloth or paper with pictures of different characters from Chinese fairy tales. At the Lantern Festival, by tradition, lanterns of different shapes hang from the gates as symbols of good luck. Also, riddles are often written on them at lantern fairs for people to guess. Those who get the answers

18、to the riddles are supposed to have good fortune.,Fancy lantern has been around for about 3,000 years and its still popular among people, which reminds us that with the development of society, culture keeps changing, but something will remain unchanged.,考题18 观点建议篇,观点建议应该是当今中考的热点,内容涉及学生生活、校园生活等各个方面,任

19、何事物都有两面性,学生可以通过具体的情况谈谈自己的观点,发表自己的看法。,依据要点扩展法 考生在写作时,可以根据书面表达中所给的要点,写出合理的句子,这里可以使用你认为比较合适的句子,表述完要点后,可以适当发挥,把上下句用适当的连词连接,使句子过渡自然。,(2010安徽)假定你叫张华,最近从报纸上得知美国某公司将在你的家乡建一座工厂。请你给该公司写封电子邮件。要点如下: 表示欢迎:有利于家乡发展等; 感到担忧:造成环境污染等; 希望了解有关环保措施及更多信息。 注意: 1.词数80100; 2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥以使行文连贯; 3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。,Dear

20、Sir or Madam, I am a middle school student. Recently, Yours faithfully, Zhang Hua,剖析 这是一篇应用文,要求写出在家乡建工厂的利与弊。文章给出了三点提示,我们可以围绕这三点写出建厂的利与弊及作者的期望。因为工厂没有建造,因此时态以一般将来时为主,连接上下句可以使用there be,most of.等句型。,参考答案 Dear Sir or Madam, I am a middle school student. Recently, I have learned from the newspaper that yo

21、u are going to build a factory in my hometown. There is no doubt that it is good for the development of my hometown and it will provide us with more jobs. Most of us stand by the program. However, some of us are worried that the factory will make much noise and pollute the environment of the area. I

22、 would like to know whether you have any plans for the environment protection.,Would you please offer us more information about it? Im looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Zhang Hua,根据观点成文法 考生在写观点建议类文章时,有些观点非常明确,要求写出不同人的观点态度,那么我们就可以把这些人的观点分别列举出来,然后根据要求来组织语言,把所要表述的观点有条不紊地表达出来。力求做到观点

23、鲜明,语句通顺、完整。,目前,许多中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班,对此人们有不同的看法。请你根据下表内容用英语写一篇短文。,注意: 1.文章必须包括所有内容要点,要求语句通顺,意思连贯; 2.词数80左右(文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数); 3.文中不得提及具体人名、校名及地名。 Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of after-school classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it. Som

24、e people think that,剖析 根据要求写出各自的观点。 赞成者观点: 1.Taking after-school classes can help students learn better and get into a good high school. 2.Students can avoid spending too much time watching TV or playing computer games. 反对者观点: 1.Students need time to rest and relax. 2.After-school classes can cause

25、a lot of stress for students and it is not good for their development.,作者观点: 1.If necessary, we can take after-school classes, but it cant take up too much time. 2.We should first rest well at weekends and on holidays. 然后对这些观点进行有条理性的整理,使得文章思路清晰、语意顺畅。,参考答案 Nowadays, many middle school students are ta

26、king all kinds of after-school classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it. Some people think that taking after-school classes can help students learn better and get into a good high school. Whats more, students can avoid spending too much time watching TV or playin

27、g computer games.,However, others think students need time to rest and relax. After-school classes can cause a lot of stress for students and it is not good for their development. In my opinion, if necessary, we can take after-school classes, but it cant take up too much time. We should first rest w

28、ell at weekends and on holidays.,考题19 事物介绍篇,事物介绍类的写作我们应该从有形和无形两个方面着手,首先要看写作提示,这样我们能够迅速下手,确立所要写的内容是对有形事物的描述还是对无形事物的介绍。,确定主题句 在介绍事物时,首先我们应该确立所要写作的主题句,然后根据主题句及所给的提示展开叙述,叙述中要注意上下文衔接及加上适当的过渡句,这样就能使文章结构自然、紧凑。,(2015安徽)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter来信询问汉语中一些流行的网络语言的意思,请根据下列提示回一封电子邮件。 点赞(Dianzan):赞同、喜爱 任性(Renxing):随心所欲

29、秒杀(Miaosha):快速达到目的 土豪(Tuhao):很富有 ,注意: 1.词数80100; 2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥; 3.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名; 4.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。,Dear Peter, As the Internet is developing fast, more and more new words and phrases have been created in Chinese. Here are some examples. All the best! Yours, Li Hua,剖析 这是一篇要求对网络语言介绍的应用文,属于无形的

30、介绍。因此我们首先确立几个主题句:One of the most popular words is Dianzan, which is often used when you quite agree with someone. When you say somebody is Renxing, you mean that they will do whatever they like.The phrase Miaosha first came from online shopping, which means you can complete your shopping orders befo

31、re others.在确定主题句后,可以在中间加上another example, if从句等,这样便可自然成文。,参考答案 Dear Peter, As the Internet is developing fast, more and more new words and phrases have been created in Chinese. Here are some examples. One of the most popular words is Dianzan, which is often used when you quite agree with someone. An

32、other example is Renxing. When you say somebody is Renxing, you mean that he will do whatever he like. The phrase Miaosha first came from online shopping, which means you can complete your shopping orders before others. But now its widely used when you,achieve your purpose in a very short time. If y

33、ou describe somebody as a Tuhao, you mean that he is very rich. You can find lots of such new Chinese words. Keep learning, and youll know more about our language and culture. All the best! Yours, Li Hua,事物的特征介绍法 这类文章主要是针对有形的事物进行描述,我们要抓住事物的特征,然后从颜色、大小、用途等方面详细描述即可。,某英文报以“书包伴我学习,伴我成长”为主题,举办中学生征文活动。请你以

34、“My Schoolbag”为题写一篇100词左右的短文。内容包括书包的外形特征、用途和由书包引发的思考。 要求: 1.语言通顺,表达准确,要点齐全,行文连贯; 2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 参考词汇:look like, be used for/to, problems, expect, free time My Schoolbag,剖析 题目要求写一篇以“My Schoolbag”为题的短文,属于说明文。在介绍书包的外形特征、用途等情况时,应该采用第三人称,时态方面应采用一般现在时。当谈论自己由书包所引发的思考时,应该使用第一人称,时态方面要运用一般现在时。,参考答案 My Sc

35、hoolbag I have a lovely schoolbag. Its big and green. It looks like a big pancake. I go to school with it on my back every day. Its my closest friend. In my schoolbag, there are textbooks, workbooks, notebooks and a red pencil-box with pens, pencils, rulers and erasers in it. I put my drinking bottl

36、e in its side pockets.,As you know, there are so many books in my schoolbag. So its very heavy. Every day I have to finish lots of homework from most of the subjects. I have no enough time to sleep. I am really tired. I need to relax myself. I expect to do what I want. I have to keep a balance betwe

37、en study and rest. Each time I see my bag, how I wish it could be much smaller and lighter!,A(2019安徽) 假定你是李华, 你的英国笔友Mike最近因视力减退而感到不安,请你用英文给他写封电子邮件,谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法。要点如下: 1.经常做户外运动; 2.很少用电子产品; 3.坚持做眼保健操; 4.,注意:1.词数80100; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息; 4.开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, Im sorry to he

38、ar that your eyesight is getting weaker. Yours, Li Hua,参考答案 Dear Mike, Im sorry to hear that your eyesight is getting weaker. Id like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily life. At school, I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise dur

39、ing the breaks. In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer. You know, the light they give off is harmful to our eyes. Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes.,Lastly, I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my e

40、yes stay healthy. I hope youll find my ways helpful. Yours, Li Hua,B(2019淮北联考) 李华的英国笔友Jessica来信说,她想了解中国的传统节日中秋节。假如你是李华,请你给Jessica写一封信,介绍该节目。内容须包含以下所有要点: 1.中秋节的时间; 2.中秋节的传统习俗及庆祝方式(全家人一起吃饭、赏月、吃月饼等); 3.我最期待的活动。,要求:1.80100词( 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数); 2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整。 Dear Jessica, Im glad to hear from you. Now

41、 let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to you. Yours, Li Hua,参考答案 Dear Jessica, Im glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to you. The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month. Its a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get toge

42、ther to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to eat mooncakes and share our stories.,For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes.Mooncakes taste very delicious. They look like the moon, big and round. Yours, Li Hua,