中考英语写作指导(书面表达)话题9校园旅行课件.ppt

1、命题探索命题探索教材链接教材链接三阶攻关三阶攻关目录写作练兵写作练兵话题话题9 校园旅行校园旅行 分析河北近分析河北近10年中考真题的书面表达可知，针对年中考真题的书面表达可知，针对“校园旅校园旅行行”这一话题，河北并未考查。但分析全国近年真题发现，此这一话题，河北并未考查。但分析全国近年真题发现，此话题在中考中出现频率较高。常见的命题角度有：介绍旅游地话题在中考中出现频率较高。常见的命题角度有：介绍旅游地点、针对某种旅行发表观点或看法，及旅游经历等。点、针对某种旅行发表观点或看法，及旅游经历等。命题探索话题话题9 校园旅行校园旅行人教课本中涉及人教课本中涉及“校园旅行校园旅行”这个话题的单元

2、有：这个话题的单元有：教材链接话题话题9 校园旅行校园旅行(2019娄底改编娄底改编)“读万卷书，行万里路读万卷书，行万里路”，研学旅行现在受，研学旅行现在受到教育主管部门和学校的高度重视，也深受学生和家长的欢迎，到教育主管部门和学校的高度重视，也深受学生和家长的欢迎，但是旅行途中也有一些需要注意的事项但是旅行途中也有一些需要注意的事项。假如假如你是李华你是李华，请你根据所给提示和要求，写一篇短文。，请你根据所给提示和要求，写一篇短文。典例剖析典例剖析一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句审主题：研学旅行中需要注意审主题：研学旅行中需要注意的事项；审时态：一般现在时的事项；审时态：一般现在时

3、审人称：第一人称审人称：第一人称话题话题9 校园旅行校园旅行提示：提示：(1)Take more exercise.(2)Pay attention to safety.(3)Ask for help when necessary.要求：要求：(1)短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。(2)短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。(3)词数词数80个左右。个左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数开头已给出，不计入总词数)一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句要点要点1：多锻炼：多锻炼要点要点2：注意安全：注意安全要点要点3：必

4、要时求助：必要时求助话题话题9 校园旅行校园旅行一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句 Now study trips are becoming more and more popular with parents and students.What should we pay attention to when were having a study trip?_话题话题9 校园旅行校园旅行1.We went to Green Park.We went to Green Park.We climbed the mountains there and saw a lot of flowers

5、.七七(下下)Unit 11 P632.Today I went on a school trip.Today I went on a school trip.We visited the science museum and it was really interesting.七七(下下)Unit 11 P651 1角度角度介绍某次校园旅行介绍某次校园旅行一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句【句子扩写范例句子扩写范例】话题话题9 校园旅行校园旅行3.At the museum,I learned a lot about robots.At the museum,I learned a l

6、ot about robots.It was so cool！七七(下下)Unit 11 P65一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题9 校园旅行校园旅行1.I camped in the mountains with some friends.(扩写具体活动扩写具体活动)_ _ 2.We took the train to the museum.(扩写感受扩写感受)_3.There were too many people in the park.(扩写结果扩写结果)_I camped in the mountains with some friends.We put up ten

7、ts and cooked outside.We took the train to the museum.It was so hot on the slow train.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句There were too many people in the park.It was really noisy.【句子扩写句子扩写】话题话题9 校园旅行校园旅行1.I think todays school trip was terrible.七七(下下)Unit 11 P652.My school trip was great!We had so much fun！七七(下下)

8、Unit 11 P653.Its really interesting,isnt it?Its a great way to spend a Saturday afternoon.八八(下下)Unit 9 P664.Its really a good chance to learn about other countries.2 2角度角度旅行经历及感受旅行经历及感受一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句【好句范例好句范例】话题话题9 校园旅行校园旅行【句子仿写句子仿写】1.我觉得这个地方值得再次来参观我觉得这个地方值得再次来参观,因为这里的一切都很棒。因为这里的一切都很棒。_ _2.我们在

9、这次旅行中获得了太多的乐趣。我们在这次旅行中获得了太多的乐趣。_3.总之总之,这次旅行对我来说很难忘。它真的是结交新朋友的好机会。这次旅行对我来说很难忘。它真的是结交新朋友的好机会。_ _ I think the place is worth visiting again because everything here is great.We got so much fun in this trip.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句All in all,this trip is unforgettable for me.It is really a good chance to mak

10、e friends.话题话题9 校园旅行校园旅行 We will organize a trip to _(目的地目的地).Im really happy because _(理由理由).In the morning,we will _(活动活动1).In the afternoon,we will _(活动活动2).Im sure we will _(感受感受)the nearby village一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句练语段练语段介绍某次校园旅行介绍某次校园旅行this is my first time to go therefeed animalslearn to coo

11、k mealshave a good time语段练习语段练习1 1话题话题9 校园旅行校园旅行 Last week,our class organized a trip to the science museum.We saw _(经历经历1)there.The guide also told us _(经历经历2).We all _ _(感受感受1).All in all,we thought the trip was _(感受感受2)great inventions一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句旅行经历及感受旅行经历及感受the development of some inve

12、ntionsfelt an unforgettable experience for usexcited when we saw those great inventions语段练习语段练习2 2话题话题9 校园旅行校园旅行一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句成篇章成篇章 Now study trips are becoming more and more popular with parents and students.What should we pay attention to when were having a study trip?First,we should take m

13、ore exercise and get enough sleep.Drink clean hot water.It is good for our health.Second,we should pay attention to the safety.We should take the safe taxi or car when we go out.When we meet something strange or find someone in danger,please call the police at once.At last,when we have some troubles

14、 in our life or study,we can ask our teachers or friends for help.I hope we will have a wonderful trip.话题话题9 校园旅行校园旅行 (2020原创原创)你们班将于本周六组织同学们去森林公园进行你们班将于本周六组织同学们去森林公园进行科普小活动。请你根据下面的提示，以班长李华的名义给同学科普小活动。请你根据下面的提示，以班长李华的名义给同学们发布一则通知。们发布一则通知。提示：提示：(1)When to meet and return?(2)How to get there?(3)What t

15、o do there?要求：要求：(1)通知须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。通知须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。(2)通知中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。通知中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。(3)词数词数80个左右。个左右。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)写作练兵写作练兵话题话题9 校园旅行校园旅行Dear classmates，May I have your attention please?We will have scientific activities in the Forest Park this Saturday._写作练兵写作练兵 We ar

16、e going to meet at 8:00 a.m.at the school gate.I hope everyone will be there on time.We will ride the sharing bikes because its not far from our school.Its important to obey the traffic rules on the way there.We must park our bikes on each side of the gate after arriving there.话题话题9 校园旅行校园旅行_ Thats all.Thank you!写作练兵写作练兵 During the scientific activities,we are going to listen to a talk about the Forest Park and plants.It will be helpful for us to know about plants.We are allowed to take notes and photos in the park.After that,we will return at 3:30 p.m.by bus.Wish we will have a good trip.