2020424湖丽衢模拟考读后续写(共15张)课件.pptx

1、Step1Read for the theme.（确定主题）Step2 Read for the plot.（定位线索）Step3 Outine the possible plots or events in each paragraph.（构思续写情节，搭建结构支架）Step4 Writing based on the outline and using sentence patterns.（运用用句型模板，落笔成文）Mei Meismother found her soon after,in the kitchen loading the dishwasher.Honey,what are

2、 you doing back here？We need you out front with the customers.”1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Para 1Mom，I dont want to be out there!_Para2Mei Mei put a handful of cookies into a small plate and left the kitchen._ Who When Where What Why?How?W

3、hoWhenWhereWhatWhy?How?Mei Mei,her mother,the twinsMei Mei was in new surroundings and his parents ignored her feelings.the opening of Mei Meis parents restaurant/shortly after moving to a new place and going to a new schoolin the restaurant of Mei Meis parentsgrumbled/complained to herselfMei Mei d

4、idnt adapt to the new school and had no friends Tip 1Tip 1：Main idea covers the following elementsMain idea covers the following elements：who who,whenwhen,wherewhere,whatwhat,why and how.why and how.M Main ideaain idea:After Mei Meis family moved to a new placeAfter Mei Meis family moved to a new pl

5、ace,she had she had difficulty making friends in the new school and often grumbled to difficulty making friends in the new school and often grumbled to herselfwhich her parents didnt notice.herselfwhich her parents didnt notice.Tip 2Tip 2：Writing purpose refers to what the writing purpose author Wri

6、ting purpose refers to what the writing purpose author wants to convey through the passage.wants to convey through the passage.Writing purposeWriting purpose:To show readers how a person adapts to new To show readers how a person adapts to new surroundings by talking with parents and taking active s

7、teps to surroundings by talking with parents and taking active steps to make new friends make new friends Tip 3Tip 3：The content of continuation writing must be consistent The content of continuation writing must be consistent withwith（保持一致）（保持一致）the given storys main idea and writing purpose.the gi

8、ven storys main idea and writing purpose.1.frowned,helped.set out the cooking supplies.(para.1)2.grumbled,mumbled,complaining.(para 2-para 4)3.hard to talk to.,.hadnt noticed her,sighed(para.5)4.rushed around,seat guest,handing out,pouring(para.6)5.ducked her head,.covered her face;turned away(para.

9、7).para 1:Mom,I dont want to be there._ para 2:Mei Mer put a handful of cookies into a small plate and left the kitchen._ Tip 4:Predict the ending based on the plot and the theme.(reasonabe)BeginningClimaxEndingStep 3:Outline the possible plots or events in each paragraph.1.所续写的短文词数应为所续写的短文词数应为150左右

10、左右;2.应使用应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语;Tip 5:Predict the ending of para.1 based on the two given sentences.para 1:Mom,I dont want to be there._para 2:Mei Mer put a handful of cookies into a small plate an

11、d left the kitchen._What did Mei Mei/mother do?How did Mei Mei/mother feel?Mei Mei:murmured,without looking mother:asked Mei Mei:sad mother:caring Mei Mei:poured out troubles mother:felt her heart sink;realized the problemMei Mei:sad;angry mother:sorry mother:held her in arms,apologized.suggestedmot

12、her:hopefulMei:got comfort and motivated;had and ideaMei Mei:confident;cheerfulWhat did Mei Mei/the twins do?How did Mei Mei/the twins feel?Mei Mei:went straight towards;put;saidcalm the twins:had their mouths openamazedMeiMei added wondereg if.the twins:nodded;invited Meiuei and the twins friendlyh

13、atted;discovered the same interesthappy and excited Step 4：using chunks and sentence patterns无灵主语无灵主语情感描写的表达情感描写的表达非谓语动词非谓语动词/独立主格独立主格“with”的复合结构的复合结构丰富的形容词感动词丰富的形容词感动词Tip 7:Language database for describing feelings postive feelings negative feelingsOne possible version for Para.1One possible versio

14、n for Para.1Mom.I dont want to be out there!Mei Mei murmured,head Mom.I dont want to be out there!Mei Mei murmured,head drooping,Feeling Mei Mei in a bad mood,her mother asked drooping,Feeling Mei Mei in a bad mood,her mother asked her what was wrong softly.At that moment,Mei Mei her what was wrong

15、softly.At that moment,Mei Mei couldnt help pouring out her troubles,Without a friend,Im couldnt help pouring out her troubles,Without a friend,Im isolated here.Realizing they failed to care about Mei Meis isolated here.Realizing they failed to care about Mei Meis feelings in entirely new surrounding

16、s,her mother felt her feelings in entirely new surroundings,her mother felt her heart sink.Holding her daughter in her arms,she apologized heart sink.Holding her daughter in her arms,she apologized for her ignorance and suggested she make new friends by for her ignorance and suggested she make new f

17、riends by taking action first.What hermother said really comforted her taking action first.What hermother said really comforted her and motivated her to take the first step.Suddenly,an idea and motivated her to take the first step.Suddenly,an idea popped into her head.popped into her head.One possib

18、le version for Para.2One possible version for Para.2Mei Mei put a handful of cookies into a small plate and left Mei Mei put a handful of cookies into a small plate and left the kitchen.She went straight towards the twins table and the kitchen.She went straight towards the twins table and put the pl

19、ate on their table,saying the cookies were specialy put the plate on their table,saying the cookies were specialy prepared for friends by her parents restaurant,Amazed,the prepared for friends by her parents restaurant,Amazed,the twins had their mouths open,for they had never seen Mei twins had thei

20、r mouths open,for they had never seen Mei Mei as a friend.Mei Mei added that she was new here and Mei as a friend.Mei Mei added that she was new here and wondered if they could be her tour guides on weekends.The wondered if they could be her tour guides on weekends.The twins nodded,sincerely invitin

21、g her to join them.Over twins nodded,sincerely inviting her to join them.Over chatting,Mei Mei found they shared the same interest-chatting,Mei Mei found they shared the same interest-making pots.She pictured three little girls making pots,her making pots.She pictured three little girls making pots,her face lit up and lips curving into a smile.face lit up and lips curving into a smile.