Unit1 Reading for Writing 写建议信(ppt课件)-2022新人教版（2019）《高中英语》必修第一册.pptx

1、Unit 1 Period III Reading for WritingLearning ObjectivesBy the end of the class,you will be able to 1.use words and expressions to give advice about problems faced with the senior high students.2.obtain the structure of a letter of advice.3.write a letter of advice successfully.1.语言知识：语言知识：behaviour

2、,attract,focus on,addicted,“动词动词+it+宾补宾补+不定式（短语）不定式（短语）”结构，结构，too-to-结结构等。构等。2.语言技能：学会写建议信。语言技能：学会写建议信。Dear Worried Friend，You wrote that you are very worried about your friend，Chen Lei.I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible.You think that your friend plays computer games too

3、 often and spends too much time online.亲爱的担忧的朋友，亲爱的担忧的朋友，你写信说你很你写信说你很担心担心你的朋友陈雷。我很理解你你的朋友陈雷。我很理解你焦虑焦虑和和糟糕的感觉。你认为你的朋友糟糕的感觉。你认为你的朋友玩电脑游戏玩电脑游戏太频繁，花太太频繁，花太多时间在网上。多时间在网上。Reading for Writing Reading for Writing I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour.It is not unusual for teenagers of

4、 your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world.But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life.Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life.I think you should e

5、ncourage your friend to try new hobbies.Why not discuss the problem together?I am sure he will listen to you，since you are his good friend.我建议你和你的朋友谈谈他的行为行为。对于你们这一代一代的青少年青少年来说，被电脑游戏和网络世界所吸引吸引并不罕见。但是花太多的时间在网上是不健康的，让你很难集中精力集中精力在生活中的其他事情上。一些学生甚至沉迷于沉迷于网络，无法集中精力在学校和家庭生活上。我认为你应该鼓励你的朋友尝试新的爱好。为什么不一起讨论这个问题呢？

6、我相信他会听你的，因为你是他的好朋友。Reading for Writing All the best，一切顺利一切顺利，Susan Luo苏珊苏珊罗罗核心词汇核心词汇1.I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour.我建议你跟你的朋友谈一谈他的行为。behaviour n.U行为；举止行为；举止 His behaviour was,in a word,shocking.总之，他的行为是令人震惊的。联想词联想词 behave vi.表现；举止规矩有礼；运转表现；举止规矩有礼；运转behave well/badly 表现

7、得好表现得好/差差behave oneself举止规矩有礼举止规矩有礼My car has been behaving well since it was repaired.我的汽车自修理后一直运行良好。Mr Blake was a gentleman.He knew how to behave.布莱克先生是位士。他知道如何举止得体。核心词汇核心词汇 well-behaved adj.彬彬有礼的；行为端正的彬彬有礼的；行为端正的The kids at this school are disciplined,hard-working and well-behaved.这所学校的孩子们遵守纪律、学

8、习勤奋、彬彬有礼。ill-behaved adj.没有礼貌的；举止表现不好的没有礼貌的；举止表现不好的核心词汇核心词汇牛刀小试牛刀小试He has been behaving_(strange)recently.How is your new car _(behave)?Smoking in public is bad _(behave).这些表现不好的孩子真的很令我头疼。这些表现不好的孩子真的很令我头疼。_strangelybehavingbehaviourThese ill-behaved children are really a big headache for me.核心词汇核心词汇

9、2.It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world.你们这一代青少年被电脑游戏和网络世界吸引，这并不稀奇。attract vt.吸引；引起吸引；引起的注意（或兴趣）的注意（或兴趣）常用搭配常用搭配 attract sb to.吸引某人到吸引某人到be attracted to.喜爱喜爱；被；被吸引吸引attract attention 吸引注意吸引注意Her beauty attracted many passers-by.What

10、 first attracts people to the job is the chance to travel.这份工作首先吸引人们的是有机会去旅行。A few years later,still attracted to the country,he returned to Uzbekistan to write an article about the disappearance of the Aral Sea.几年后，他仍然被这个国家吸引，于是回到乌兹别克斯坦写了一篇关于咸海消失的文章。(2020新高考全国1核心词汇核心词汇They tend to attract attention

11、 wherever they go.他们不管到哪里都容易引人注意。联想词attraction n.C，U喜爱；吸引力；魅力喜爱；吸引力；魅力 C吸引人之物吸引人之物She felt an immediate attraction for him.她对他顿生爱慕之情。attractive adj.迷人的；有魅力的；有吸引力的迷人的；有魅力的；有吸引力的I thought he was very attractive and obviously very intelligent.我觉得他魅力非凡，而且显然才智过人。核心词汇核心词汇牛刀小试牛刀小试What_ me most in Beijing i

12、s the Great Wall.We welcome you to join us in this special tour which will explore one of the unique Australian_(attract).Summer attracts visitors _the countryside.Guilin is an_(attract)city which many visitors want to go to.Thousands of tourists _(attract)to Shanghai Disney Resort the day it opened

13、.attracts attractionsattractivetowere attracted核心词汇核心词汇3.But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life.但花费过多的时间上网是不健康的，并且这也会让你们很难专注于生活中的其他事情。focus on 集中；特别关注；集中；特别关注；(眼睛、摄像机等眼睛、摄像机等)对准，调节焦距对准，调节焦距Whats more,it is of significance to focus

14、on both food quantity and quality.另外，关注食物的数量和质量都很重要。But more cameras focus on Stallone and his three beautiful daughters.但是更多的照相机聚焦在斯塔隆和他的三个漂亮的女儿身上。核心词汇核心词汇联想拓展联想拓展focus vi.&t.集中集中(精力、注意力等精力、注意力等)；(使使)调节焦距；调节焦距；(使使)聚焦聚焦focus.on.把把集中到集中到上上focus/centre/concentrate/fix ones attention on sth集中某集中某人的注意力于

15、某物上人的注意力于某物上He focused his blue eyes on her.他那双蓝色的眼睛注视着她。n.焦点；重点；中心焦点；重点；中心the focus of attention/concern/interest关注的焦点核心词汇核心词汇牛刀小试牛刀小试根据汉语提示补全句子。Though the story is amusing,I have to put it away and _(把我的注意力集中在)study.The old man stood there with _(他的眼睛盯着)the picture.翻译句子翻译句子我们必须关注产品质量的提升。(focus on)

16、这是会议上关注的主要焦点。_focus/concentrate my attention on his eyes focused on We must focus on improving the quality of the products.It was the main focus of attention at the meeting.核心词汇核心词汇4.Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life.有些学生甚至上网成瘾，无法将精力集

17、中到学校生活和家庭生活上。addicted adj.有瘾的；上瘾的；入迷的有瘾的；上瘾的；入迷的 常用搭配 be addicted to doing sth 对对入迷；沉迷于；对入迷；沉迷于；对上瘾上瘾 My children are hopelessly addicted to the television.我的孩子们都沉迷于看电视，简直无药可救了。Many smokers who are addicted to nicotine cannot give up easily.许多对尼古丁有瘾的吸烟者不容易把烟戒掉。特别注意特别注意短语短语be addicted to中的中的to是介词，后接名

18、词、代词或动名词形式。是介词，后接名词、代词或动名词形式。核心词汇核心词汇He is addicted to playing video games,which can account for his failure in the exam.他沉迷于玩电子游戏，这是他考试不及格的原因。联想词联想词addict n.对对入迷的人；吸毒成瘾的人入迷的人；吸毒成瘾的人She is a TV addict and watches as much as she can.她是个电视迷，看起电视来没完没了。addiction n.瘾；入迷瘾；入迷He is now fighting his addictio

19、n to alcohol.他现在正努力戒酒。核心词汇核心词汇牛刀小试牛刀小试 Some Western countries are facing the tough issue of drug _(addict)among young people.I went through about four years of being _(addict)to video games.He is turning into_ Internet addict.People_(addict)to smoking have great difficulty in getting rid of the(addi

20、ct)._(addict)to playing games recently,he is easy to feel sleepy in class.Much to my shock,my daughter is _(addict)to surfing the Internet.addictionaddictedanaddictedAddictedaddicted句型探究句型探究1.But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life.

21、【句意】但花费过多的时间上网是不健康的，并且这也会让你们很难专注于生活中的其他事情。知识拓展知识拓展 “动词+it+宾补+不定式(短语)”结构 定向练1当不定式(短语)作宾语，且有宾语补足语时，常用it作形式宾语，而将不定式(短语)放在宾语补足语之后。构成的结构为：动词构成的结构为：动词+it+宾补宾补+不定式不定式(短语短语)。常用于这一复合结构的动词有：consider,feel,find,make,think等。They all feel it very hard to learn German.他们都认为学习德语很困难。The rough road makes it difficult

22、 to get to the destination.崎岖不平的路使到达目的地变得困难。句型探究句型探究牛刀小试牛刀小试 He found _his duty to work hard at all his subjects.He thought it worthwhile _(have)a try.They consider_ better to do it that way.I felt it important for women _(join)and take a leading role.itto haveitto join句型探究句型探究2.There is a girl I li

23、ke in my class,but Im too shy to talk to her.【句意【句意】班里有一位我喜欢的女孩，但是我太害羞了，不敢和她说话。知识拓展知识拓展 too.to.结构结构 too.to.意为意为“太太而不能而不能”，表示否定意义。，表示否定意义。Upon hearing the teachers talk,the children probably felt it sounded too good to be true.听到老师说的话，孩子们可能觉得那听起来太好了，以至于不是真的。It was too cold to do anything outside.天气太冷

24、了，在户外什么也做不了。too.to.结构也可以转换为结构也可以转换为so.that.引导的结果状语从句。引导的结果状语从句。He is too young to do this thing.=He is so young that he cant do this thing.他太小了，做不了这件事。句型探究句型探究特别注意特别注意当too前面有all,but,only,just,never等词修饰，too后面的形容词为表示心情的或描绘性的形容词，如happy,pleased,willing,thankful,delighted,anxious,eager,kind,good,wise等时，此

25、结构没有否定意义，而表示强烈的肯定意义。She is only too glad to help you.她非常乐意帮助你。Its never too late to learn.活到老，学到老。They are all too delighted to go and do this work.他们很乐意去做这项工作。牛刀小试牛刀小试Its clear that the tree is too young to stand the storm.同义句转换。Its clear that the tree is_ young _it cant stand the storm.You cannot

26、be too careful in driving a car.（英译汉）so that你开车时再小心也不为过。你开车时再小心也不为过。写作探究写作探究Susan Luo,an adviser for teenagers,has received a letter asking for some advice.(P18)10th September 2018 Dear worried friends,All the best,Susan LuoDateDateGreeting Greeting BodyBodyCloseCloseSignatureSignatureThe organisati

27、on of the letterI knowwhat theproblem is.I understand how you feel.This is myadvice andreason(s).I think myadvice will help.Circle the expressions Ms Luo uses to make suggestions in the letter.写作探究写作探究1.篇章结构 建议信是写信人向收信人针对某事提出的建议或忠告。信的内容要包含写信的原因、具体建议以及提出建议的理由等。文章结构一般是“三段式”，通常以first(ly)，second(ly),thi

28、rd(ly)或或 to begin/start with,then,besides,last but not least等依次陈述建议，具体为：第一段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，需要的话可以简单介绍自己，注意礼貌用语的使用和语气。第二段：最好先肯定对方的优点，然后指出需要改进的地方或针对具体情况给出具体的建议或忠告。注意使用礼貌用语，建议信是在提建议，而不是投诉。第三段：对提出的建议进行总结。注意结尾更要有礼貌，使对方容易接受。写作探究写作探究2.常用表达常用表达(1)首段常用表达首段常用表达I am writing to express my views on/about.我写信是想表达我对的

29、看法。You have asked my advice about/on.and I will try to make some suggestions.你已经问了我一些关于的建议，我会尽量给你一些建议。After I read your letter in the newspaper,I am sorry to know that.我在报上看到你的信后，很遗憾得知I am very glad to hear that you want to.我很高兴听到你想要I know you have trouble in.after reading your letter.读完你的来信后，得知你在方面

30、有麻烦。I am writing to you for the purpose of.我写信给你是为了I am writing to share some advice/opinions with you.我写信是想和你分享一些建议/意见。写作探究写作探究(2)提出建议时的常用表达提出建议时的常用表达I think it would be more beneficial if you could.我认为如果你能会更有益。I would like to suggest/recommend that.我想建议/推荐If I were you,I would.如果我是你，我会Why not.?/Ho

31、w(What)about.?/Youd better./Its better to.为什么不?/怎么样？/你最好/做更好。What do you think of.?/How do you like.?你认为怎么样？-is a good/great idea.是个好主意。You may consider doing.你可以考虑做As far as I am concerned/In my opinion,it would be wise to take the following action.在我看来，采取以下行动是明智的。When it comes to such a situation,

32、I suggest that you should.当谈到这种情况时，我建议你应该写作探究写作探究(3)尾段常用表达尾段常用表达I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration.我希望你会考虑我的建议。I believe you will find these suggestions practical/useful/helpful.我相信你将会发现这些建议是实用的/有用的/有帮助的。In the end,I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.最后，如果你觉得我的建议有

33、用的话，我会很高兴的。写作探究写作探究模拟演练模拟演练 为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开设了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为“Worried”的同学的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请你用英文给该同学写一封回信，内容要点如下：1.表示理解并给予安慰；2.提出建议并说明理由。注意注意：1.词数80左右；2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3.信的开头和结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。参考词汇参考词汇：temper n.temper n.脾气；情绪脾气；情绪Hi“Worried”,Im so

34、rry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment.写作探究写作探究【参考范文】参考范文】Hi“Worried”,Im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment.The truth is that everyone has one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong,so you dont have to worry too much.The important thing is

35、 to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything youll regret.Here are three useful tips.First,talk to someone you trust about how you feel.This is a good way to let your anger out without hurting others or yourself.Second,go outdoors and play team games with your friends as p

36、hysical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger.Third,remain optimistic about your future.Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.I hope youll soon feel calmer and carry on as usual.Yours,JamieThe checklist Are all the parts of a letter included and orga

37、nized in a good order?Does the writer give reasons for the advice?Does the writer use proper expressions to give suggestions?Does the writer use commas and stops correctly?Is the handwriting easy to read?AssessingHomework 1.Revise your letter again and hand it in.2.Enjoy the passage The Face-down Generation on Page 74.Thank YouNew SemesterNew Semester，new Beginningnew Beginning