Unit1Teenage Life Reading for Writting 写作指导(ppt课件)-2022新人教版（2019）《高中英语》必修第一册.pptx

1、 How to write a letter?In our daily life,when our friends meet problems,they want someone to help them.If necessary,we will write a letter to him.but.?Writing Project write a letter of advicewrite a letter of advice to one of the taanagers belowImitation（模仿）学习的最好方法就是模仿，写建议信当然我们要以课本为蓝本，模仿的过程由外到内。所谓外，

2、就是文章的结构安排，格式外貌特征，根据P18页的课文我们可以看到，建议信的大致组织结构：Date 日期Greeting 问候语Close 结尾Signature 署名Body 正文书信格式1.日期、问候语在试题中都是设定好的，所以考试中不作要求。2.Body 正文。正文根据需要通常由2-3个段落组成。第一段通常要交代清楚你已经 知道了对方所遇到的问题或困难，并且能感受到对方的焦虑、急切、渴望、愤怒等的心情，然后表明自己能够提供一些建议等内容。正文第一段常见的句式有：I have received your letter,and I know you are worrying about.I u

3、nderstand quite well that.you are anxious/nervous/angry/mad/annoyed/glad/eager/terrible/frightened等。第二段就要给对方提出你能提供的建议，比如处理问题的方法、如何制定完成任务的计划、如何养成好的习惯等。结合自己的经验分析出现问题的原因，对于已经出现的问题或已经给自己造成麻烦的问题，要让对方认识到问题的客存在，要理性对待，不能坐视不管，更不可以采取过激的行为。只有在理性的范围内才能解决问题。常见的句式有：I recommend that you should/can talk with./speak

4、 to.I advise/suggest that you should.等这一类别的句型。其次是分析原因的句型例如：The reason why.is that.That is because.例如：I am sure he will listen to you,because/as/since you are his/her best friend.I hope that you will find these suggestions/ideas/advice useful.4.Close 结尾。通常表达祝福。比如：All the best,/Best wishes,等。5.Signatu

5、re 签名。最后写上写信人的名字。假定你是李华，你的一个在英国学习的朋友给你写信，假定你是李华，你的一个在英国学习的朋友给你写信，他说很不适应那里的校园生活，感到很难过。请你给他他说很不适应那里的校园生活，感到很难过。请你给他些一封建议信。些一封建议信。1.理解朋友的困难，但要克服它，不能放弃，学好英语理解朋友的困难，但要克服它，不能放弃，学好英语在那里才会有更多与别人交流的机会。在那里才会有更多与别人交流的机会。2.多交朋友，乐于助人多交朋友，乐于助人3.积极参加各种社团活动，抓住学习的机会。积极参加各种社团活动，抓住学习的机会。下面是学生的一篇习作，通过这篇作文，可以看出学生在练习写作中出

6、现的问题，以及有从哪几个方面可以提高。同时也这就涉及到下面的话题：如何对一篇文章进行润色。学生写作暴露的问题很明显：1.文章单薄，从卷面看字数就没有达到要求，也就是说没有把内容交代清楚。2.第一段中没有叙述清楚，已经知道对方的问题，比如常用的句子：I have received your letter,in which you said you met.,You have asked me for advice on.and I will try to make suggestions.Thanks for trusting me,Regarding your problem about.I

7、would like to give you some suggestions.如果这样修改，既说明了情况，又使用了较为复杂的句式，使句式更丰富，可以增加文章的亮点。3.正文应该是对对方的来信进行解答，或者给出委婉的合理化建议，句式要灵活多变，不能按照中文的提示词逐条翻译。比如；Firstly,I think you should.Secondly,.Thirdly,.这样行文更加条理清晰，层次分明。4.结尾一般带有对别人的祝愿，并表示如果自己的建议能够给对方提供帮助，自己会很高兴等等。比如：I hope my suggestions will.I will be more than happ

8、y to see improvements in this matter.I would be ready to discuss with you in further details.这样整篇文章就比较完美了。下面是修改润色过的文章Dear Xiao Ming,I have received your letter,in which you said you met a few problems and couldnt adapt to the campus life.You felt very confused.I think I have some suggestions to help

9、 you.Firstly,I think you should face these problems correctly.In a new environment everyone will have these problems and challenges,but dont give up.We should actively overcome them,and take the opportunity to practise your spoken English and study hard.Secondly,everyday you will have chance to comm

10、unicate with others,thus,gradually you can make friends with them,you will not feel lonely.Lastly,I think you should take an active part in extra-curricular activities,ready to help others,and seize every chance to improve your study.I hope my suggestions will help you,and I would be ready to discuss with you in further details next time.Yours Li Hua