高中英语作文(公开课)：如何写好建议信课件-PPT.ppt

1、How to write a letterfor advice如何写好建议信如何写好建议信高考作文得分点分析1.内容分-72.结构分-63.词句分-64.卷面分-6卷面分-6卷面：卷面：1.字迹工整美观；字迹工整美观；2.不能涂改；不能涂改；1）一笔一画，不可连笔；2）单词与单词之间距离相等，单词的字母与字母之间距离也要相等。3）26个英文字母一定要写的饱满和匀称。养成打草稿的习惯和平时认真书写的习惯。怎么样才能做到呢？对关键信息，进行合理的拓展，使行文连贯。假如你是某英文报假如你是某英文报“PLEASE TELL ME”专栏的编辑专栏的编辑Robert。某校高二年级学生。某校高二年级学生Lu

2、cy因担心无法适应忙碌的高三生活而因担心无法适应忙碌的高三生活而写信向你求助。请你用英文给该同学写写信向你求助。请你用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：一封回信。内容要点如下：1、对该同学存在的问题表示理解对该同学存在的问题表示理解2、提出建议并给出理由提出建议并给出理由 注意：词数注意：词数120左右（信的开头已给出，左右（信的开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。但不计入总词数）。第一步：审题第一步：审题养成重视审题的习惯。养成重视审题的习惯。思考的问题思考的问题样题分析样题分析第几人称？（第几人称？（person）文章的题材是什么？文章的题材是什么？要写的文章主题是什么要写的文章主题是什么(

3、topic)动作是什么时候发生的？动作是什么时候发生的？(时态时态)(when)第二人称第二人称写一封信写一封信建议：如何解除对高三建议：如何解除对高三生活的担忧生活的担忧一般现在时一般现在时开门见山，表明写作意图。在本开门见山，表明写作意图。在本段中，写信人应该先简单介绍自段中，写信人应该先简单介绍自己，然后陈述事由，表明写信的己，然后陈述事由，表明写信的目的及原因。目的及原因。委婉地提出建议及改进措施，委婉地提出建议及改进措施，或提出忠告。或提出忠告。礼貌地总结并期盼对方的回复。礼貌地总结并期盼对方的回复。the form of a suggestion letterGreeting,Bo

4、dy:1st part:2nd part:3rd part:Complimentary close(结束语结束语),Signaturethe purposesuggestionsask the receiver to consider the suggestions and take themDear ,Yours sincerely,Alice Major 建议的构思（拓展）建议的构思（拓展）说明建议的内容说明建议的内容(要点要点)；提出具体建议的提出具体建议的原因原因；指出采纳建议的指出采纳建议的益处益处。注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。方感受。

5、第二步：搜索相关词组或句型第二步：搜索相关词组或句型问题建议高二年级学生高二年级学生Lucy因担心无法适应忙因担心无法适应忙碌的高三生活而写碌的高三生活而写信向你求助信向你求助1.保持自信和乐观。保持自信和乐观。2.列好时间表列好时间表3.积极去解决问题。积极去解决问题。原因：是实现目标的基础。益处：逐渐取得进步方法：遇困难求助师生建议的构思建议的构思-委婉表达委婉表达注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。方感受。表达建议常用句式：Youd better do sth Its better for you to In my opinion/As far a

6、s I am concernedFrom my point of viewI would like to suggest that For one thing for anotheron the one hand on the other handFirstlysecondlythirdly/FirstthenlaterTo begin/start with whats more last but not least In a word/In conclusion 4）Translations.将要点的内容翻译成地道的将要点的内容翻译成地道的英文句子，组句成篇（打草英文句子，组句成篇（打草稿）

7、稿）5）检查，修改，誊写。）检查，修改，誊写。Actually,it is common for most students to be anxious about the busy and tough school life of Senior Three,so you neednt worry too much.My advice is as follows.形式主语句型形式主语句型and,so,orand,so,or前面有逗号隔开，连接两个句子前面有逗号隔开，连接两个句子副词副词 连词连词 First,you should be confident and optimistic,Seco

8、ndly,you ought to make proper schedules for your studies and life.Thirdly,you need to learn to solve your problems actively.When faced with difficulties in your life,you can always ask your teachers or classmates for advice,定语从句定语从句倒装倒装状语从句状语从句定语从句定语从句副词副词=help 用短语来代替单词用短语来代替单词 I hope that these sug

9、gestions will work.And I am dying to receiving your good news./I cant wait to hear from you again./Dont hesitate to write to me about your great progress.=want to 用短语来代替单词用短语来代替单词=want to 用短语来代短语用短语来代短语=tell 用短语来代替单词用短语来代替单词 如何算是一篇好文章？如何算是一篇好文章？覆盖了所有的要点覆盖了所有的要点应用了较多的语法结构和词汇应用了较多的语法结构和词汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成

10、有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。条理清楚。要要点点全全词汇词汇,句型句型（高级）和语法（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）语言地道多样化（较复杂）语言地道连连接接词词如何做到词汇，句型的高级化如何做到词汇，句型的高级化和语法多样化和语法多样化in factas a matter of factbesidesin additionin my opinionas far as I am concernedfirst/firstlyfirst of allsuddenlyall of a suddenhoweveron the contrar

11、yhave to do sth.have no choice but to do sth.（1）should Sb ought to do sth.Sb be supposed to do sth.Why not do sth?It is beneficial for you to do sth.If I were you,I would do sth.It is high time that sb did sth.（2）want sb plan to do sth.sb would like to do sth.sb cant wait to do sth.sb desire to do s

12、th.渴望做某事。sb has a great desire to do sth.（3）like sth sb be fond of sth/doing sth.喜欢 sb is crazy about sth/doing sth.sb fall in love with sth.sb爱上sth。（4）good great/wonderful excellent棒极了的，极好的棒极了的，极好的 fantastic棒极了的，极好的棒极了的，极好的 brilliant棒极了的，极好的棒极了的，极好的 fabulous棒极了的，极好的棒极了的，极好的 superb棒极了的，极好的棒极了的，极好的 t

13、errific 棒极了的，极好的棒极了的，极好的 meaningful 有意义的有意义的 educational 有教育意义的有教育意义的（5）beautiful attractive 吸引人的，迷人的 appealing*吸引人的，迷人的 fascinating*吸引人的，迷人的（6）difficult challenging 有挑战性的（7）important vital 重要的，必不可少的 significant*至关重要的 essential*必要的（8）we We teenagers.我们青少年我们青少年 We middle school students我们中学生我们中学生 We

14、English learners 我们英语学习者我们英语学习者（10）very extremely 极端地极端地 surprisingly 令人惊讶地令人惊讶地（9）In my opinion,/I think From my perspective,从我观点看来 From my point of view,.从我观点看来 As far as I am concerned,就我而言 Personally,在我看来,适当运用模板适当运用模板建议信建议信开头开头常用句式：常用句式：I am very happy to hear from you.I am very glad to hear tha

15、t you want to ask some advice/suggestions about.I am writing to express my views on/concerning You have asked for my advice with regard to/on and I will try to make some suggestions.Thank you for trusting me.Its my pleasure to give you some suggestions.结尾常用句式：I hope that my opinions/suggestions are

16、of help to you,and please feel free to contact me for more questions.I am looking forwards to your consideration about my proposals/suggestions/opinions.I will be more than happy to see improvements later.Best wishes(for you).练习：假定你是李华，你的英国朋友练习：假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根

17、据下列要点写回信。下列要点写回信。要点：要点：参加中文学习班；参加中文学习班；看中文书刊、电视；看中文书刊、电视；学唱中文歌曲；学唱中文歌曲；交中国朋友。交中国朋友。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；实战演练Dear _，(I am very happy to hear from you.)I am writing to express my views concerning/with regard to _.First of all,Thank you for trusting me.Meanwhile,Its my pleasure to give y

18、ou some suggestions.Firstly,it would be better if you _Secondly,it would be a good idea for you to _Thirdly,you can also benefit a lot from _.Finally,it is essential that you should_.how to learn Chinese well watch TV and read books,newspapers and magazines.learning and singing Chinese songsmake mor

19、e friends with Chinese people Peter take Chinese courses.,which is one of the most traditional and efficient ways of learning ChineseBy doing this,not only can you get familiar with Chinese culture,but also you will have more chances to improve your Chinese.As is well-known,songs can be relaxing and

20、 therefore may make it possible for you to become more interested in learning Chinese.The more you chat with them in Chinese,the more fluent your Chinese will become.In a word,I _(期待期待)your consideration about suggestions.I hope that my opinions _(会帮助你会帮助你)you.Best wishes(for you)!Yours(sincerely),Li Huaam looking forward to are of great help to