writing高中英文记叙文写作(共21张)课件.ppt

1、narrative writing书面表达 学校生活是我们学生生活的重要部分,在学校我们每天经历很多事情,有的令你难忘,有的让你惊奇,也有的使你遗憾,请以 A/A_ thing(unforgettable,amazing,disappointing)为题,用英语写一篇120词的短文来描述这样的一件事,并谈谈你的感受.How to describe a story?5W1H(who,when,where,what,why,how)first;at the beginning suddenly;and then;after that comments with feeling,deep think

2、ingscene and charactersbeginning,developement,endingIntroductionEvent Conclusion1.2.3.I.Structure In my eyes,并列并列(coordinating relation)转折转折(adversative relation)因果因果(cause and effect relation)其他其他(other relations)and,bothand,as well as but,however,though,while so,therefore,because when,suddenly,imm

3、ediately,as soon as,unfortunately,sothat,finally,as a result,What was worseWhensuddenlyand thenimmediatelyAfter thatComplete the story with linking words below.1.Introduction2.Beginning 3.Development 4.ConclusionWhensuddenlyand thenimmediatelyAfter thatComplete the story with linking words below.Pos

4、sible version:I often stay up late to go over my lessons for the college entrance examinations.Last night I didnt go to bed until 12 oclock.When I woke up this morning,it was already 9 oclock.I got dressed and washed myself quickly.Then I rushed into the living room,where mother was preparing breakf

5、ast.Before she could say anything,I got my schoolbag,ran out and got on my bike.I rode as fast as I could.It seemed only a few minutes before I got to the school gate.To my surprise,it was closed.It was then that I realized it was Sunday today.What an awful day!I really did a foolish thing.John was

6、studying in his room when he heard screaming.When he and his father rushed outside,a man ran from the scene.They discovered Anne Slade,a mother of three,had been stabbed repeatedly.She was lying in her front garden bleeding heavily.Her hands had almost been cut off.John immediatedly asked a number o

7、f people for bandges but nobody could put their hands on any So they used tea towels and tape to treat injuries.He slowed the bleeding by.until.It was Johns.that 少用第一反应词少用第一反应词,多用第二反应词多用第二反应词 1)这件事使我很惊讶。这件事使我很惊讶。It surprised me.2)我非常惭愧。我非常惭愧。I was really ashamed.3)今天是糟糕的一天。今天是糟糕的一天。It was a bad day

8、today.1.Try to retranslate in more vivid English.It was really a terrible shock for me.My face was burning with shame.Today started to go wrong the instant I left home.burning II.language 1.requirement（person,tense）2.details in pictures（5W1H)3.passages with linking words4.ending with feelings(What!H

9、ow!)5.corrections(grammar&spellings)请根据图片所提供的信息以请根据图片所提供的信息以第一人称第一人称用英语写一篇用英语写一篇记叙文记叙文。注意：短文应包括所有图片的主要内容，内容要注意：短文应包括所有图片的主要内容，内容要连贯、完整连贯、完整；长度长度100单词单词左右。左右。1Picture 1why:stay upwhen:9:00AMJune,17where:at homewhat:wake up latewho:IPicture 2get dressedget the schoolbag to school prepare breakfastPicture 3ran outride to school as fast asPicture 4to ones surpriserealizeSundayfindclose