2020年7月浙江高考英语读后续写讲评课件.pptx（无音视频素材）

1、Polar bearsWhen?Where?Who?What?Why?Elli and I;a polar bear one fallthe town of Churchill,Manitoba,Canada A bear came to our camp and tried to get in.Read for the basic information The bear was hungry.Know the parts of a story Resolution冲冲突解决突解决EndingDevelopment发展发展BeginningClimax 高潮高潮 Read for the p

2、lot(情节情节)Resolution冲突解决冲突解决Endingcooked dinnertried defense.kept tearing.sprayed.ran.Development发展发展BeginningClimax 高潮高潮smelled.bread;to camp.bit the wire.？Predict the end 1：A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.2：At that very moment,the helicopter arrived.saved Resolution冲突解决冲突解决Endi

3、ngcooked dinnertried defense.kept tearing.radioed.sprayed.ran.Development发展发展BeginningClimax 高潮高潮smelled.bread;to camp.pulled the fence;bit.1：A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.2：At that very moment,the helicopter arrived.headed backmomenthelicopter arrived Analyze the 2 given sent

4、ences savedResolution冲突解决冲突解决Endingcooked dinnertried defense.kept tearing.radioed.sprayed.ran.Development发展发展BeginningClimax 高潮高潮smelled.bread;to camp.pulled the fence;bit.headed backmomenthelicopter arrivedPara.1Para.2？What happened in the middle of each paragraph?saved.bear headed back Design the

5、 main pointsParagraph 1：Paragraph 2：.savedhelicopter arrived.1.What did the bear do after heading back?2.What object(物品物品)did we use to prevent the bear?3.What was the bears reaction?.1.What did we do then?2.What about the bear?3.How did we feel after we were saved?.Tip 1 生动的动词描写生动的动词描写1.它（熊）的吼叫声（ro

6、ar）在我们周围回响（echo）The bears roar echoed all around us.2.他用后腿站立，推着木栅栏的柱子(post)。It stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.3.在仔细地观察了这片区域之后，熊向前小跑(trot)了几步。After carefully observing the area,the bear trotted forward a few steps.Tip 1 生动的动词描写生动的动词描写4.在我意识到她的意图之前，她把包扔过栅栏，落在远处的灌木丛里 Before

7、 I realized her intentions,she tossed the bag across the fence,which landed in a bush far away.5.我抓起相机，拍下了最后一张熊的照片 I snatched my camera and snapped one last shot of the bear.Tip 2 ing+主谓结构主谓结构1.我们紧紧地抱在一起，害怕地直打哆嗦（shiver）。Shivering with fear,we huddled together.,we huddled together.2.听说我们没有受到任何身体伤害，飞行

8、员让我们待在原地，捂住耳朵。Hearing that we had not suffered any physical injury,the pilot told us to stay put and cover our ears.3.听到直升飞机的声音，我们迅速跑回营地，用颤抖(tremblingtrembling)的声音呼叫我们的救主HearingHearing the helicopter,we ran back to the camp swiftly,and the helicopter,we ran back to the camp swiftly,and radioed our s

9、avior in a trembling voice.radioed our savior in a trembling voice.4.看到北极熊逼近，我吓得呆住了，吓得不敢动。Seeing Seeing the approaching of the polar bear,I froze with terror,too scared to move.Tip 3 -Ed+主谓主谓 1.被熊的吼叫声惊吓住，埃利和我尝试了我们所知道的所有应对熊的防卫措施。Terrified by its roar,Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we k

10、new.2.那只熊被喷雾激怒了，怒吼着迎接我们 Irritated by the spray,the bear greeted us with a howl of rage.3.熊被面包的气味所吸引，向放面包的地方跑去。Attracted by the smell of the bread,the bear run towards where the bread lay.4.一种强烈的恐惧感抓住了我，我能感觉到手心冒汗。Seized by a strong sense of horror,I could feel my palms sweating.Tip 4 With 的复合结构的复合结构1

11、.熊跑远了，我叹了口气，如释重负。With the bear running away,I signed with relief.2.照了这张照片，我感到既轻松又幸运With the picture snapped,I felt both relieved and fortunate.3.我一只手放在栏杆上，向那只熊喷射喷雾。With one hand on the bars,I he fired the spray at the bear.Tip 5 倒装句倒装句 1.我吓得喉咙发紧，双膝发软(so that的倒装)So scared was I that my throat tighten

12、ed and my knees felt weak 2.我的心跳得如此之快以至于我几乎喘不过气来。(so that的倒装)So fast did my heart beat that I could hardly take a breath.3.尽管我很害怕，但我还是鼓起勇气把喷雾器拔了出来。（as 的倒转）Scared as I was,I collected my bravery to pull out the spray.4.无论我们怎么努力，我都无法摆脱那只熊。（as 的倒转）Try as we might,I could not get rid of the bear.范文1 A f

13、ew minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.Roars and screams pierced the silence with needle-like shrillness.The noises turned Elli and I pale with horror.I feared that the giant would destroy our whole fence.He roared repeatedly,shattering what was left of the silence.Elli seized this opport

14、unity to take some pictures of the bear.The animals noises echoed all around us.We betrayed our feelings by huddling together,shivering with fear.After thoroughly scrutinizing the area,he trotted forward a few steps.At that very moment,the helicopter arrived.My heart leaped with joy as I knew we wer

15、e likely to be saved.Elli used pepper spray again to buy us enough time.But this time the bear became more alert.He regarded us with the merciless necessity of hunger,so we throw all the food we have.He then turned away and started devouring.As we were climbing the rope ladder,Elli prayed like thous

16、and times to show thankfulness of being safe and sound.范文2 A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.The furry giant must have gathered his wits,for he suddenly reared up and attacked the fence with ferocious strength,leaving a narrow opening on it.Behind me,Elli muffled a cry of terror.M

17、y eyes were fixed on the intruder.My mind raced like flash as my hands groped for anything that might keep us safe from the bears rampage.Thats when I felt the camera.With little hesitation,I shoved the equipment through the opening as the polar bear closed his jaws on the lens and then pulled my wh

18、ole camera out and smashed it.At that very moment,the helicopter arrived.I ran back to the camp,stumbling a hundred times in my haste.Elli contacted the pilot over the radio.Hearing that we had not suffered any physical injury,the pilot told us to stay put and cover our ears.The harsh whooshing noise of the approaching helicopter spooked the young bear.The animal took a few hesitant steps back and eventually disappeared back towards the lake.Although my camera has met its glorious end,and though all our pictures were lost,our memory of this unexpected encounter remains fresh till this day.