高考英语写作素材：从《绿山墙的安妮》片段挖掘“人物描写”--从“愤怒”到“致歉”.docx

1、高考英语写作素材：从绿山墙的安妮片段挖掘“人物描写”-从“愤怒”到“致歉”人物：安妮：小说的主人公，一个十一岁的小女孩，是个孤儿。不久前被马瑞拉和马修从孤儿院领回家。马瑞拉：收养了安妮的女主人，是个古板严肃的人，对安妮的教育十分严格。马修：和马瑞拉是夫妻，收养了安妮的男主人，是一个善良的人，很宠爱安妮。雷切尔林德：这个片段是蕾切尔太太（林德太太）来到马瑞拉家，看到刚刚被马瑞拉收养地孤儿安妮，就直言不讳地说安妮长得丑。这个片段的故事情节：蕾切尔太太（林德太太）说安妮丑-安妮很愤怒说了一些过激的言辞-蕾切尔太太生气地走了-马瑞拉劝说安妮道歉，安妮不听-马修背着马瑞拉劝说安妮，安妮答应道歉-安妮和马

2、瑞拉上门道歉-取得蕾切尔太太的原谅。1.安妮的愤怒：“Ihate you,she cried in a choked voice, stamping her foot on the floor.我恨你。“她一边用气得几乎说不出话的嗓音叫着，一边用脚跺着地板。2.马瑞拉的惊愕：“Anne!”exclaimed Marilla in consternation.“安妮！”马瑞拉惊恐地大叫。3.安妮怒气不减：But Anne continued toface Mrs Rachel undauntedly, head up,eyes blazing, hands clenched, passionat

3、e indignation exhaling from her like an atmosphere.但安妮继续毫不畏惧地面对蕾切尔太太，她昂起头来，怒火在眼中燃烧，捏紧拳头，满腔的怒火像一股气流般从她体内喷射而出。“How dare you say such things about me!” sherepeated vehemently.“你怎么敢这样说我？”她怒不可遏地重复着。4.蕾切尔太太听到安妮的话感到恐惧：“Didanybody ever see such a temper!”exclaimed the horrified Mrs Rachel.“有谁见过这样脾气大的人！”惊得不知

4、所措的蕾切尔太太大叫道。5.马瑞拉叫安妮回房间：“Annego to your room and stay there until I come up,” said Marilla,recovering her power of speech with difficulty.“安妮，到你房间去，待在那儿等我上去。”马瑞拉好不容易恢复了说话的能力。6.安妮夺门而去：Anne,bursting into tears, rushed to the hall door, slammed ituntil the tins on the porch wall outside rattled in symp

5、athy, andfled throughthe hall and up the stairslike a whirlwind.安妮嚎啕大哭着冲向客厅，砰的一声关上了门，屋外挂在门廊墙上的锡皮听子随之发出叮铃哐啷的声响，然后，她像一阵旋风似的穿过客厅，上了楼。7.蕾切尔太太夺门而出：MrsRachelswept out and away.随即，蕾切尔太太箭步如飞地离去了。8.马瑞拉的不知所措：On the way upstairs shepondered uneasily as to what she ought to do.在上楼的时候她心神不宁地考虑着自己该怎么办。9.马瑞拉发现安妮趴在床

6、上哭泣：Marillafound Anne face downward on her bed,crying bitterly, quite oblivious ofmuddy boots on a clean counterpane.马瑞拉发现安妮脸朝下趴在床上伤心地哭着，安全忘记了她那双沾满烂泥的靴子正落在干净的床罩上。10.安妮听到马瑞拉让她起来之后的动作：Annesquirmed off the bed and sat rigidly on a chairbeside it,her face swollen and tear-stained and her eyes fixed stub

7、bornly on the floor.安妮蠕动着身子从床上下来，僵硬地坐到窗边的一把椅子上，浮肿的脸上挂着泪珠，两只眼睛死死得盯着地板。11.安妮对马瑞拉劝说的反驳：“Shehadnt any right to call me ugly and red-headed,”retorted Anne, evasive and defiant.“她没有权利说我丑，说我是红发女孩。”安妮回避了马瑞拉的问话，不服气地反驳道。接下来是马瑞拉和安妮的对话，对话太长就省略了。12.安妮的心痛和马瑞拉的满腹愁苦：Leavingthis Parthian shaft torankle in Annes stor

8、my bosom, Marilladescended tothe kitchen,grievously troubled in mind and vexed in soul.马瑞拉留下的这几句话回荡在安妮心潮起伏的胸中，让她感到心痛，马瑞拉心神不宁、满腹愁苦地下楼来到厨房。（rankleones bosom使心痛）13.马修偷摸地来到安妮的房间打算劝说安妮：Hetiptoedalong the hall and stood for several minutes outside the door of the east gable before he summoned courage tota

9、p on it with his fingersand the open the door topeep in. 他踮着脚走过走廊，在东山墙屋外站了几分钟，最后他鼓起勇气用手指敲了敲门，然后推开门向里面偷偷望去。马修对按你的劝说，内容省略。劝说成功。14.安妮先对马瑞拉道歉，马瑞拉的反应：“Very well.” Marillascrispness gave no sign of her relief.马瑞拉很简要地答着，并未流露出任何的宽慰之情。15.安妮出现在蕾切尔太太面前的反应：Thenthe radiance vanished.Mournful penitence appeared o

10、n every feature. Before a word was spoken Anne suddenlywent down on her kneesbefore the astonished Mrs Rachel andheld out her hands beseechingly.紧接着，安妮的喜悦消失了。痛苦的悔恨之情浮现在脸上的每一部分。未等开口说话，安妮突然跪倒了惊讶不已的林德太太面前，哀求着深处双手。“Oh, Mrs Lynde, I am so extremely sorry,” she saidwith a quiver in her voice. “I could nev

11、er express my sorrow.”“噢，林德太太，我真的难过极了。”她用颤抖的嗓音说到，“我无法表达心中的悲伤.”安妮垂下头等着宣判：Anneclasped her hands together, bowed her head, and waited for the word of judgment.安妮紧握双手，垂下头，等待着宣判。16.林德太太的反应：Sheonly perceived thatAnnehad made a very thorough apology andall resentment vanished from her kindly, if somewhat officious,heart.她只感到了安妮做了一个非常彻底的道歉，所有的忿恨从她那颗虽说有些好管闲事却很仁慈的心中消失了。“There,there, get up, child,” shesaid heartily. “ Of course I forgive you.” “好啦，好啦，起来吧，孩子，”她热情地说道，“我当然原谅你.”17.得到原谅的安妮的反应：“Oh, Mrs Lynde!” Annedrew a long breath as she rose to her feet. “噢，林德太太！”安妮深深呼了一口气，站了起来。