Writing-读后续写技巧讲解--2023届高三英语写作专项.pptx

1、读后续写读后续写The Continuation Writing The best preparation for future is doing your best today.做好当下是对未来最好的准备！三大原则三大原则四个步骤四个步骤读后续写读后续写写作指导写作指导1.原文一致原则内容要前后衔接,上下连贯,语言表达风格一致。2.正能量原则（结局性）故事内容一定要正能量,故事的结局是美满的。如:迷路了;但最终一定回到了家;失败了或遇到困难了,但最终一定成功了等。3.曲折性原则（过程性）凡是故事都应有跌宕起伏，其中人物会遇到困难或问题，但最终能解决。写作指导 三大原则一、读懂大意，理清脉络读

2、所给的不完整故事，弄清大意和主题，理清故事的主要人物和事件。二、细读首句，构思框架 仔细阅读所给每段的首句，结合正能量结尾，思考大致框架。三、增加细节，开始写作依据情节和常识，在确定的框架内，可按“所见/所遇/所想/所为/所感”等构思具体细节。四、修改润色，整洁誊写把修正润色后的续写整洁地写入答卷。四个步骤 实战演练：读后续写实战演练：读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Mike licked the last of the mint chocolate chip ice cream.It was almost time

3、to leave.He jumped into the car with his parents and headed off to the Olympic-sized pool for the big swim meet.When his race came up,Mike was confident.He was strong and swift.Mike climbed out the pool smiling.He had just won first place,making him the fastest boy in his age group “Congratulations,

4、son,“his father said.His mom gave him a hug,even though he was soaking wet.A week later,it was time for another swim meet.Like before.Mike decided to enioy his favorite ice cream flavor.Mike remembered that the last time he had won a race he also ate mint chocolate chip ice cream first.Maybe hed win

5、 again.Hes taken first place again in his race(比赛).Mike was feeling pretty good.As it turned out,Mike decided to have some mint chocolate chip ice cream before every one of the next few swim meets.He began to think of it as his lucky charm(幸运符).After sever a months of placing in the top positions of

6、 every race he swam,Mike was feeling unbeatable.And he wouldnt admit it,but all that ice cream was adding a few pounds to his athletic swimmers build.It didnt take long after that for Mike to start coming in second place-and then third-and then last place in his races.The lucky mint chocolate chip i

7、ce cream had lost its magic.On the day of his next swim meet his mother sat down at the table with him“Mike,we all love ice cream,but its not healthy for your body to eat so much of it.Maybe its time to quit(放弃)the sweet treats for a while,especially before you go swimming.Mike unwillingly agreed.He

8、 went to the swim meet,and didnt perform well.His father offered to go running with him a few days a week to help him feel better and strengthen his muscles.The extra weight soon disappeared,and Mike found himself breathing easier at swim practices.It was the last meet of the season and Mike wasnt s

9、ure what to expect.He felt healthy again,but he didnt know if he still had any speed in the pool.Paragaph1:As hedove into the water,he kicked his legs and stretched his arms as far ashe could._Paragraph 2:His jaw(下巴)dropped as he realized he had beaten his own best time,and everyone else too._Possib

10、ilities:(success/failure)What he was feeling now?Have any ideas in his mind?Part 01 读懂大意，理清脉络 主要是根据记叙文的六要素弄清文章大意，特别要弄清故事的人物，时态(通常是一般过去时)，事件(故事的起因和经过)，语言特色(以便在续写时语言(特色前后一致，保持不变)，等等。变化：人物、时态、事件 不变：语言、特色whowhatwherewhenwhy（起因）（起因）ThemeMike,his parents,teammates The boy believed that the mint ice cream

11、could bring luck to him.In the sports meetDuring the gameThe boy won the first place because he ate the mint ice creamdiligent/hard-working(勤奋勤奋)第一步，通读全文，理清脉络CharactersTense(时态)EventsMike,his parents,teammates Simple past tense（一般过去式）Mike licked the last of the mint chocolate chip ice cream,He had j

12、ust won first place.Mike decided to enioy his favorite ice cream flavor,hed win again.Mike began to think of it as his lucky charm.After sever a months of placing in the top positions of every race he swam,Mike was feeling unbeatable.It didnt take long after that for Mike to start coming in second p

13、lace-and then third-and then last place in his races.His mother quit the sweet treats during the sports meet and his dad helped his son how to scientifically.Main idea 通过阅读所给文章可知，文章讲述了一个男孩通过阅读所给文章可知，文章讲述了一个男孩因为吃了一只因为吃了一只薄荷巧克力冰淇凌而在运动会上取胜，之后每次都在运动会上尝薄荷巧克力冰淇凌而在运动会上取胜，之后每次都在运动会上尝试该动作，结果都能获胜，所以笃信冰淇凌是他的幸运

14、符试该动作，结果都能获胜，所以笃信冰淇凌是他的幸运符。然而然而之后接二连三的失败让他产生了自我怀疑，最后在他父母的引导之后接二连三的失败让他产生了自我怀疑，最后在他父母的引导下，走上了正确科学锻炼的道路。下，走上了正确科学锻炼的道路。Make prediction Part 02 细读首句，构思框架两段首句定一框由续写的第一段首句与第二段首句确定第一段的框架。二框二首正能量第二段的框架，由第二段首句与正能量结尾来确定。两段首句定一框即由续写的第一段首句与第二段首句确定第一段的框架。即由续写的第一段首句与第二段首句确定第一段的框架。Paragraph 1:As he dove into the

15、water,he kicked his legs and stretched his arms as far as he could.Paragraph 2:His jaw(下巴)dropped as he realized he had beaten his own best time,and everyone else too.由第一段首句可知，在他家人的帮助下，他已经开始摆脱了幸运符的困扰，坚信只有勤奋努力才能成功，并尽他所能去争取成功。而从第二句首句从他和其他人惊掉下巴的神情可知，他已经获得了成功。而在本段还可添加合理的细节来丰富内容，如男孩参加比赛时的心理变化、之前的锻炼经历等，注意

16、结尾要与下段语义衔接。二框二首正能量第二段的框架，由第二段首句与正能量结尾来确定。第二段的框架，由第二段首句与正能量结尾来确定。Paragraph 2:His jaw(下巴)dropped as he realized he had beaten his own best time,and everyone else too.由第一段框架+第二段首句可知，这一定是一个正能量的结尾。可在首句后描写从他和其他人惊掉下巴的神情可知，他已经获得了成功。还可以结合前面正文的内容来写，如感恩父母的辛勤付出和自己的刻苦训练，并得出只有刻苦锻炼才能获得成功。Part 03 增加细节，开始写作在已定框架范围内，

17、依据情节发展和生活常识，推断故事中人物所见、所闻、所思、所说、所做等给每段增加5至8个具体细节 我们称之为叫“五八细节添加法”。构思即根据构思的大致框架，推断故事中人物所见、所思、所说、所做即根据构思的大致框架，推断故事中人物所见、所思、所说、所做等每段增加五至八个具体细节或叫等每段增加五至八个具体细节或叫“58细节法细节法”Paragraph 1:As he dove into the water,he kicked his legs and stretched his arms as far as he could.所做所做热身运动热身运动所思所思锻炼的艰辛和锻炼的艰辛和对自己获取成对自己

18、获取成功的信心。功的信心。Paragraph 2:His jaw(下巴)dropped as he realized he had beaten his own best time,and everyone else too.所做所做击败对手击败对手所思所思获得成功，笑颜开来获得成功，笑颜开来所闻所闻惊掉下巴惊掉下巴注意:1.写作时注意细节描写，如描述人物的动作、神态和心情。2.贯彻一致性原则。除内容上要语义衔接，上下连贯外，语言风格也要一致，如使用分词短语和从句。3.注意使用关联词语。Part 04修改润色,整洁誊写审读初稿，注意语义是否衔接，前后是否连贯，事件是否符合逻辑语言特色是否与前文

19、一致。在修改润色之后，整齐工整地誊写在答卷上。Paragraph 1:As he dove into the water,he kicked his legs and stretched his arms as far as he could.Endless energy and motivation filled him.(心情)This is where I belong.I can win the race,he thought.His teeth clenched and his eyes fixed on the finish line forward.(内心独白)Suddenly,

20、two figures whizzed past,which startled him.(心情变化)Fearing to fall behind,he felt his heart pounding frantically and his mind went blank.(解释心情变化和问题)Just then,he thought of his sweat and his fathers encouraging smile.(问题的解决方法)Gradually,his worry gave way to his confidence and the last five minutes saw

21、 him dash to the finish line,followed by the end of the race.(衔接句)Paragraph 2:His jaw(下巴)dropped as he realized he had beaten his own best time,and everyone else too._ The flowers in his heart were already in bloom.(心情变化)However,he knew he deserved the honor of championship.(拓展)His parents came up a

22、nd gave him a high five,grinning from ear to ear.(次要角色的回应)“Hey,why not try your favorite ice cream and celebrate!”said his father,patting him on the shoulder.(对话1)“Thanks,Dad,but I have given up the ice cream.Its not such a lucky charm at all.”His eyes shone with wisdom.(对话2)It was that day that Mike realized that ones lucky charm was nothing but his diligence.(照应开头的主旨句)GOOD DAY