九年级中考英语总复习-作文讲评课件(共15张).pptx

1、English Composition 英语作文 书面表达：书面表达：近来，天津市正在创建全国文明城市，这一话题在我校引起了热近来，天津市正在创建全国文明城市，这一话题在我校引起了热烈讨论。作为一名中学生，请根据下面提示信息给学校英语专栏写一篇短文，烈讨论。作为一名中学生，请根据下面提示信息给学校英语专栏写一篇短文，呼吁大家如何为创建文明城市贡献力量。呼吁大家如何为创建文明城市贡献力量。1.见面跟人打招呼见面跟人打招呼 2.与同学友好相处与同学友好相处 3.保持教室及社区环境卫生保持教室及社区环境卫生 4.帮助家人做力所能及的事帮助家人做力所能及的事 5.在公共场合遵守秩序在公共场合遵守秩序

2、6.如果友人不遵守规则，你会如果友人不遵守规则，你会 要求要求:书写规范，语句通顺，行文流畅，结构完整，语法正确书写规范，语句通顺，行文流畅，结构完整，语法正确 词数词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数 短文应包括所有要点，不要逐字翻译，但可适当发挥。短文应包括所有要点，不要逐字翻译，但可适当发挥。2018年九年级模拟考试英语作文提示词：话题话题 issue全国文明城市社区全国文明城市社区the national civilized city遵守公共秩序遵守公共秩序obey public order绝望型抄写型奋斗型精英型Problems in your w

3、riting 要点不全词数太少无头无尾缺少过渡语法错误书写潦草卷面涂改 书面整洁干净，行文连贯通顺，句式多样，语法基本无误或有少量语法错误。We had better help our parents do the housework which we can do.(季建雯)Its our duty to protect our environment.(周晶美)We should do something we can do to builda national civilized city.(郭爽)Its a good idea to get on well with others.(姚

4、春情)Its important to keep our community clean.(季雅杰)评分标准：评分标准：第五档（13-15分）能能写明全部要点写明全部要点，文，文章中章中语法无误语法无误，行文，行文连贯且通顺连贯且通顺，表达，表达清清楚且丰富楚且丰富。第四档（10-12分）能写明全部或能写明全部或大部分内容要点大部分内容要点，文中有，文中有少少量量语法语法错误错误，行文，行文基本基本连贯，表达基本清连贯，表达基本清楚。楚。第三档（7-9分）能写明能写明部分部分内容要点内容要点,文中有文中有较多较多语法错误，语法错误，尚能达意尚能达意。第二档（4-6分）只能写出只能写出少部分少部

5、分内容要点，文中有内容要点，文中有许多许多语语法错误，只有法错误，只有个别个别句子可读。句子可读。第一档（0-3分）只能写出语所要求内容有关的只能写出语所要求内容有关的一些单词一些单词或或1-21-2个要点个要点。正确抄写全部参考词汇给。正确抄写全部参考词汇给1 1分；分；写出相关要点的词组给写出相关要点的词组给2-32-3分。分。评分：评分：_ _ 理由：理由：_ Version 1:First,students say hello when they people.Second,students are friendly to anybody.Third,students should k

6、eep the environment is clean in class and in community.Fourth,students have better help parents to do housework.In public,we must obey public order.Finally,when you met somebody not to obey order.You must stop his.and you can tell he right is action.7 Version 2:English textbooks play an important pa

7、rt in our study of English.They can help us learn English well.It can also help open our minds and make our school life colorful.Weve learned many wonderful things in the world in our textbooks.We also learnt a lot about cultures around the world.My favorite person is Spud Webb.Ive learned a lot fro

8、m him.评分标准：评分标准：第五档（13-15分）能能写明全部要点写明全部要点，文，文章中章中语法无误语法无误，行文，行文连贯且通顺连贯且通顺，表达，表达清清楚且丰富楚且丰富。第四档（10-12分）能写明全部或能写明全部或大部分内容要点大部分内容要点，文中有，文中有少少量量语法语法错误错误，行文，行文基本基本连贯，表达基本清连贯，表达基本清楚。楚。第三档（7-9分）能写明能写明部分部分内容要点内容要点,文中有文中有较多较多语法错误，语法错误，尚能达意尚能达意。第二档（4-6分）只能写出只能写出少部分少部分内容要点，文中有内容要点，文中有许多许多语语法错误，只有法错误，只有个别个别句子可读。

9、句子可读。第一档（0-3分）只能写出语所要求内容有关的只能写出语所要求内容有关的一些单词一些单词或或1-21-2个要点个要点。正确抄写全部参考词汇给。正确抄写全部参考词汇给1 1分；分；写出相关要点的词组给写出相关要点的词组给2-32-3分。分。评分：评分：_ _ 理由：理由：_13 Version 2:As a middle school student,we should do something we can do to build the national civilized city.Here is some advice for us.First of all,when we me

10、et someone,we should say hello to them.And we should get on well with our classmates.Second,we had better keep our classroom and community clean.Because we should protect our environment.At last,we must obey public order in public places.If someone against the rules,we should stop him and tell him a

11、bout the rules.If everyone can do something,our city will become better and better.u语法知识混乱，运用不够准确语法知识混乱，运用不够准确代词代词:We must stop he from doing it.You should get on well with you classmates.时态时态:I believe our city get better and better.主谓主谓一致一致:If someone dont obey the rules,词性：词性：We mustnt against th

12、e rules.习惯习惯搭配搭配:We should be friendly with others.We should keep clean the classroom.him will get better and better.break doesnttoTypical mistakes(典型错误)yourkeep the classroom clean.u 句型结构句型结构 Chinglish 现象现象 I very like Tianjin.When we at schoolIf have people doesnt obey public orderare at school li

13、ke Tianjin very much.If someone doesnt obey public orderRecently,Tianjin is building the civilized city.At our school,we are talking about this issue.Then what can we do to help build the national civilized city?First,I think it is polite to say hello when we meet someone.And also we should get on w

14、ell with our classmates.Second,keep our classrooms and community clean so that we can live in a comfortable environment.And as a student,we should help parents do something we can do.Whats more,when we are in public,we should always obey public order.And if someone doesnt obey public order,its our d

15、uty to stop him and tell him to do the right thing.In my opinion,Tianjin is our hometown,so lets try our best to make it a better place and help build the national civilized city.英语作文万能的三段式“观点-事例-总结“Standard of a good compositionNo mistakes没有错误没有错误 Enough content内容充足内容充足Fine language语言丰富语言丰富Beautifu

16、l handwriting书写工整书写工整1.You should do2.You had better do3.Its a good idea to do4.Its better to do5.Its important/necessary to do6.Lets try our best to do 7.Its our duty to do Give advice（提建议）You are supposed to do Try to express in a different way书面表达：为了响应天津市创建全国卫生城市的号召，书面表达：为了响应天津市创建全国卫生城市的号召，我校开了我校开了“绿色城市，健康生活绿色城市，健康生活”为主题的英文征文活为主题的英文征文活动。请你以动。请你以“The greener city,the healthy life”为题，为题，根据下列提示信息，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，根据下列提示信息，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇写一篇80词左右的英语短文。词左右的英语短文。骑车出行，减少空气污染骑车出行，减少空气污染 不随地吐痰不随地吐痰,不在公共场所吸烟不在公共场所吸烟 垃圾入箱垃圾入箱,保持城市卫生保持城市卫生 多种树多种树,保护自然环境保护自然环境 （你的观点）（你的观点）