人教版高中英语复习课件：写作技巧.ppt

1、What makes a good composition?如何使你的写作如何使你的写作“亮瞎眼亮瞎眼”?1.Structure a text；2.Develop a paragraph;3.Have proper dictions.Coming up next1.Structure a textCollection（列举法）（列举法）In order of time/space;Journalistic writing(who/what/where/when/why)Cause/effect（因果关系法）（因果关系法）causes and effectsProblem/solution（问题

2、求解法）（问题求解法）Problems and solutionsComparison（比较对照法）（比较对照法）One view；another opposing view1.【2012安徽卷】假设美国某中学的学生明天来你校访问交流，主题是高中生对文、理科的选择。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，向他们介绍你所做的选择，并说明选择的理由。1.Structure a textA.Collection（列举法）B.cause/effect（因果关系法）C.problem/solution（问题求解法）D.comparison（比较对照法）2.【2012年11月苏州高三】从南京“彭宇案”开始，社会就陷入助人

3、恐惧中，最近，你们班就是否应该帮助陌生人展开了讨论，同学们就这一话题意见不一，你的看法如何？3.【2011全国卷I】假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请写一封信。Coming up next.1.Structure a text；2.Develop a paragraph;3.Have proper dictions.Basic elements（对象分析法）（对象分析法）Element 1（对象一）（对象一）Element 2（对象二）（对象二）Element（对象（对象）Analysis 1（分析一）（分析一）

4、Analysis 2（分析二）（分析二）Analysis（分析（分析）2.Develop a paragraph 生活中冲突时有发生。假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执,导致关系紧张。请你结合此事,并根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,向学校英文报Happy Teens冶专栏投稿。简要描述简要描述事情的经过事情的经过打篮球、碰撞、争执打篮球、碰撞、争执,等等等等分析发生分析发生冲突的原因冲突的原因1.1.遇事不够冷静遇事不够冷静2.2.谈谈避免谈谈避免冲突的做法冲突的做法(请考生根据自己的经历或请考生根据自己的经历或感想感想,提出至少两种做法提出至少两种做法)例一：2.Develop a pa

5、ragraphReasons for the conflictElementsAnalysis2.Develop a paragraphFeelings at that time（当时的情绪）Care about losing and winning（对输赢的认识）Ways of handling conflicts（处理冲突的方法）Personal qualities（个人的思想境界）Understanding of a tough game（对剧烈体育运动的理解）例一：Five questions:Q1:Did they understand basketball is a tough g

6、ame where pushing and bumping are very common?Q2:Did they care too much about winning and losing?Q3:Were they too self-centered?Were they considerate enough?Q4:Were they calm enough when the conflict happened?Q5:Did they handle the conflict wisely after it happened?The conflict arose from the follow

7、ing factors.First,they didnt understand basketball is a tough game where pushing and bumping are very common.Second,they cared too much about winning and losing.Third,they were too self-centered and not considerate enough.Fourth,they were not calm enough to handle the conflict in a wise way when the

8、 conflict happened.你校正在进行“英语读书周”活动，该活动要求学生摘录名言佳句（quote）并相互交流。以下是某同学摘录的句子：“Your future depends on many things,but mostly on you”。请按下列要求用英语写一篇短文。1.针对摘录句谈谈你的看法；2.举例说明理由。2.Develop a paragraphYour future depends on many things,but mostly on you.ElementsAnalysisyour futuremany thingsmostly on you例二：3 ques

9、tions:Q1:What is your future about?(to be successful;to realize my dream;to reach a goal;to be famous;to make great contributions to society,etc.)Q2.Your future is affected by many factors.What are they?(They include great help from others,good opportunities,in-born talent;a good health;good educati

10、on,etc.)Q3:Of all the factors,which one is the most important?And why?(The most important one is our hard work,strong determination,perseverance,positive attitude,etc.)Can we achieve great success in the future?Well,it is determined by many things,such as great help from other,good opportunities,in-

11、born talent,a good health,good education.However,of all these factors,our strong determination,positive attitude hard work play a more important role in realizing our dream.假设美国某中学的学生明天来你校访问交流，主题是高中生对文、理科的选择。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，向他们介绍你所做的选择，并说明选择的理由。2.Develop a paragraphReasons for choosing arts/scienceEleme

12、ntsAnalysisyour interestyour dreamothers influencecharacteristics of arts/science例三：There are some reasons accounting for my choice.First,arts lessons,full of famous people and events,are extremely interesting and enjoyable while abstract concepts and calculation in science lessons are very boring.S

13、econd,the choice of arts can help me achieve my childhood dream of becoming a lawyer or translator.Third,I am better at arts than science,which will enable me to perform well in college entrance exams and get admitted to my dream university.First,science graduates are in greater demand than arts one

14、s in China.Second,the science major can help me achieve my childhood dream of becoming a scientist.Third,my parents wish me to study science at college because they believe I will have a brighter future as a science student.Last but not least,my physics teacher is my role model,whose influence on me

15、 has a lot to do with my decision.漫画作文漫画作文elementsAnalysis漫画漫画里面里面漫画漫画后面后面漫画漫画前面前面2.Develop a paragraph漫画里面的内容粗线条简单描述漫画后面的道理简单概括并拔高漫画前面的你我该怎么想如何做 假定你是某中学生英语报的小记者；以下漫画内容是你的所见所闻,谙根据要求写一篇英语短文投稿。漫画作文漫画作文漫画里面漫画里面漫画后面漫画后面漫画前面漫画前面2.Develop a paragraphNo littering!啊，多美的景色！例四：One possible version:Mind Your B

16、ehavior in Public Places Last Sunday,I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park.The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring,with the sun shining and birds singing.When I was enjoying the fantastic scenery around,something unpleasant caught my eye.A young couple in a boat were

17、eating,talking and laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world.Whats worse,they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake,totally ignoring the noticeable sign No Littering nearby.What a shame!Such behavior left me deep in thought.If all visitors to the Fairy Lake Park do as the coup

18、le did,the lake will be severely polluted and soon turned into a huge dustbin.I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places.Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.Coming up next.1.Structure a text；2.Develop a paragraph;3.Have proper dictions.【201120

19、11天津卷天津卷】假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华。你校将于假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华。你校将于6 6月月2626日日接待来自于美国某中学的学生访问团。你受学校委托，负责安排在津接待来自于美国某中学的学生访问团。你受学校委托，负责安排在津的一日活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给该团的领队的一日活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给该团的领队Smith Smith 先生写一先生写一封电子邮件，介绍活动计划并简要说明理由，最后征求对方意见。封电子邮件，介绍活动计划并简要说明理由，最后征求对方意见。(1)Extend a sentence方法一：补充与拓展（B篇）1.上午与我校学生座谈；（拓展目的）In or

20、der to_,well have a talk in the morning.2.中午与我校学生共同进餐；（补充信息）We will have lunch together in the school dining hall,where _.3.下午与我校学生游览海河。（补充信息）In the afternoon,we will visit the Haihe River,which _.【备注】天津考生肯定知道，河海是中国第七大河流，风景优美。We should learn to achieve a balance between work and rest.Just as a sayin

21、g goes,_.all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.(1)Extend a sentence方法二：添加名言警句(A)【2012浙江卷】你校正在进行“英语读书周”活动，该活动要求学生摘录名言佳句并相互交流。以下是某同学摘录的句子：“Your future depends on many things,but mostly on you”。请按要求用英语写一篇短文。Our future is determined by many things,such as opportunities and help form others,but our

22、own attitude,determination and hard work play a more role.Were the master of our own future.Just as a saying goes,_God helps those who help themselves.(1)Extend a sentence方法二：添加名言警句(C)1.We want to give him a surprise,so everyone should keep quiet about the thing.(2012全国)2.The economy is developing f

23、ast,and more and more people can afford private cars.（2012无锡模拟）3.We shouldnt blame each other.We should communicate more and put ourselves in others shoes.（2012江苏）变化句子的开头(2)Make it unique方法三：九寨沟以美丽的自然风光闻名。Jiuzhai Valley is well-known for its beautiful natural scenery.(2)Make it unique方法四：使用高级词汇More

24、and more people like folk music,even dogs.lI suggest that lI believe that lI hope that lI support that las is shown in the picturelhave a(an)effect onlmake a difference to ltake measures tolplay a role in lsincerelylfullylstronglylvividlylfirmlylbiglprofoundlvitalleffective(2)Make it unique方法五：小词巧用汉

25、语（复杂思维）汉语（复杂思维）英语（傻瓜思维）英语（傻瓜思维）你是一个好人。你真坏！You are not my type.I dont like you.Yes,I love you.(3)Say what I mean例一：柳永的雨霖铃柳永的雨霖铃寒蝉凄切，对长亭晚，骤雨初歇寒蝉凄切，对长亭晚，骤雨初歇 不入虎穴，焉得虎子。【傻瓜思维】要做出大事，就得敢于冒险。(3)Say what I mean 祝大家高考金榜题名。【傻瓜思维】祝高考取得好成绩，上到一个好大学。例二：【直译】The school held a campaign called Five talks Four beautie

26、s Three Loves【解释】The school held a campaign to _.improve students moral standards(3)Say what I mean五讲：讲文明、讲礼貌、讲卫生、讲秩序、讲道德四美：心灵美、语言美、行为美、环境美三热爱：热爱祖国、热爱社会主义、热爱中国共产党1.学校开展了“五讲四美三热爱”树新风活动。2.我们班开展了“比学赶超”的学英语活动。Our class held a campaign to _.encourage us to learn English actively 例三：1.我们要关爱空巢老人old people who live alone(3)Say what I mean2.他是一个留守儿童。He stays with _ in the village while his parents work _.例四：