2021届中考英语冲刺复习--书面表达技巧课件.pptx

1、2021届中考英语冲刺精品复习书面表达技巧一份耕耘，一分收获一份耕耘，一分收获 If you plant a good seed in spring,you will have a good harvest in autumn.Welcome to our class!作文是会呼吸的痛作文是会呼吸的痛它活在试卷最后的角落它活在试卷最后的角落看别人写会痛看别人写会痛自己写会痛自己写会痛反正都会痛反正都会痛.Step 1Look carefully and find the key words仔细审题，找出关键词Decide which tense to use确定时态、人称审出主题和写作类型健康

2、很重要。在学习和健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告调查报告,并提倡大家并提倡大家进行假日休闲。进行假日休闲。travelstay at homevisit friends or parentswork列列列出写作提纲 用简单的句子或短语用简单的句

3、子或短语列出列出文章要文章要点。点。如何度假如何度假 调查报告调查报告 提倡假日休闲提倡假日休闲Step 2 How do people spend their vacation?A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.Enjoy your vacation.travelstay at homevisit friends or parentswork 如何度假如何度假 调查报告调查报告 倡议假日休闲倡议假日休闲加加St

4、ep 3a nice heada nice tail a nice bodya nice dogA lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.加加 加首尾加首尾，使结构完整。采取总分总总分总结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。Step 3a nice heada nice tail a nice bodya nice dogA lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.S

5、ome other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our survey report.Please enjoy your vacation.People can keep healthy and work well.How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our survey report.A lot of pe

6、ople travel.Some people stay at home.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.Please enjoy your vacation.People can keep healthy and work well.a good composition连连恰当运用关联词语，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。Step 41.表示并列或递进表示并列或递进:and,also,as well as,bothand,not onlybut also,neithernor;2.表示选择表示选择:

7、or,eitheror;3.表示转折表示转折:but,however,although,though,after all,4.表示因果表示因果:because,because of,so,as a result,5.表示条件表示条件:if,unless6.表示对比表示对比:instead,notbut,on the one handon the other hand;7.表示列举表示列举:for example,such as,8.表示顺序表示顺序:to begin with,firstly,first(of all),second(ly),next,later,since then,from

8、 then on,finally,in the end;9.表示强调表示强调:also,besides,whats more,actually,in fact,10.表示结论表示结论:all in all,altogether,in a word,generally speaking,1._ I am tired,I keep on working till midnight.2.He didnt go to movies,he went to the concert _.3.We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming,running and hiking

9、.4.Reading _ makes us happy_ makes us know more.Thoughinsteadsuch asnot onlybut also How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our survey report.According to the survey,a lot of people travel.And some people stay at home.Also some other people visit friends or parents.However,a

10、 few people work.All in all,different people have different ways to relax themselves.Please enjoy your vacation.People can keep healthy and work well.连连美美选好词句，美化美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。Step 5Task2 Make your sentences correct1.I very like English.2.We should do sport a week once.3.Save the environment

11、 is our duty.4.There is going to have a meeting today.once a weekSavingbevery much.查找拼写、语法等方面的错误查找拼写、语法等方面的错误In a Monday morning,Mr.Smith got upat seven thirty and put up the clothes.He wishes his face and brushed his tooth.It was a querter past eight.He said good-bye to his wife.He didnt catch the

12、busbecause there were many people sat on the bus.He ran to work,he gave the letters to the people who waited forthem.He goes home at four.He weretired,but he was happy.Ononwashedteethquarterwassitting或去掉andwentTask 3 Express in different ways1.Parents really wish us to work hard.Parents reallywish u

13、s to put our heart into study.2.The sweater is very dear.I cant afford it.The sweater is so dear that I cant afford it.3.We should often introduce some good books.We should often introduce some books which are useful.4.We should learn English grammar.Its important to learn English grammar.We intervi

14、ewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our survey report.According to the survey,a lot of people travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.And some people like to stay at home,like watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.Some people visit friend

15、s or parents,because they think it can also make them relaxed.However,a few people have to work.All in all,different people have different ways to relax themselves.I suggest that we should enjoy the holiday.People who relax well can keep healthy and work well.美美 How do people spend their vacation?We

16、 made a suevey 书面表达写作技巧书面表达写作技巧列列加加连连美美？养眼养眼爽心爽心书面表达写作技巧书面表达写作技巧列列加加连连美美？誊誊 为了更好地开展年全民阅读活动，有关部门就如何为市民创造良好的阅读环境广泛征求意见，你班将举行一次英语主题班会来讨论这个话题。请你写一篇发言稿，提出自己的想法和建议。要点提示：要点提示：1.阅读的好处：2.你的建议（如：建更多小型图书馆，经常性地介绍好书等）3.要求：要求：1.词数：80词左右开头，开头已给出，不计入总词数 2.文中不能出现自己的名字和所在学校的名称。Hello,my dear friends.As we all know,rea

17、ding is very important to us.Reading makes us happy.Reading makes us know more.To make people love reading,I have some good advice.We should build more small libraries.We should often introduce some good books to others.Seats in the libraries should be more comfortable.People will love reading books

18、.They will often go to libraries.I hope my advice is useful.Lets read now!Reading not only makes us happy but also makes us know more.To make people love reading,I have some good advice.To begin with,we should build more small libraries.Whats more,we should often introduce some good books to others.

19、Finally,seats in the libraries should be more comfortable.People will love reading books.They will often go to libraries.I hope my advice is useful.Lets read now!Reading not only makes us happy but also makes us know more.In oder to make people love reading,I have some good advice.To begin with,I th

20、ink we are supposed to build more small libraries.Whats more,We are expected to introduce some books which are useful to others.Finally,seats in the libraries should be more comfortable.If the seats are more comfortable,people will love reading.They will often go to libraries.I hope my advice is use

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