高考英语一轮复习之应用文写作祝贺信-课件-.pptx

1、Congratulation Letter1Dear John:So youre a year older today-or dont you want to be reminded?Anyway,congratulations and best wishes.If you feel like holding a celebration,will you let me take you to dinner and the movies,as a sort of birthday treat?You name the day.And in the meantime,many happy retu

2、rns!Cordially,Peter2Dear Mr.Wang,On the occasion of the 35th anniversary of your National Day,please accept our heartiest congratulations.May the trade connections between our countries continue to develop with each passing day!Yours faithfullyCongratulations on a birthdayCongratulations on a festiv

3、al4Dear Henry,I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations on your admission into the Biology Department of Beijing University as a postgraduate.As your close friend,I just want you to know how lucky I am to be able to share your pride and how pleased I am at your admission.In my view,your hard

4、work and persistence contribute to your successful admission,which is a reward that you richly deserve.I am sure you will make a greater progress in your study and obtain a bright future in your life.I wish you greater success and I am looking forward to good news from you soon.Best Wishes,Li Ming3D

5、ear Mr.Li:I learned from Wang Ying that you were graduated with high honors from Suzhou University yesterday.So I am writing to extend to you my utmost congratulations.I can well imagine how proud your parents are now,who have been anxiously hoping to witness your brilliant success.As I understand,y

6、ou will continue studies in the United States soon.I wish you greater success in your studies and research work.With best wishes.Yours sincerely,GeorgeCongratulations on graduationCongratulations on admissionCongratulations on winning a game/contestCongratulations on promotion5Dear Jerry，I hear that

7、 you have won the first prize in the English Contest for middle school students,so I am writing to send my congratulations to you from the bottom of my heart.As your good friend,I am so proud of you!I know you have always been hard-working and now your efforts have paid off.Your pronounciation and f

8、luent English,especially your beautiful voice must have left the audience and the judges a deep impression.I hope that I can be successful like you one day.So could you share with me how you improve your English?Your experience will be of great help to me.I will appreciate it if you can write me bac

9、k and give me you advice.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua6Dear Mr.Minister Allow me to convey my congratulations on your promotion to Minister of Trade.I am delighted that many years of service you have given to your country should have been recognized and appreciated.We wish you suc

10、cess in your new post and look forward to closer cooperation with you in the development of trade between our two countries.Sincerely日常生活中，无论是亲朋好友毕业、晋升、获奖、开业，还是订婚、结婚、生、乔迁，都需要写上一封信向对方表示祝贺。信中应表示为对方而高兴，语言充满真诚和热情，收信人读后会感到喜悦和振奋。祝贺信既可以正式写，也可以随便写，具体视场合而定。对不太熟悉的朋友适合正式写，以表示礼貌和尊重；对熟悉的朋友则可以随便一些。但无论采用哪种方式，祝贺信必须

11、表达由衷的感情，而且写信要及时。祝贺信是社交中的一种礼仪性信函。通常包括以下几个方面的内容：1、说明祝贺事由，表达热烈、诚挚的祝贺；2、围绕祝贺事件表述贺喜内容；3、表达美好祝福。生日 birthday 毕业 graduation 入学 admission into a school 获奖 winning a game/contest 晋升 promotion .Core words&phrases congratulate/congratulations on celebrate/celebration admire/admiration success/succeed/successful

12、(in)make great/significant progress come true hard-working/diligent/diligence show great interest in further success 祝贺庆祝钦佩、仰慕成功取得显著进步成为现实努力、勤奋对.有极大兴趣进一步成功Dear Jerry，I hear that you have won the first prize in the English Contest for middle school students,so I am writing to send my congratulations

13、to you from the bottom of my heart.As your best friend,I am proud of you!I know you have always been hard-working.Your efforts pay off at last.Your pronounciation and fluent English,especially your beautiful voice,left me a deep impression.I hope that I can be successful like you one day.So could yo

14、u share with me how you improve your English?Your experience will be of great help to me in my learning.I will appreciate it if you can write me back and give me you advice.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li HuaStructure OpeningBodyClosingPurpose of writingSincere congratulationsPositive c

15、ommentHearty compliment/praisePolite request for sharing the secret to success/invitation to have a celebration togetherCongratulations agaginHope/expectation诸葛亮是从学习和做人两个方面进行论述的。先从正面进行阐述，他认为：无论做人，还是学习，要注重的都是一个“静”字，修身需要静，学习需要静，获得成就也取决于静；接着又从反面进行论证，把失败归结为一个“躁”字，进而把“静”与“躁”加以对比，增强了论述效果，达到了论证的目的。11.总结：本文

16、写的是猫，作者却巧妙地借物抒情，曲折地表达了同情、怜爱弱小者的思想感情，本文组织材料的特点是前后连贯、首尾呼应，文章在结构上严丝合缝条理清晰。13.“无时”一词写出诗人随时都想去山西村，表达了诗人与村民相处融洽，喜爱山西村的真挚情感。2.如何理解曾子所说的“忠”和“信”？讲求“忠”和“信”对现代人有什么特殊意义？作者是冰心，原名谢婉莹，中国现代文学史上第一位著名女作家。这两作品是在受到了印度诗人泰戈尔的飞鸟集的影响下写成的。包括三方面的内容：概括题是目前中考的高频考点，不管是散文、小说、议论文还是说明文都会有相关题型出现。所以学生们现在要特别注重这个题型。此片段以建议的方式陈述观点，以看似褒扬

17、的态度含蓄地进行批评，借农场主的过人见识反衬总统的狭隘。三段文字环环相扣，层层推进，说理时态度诚恳友善，却又绝不含糊其辞。这样的书信体写作，在寻常中挖掘出不同寻常，既体现出作者思想的宽度和深度，也把“任务”落到了实处。立足人情人性，远离道德强加1、活动类：根据活动主题设计活动宣传口号、活动步骤等。Opening(para.1)Dear Jerry，I hear that you have won the first prize in the English Contest for middle school students,so I am writing to send my congrat

18、ulations to you from the bottom of my heart.Dear Henry,I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations on your admission into the Biology Department of Beijing University as a postgraduate.很高兴得知很高兴得知.,故写信向你表示最诚挚的祝贺故写信向你表示最诚挚的祝贺.开门见山，直入主题(祝贺事由)1.我写信是想衷心祝贺你高中毕业并考取北京大学。我写信是想衷心祝贺你高中毕业并考取北京大学。2.很高兴得知很高兴

19、得知你在学校的演讲比赛中得了第一名你在学校的演讲比赛中得了第一名,写信向你表示最诚挚的祝贺。写信向你表示最诚挚的祝贺。3.获悉你被选为学生会主席获悉你被选为学生会主席,我对你的成功表示最衷心的祝贺我对你的成功表示最衷心的祝贺/在这特别的日子里，在这特别的日子里，请接受我由衷的祝贺。请接受我由衷的祝贺。I am writing to offer/express my sincere/hearty/warmest congratulations to you on _.Opening(para.1)祝贺事由It was delightful for me to hear that/I was ve

20、ry delighted to hear the news that _ and I am writing to express my sincere congratulations to you.I have learned with delight that you _ and I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations _./Please accept my hearty congratulations _.Body(para.2)As your close friend,I just want you to know

21、how lucky I am to be able to share your pride and how pleased I am at your admission./In my view,your hard work and persistence contribute to your successful admission,which is a reward that you richly deserve./I am sure you will make greater progress in your study and obtain a bright future in your

22、 life.表达由衷的喜悦表达由衷的喜悦积极评价对方优积极评价对方优点及付出的努力点及付出的努力展望未来展望未来,表达祝福表达祝福 积极评价，展望未来Body(para.2)表达由衷的喜悦表达由衷的喜悦积极评价对方优积极评价对方优点及付出的努力点及付出的努力表达愿望，虚心求教表达愿望，虚心求教 As your good friend,I am so proud of you!/I know you have always been hard-working and now your efforts have paid off.Your pronounciation and fluent Eng

23、lish,especially your beautiful voice must have left the audience and the judges a deep impression./I hope that I can be successful like you one day.So could you share with me how you improve your English?Your experience will be of great help to me.积极评价，虚心求教Body(para.2)评论事件智慧与汗水intelligencediligence/

24、industry/hard work/devotion天赋与才能talent/giftability/capability能力What may lead to a persons success?毅力 persistence/perseverance决心determination/resolutionBody(para.2)评论事件好消息传得好消息传得真真快快!我知道这肯定是我知道这肯定是你你_的结果的结果，也，也是你是你的的_应得的应得的回报。回报。Good news travel fast!I know your _ and it is a reward you for your _.勤奋

25、和勤奋和努力努力决心决心和和投入投入才能和勤奋才能和勤奋毅力毅力和和决心决心Good Qualities天赋天赋&才能才能talent/giftability/capability智慧智慧&汗水汗水intelligencediligence/industry/hard work/devotion决心决心determination/resolution毅力毅力persistence/perseveranceBody(para.2)评论事件、展望未来我知道，我为你取得的成就感到骄傲。我是你的 使你获得了现在的成功。另一方面，这个新职位为你的生活增加了一个新的维度，一定会让你。I know _ an

26、d I am very proud of you for your achievement.I that it is your _ that leads you to the current success.This new position,on the other hand,adds a new dimension to your life and is bound to _.这些年来，我，我比任何人都清楚你。从你目前的成就来看，我相信你将来。I all the years,and I know more than anyone else _.Judging from your curre

27、nt success,I am confident that in the future _.Closing(para.3)再次祝贺，真诚祝福，期待回信 Congratulations again!I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead!Look forward to your reply.Again,please accept my sincere congratulations.May youcontinued successandfulfillmentinthe yearsahead.Congratulations ag

28、ain!I wish you greater success and I am looking forward to good news soon.Sincere congratulations to you again!May all go wonderfully in your new school and wish you greater achievements in your study!孔子说：“只学习却不思考，就会迷惑；只空想却不学习，就会疑惑。”实际写作中，书信体作文普遍性存在着“思维肤浅化”和“语言论文化”的欠缺。“思维肤浅化”主要体现为脱离具体的话语情境，空谈看起来正确却不

29、解决实际问题的抽象道理；“语言论文化”主要体现为缺乏第二人称“你”的表达意识，习惯于以旁观者身份分析阐释，只关注“晓之以理”，不关注“动之以情”。两方面的缺失，带来的必然是作文缺乏思考深度，可读性不强。1讽刺批判社会现实的黑暗，歌颂悟空的敢于斗争，善于斗争，不为强权，乐观顽强的精神，同时也告诉人们必须经历艰难才能最终获得幸福成功8 在西梁女国，（唐僧）和（猪八戒）和了母子河的水，结果怀了孕。6 金兜山上的妖怪叫（独角兕），本是（太上老君）的坐骑，他趁着看牛的童子瞌睡，偷了宝贝（金钢琢）下界作怪。29 平顶山莲花洞的两个妖怪分别是（金角大王）、（银角大王），他们本来是（太上老君）看守炼丹炉的童子

30、，被（观音菩萨）借取下界为妖，来考验唐僧取经的决心的。3、又一阵风刮来了，来的是那么猛烈，又是那么深沉。漫卷着枫叶，也一片片飘落。我看着一片片飘落的枫叶，不禁思绪万千。叶落无痕，的确，落叶是那么宁静地落下来了，无声无息，令人丝毫无察觉。5.“不义而富且贵，于我如浮云。”这句话运用了什么修辞？表现了孔子怎样的品格？在今天有什么现实意义？猫最初发表在1925年11月间出版的文学周报。它是郑振铎从事文学创作的早期作品。在此之前他的其他作品，其内容已经触及五四时期青年要求自由平等、个性解放等问题，即使是对不会说话的猫，因为我没有判断明白，便妄下断语，冤苦了一只不能说话辩诉的动物，从而感到自己的良心受了

31、伤。这些深表忏悔的话，表明了作品中主人公我有知错求改和实事求是之心，表明了作者受到了当时颇具影响力的某些人生观念如平等、公正地待人接物，不伤害无辜，不欺凌弱小等观念的影响。孔子说：“军队可以改变其主帅，一个人的志向却是不可改变的。”西游记创造了神奇绚丽的神话世界，具有强烈的艺术魅力。天上地下，龙宫冥府，人物的活动有广阔的天地，可以无拘无束地充分施展其超人的本领。情节生动、奇幻、曲折，表现了丰富大胆的艺术想像力。西游记可以说是一部最能体现我国民族丰富想像力的小说，也是一部最接近儿童文学的古代小说。桃源与沅洲：由桃花源记写起，通过这篇文章在人们心中的广大影响引出现实中的桃源的风土人情。通过对现实中

32、桃源的环境、人文景观等的描述，让人们认识到现实生活的残酷、严峻，使得世外桃源般的理想社会在作者的笔下一点点被破坏，最终回归到现实，也引起人们对理想和现实之间差距的深思。实战训练 假如你是李华，你的好友李明在网上中国诗词朗诵比赛中荣获一等奖。假如你是李华，你的好友李明在网上中国诗词朗诵比赛中荣获一等奖。请你根据以下内容，给他写一封祝贺信。请你根据以下内容，给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括：内容包括：1.表达你的愉悦心情并表示祝贺；表达你的愉悦心情并表示祝贺；2.肯定对方成绩并予以赞美；肯定对方成绩并予以赞美；3.希望共进晚餐以示庆祝。希望共进晚餐以示庆祝。注意：注意：1.词数词数80左右；左右；2.开

33、头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数；开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：中国诗词朗诵比赛参考词汇：中国诗词朗诵比赛 the Chinese Poetry Recitation Contest1.表达你的愉悦心情并表示祝贺表达你的愉悦心情并表示祝贺(得知李明网上中国诗词朗诵比赛中荣获一等奖得知李明网上中国诗词朗诵比赛中荣获一等奖);2.肯定对方成绩并予以赞美；肯定对方成绩并予以赞美；3.希望共进晚餐以示庆祝希望共进晚餐以示庆祝。Dear Li Ming,_ Yours sincerely,Li HuaPara.1Para

34、.2Para.3Para.1 得知李明网上中国诗词朗诵比赛中荣获一等奖得知李明网上中国诗词朗诵比赛中荣获一等奖;表达你的愉悦心情并表示祝贺表达你的愉悦心情并表示祝贺 很高兴得知你在很高兴得知你在网上中国诗词朗诵比赛中荣获一等奖，特写信向你表示网上中国诗词朗诵比赛中荣获一等奖，特写信向你表示诚挚的祝贺。诚挚的祝贺。得知你在得知你在网上中国诗词朗诵比赛中荣获一等奖，我感到非常高兴。网上中国诗词朗诵比赛中荣获一等奖，我感到非常高兴。请允请允许向你致以衷心的祝贺。许向你致以衷心的祝贺。你不知道当我得知你获得了中学生网上诗词朗诵比赛一等奖时，我是多你不知道当我得知你获得了中学生网上诗词朗诵比赛一等奖时，

35、我是多么的激动和高兴。祝贺么的激动和高兴。祝贺!Im pleased to hear that you have won the first prize in the online Chinese Poetry Recitation Contest.Congratulations!Para.2 肯定对方成绩并予以赞美肯定对方成绩并予以赞美 客观天赋客观天赋 主观努力主观努力 一分耕耘，一分收获一分耕耘，一分收获Para.2 肯定对方成绩并予以赞美肯定对方成绩并予以赞美 我坚信你有我坚信你有诗歌朗诵诗歌朗诵的天赋的天赋.说实话，我最欣赏的是你对中国诗歌的无比热情和热爱。说实话，我最欣赏的是你对中

36、国诗歌的无比热情和热爱。I strongly/firmly believe thatTo be honest/frank,what I admire most isPara.2 肯定对方成绩并予以赞美肯定对方成绩并予以赞美 过去的三个月过去的三个月见证了见证了你的你的投入投入和不懈的努力。和不懈的努力。毫无疑问，你的努力和不断的练习毫无疑问，你的努力和不断的练习促成了促成了你的成功。你的成功。我知道你一直对中国古诗很感兴趣，在课余时间里花了相当多的时间阅我知道你一直对中国古诗很感兴趣，在课余时间里花了相当多的时间阅读和背诵古诗。读和背诵古诗。The past three months have

37、 seen yourUndoubtedly,your contribute to your success.I know Chinese ancient poetry and reading and reciting them.Para.2 肯定对方成绩并予以赞美肯定对方成绩并予以赞美 一分耕耘，一分收获一分耕耘，一分收获No pains,no gains.Its a reward you richly deserve.Its a real encouragement to me to see your efforts rewarded.Para.3 希望共进晚餐以示庆祝。希望共进晚餐以示庆祝

38、。I hope that I can have dinner with you and express my congratulations face to face.Best wishes for your further success!I would like to invite you to have dinner with me and my warmest congratulations face to face.注意注意:；2.开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数；开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数；Language-concise&to the pointI have lea

39、rned with great delight that you have won the first prize in the online Chinese Poetry Recitation Contest.Please allow me to convey my heartfelt congratulations to you.I strongly believe that you have a talent for poetry reading and undoubtedly,your hard work and constant practice contribute to your

40、 success.Its a reward you richly deserve.Kindly let me know when it is convenient to you.I would like to invite you to have dinner with me to have a celebration.Look forward to your reply.假如你是李华，得知你的好友假如你是李华，得知你的好友Peter以优异成绩高中毕业并被一所重点大以优异成绩高中毕业并被一所重点大学录取。请你根据以下内容，给他写一封电子邮件表示祝贺。学录取。请你根据以下内容，给他写一封电子邮件表示祝贺。内容包括：内容包括：1.向向Peter表示祝贺；表示祝贺；2.介绍自己目前的学习情况；介绍自己目前的学习情况；3.请教方法。请教方法。注意：注意：1.词数词数80左右；左右；2.开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数；开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Thank you!