高考英语书面表达写作指导(很好)课件.ppt

1、高考英语书面表达写作指导一一.英语书面表达解题步骤英语书面表达解题步骤 一一.仔细审题仔细审题。如果是看图写文，看如果是看图写文，看懂每幅图之间的联系至关重要。懂每幅图之间的联系至关重要。二二.写要点写要点。据每幅图写出一至两句。据每幅图写出一至两句话。因为每年高考书面表达一般控制在话。因为每年高考书面表达一般控制在10句话，句话，120个词左右。个词左右。三三.连句成文连句成文。每句话写好后，用适。每句话写好后，用适当的连词连接起来，使之上下连贯，呼当的连词连接起来，使之上下连贯，呼应，通顺，简洁。应，通顺，简洁。四四.查错漏查错漏。完稿后，检查一下有没。完稿后，检查一下有没有时态，语态，拼

2、写错误并逐一加以改有时态，语态，拼写错误并逐一加以改正。正。五五.卷面整洁卷面整洁。卷面整洁干净甚至比准。卷面整洁干净甚至比准确，通顺，简介更重要。因为整洁干净给阅确，通顺，简介更重要。因为整洁干净给阅卷人精神上带来愉悦，相对而言，分数自然卷人精神上带来愉悦，相对而言，分数自然要给得高一些。要给得高一些。为了帮助同学们在平时写作练习的时候为了帮助同学们在平时写作练习的时候时刻牢记这些写作的基本要领，特编顺口溜时刻牢记这些写作的基本要领，特编顺口溜如下：如下：细审题，巧构思，列要点，防遗漏。细审题，巧构思，列要点，防遗漏。写日记，同汉语；书信，通知格式要牢记。写日记，同汉语；书信，通知格式要牢记

3、。看清图表细梳理，写人记事按顺序；完稿后看清图表细梳理，写人记事按顺序；完稿后查遗漏，整洁干净莫忘记。查遗漏，整洁干净莫忘记。关于高考英语书面表达高分策关于高考英语书面表达高分策略略,我们从遣词，造句，谋篇三个我们从遣词，造句，谋篇三个方面分析。方面分析。二二.高考英语书面表达高分策略高考英语书面表达高分策略遣词的原则遣词的原则 使用高等级词汇及短语使用高等级词汇及短语,如果仅仅记如果仅仅记住几个简单基础的词汇住几个简单基础的词汇,而且一味的重复低而且一味的重复低水平的英语知识点水平的英语知识点,还远远没有达到大学的还远远没有达到大学的入学要求。这就要求考生在平时的训练和入学要求。这就要求考生

4、在平时的训练和考试当中，有意识的强化考试当中，有意识的强化“复杂，高级复杂，高级”这两个概念，使自己的作文能力区别于普这两个概念，使自己的作文能力区别于普通学生的作文，使自己一下子就站在一个通学生的作文，使自己一下子就站在一个比别人高的位置上，充分显示自己的实力。比别人高的位置上，充分显示自己的实力。平时学习过程中注意总结各种各样的词汇。平时学习过程中注意总结各种各样的词汇。以描述人物的词汇为例：以描述人物的词汇为例：表达人物爱憎感情：表达人物爱憎感情：like,love,be interested in,be fond of hate,dislike,be tired of,lose int

5、erest in happy,excited,pleased,satisfied,angry,sad,worried,disappointed,terrified,mad,frightened 介绍人物的影响及人们对人的评价：介绍人物的影响及人们对人的评价：He became famous for his new theory.The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader.We regard Li Fei as our model.Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit

6、.People spoke highly of him and all respected him.常见描述人物性格，外貌和身体状况等的词语常见描述人物性格，外貌和身体状况等的词语 good-looking/funny-looking/strong-looking/ugly-looking/dirty-looking/ordinary-looking/blue-eyed/white-eyed/warm-hearted/light-hearted/kind-hearted/absent-minded/tall/short/beautiful/pretty/lovely/naughty/be bl

7、ind/lame in/be in good or poor condition/healthy/fine/well/strong-tempered/bad-tempered/near-sighted/far-sighted/foolish/stupid/silly/clever/smart/wise/bright/diligent/intelligent/lazy/hard working,etc.造句的原则造句的原则 句式多变，语法活用，句子是表达句式多变，语法活用，句子是表达一个完整意思的最小当位，所以造句能一个完整意思的最小当位，所以造句能力在英文写作中是非常重要的。好的英力在英文写作

8、中是非常重要的。好的英语句子能够生动，形象，准确的表达内语句子能够生动，形象，准确的表达内容。所以要想写出漂亮的书面表达，必容。所以要想写出漂亮的书面表达，必须从写好句子开始。须从写好句子开始。英语基本句型及造句英语基本句型及造句:l主语主语+谓语谓语+状语状语(介词介词,名词短语或从名词短语或从句句)The sun rises up in the east and sets in the west.l We get up early every morning.The meeting lasted 2 hours.主语主语+系动词系动词+形容词形容词 Good medicine tastes

9、 bitter to the mouth.He was so tired that he fell asleep the moment he went to bed.Your explanation sounds reasonable.主语主语+不及物动词不及物动词+副词副词 lThis kind of wine drinks well and sells well.The suit wears well.Glass breaks easily.主语主语+谓语谓语+介词介词+宾语宾语 We all agreed on the terms.He hates to argue with his w

10、ife about such small matters.All these things are to be answered for.主语主语+谓语谓语+直接宾语直接宾语 I want your promise.Have your fixed my watch?This factory produces 1000 cars a week.主语主语+谓语谓语+间接宾语间接宾语+直接宾语直接宾语 lHe paid me a visit yesterday.lHe owed me 50 yuan.lHe wrote his family a letter yesterday.主语+谓语+宾语+宾

11、补(to do)lI will get someone to repair the recorder for you.lI didnt mean to hurt you.lHe invited me to teach at a well-known university.主语+谓语+宾语+宾补(do)lI often hear her sing the song.lThe boss made workers work 15 hours a day.lDont forget to have him come.主语+谓语+现在分词 lI heard her singing in the next

12、room.lWe could feel our heats beating fast.lDid you observe the birds flying around the trees?主语+谓语+过去分词 lI must have my watch repaired.lWe must get he task finished on time.lSpeak louder to make yourself understood by everybody.主语+谓语+宾语(动名词)lI suggested putting off the meeting.lThey all avoided men

13、tioning the matter.lWe cant help laughing at the news.主语+谓语+宾语(不定式)lI cant afford to buy such a large house.lDont pretend to know what you dont.lHe feared to speak in her presence.主语+谓语+宾语(名词/代词)+介词+宾语 lNothing can prevent us from going forward.lThank you for your help.lHe demanded an answer from me

14、.练习写好句子的方法一：合并句子 lIt was early in the morning.Mr.Smith was in his garden.He was watering flowers.lEarly in the morning,Mr.Smith was watering flowers in his garden.A girl was crossing a road.The girl was pretty.The road was wide.A pretty girl was crossing a wide road.写好句子的方法二：改写句子 l1)Mr.Green is a ta

15、ll man,who wears a pair of thick glasses.(改成介词短语做伴随状语)Mr.Green is a tall man with a pair of thick glasses.2)The ice on the lake is too thin for us to skate on.(使用sothat结构改写句子)lThe ice on the lake is so thin that we cant skate on it.练习方法三：一句多译 I spent 300 yuan on the book.I paid 300 yuan for the book

16、.The price of the book is 300 yuanIt cost me 300 yuan to buy the book.The book cost me 300 yuan.我不懂什么英语，李明也不懂。lI dont know any English,nor does Li Ming.I hardly know any English,nor does Li Ming.I hardly know any English,neither does Li Ming.I hardly know any English,no more does Li Ming.I hardly kn

17、ow any English,so it is with Li Ming.lI know no more English than Li Ming does.I know as little English as Li Ming does.一到家，我就把所见到的一切都记了下来。一到家，我就把所见到的一切都记了下来。On/Upon arriving home,I wrote down everything I had seen.As soon as I arrived home,I wrote down everything I had seen.As soon as I arrived hom

18、e,I wrote down everything I had seen.The instant I arrived home,I wrote down everything I had seen.lNo sooner had I arrived home than I wrote down everything I had seen 昨天下午他才来昨天下午他才来 He came here yesterday afternoon.He didnt come here until yesterday afternoon.Not until yesterday afternoon did he c

19、ome here.It was yesterday afternoon that he arrived here.It was not until yesterday afternoon that he came here.谋篇的原则谋篇的原则 满分作文都有个共性就是有效满分作文都有个共性就是有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。文章的连贯性和紧凑文结构紧凑。文章的连贯性和紧凑感是很重要的。句子作为最小的表感是很重要的。句子作为最小的表达意思的语言当位如果只是被随意达意思的语言当位如果只是被随意的整合，是无法达到有效表达的目的整合，是无法达到有效表达的目的

20、。的。常见的句子之间的连接手段有：常见的句子之间的连接手段有：l使用代词指代上一句中的名词使用代词指代上一句中的名词 重复使用上一句中的词重复使用上一句中的词 使用连接词使用连接词 使用平行结构使用平行结构 高考大纲中常用的连接词高考大纲中常用的连接词:表并列补充关系的:what is more,besides,also,as well,moreover,furthermore,in addition,表因果关系的:since,as,because(of),for,so,thus,therefore,as a result,so that,表条件关系的:if,on the condition(

21、that),as long as,unless,or else,表转折对比关系的表转折对比关系的:but,however,yet,instead,on the other hand,on the contrary,although,different from,in contrast to,despite,in spite of,whereas,unlike,nevertheless,not onlybut also,herethere,years agotoday,thisthat,the formerthe latter,thennow,the firstwhereas the secon

22、d,oncenow,on the one handon the other hand,someothers,表时间关系的表时间关系的:when,after,before,until,as soon as,later,afterwards,soon,lately,recently,since,from then on,eventually,in the meantime,then,suddenly,at the same time,next,early this morning/year/century,after an interval,now,after,presently,later,af

23、terward,somewhat later,finally,at last,all of a sudden,表换一种方式表达:in other words,that is to say,to put it another way,表进行举例说明:for instance,for example,like,such as,表陈述事实:in fact,actually,as a matter of fact,to tell you the truth 表特定的顺序关系表特定的顺序关系:above all,first of all,firstly,secondlynext,finally,in the end,at last 表总结表总结:on the whole,in short,all in all,at last,in a word