概要写作116-From-Page-to-Screen(课件)-高考英语作文新题型.pptx

1、 文本主题、体裁与结构解读 文本各段落要点精读 表达微技能之高度概括篇 牛刀小试 参考范文欣赏体裁：主题：结构：1.文本主题、体裁与结构解读主题AdaptationsA.authors opinion on adaptationsB.the origin of adaptationsC.causes for adaptations failureD.some experts opinions主题：结构：1.文本主题、体裁与结构解读the authors opinion on adaptations and the causes for adaptations failure 结构Cause 1

2、Cause 1issue issue Cause 2Cause 2Cause 3Cause 3Cause 4Cause 4主题：结构：the authors opinion on adaptations and the causes for failure Para 1Para 3Para 2Para 5Para 4argumentation1.文本主题、体裁与结构解读Reading a book and watching a film are two very different experiences,but its normal to have high expectations whe

3、n a film of a favourite book is made.There are very many times I have been disappointed by a film of a book I love.The films can be adapted from classic novels,short stories,comic books and stage plays,as well as non-fictions,even those written by ghostwriters.All can work well,but why do many adapt

4、ations fail with both cinema audiences and critics?2.文本各段落要点精读A.All the films are very good.B.All kinds of books can be adapted to fimls.C.All the books are very good.Main idea:Many adaptations fail with both cinema audiences and critics,which may arise from different reasons.关注连词关注连词A key question

5、is obviously how close to the original the film is.Since a typical film is only around two hours long,it becomes a question for the screenwriters to decide what to leave out and how to write the dialogue.Sometimes there may be changes to the plot,additions,and even different endings.I,like many peop

6、le,have often left the cinema feeling“the film is not like the book”.2.文本各段落要点精读Main idea:The key reason is that the film is not like the original,since a typical film is only around two hours and there may be many changes.because Another problem is the cast.Finding actors acceptable to film audienc

7、es can mean the difference between success and failure.Readers have their imaginations about how characters look and sound.This is where I think many film adaptations fall down.Main idea:Another reason is the cast,because readers have their imaginations about how characters look and sound.2.文本各段落要点精

8、读关注代词关注代词Some books are just too difficult to film for technical reasons,although movies like The Life of Pi are very successful.CGI(Computer Generated Image)technology has had a huge impact on the movie industry.It allowed the previously unfilmable to become a reality.Main idea:Some books are just

9、too difficult to film for technical reasons,although CGI technology allowed the previously unfilmable to become a realilty.2.文本各段落要点精读关注连词和代词关注连词和代词 One may think that it is the book writer who is in the best position to do film adaptations.In fact,this can actually be a bad thing because they may b

10、e too close to the material and find it difficult to adapt.Also,some writers have been very unsatisfied with the film versions of their work.Roald Dahl and Stephen King are examples of this.For me,anyway,it is always a bad idea to watch a film of a book you love.Main idea:The book writer is not the

11、best to do film adaptations,because he or she is too close to the material and will find it difficult to adapt,and also unsatisfied with the adapted versions.2.文本各段落要点精读关注连词和代词关注连词和代词Many adaptations fail with both cinema audiences and critics,which may arise from different reasons.The key reason is

12、 that the film is not like the original,since a typical film is only around two hours and there may be many changes.Another reason is the cast,because readers have their imagination about characters.Some books are just too difficult to film for technical reasons,although CGI technology allowed the p

13、reviously unfilmable to become a realilty.The book writer is not the best to do film adaptations,because he or she is too close to the material and will find it difficult to adapt,and also unsatisfied with the adapted versions.(108 words)点评：该概要完全覆盖了文章全部要点，但是字数字数严重超标，有多处表达抄袭抄袭原文，此外，有些表达过于冗长冗长，又缺乏连贯性连

14、贯性。仔细观察，我们会发现，有些表达的解释其实没有必要，有些解释有必要但又太繁琐。概要写作原则4C+NOcompletecoherent objective correctconciseno copyCover all the key points.Make sure theres no grammar mistakes.Be brief and to the point.Use proper transitions.Use your own words.No extra ideas or emotions.3.表达微技能之高度概括篇1.1.描述性词汇变概括性词汇。描述性词汇变概括性词汇。我们

15、可以考虑把含有定语的短我们可以考虑把含有定语的短语通过转换词性、精简词汇等方式，把描述性的语言概括成一语通过转换词性、精简词汇等方式，把描述性的语言概括成一个或几个词。个或几个词。2.2.短语变词汇。短语变词汇。在短语变词汇时，可以重点关注有多个变形在短语变词汇时，可以重点关注有多个变形的单词，往往会有意外的收获。的单词，往往会有意外的收获。3.3.短句变短语。短句变短语。通过使用高度概括性的词汇，或转换某些核通过使用高度概括性的词汇，或转换某些核心词的词性并进行一定的筛选，可以将句子变短语。心词的词性并进行一定的筛选，可以将句子变短语。4.4.长句变短句。长句变短句。复杂的长句变精简的短句，

16、其核心在于抓住复杂的长句变精简的短句，其核心在于抓住句子的主干，即抓住句子的主语、谓语和宾语，尽可能用主语句子的主干，即抓住句子的主语、谓语和宾语，尽可能用主语+谓语谓语+宾语的形式来改写句子。宾语的形式来改写句子。Many adaptations fail with both cinema audiences and critics,which arise from different reasons.Many adaptations fail with people,which arise from different reasons.Many adaptations failures a

17、rise from different reasons.Many adaptations fail with both cinema audiences and critics for different reasons.Many adaptations fail with people for different reasons.概要写作1.16 From Page to Screen（课件）-高考英语作文新题型概要写作1.16 From Page to Screen（课件）-高考英语作文新题型一、一、根据要求完成下列句子的改写或翻译。根据要求完成下列句子的改写或翻译。1.The key r

18、eason is that the film is not like the original,since a typical film is only around two hours and there may be many changes.The key reason is that the film is not like the original,since _ _ and there may be many changes.(描述性词汇变概括性词汇)The key reason is that the film is not like the original since the

19、re may be many changes because of _.(短句变短语)The key reason is that the film is not like the original because of _ and _.(短句变短语)The key reason is that the limited time and changes _ _.(长句变短句)5.牛刀小试a typical films time is limitedthe limited timelimited time many changesmake the film not like the origin

20、al概要写作1.16 From Page to Screen（课件）-高考英语作文新题型概要写作1.16 From Page to Screen（课件）-高考英语作文新题型参考范文欣赏1Many adaptations fail with people for different reasons.（要点1）The key one is that the film is not like the original as there may be many changes because of the limited time.（要点2）Besides,readers have their own

21、 imagination about the cast.（要点3）And its really hard work to film some books for technology limit.（要点4）Additionally,the book author is not the best choice for adaptation because of their very close connection to the material.（要点 5）（78 words）概要写作1.16 From Page to Screen（课件）-高考英语作文新题型概要写作1.16 From Pag

22、e to Screen（课件）-高考英语作文新题型参考范文欣赏2Many adaptations disappoint both audiences and readers,which may arises from the reasons below.（要点1）Firstly,to meet time requirement,the adapted film is always found not close to the original story.（要点2）Besides,the selected cast may not satisfy readers as they have th

23、eir own imagination about the characters.（要点3）And some books are really unfilmable for technology limit.（要点4）As for the adaptor,the book author,being too close to the material,should not be taken into favorable consideration.（要点5）（77words）概要写作1.16 From Page to Screen（课件）-高考英语作文新题型概要写作1.16 From Page to Screen（课件）-高考英语作文新题型