高考英语作文提升训练课件：高考英语分类写作-18留言请假条.ppt

1、 全国高考英语二轮突破apartment 公寓公寓It is a pity that.真遗憾真遗憾lose this opportunity 失去这个机会失去这个机会excuse 借口借口give sb.a speech 给某人作演讲给某人作演讲society 社会社会record v.录音录音tape 录音带录音带mean a great deal 意味着很多意味着很多promise to do sth.承诺做某事承诺做某事stadium 体育馆体育馆be fond of 喜欢喜欢local food 当地食物当地食物guarantee 保证保证look forward to 期待着期待着1

2、.Im writing to ask for two days sick leave.我给您写信请两天病假。我给您写信请两天病假。2.Could you kindly excuse my absence on Monday and Tuesday?周一周一和周二我不得不缺席了，你能准假吗？和周二我不得不缺席了，你能准假吗？3.Im sorry to say that I cant wait for you at home.很抱歉，我不能很抱歉，我不能在家等你了。在家等你了。4.Since you were out,I have to leave this note to you.既然你出去了，

3、既然你出去了，我只好给你留张便条了。我只好给你留张便条了。5.Im going out shopping,and wont be back until about 5:00 pm.我我外出购物了，下午五点才回来。外出购物了，下午五点才回来。6.Tracy called,saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as.Tracy打电话来，说她明天早上不能在打电话来，说她明天早上不能在Bolton咖啡馆见你，因为咖啡馆见你，因为7.She wanted you to call her back as soo

4、n as you are home.她想你回她想你回到家马上给她回电话。到家马上给她回电话。8.Finally,would you call her back upon your arriving home so that you can fix another time for your meeting?最后，你回到家可以给她回电最后，你回到家可以给她回电话吗？这样你们可以安排另外一个时间见面。话吗？这样你们可以安排另外一个时间见面。9.I am sorry that I cant attend the party to be held this Friday at your apartme

5、nt.很抱歉我不能参加星期五在你公寓举办的派对。很抱歉我不能参加星期五在你公寓举办的派对。10.I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded.我想是否有可我想是否有可能把讲座录音。能把讲座录音。11.If you are interested,please let us know as soon as possible.如果如果你有兴趣，请尽快告知我们。你有兴趣，请尽快告知我们。1.After taken my temperature,I knew I had a fever.1.taken改为taking2.Please cal

6、l me back at your convenient.2.convenient改为convenience3.I learn that you are interested in Beijing Opera,and I want to invite you enjoy a famous opera.3.enjoy前面加to4.As my dictionary has been left at home,I wonder if you can lend me your.4.your改为yours；或者your后加dictionary5.Im serious ill today and cann

7、ot come to class.5.serious改为seriously6.Ill leave by a train at 8:00 tomorrow morning.6.删掉a7.I will come back to work the moment I will feel better.7.删掉第二个will8.Tracy called,said that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee.8.said改为saying；或者said前面加and9.There is a supermarket nearby which we can go shop

8、ping.9.which改为where；或者which前面加in10.We do look forward to see you at our English party.10.see改为seeing【20092009全国全国卷：外出留言卷：外出留言】假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东天你的房东Mrs WilsonMrs Wilson不在家，你准备外出，请给不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs WilsonMrs Wilson写一写一留言条，内容包括：留言条，内容包括：1.1.外出购物外出购物 2.2.替房东

9、还书替房东还书3.Tracy3.Tracy来电话留言：来电话留言：1)1)咖啡屋咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)(Bolton Coffee)见面取消见面取消 2)2)此事已告知此事已告知Susan Susan 3)3)尽快回电尽快回电满分佳作（一）满分佳作（一）Mrs.Wilson,Im going out shopping,and wont be back until about 5:00 pm.I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library.At about 1 oclock

10、this afternoon,Tracy called,saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she had something important to attend to.She felt very sorry about that,but said that you could set some other time for the meeting.She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home.She has alread

11、y told Susan about this change.满分赏析满分赏析you asked me to return to the City Library是省略了关系代词的定语是省略了关系代词的定语从句。从句。saying是现在分词作状语，且含有是现在分词作状语，且含有that引导的宾语从句；本句还引导的宾语从句；本句还有有as引导的原因状语从句；作者用多样的语法手段，有效地把相关引导的原因状语从句；作者用多样的语法手段，有效地把相关信息整合起来。信息整合起来。feel sorry about(觉得抱歉觉得抱歉)和和set some other time for(确定另外的一确定另外的

12、一个时间个时间)两个表达都自然地道。考生平时要多积累，才不会两个表达都自然地道。考生平时要多积累，才不会“巧妇巧妇难为无米之炊难为无米之炊”。满分佳作（二）满分佳作（二）Mrs.Wilson,I am going out shopping with my friend Mary this morning and will come back late this evening.I will return the books that you borrowed last week to the library.In addition,Tracy called you and left a mes

13、sage,saying that the meeting at Bolton Coffee was canceled because she had to attend her cousins wedding that day,and she apologized to you.Susan was informed of this change too.Finally,would you call her back upon your arriving home so that you can fix another time for your meeting?Have a nice day!

14、Li Hua满分赏析满分赏析本句含有本句含有that 引导的定语从句。引导的定语从句。be informed of(被告知被告知)，词汇使用高级。，词汇使用高级。so that引导目的状语从句；引导目的状语从句；fix another time for(确定另确定另一时间一时间)。“语言靠模仿，内容要原创语言靠模仿，内容要原创”，语言学家王初，语言学家王初明教授的这句话值得同学们在学习英语时牢记。明教授的这句话值得同学们在学习英语时牢记。【模拟真题：留言条模拟真题：留言条】作文原题作文原题假设你是李华，你们学校的假设你是李华，你们学校的Smith先生打算本周五在他的先生打算本周五在他的公寓举办

15、一个晚会，并邀请你参加。但是，你有其他事情公寓举办一个晚会，并邀请你参加。但是，你有其他事情无法参加。请给无法参加。请给Smith先生写一个留言条，内容包括：先生写一个留言条，内容包括：1.对无法参加晚会表示歉意；对无法参加晚会表示歉意；2.不能参加晚会的原因；不能参加晚会的原因；3.通知他下周三你班英语晚会的时间和地点。通知他下周三你班英语晚会的时间和地点。作文翻译作文翻译亲爱的亲爱的SmithSmith，非常抱歉我不能参加星期五在你公寓举行的派对。失去这个非常抱歉我不能参加星期五在你公寓举行的派对。失去这个机会真遗憾。我的姑姑星期六晚上将来看我们，我们很长时间没有机会真遗憾。我的姑姑星期六

16、晚上将来看我们，我们很长时间没有见面了，因此我没有理由不去她。见面了，因此我没有理由不去她。嗯，还有一件事。下周三下午嗯，还有一件事。下周三下午1818：3030我们班将在会议厅举行我们班将在会议厅举行英语派对。将会有演讲和表演。我们邀请你来做评委，然后在派对英语派对。将会有演讲和表演。我们邀请你来做评委，然后在派对结束为我们做一次英语学习的演讲。结束为我们做一次英语学习的演讲。我十分期待能看到你。我十分期待能看到你。你的，你的，李华李华Dear Smith,I am sorry that I cant attend the party to be held this Friday at yo

17、ur apartment.It is a pity that I will lose this opportunity.My aunt will come to visit us on Friday evening and we havent seen each other for a very long time,so I cant make any excuse to miss her.Well,there is one more thing.We are going to hold an English party at the meeting hall in the school at

18、 18:30 p.m.next Wednesday.There will be speeches and performances.We invite you to be the judge and give us a speech on English learning at the end of the party.We do look forward to seeing you.Yours,Li Hua【2004全国卷全国卷3：上课请假：上课请假】假设你是李华，你的美国老师假设你是李华，你的美国老师Miss Morgan要求你们明天要求你们明天下午去听一个有关美国历史的讲座。你因故不能参

19、加。请下午去听一个有关美国历史的讲座。你因故不能参加。请你根据以下要点，写一封短信向你根据以下要点，写一封短信向Miss Morgan请假。请假。内容要点：内容要点：*表示歉意表示歉意 *理由：去机场接人理由：去机场接人 *询问：是否有录音，以便补听讲座询问：是否有录音，以便补听讲座Dear Miss Morgan,.Yours sincerelyLi Hua【20042004全国卷全国卷3 3：上课请假：上课请假】Dear Miss Morgan,I am so sorry that I wont be able to attend the lecture on American histo

20、ry tomorrow afternoon.My uncle is returning home from France,and I have promised to meet him at the airport at 3:30 tomorrow afternoon.I am very much interested in American society and history.I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded,and if so,could I borrow the tape?It would mean a gr

21、eat deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk.Yours sincerelyLi Hua【模拟真题：留言条模拟真题：留言条】假设你叫李华，是一名高中生，你和朋友约定周日上午去假设你叫李华，是一名高中生，你和朋友约定周日上午去体育场打篮球，外教体育场打篮球，外教Mr.HopkinsMr.Hopkins非常喜欢体育运动，你非常喜欢体育运动，你邀请他加入你们。你的留言条应该包括以下内容：邀请他加入你们。你的留言条应该包括以下内容：1.1.和朋友一起打篮球的时间和地点；和朋友一起打篮球的时间和地点；

22、2.2.从学校门口到体育场的方式；从学校门口到体育场的方式；3.3.午饭和下午活动安排；午饭和下午活动安排；4.4.希望尽早回复。希望尽早回复。Dear Mr.Hopkins,Dear Mr.Hopkins,I am writing to tell you about my plan for I am writing to tell you about my plan for the coming Sunday.the coming Sunday.Sincerely,Sincerely,Li HuaLi Hua【模拟真题：留言条模拟真题：留言条】Dear Mr.Hopkins,I am wri

23、ting to tell you about my plan for the coming Sunday.My friends and I have decided to play basketball from 9:00 a.m.to 11:30 a.m.on Sunday at the city stadium.Since you are fond of playing basketball,wed like to invite you to join us.You can take bus No.102 from the stop near our school.It takes abo

24、ut 29 minutes to get there.At noon,we will have lunch at Food City,where we can have all kinds of local food.Or you can return after lunch.If you are interested,please let us know as soon as possible.If you come,I guarantee you will have a good time with us.I am looking forward to your early reply.Sincerely,Li Hua