打包读后续写高考英语作文新题型16课件.pptx

1、Going HomeInterpretation of the Text 文本解读A storyhowwherewhenwhywhowhatInterpretation of the Text 文本解读(Who)VingoWife Three boys and three girlsHusbandStrangersInterpretation of the Text 文本解读(When)1.When the young people boarded 1.When the young people boarded the bus,they noticed Vingo;the bus,they n

2、oticed Vingo;上车后，他们注意到主人上车后，他们注意到主人公公VingoVingo晚上汽车作短暂停靠时，其晚上汽车作短暂停靠时，其中一女孩想与他交谈，却并中一女孩想与他交谈，却并未得到回应。未得到回应。2.Deep into the night2.Deep into the night，one of one of the girls started to talk with the girls started to talk with him but failed.him but failed.3.The next morning,Vingo told 3.The next mor

3、ning,Vingo told his story at the young peoples his story at the young peoples insistence.insistence.第二天，在年轻人们的坚持第二天，在年轻人们的坚持下，下，VingoVingo与他们坐在一起与他们坐在一起并谈起了自己的故事并谈起了自己的故事Interpretation of the Text文本解读(How)Vingos Vingos love for his love for his wifewifeif the kids kept asking if the kids kept asking

4、 questions,and if it hurt her too questions,and if it hurt her too much,she could just forget me.much,she could just forget me.Id understand.Get a new guy,I Id understand.Get a new guy,I said.Shes a wonderful woman.said.Shes a wonderful woman.(para 7)(para 7)eyes fixed upon on a photo,eyes fixed upo

5、n on a photo,completely in silence;became completely in silence;became s i l e n t a g a i n;s l o w l y a n d s i l e n t a g a i n;s l o w l y a n d painfully,he began his storypainfully,he began his story (para 1)(para 1)Interpretation of underlined words and given information划线词和续写首句解读(G-N策略）1.I

6、nterpretation of given information首句解读：Para.1 Looking at the photo,the young people found a young woman and three children in it.Given Information1.1.“Well,when I was in prison I wrote to my“Well,when I was in prison I wrote to my wifewife,”Shes a wonderful woman,”Shes a wonderful woman.(Para(Para.7

7、)7)2.2.We used to live in We used to live in BrunswickBrunswick,and theres,and theres a big a big oakoak（橡树）treetree just as you come into just as you come into town.If she didnt want me,forget it-town.If she didnt want me,forget it-no handkerchief and Id go on through.”no handkerchief and Id go on

8、through.”(Para(Para.9)9)Interpretation of underlined words and given information划线词和续写首句解读（G-N策略）1.Interpretation of given information首句解读：Para.2 Vingo sat there amazed,staring at the oak tree.3.We used to live in 3.We used to live in BrunswickBrunswick,and theres a,and theres a big big oakoak（橡树）tr

9、eetree just as you come into town.I just as you come into town.I told her that if she didnt have a new man and if told her that if she didnt have a new man and if shed take me back,she should put a yellow shed take me back,she should put a yellow handkerchiefhandkerchief on the tree,and Id get off a

10、nd on the tree,and Id get off and come home.If she didnt want me,forget it-no come home.If she didnt want me,forget it-no handkerchief and Id go on through.”handkerchief and Id go on through.”(P Paraara.3)3)Given InformationInterpretation of underlined words and given information划线词和续写首句解读（G-N策略）New

11、 Information Whats the young peoples reaction Whats the young peoples reaction towards the photo?towards the photo?How did Vingo comment on his wife?How did Vingo comment on his wife?How did the young people and Vingo feel How did the young people and Vingo feel when the bus gradually approached the

12、 tree?when the bus gradually approached the tree?What was his wifes choice?Was there What was his wifes choice?Was there a yellow handkerchief on the tree?a yellow handkerchief on the tree?1.Interpretation of given information首句解读：Para.1 Looking at the photo,the young people found a young woman and

13、three children in it.Interpretation of underlined words and given information划线词和续写首句解读（G-N策略）New Information 1.Interpretation of given information首句解读：Para.2 Vingo sat there amazed,staring at the oak tree.If the handkerchief is there,whats the young If the handkerchief is there,whats the young peop

14、les reaction?peoples reaction?What about Vingo?How did he feel when he saw What about Vingo?How did he feel when he saw the yellow handkerchief?the yellow handkerchief?What did Vingo do then?Did he go home finally?What did Vingo do then?Did he go home finally?How did the young people feel at last?Ho

15、w did the young people feel at last?2.Interpretation of underlined words下划线词解读：Vingo，photo，the young people，sat，home，married，wife，Brunswick，oak tree，handkerchiefCharactersPlacesObjectsActionsVingo,the young people,wifehome,Brunswickphoto,oak tree,handkerchiefsat,marriedInterpretation of underlined w

16、ords and given information划线词和续写首句解读VingoInterpretation of writing ideas 写作思路解读Wife and kidsLook at the photosNervous oak treeStare at handkerchief The Micro-skills Training in writing 表达微技能：之准确动作神态描写：紧张篇 读后续写的评分原则之一是“内容的丰富性”。所谓“内容的丰富性”，就是要求续写部分详细、生动地描述情景、态度和感情等。After a while,slowly and painfully,he

17、 began his story.(para.3)I.词的积累形容词：nervous,uneasy,tense,excited名词：tension,nerves,anxiety动词：tighten ones face,tremble,shake,stress out我们可以通过对人物的动作、语言、心理活动、表情和环境等细节的描写以及修辞等多种方式来丰富内容，增强画面的叙述感，使得文章血肉丰满，厚实动人。平时注重积累相关的词汇、句子的积累。The Micro-skills Training in writing 表达微技能：之准确动作神态描写：紧张篇II.句的积累1.Tension slowly

18、 creeps upon him.2.His face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.3.A flood of tension welled up in him./Tension flooded over him.4.His heart beat so violently that he felt nearly suffocated（窒息）.5.He shook all over,feeling like sitting on pins and needles.6.He tightened his face,as if protecting h

19、imself against another disappointment.7.His heart beat wildly and his legs trembled.8.He felt so nervous that he felt his throat tightened.9.He felt so nervous that he couldnt move an inch.10.Scared and nervous,she was frozen to the spot.Have a try 牛刀小试：句子翻译与句型转换牛刀小试：句子翻译与句型转换1.1.随着汽车逐渐靠近随着汽车逐渐靠近Bru

20、nswick,VingoBrunswick,Vingo内心紧张不已。内心紧张不已。As the bus got closer and closer to Brunswick,_.(运用sothat句型)With the bus getting closer and closer to Brunswick,_.(运用非谓语动词)Vingos heart beat so violently that he felt nearly suffocatedVingo shook all over,feeling like sitting on pins and needles1.1.随着汽车逐渐靠近随着

21、汽车逐渐靠近Brunswick,VingoBrunswick,Vingo内心紧张不已。内心紧张不已。With Brunswick approaching,_.(运用as if的非虚拟用法)_,Vingo tightened his face,_.(运用as引导时间状语从句)Vingo tightened his face,as if protecting himself against another disappointmentAs Brunswick approachesas if protecting himself against another disappointment2.看到橡

22、树上挂满了黄手帕，他们都兴奋地跳了起来。看到橡树上挂满了黄手帕，他们都兴奋地跳了起来。(On)Seeing the oak tree full of yellow handkerchiefs,_.(运用非谓语动词)_ at the oak trees which was filled with yellow handkerchiefs.they all jumped up from their seats,dancing and screaming with joyTheir eyes shone/beamed with joy3.他正要反应，突然感觉自己舌头打结，手心出汗。他正要反应，突然感

23、觉自己舌头打结，手心出汗。He was about to respond_.(运用be about towhen句型)when he felt his tongue tied and palms sweating4.当他们仍旧气喘吁吁，心跳飞快时，突然意识到刚刚所发生的事都是真实的。_,they were consequently convinced that what happened just now was true.(运用as引导时间状语从句)_,they were consequently convinced that what happened just now was true.

24、(运用独立主格结构)As they were still out of breath and their heart beat wildlyAs they were still out of breath,their heart beating wildly5.他伸手去抓她的手，不料却发现她的手指冰冷，手在冒汗又颤抖着。他伸手去抓她的手，不料却发现她的手指冰冷，手在冒汗又颤抖着。He reached up to grab her hand,_.(运用only to do作结果状语)only to find her freezing fingers,sweating and trembling6

25、.紧张又害怕，我盯着父亲，试图从他那儿找到解决问题的办法。紧张又害怕，我盯着父亲，试图从他那儿找到解决问题的办法。_,I stared at Dad and tried to seek a solution for the trouble from him.(运用伴随状语)_,I stared at Dad,_.(运用非谓语动词)Nervous and frightenedNervous and frightenedtrying to seek a solution for the trouble from him7.为了避免我的马伤害到这只小野兔，我本能地大喊一声，使劲向后拉马为了避免我的马

26、伤害到这只小野兔，我本能地大喊一声，使劲向后拉马绳。绳。Instinctively,_,_ in order to stop the horse from hurting the little rabbit.(运用非谓语动词)I yelled out loud pulling back the reins hard8.一想到我们可能在这一片未知的黑暗中迷了路，我打了个寒颤。一想到我们可能在这一片未知的黑暗中迷了路，我打了个寒颤。The thought _ sent shivers down my spine.(运用同位语从句)_,I shuddered in the cold.(运用句型“一就

27、”)I shivered inwardly _.(运用短语“一想起”)that we might have got lost in such darknessThe moment I realized that we might have got lost in such darknessat the thought of our/us getting lost in such darkness9.感觉到我对未知的紧张和担忧，父亲试着逗我笑。感觉到我对未知的紧张和担忧，父亲试着逗我笑。_,Dad tried to make me laugh.(运用非谓语动词)Dad tried to make

28、 me laugh _.(运用时间状语从句)Sensing my stress and fear of the unknown10.Rigo感到有些紧张，他低下了头，身体不禁有些发抖，但他迫使感到有些紧张，他低下了头，身体不禁有些发抖，但他迫使自己不要慌张。自己不要慌张。Rigo was a little nervous,_,but he forced himself not to panic.(运用连动句句型)slowering his head and couldnt help tremblingwhen he sensed my stress and fear of the unknow

29、nPossible version 1Para.1:Looking at the photo,the young people found a young woman and three children in it.“What a lovely woman and cute kids.”“Yeah,she is a smart woman who can always make our small house warm and comfortable.”VingoVingo murmured.With BrunswickBrunswick approaching,Vingo stopped

30、staring at thestopped staring at the photophoto,tightening his face,as if protecting himself against tightening his face,as if protecting himself against another disappointmentanother disappointment.The young peopleThe young people took over window took over window seats,waiting for the coming of th

31、eseats,waiting for the coming of the oak treeoak tree.Then Brunswick was ten miles,and then five.All the people opened All the people opened their eyes wide,waiting for a miracle.their eyes wide,waiting for a miracle.Suddenly,they all jumped up from their seats,screaming except Vingo.Possible versio

32、n 1Para.2:Vingo sat there amazed,staring at the oak tree.It was covered with yellow handkerchiefs,twenty or thirty of them,maybe hundreds,flying in the wind.The oak tree stood like a banner of welcome,blowing in the wind.All the young people were up out of their seats,shouting,crying,doing small dan

33、ces or shaking fists in triumph.As the young people remained thrilled,Vingo slowly rose from his seat,holding himself tightly,and made his way to the front of the bus to go home.评点：评点：在车越来越靠近家的过程中，Vingo的紧张情绪是逐步加深的。从他停止看照片(stopped staring at the photostopped staring at the photo)，开始绷紧脸(tightening his

34、 tightening his faceface)，怕自己又一次失望的动作(as if protecting himself against as if protecting himself against another disappointmentanother disappointment)及情绪描写中，很快就能给人一种画面感，Vingo内心的忐忑不安和期盼回家的心情不言而喻。此处又为下文满树的黄手帕的出现做好了铺垫，从紧张不安到安心雀跃，两种情绪形成鲜明的对比，推动了情节的发展。而年轻人们睁大眼睛，看着窗外，期盼能看到奇迹，此处是从侧面进一步烘托了人物紧张的情感，也对故事的发展起到了推

35、波助澜的作用，使人更期待看到树上挂着黄手帕。第二段结尾处，当Vingo看到了满树的黄手帕时，他缓慢地从座位起身，这时他的紧张带有一种想要飞奔回家又害怕回家的紧张，hold himself tightlyhold himself tightly把他的这种心情形容地恰到好处。1.第一眼看到你会被那抢眼、近乎妖艳的色彩震撼，更会迷醉于她独特的，蕴涵巫女般迷幻魔力的风格之中。2.她选择以代表强烈欲望的紫色来包装其化妆品系列，以黯紫色为主色的包装，周围布满了红艳的蔷薇，像极了年代妩媚的面粉盒；复古俏丽的化妆品系列让城中女子爱不释手。3.古琦品牌时装一向以高档、豪华、性感而闻名于世，以“身份与财富之象征”

36、品牌形象成为富有的上流社会的消费宠儿，一向被商界人士垂青，时尚之余不失高雅。古琦现在是意大利最大的时装集团。4.继承着法国高级女装的传统，始终保持高级华丽的设计路线，迎合上流社会成熟女性的审美品味，象征着法国时装文化的最高精神。5.多年过去了，这个名字依然引领着世界的流行时尚。然而在这些辉煌的业绩后面，我们所看到的是一个活生生的，他充满着深情，极为害羞，又极为幽默，他便是永远的。6.迪奥的设计，注重的是服装的女性造型线条而并非色彩。他的时装具有鲜明的风格：裙长不再曳地，强调女性隆胸丰臀、腰肢纤细、肩形柔美的曲线，打破了战后女装保守古板的线条。这种风格轰动了巴黎乃至整个西方世界，给人留下深刻的印象。7.服装与其他名牌做法不同，它从不将任何“”或“”等明显的标志放在衣服上，而衣标上的字样，则是其唯一的辨识方法。8.推出的服装款式向顾客传递积极、开放的生活理念,倡导时尚的生活方式。专为成熟时尚的都市女性设计。她们的着装风格典雅、性感；精于对服装款式、颜色、面料及配饰的