高考（概要写作话题训练5）体育健康-共19张课件.pptx

1、【概要写作话题训练5】体育健康人与环境人与环境主题语境:体育健康关键词:workout 语篇类型:事理介绍短文词数:335语篇难度:建议时间:24mins阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要Training with a partner can help you overcome some barriers.here are four methods of creating a successful workout partnership It can be hard to stick to a fitness program everyone has days when all

2、 you want to do is lie on the couch and watch your favorite shows.during times when motivation is lacking,having a suitable workout partner is beneficial A simple text or email the day before a planned workout might be all your partner needs to stay activeFinding a workout partner who shares similar

3、 training interests provides a foundation to build a successful workout plan.If four-hour bike rides do not interest you,find a partner who would rather attend a 45inute class.If barbell(IEA)training in the middle of the weight room is too terrifying,grab a partner who would rather try a circuit wor

4、kout of body weight exercise.Before starting your workout partnership,set goals and expectations as individuals and as a team.Write down how often you will train together,including specific days and times of the week Make notes of the types of workouts you will complete together.Consider scheduling

5、an entire month of workouts at once.Setting expectations prior to beginning your workout partnership will greatly increase your likelihood of success.Author Dale Carnegie said,People rarely succeed unless they have fun in what they are doing Maintain a positive attitude toward your training partners

6、hip by carrying out fun workouts and monthly challenges.Play basketball together,even if you have never played before Work together to see how fast you can climb 100 flights of stairs.Have a monthly push-up(俯卧撑)contest to test your progress and challenge each other.Enjoy being creative and remember

7、to celebrate your progress._名词注解名词注解:俯卧撑俯卧撑(英文英文:push-up;press:up)中国大陆称作俯卧撑,中国台湾地区称作伏地挺身,港澳地区称作掌上压)是常见的健身运动,有助于增加胸大肌锻炼效果。俯卧撑在日常锻炼和体育课上,特别是在军事体能训练中是一项基本训练。俯卧撑主要锻炼上肢、腰部及腹部的肌肉,尤其是胸肌,是简单易行却十分有效的力量训练手段。初学者练习俯卧撑可以进行两组,每组15到20下;有一定基础的运动者则可做3组,每组20下。语篇语篇解读解读本题属于说明文类的概要写作。首先根据文章内容明确主题主要介绍了四种建立锻炼合作伙伴关系的方法。即 T

8、he writer introduces four methods of building up a successful exercise partnership.然后写出与主题相关的一些要点:When your partner is lacking in motivation,you can send a message or an email to your partner before exercising.It is good to find a workout partner who has similar training interests with you.x It is i

9、mportant to set a goal with your partner x It is necessary to keep an active attitude to your training partnership.在拟写提纲时,要突出主题,知道先写什么后写什么,也就是做到层次分明难难句分析句分析原文：During times when motivation is lacking,having as suitable workout partner is beneficial译文:在缺乏动机的时候,有一个合适的锻炼伙伴是有好处分析:本句中的 when motivation is

10、lacking是由when引导的语从句,having a suitable workout partner是一个动名词短语,在句中充当主语笔前点睛笔前点睛审题分析审要求:说明文类的概要写作;审人称:因为本文属于说明文,介绍了四种建立锻炼合作伙伴关系的方法,所以使用第三人称3审时态:为本文讲述的是一个事实,所以使用一般现在时;审要点:也就是提纲中列出的几个要点写作时要注意点与点之间的过渡。思路点拨思路点拨1.find out the key pointfour methods of building up a successful exercise partnership2.give some

11、details send a message or an email to your partner before exercising,find a workout partner who shares similar training interests with you set a goal with your partner;keep an active attitude to your training partnership高分范文高分范文The writer introduces four methods of building up a successful exercise

12、partnership.(要点 1)First,when your partner is lacking in motivation,you can send a message or an email to your partner before exercising.(要点2)In addition,it is good to find a workout partner who share similar training interests with you.(要点3)Whats more,setting a goal with your partner is important.(要

13、点4)Finally,it is necessary to keep an active attitude to your training partnership.(要点5）(80 words)高分解密高分解密要点1:开篇准确地点出了文章的主题要点2:When引导时间状语从句。要点3:这句话准确使用了who引导的定语从句且有效使用了过渡成分 In addition,与前句衔接自然。要点4:本句有效使用了过渡成分 Whats more,与前前句衔接自然且使用了动名词短语作主语。要点5:本句正确使用了短语 keep an active attitude to?语境演练语境演练Every year

14、,more and more parents complain to their childrens schools about PE.They believe that their children shouldnt have to participate in physical activity if they dont want to Supporters of PE,however,believe that it is a crucial element of all-round schooling and our societys well-being.They insist PE

15、in schools remains one of the few places by which the youth can be forced to participate in aerobic exercise阅读短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要Firstly,they believe that participation in sport promotes health.In fact physical education is a springboard for involvement in sport and physical activities throughout

16、life.Government is,or should be concerned with the health of its citizens.Encouraging physical activity in the young through compulsory PE fights child obesity and contributes to forming lifelong habits of exercise.This doesnt have to be through traditional team sports;increasingly schools are able

17、to offer exercise in the form of swimming,gymnastics,dance,etc.Besides,physical education helps to develop character and the mutual(相互的)respect required to succeed in an adult environment.Playing team sports builds character and encourages students to work with others,as they would be expected to do

18、 in most business or sporting environments.Sport teaches children how to win and lose with good grace and builds a strong school spirit through competition with other institutions.It is often the experience of playing on a team together that builds the strongest friendships at school,which endure fo

19、r years afterwards.Finally,the pursuit for national sporting achievement begins in schools.If schools dont have compulsory PE,it is much harder to pick out,develop and equip athletes to represent the country on a wider stage.However,its much easier to find suitable individuals with a full sports pro

20、gram in every school._高分范文高分范文Unlike parents,supporters of PE main tain students should participate in sports Team and individual sports prevent children getting overweight and help form lifelong habits of exercise(高分句型一).PE also cultivates childrens team spirits,mutual respect,right attitudes towar

21、ds competition and endurable friendships(高分句型二)Last,school PE helps select and train potential athletes for national teams范文范文解析解析写好这类作文要注意几个步骤:1.认真审题找准提示语中的关键词或句,确定中心思想.2.依据关键句,草拟提纲,梳理文章的脉络3.准确定位人称、时态注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次4最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等范文解读范文解读高分句型一:Team and individual sports prevent

22、 children getting overweight and help form lifelong habits of exercise本句运用了 prevent doing sth,form habits等短语译为:团队和个人体育可以预防儿童超重,养成终身锻炼习惯.高分句型二PE also cultivates childrens team spirits,mutual respect,right attitudes towards competition and endurable friendships本句运用了许多高级词汇 mutual respect,endurable frie

23、ndships等;译为:体育也培养孩子们的团队精神、相互尊重、对竞争的正确态度和持久的友谊谢谢观谢谢观看看 下节课再下节课再见见1.学习学习语文是一种享受，你会发现语文学习是在与另一个人对话，也是在与自己对话。每当你读一篇文章时，仿佛作者就在你身边，他的经历、他的情感都进入了你心中语文是一种享受，你会发现语文学习是在与另一个人对话，也是在与自己对话。每当你读一篇文章时，仿佛作者就在你身边，他的经历、他的情感都进入了你心中。2.不论不论读名家名篇，还是自己创作，你会更清楚地认识到自己，每次学习语文，其实都是对自己的一次审视，你不仅仅懂的更多，而且文学素养也随之提高。这便是语文，需要你与之心灵相通

24、。读名家名篇，还是自己创作，你会更清楚地认识到自己，每次学习语文，其实都是对自己的一次审视，你不仅仅懂的更多，而且文学素养也随之提高。这便是语文，需要你与之心灵相通。3.动物也有着自己的语言。它们不光有声音语言，还有许多无声的语言，例如美妙的舞姿、绚丽的色彩和芬芳的气味，研究这些千奇百怪的语言对人类有特殊的意义。4.议论文写作中大部分同学会陷入泛泛而谈，没有议论的内容，就算有论据可用，也只是蜻蜓点水，草草收兵。不少作文且不说能运用几种修辞组织语言，更不说能使句子富有意蕴，单是连最基本的语言通顺也很难做到。5.记叙文的写作反映的问题则更大，且不说选材的平淡，就语言的叙述而言，无法体现出一个学生高

25、中三年这一思想蜕变的进步，反而还停留在初中的水平，令人汗颜。6.大部分的记叙文平铺直叙，语言啰嗦乏味，缺少灵动性的语句，不会运用各种表达方式，逻辑错乱，这样的文章基本都被判为四类下。7.7.由由果溯因法。事物都是互相联系的。比如，有很多事物就是以因果关系的联系形式存在的。写材料作文，审题时如果能由材料中列举的现象或结果推究出造成所列现象或结果的本质原因，往往能找到最佳的立意。果溯因法。事物都是互相联系的。比如，有很多事物就是以因果关系的联系形式存在的。写材料作文，审题时如果能由材料中列举的现象或结果推究出造成所列现象或结果的本质原因，往往能找到最佳的立意。8.8.提炼提炼中心法。这是写新材料作

26、文最为常见且最为稳妥的审题立意方法。写新材料作文时，如果能准确地提炼出材料的中心，并以其作为文章的主旨，一定会使所写文章既切题又有深度。所以，写新材料作文时这种方法来立意中心法。这是写新材料作文最为常见且最为稳妥的审题立意方法。写新材料作文时，如果能准确地提炼出材料的中心，并以其作为文章的主旨，一定会使所写文章既切题又有深度。所以，写新材料作文时这种方法来立意最多最多。9.9.抓抓关键句法。关键句常常有暗示材料中心的作用。所以，有些新材料作文材料中的关键性语句可以作为选择立意角度的突破口。在新材料作文的材料中，关键句常常是命题者或材料中的人物的评议性语句。关键句法。关键句常常有暗示材料中心的作用。所以，有些新材料作文材料中的关键性语句可以作为选择立意角度的突破口。在新材料作文的材料中，关键句常常是命题者或材料中的人物的评议性语句。